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I am already in love with this. I just wanted to let you know that in the second part of the prologue, when you're in the kitchen, it doesn't keep the pronoun of Simon. You're talking to him, but then it says 'she shakes her head...' instead of 'he'. Other than that, everything else looks good!! :D

Another thing I noticed. In the gardens there's a spot where it says "yet the $mctitle makes no move". $mctitle is not declared. 









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