Oh my god, this is so fun!! The premise? Divine. The characters? Stunning. The writing? Eloquent and irreverent.

This feels very promising! I love the tone so far, and the available character choices are thoughtful and engaging. I hope all is well with you and yours and that whatever you're writing right now is going better than expected :)

Great setup, Ash! The characters and lore are charming and engaging. I also appreciate the way character customizations were woven throughout the text; it felt much more seamless and natural than what I've come to expect.

Hell yeah! Excited to see what you've crafted!

William, please, this is wonderful! Thanks for sharing. I hope things are going well for you!

Congratulations!! And thank you!

Hello! I'm obsessed. I'm wondering if I've perhaps lost my way in my playthrough; a certain waitress had just woken me up. Is that the end of what's currently available? I ask because I've just played through three times and I'm certain I've messed up somehow. Hope all's well!!

That's wonderful!! I hope the craft honing is going well🥰

I cannot believe how romantic this sex-heavy game is, like, I'm taken aback. You have such a fun and immersive writing style! I'd love to know more about how you came to hone your craft. 

Additionally, I'm dying over the warlord joke and the later mention in the heretic route. As of the most recent update (like an hour ago, so hell yeah), there are a few repetitive passages during the last available night. I also believe I saw a stray "her" when referring to V very early on in the story; perhaps a mistyped reference to MC's gender?

Lol same! Love to imagine the artist ordering a water and sketching out the judgey ppl at the next table 

Hell yeah!! I hope the revamp (hah!) is going well!

Us judgmentally waiting for other readers to join us in this Meta Waiting

thank you!! 😭😭

Hope things have gotten easier/better for you!

Ooooo! This is so interesting! Adore the characters. Sazora gives me v strong Michelle from Derry Girls vibes, and I love her to bits. If she betrays me, I'll lose it 🫠

(Many well wishes, Devi! Hope recovery is going better than expected!)

The lore and characters are so interesting! I hope to light the fire that chars Gen Kane's corpse 🥰🕯

This setup is so interesting!! Also, I cannot wait for my little boxcar acolyte to eff shit up!

Honestly? I LOVE the whole Duke of the North revival happening rn. So excited for this!

Hell yeah!! Thanks for the update! Excited to see what you've crafted 🥰

This is so fun! The pacing and characters are great, and I loved the timed reaction!

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You're a wonderful writer, and your characters were a blast to hang out with! I'm excited to see what happens next! I sincerely hope you charge for the full game once it's out bc this is fantastic work (and i would like to buy it).

So far, this is an intriguing setup! Love that MC has the option to hold their reincarnated cards close and pretend they're not smarter than their age implies! 

Same!! It really allows you to get invested in the characters, and you immediately get to impact the world around you. I tend to return when I'm itching for a witcher-esque game!

Stop!! these are so good!!!

noted! I'll keep this is mind for my future comments 😭

Was just asking myself the same q 😭

Your spoiler tag isnt working!

This is such a fascinating setting, with interesting powers and omg the people?? I'd buy the entirety of the game rn based solely on the first chapter. Lovely work!

I'm still aghast, btw. Made me feel a bit like I was reading Sabriel for the first time.

Bro?! I'll have to walk away and come back to leave a coherent sentence, but you can't just drop something of this quality on the masses and not be prepared to be a massive success. This is so fun and heartwarming and thrilling and terrifying; hearty storytelling with masterful seasoning. Just well done. 

You've crafted a fascinating world filled with loving and brave people! Thank you for sharing! 

This is so cute!! And essentially all dialogue? What a challenge! Well done!

ooooo good question! My playthrough had a description of air crackling, but no explicit mention of lightning. 

Dude! Right?!?? 😭