This was amazing!
Some errors: I tried to play chapter 3, but it stopped at chapter two. It also had the 'post-chapter musings' then didn't proceed. All LI's are at male, and I'm on a PC.
Also, the scene where the MC stopped the arrow through 'time-magic' there was a $acolor on one passage and another on the next when they talk about the color of the magic. I chose to go with Kali for these passages.