A poem/ rap I made Please tell me if it makes sense or if it's good

I wrote this song, it’s supposed to be a rap song, and I wanted everyone’s opinion. If you want to read the rest there is a board called mine you can go to.

Just some of my freestyle writing

I was about 17 when I first heard this jam and was completely floored at its tempo and the rhymes. A true Pioneer of the genre.

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Fav line from rcr's rap 💔😇