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oye bro tal vez no estes de acuerdo pero deberias ponerlos en character ia o hi waifu conozco un monton de gente que usa esa app y luego les podria decir pa que lo instalen:)

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Will it ever be continued or is it finished, loved it more than i thought i would honestly

Of course, there will be more! I'm already working on the final touches of the next update. There will be news soon!

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I loved this game, even more so the story, I was completely hooked, I loved the structure of Dax, the story about their past impressed me, and this game was the first game of its kind that I played, so I thought it was incredible! 


congratulations on the good work! 

thank u!

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Excuse me, what's the name of the game song? The song in the main menu when you open the game is cool, but I don't know what it's called. Could someone tell me or help me know what it's called? I know it's something stupid but it's really cool and I really would like to know what the name of the song is

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 ive found it only in the game files on steam even after 2 hours of chat GPT i cant find it anywhere else

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vine por el porno y me quede por la historia uwu

jjajajaja, gracias sentinel

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Have you learned to draw characters well? Mariu Axe

No, they are made with AI, Stable Diffusion to be precise.

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Heya, found this little gem while browsing for good NSFW games. Didnt think much of it at first tbh, seemed like ur average explicit furry visual novel. Some story, some  (static) lewd scenes, the usual...

But holy damn was  I wrong! This game is AMAZING! Sure, it lacks a little in terms of "choice" on how to progress the story, but i dont even care about that anymore. The script is a little wobbly (or maybe slow, not sure whats the right way to put it) at the beginning - i guess new project, still not 100% sure where its supposed to go from a writers perspective, totally normal. But the way it develops after a while. I cant remember the last time i got so invested in a story. Or in a character (obviously speaking about Dax and protagonist aka me). Heck, i cant even think of anything similar. Sure, u get hyped or otherwise emotional for certain (main-)chars in many stories, be it TV-series, movies, games, comic or whatever, but these connections never went as deep as this time.

I absolutely love ur game, Dax and his relationship with the player, and the story. 10 out of 5 Stars, would definitely recommend. Tho play it at ur own risk, u might get really emotional.
This isnt just furry chars and lewd art with some kind of mostly irrelevant plot. This i a deeply emotional story that will get u invested pretty heavily. At least that was the case for me, a totally new experience.

I really wish to see how it continues, i played for hours and the fear of progressing and suddenly being faced with a "thx for playin, end of build" kinda message grew with every click. (see below in the spoiler)

~~ Keep going, this is an absolute piece of art for me that i want to see finished. Expect my patreon money shortly :3

(Also, i dont mind that the background images are ai generated. I saw that this was not always the case, so i'm curious how they were before, but they are just there to set a better scene, they arent really relevant for the plot.
And fun fact, this is the first time i'm "review" commenting like this but i just had to do it this time ^^)     




!! WARNING: SPOILER !!
When the rebels showed up and they got seperated, i had such a big heart ache. Like, i was for real scared for life that sth would happen to him. And unfortunately that was right around the time i had to do sth else and pause, so i constantly had this feeling in my chest, like sth missing, hurting. Like hunger, but at the heart not the stomache. And i was really scared to get to the end of the build at this time.
Dont worry, i'm fine. I just never got invested this much in a character, or a fictional relationship.

I love ur work and i hope u can continue it until its finished! I want more of this god damn fuckin cute catboy!!!

Dunno how to end this comment, feel like i'm rambling too much, but i just had to leave some appreciation for u. (⁠つ⁠≧⁠▽⁠≦⁠)⁠つ

I really appreciate your comment. It's true that the game is a bit slow at the beginning, but that was intentional. I didn't want to rush things and make everything just about sex.

My intention was for the protagonist and Dax to get to know each other and learn to live together... Falling in love slowly.

As for the emotional aspect of the story, that's also true. There are many themes that make it more of a drama rather than a purely romantic story.

There's still a long way to go before the ending, but I hope you enjoy the upcoming updates just as much as the previous ones.

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Yo like finish the story, idc if it's ai or anything I love Dax please more content. FOR MY DAMN CAT BOY!, Put more care and love for Dax and also more choices to pick and reactions, this was so fun!. Dax is one of my favorite characters and so interested.

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Kinda weird AI backgrounds ngl.

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I wish I could play the pre-ai versions again. They had a lot of charm, and I genuinely enjoyed your art a lot.

I've been a fan of this project for years and loved seeing what you did with it, but I can't say the same anymore. Sorry.

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I like LGBT characters but I don't like furry characters. Hopefully the next update will be better

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Friend, this game is furry, I don’t know what you were expecting, haha. The main character is a furry, and I don’t think that’s going to change in future updates. Cheers!

Sorry if my words are rude. I was looking for a game but never found it.

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Is there a c.ai character if so please do let me know

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oye tal vez ni te importe pero ando publicitando el juego XD  por cierto como se llama la cancion del menu principal?

Gracias! Mientras mas publico tenga mi proyecto. Mas posibilidades de que se vuelva aun mas grande! Gracias por la ayuda! 

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La cancion del menu principal fue creada con suno ia.

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I like the game, hope for more updates in the future.

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I absolutely love this game and I'm cant wait for the whole game to come out

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I love the game, thanks for making it.

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pregunta debo hacer toda la historia de nuevo para seguir con el lore porque no cacho lo que trajo esta versión(aparte de una rola épica en el menú de inicio)

siempre recomiendo empezar desde cero para evitar bugs.

si ya le entendí(PD:al inicio parece que te esta apuntando con una 9mm xd)

      we para la 16.0(si hay claro) debería haber un guiño a subnautica XD(lo digo por la mera palabra federación XD)

Will this game have branching paths?

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You know a big part of me wants to see MC also seducing an osgokk as karmic justice for Dax's racism, forcing him to share. Also more femboy booty is always nice and having 2 femboys down on your cock is better than 1

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Hahaha. That would make Dax really angry.

In a good or bad way? Because I really want to see it happen now

Breeding more than one femboy is a winner for me. Especially with a femboy harem true ending.

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Hola manito vengo de steam

No pensé que estaría aqui en itch recién me doy cuenta, bueno dejen un comentario en steam de lo que pienso del juego (puras cosas buenas) 

Solo vengo aqui a decir que tuve unas ideas de los posibles final (Bueno, malo o neutral)

Y que no te olvides de los de steam que aún está en la actualización 13

Por favor y gracias por leer 

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me interesaria escucharlas bro (no soy co creador ni nada solo me interesa xd)

No, en steam esta ya la 14.0 ya que el arte cambio, la 13.0 tenia el arte viejo en la portada y en el menu principal. debí olvidar cambiar el numero de la version. Pero es lo mismo

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oh ya, gracias por contestar el mensaje manito

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mi estimado para cuando nueva actualización de esta novela

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pronto mi amigo, tengo que traducir y arreglar algunas cosas... La 15.0 esta a la vuelta de la esquina.

no puedo esperar(fuera de las escenas xxx si me enganchaste en la historia por el romance supongo lo que digo es que te hiciste tremenda obra de arte mi bro)

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me vai a ver comentandote la mayoria del tiempo bro por fa no te enojes pero el juego es buenisimo 

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seems really interesting, but i'm disappointed in the usage of AI for the art. for those unaware, AI art is not possible without stealing the work of human artists.

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Yeah, but sadly art is also expensive. It is hard to find an artist to work for shared profit. Not to mention commissioning every art piece by piece

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I'm sorry to 'disappoint' you, but I work alone on this project and lack the skill, money, or time to draw everything myself (as I did up until update 13). Stable Diffusion helps me improve this visual novel significantly. There are many visual novels with beautiful, hand-drawn art. I encourage you to play them and enjoy their incredible stories.

Best regards!

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diganme que al final dax no muere

no prometo nada...

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no me diga eso compa que ya me encariñe con el wey

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where is the next update I'm fiending 😋

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El juego me encanta, la historia es muy buena y me dejó muy picado, y los personajes me encantan, ya que tienen una personalidad muy marcada, Dax sobre todo.

la única queja que tengo, precisamente es con Dax, pese que me guste mucho el personaje, no me termina de agradar su diseño, siento que si tamaño en las piernas y trasero es bastante "exagerado", para mi gusto, se ve raro

Quizá si le redujera un poco el tamaño, sobre todo de sus piernas y poco el trasero, se vería mejor, al menos a mi gusto.

Pero dejando eso de lado, me encantó la historia!!, ya ansió la continuación!!

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si hago eso, termino colgado en la plaza del pueblo rodeado por antorchas. no gracias jajajaja, y gracias por jugar a mi juego, abrazo

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Nah, no creo, tampoco es que lo dejes sin nada...x'D

aún así, me gusta mucho la historia!!

Estoy ansioso por la continuación 6w9

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10/10 quiero mas incluso espero en un futuro una continuacion y mas sexo con el gatito que como me gusta darle duro por el culo y el diseño que tiene hasta ahorita Dax esta muy bueno ojala no lo cambien

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confirmo bro(ni me termine el primero pero quiero un sky division 2XD)

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Not going to lie, when I first saw this game, I was only in it for the very cute furry that was on the screenshots...But after playing through it? Not only was the visuals quite good, but the story and character dialogue absolutely melted my heart. SURE the spicy scenes were great but it was even better because it didn't felt rushed and your character and Dax actually bonded and got closer and closer together to develop such feelings. Not only that, the overall game had very good lore, story telling, and great world building that I was easily immersed in it.

tl;dr: Was playing it for the cute guy, fell in love with the amazing writing

9/10 (Will change it to 10 if you give us more updates this is a threat)
But seriously though, this was incredible!!! A good 2 hours well spent!

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Heya, so i've been here playing every update for a long time. I've loved the story and lore and all the fun action. I do not have a problem with the AI art however I did prefer the art before, the charm it had and the slimmer portions of Dax were just cuter and better in my opinion

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Real mente bueno supero mis expectativas 

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Fantastico. Alguien me recomienda novelas visuales de este estilo?

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10/10

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Love your game. I don't see why so many people are angry at the use of ai for this, you still write the story and drew for the game previously(personally I didn't even know it was ai for while). I barely noticed that dax was ai generated and I still loved the design. Can't wait for future updates!

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Amazing game! I love dax so much lol, I love the art too, don't listen to the haters. Your use of A.I is what it was made for and is consistent which is more than what can be said for other games lol, keep up the great work! Cant wait for the next update.

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You really know what you want, hehe. I'll keep that in mind.

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why does "it" have a dick

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Joystick :)

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what?

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Art is hard! I understand why you switched to ai art, tbh the story you're writing is amazing and if you wanna use AI go for it! As long as you keep writing to yourself and not ai generated, I'm onboard!

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I think its not ai art, but maybe im wrong, still, i agree with you, if keep doing it like this, id love keep playing, i cant wait the story continue :D

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Hello! I'm the developer. Yes, I used Stable Diffusion to create the new art for Sky Division. The first illustrations were drawn by me, but I'm not a great artist, so I decided to use AI to create them. Thank you so much for playing!

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Thank you so much! I write the story myself, as it would lose a lot of its essence if someone else wrote it or if it was done by AI. I only use AI for the illustrations and to translate it from Spanish to English. Thank you so much for playing!

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Hey man don't listen to the haters the new art is fire keep it up its such a good vn i can't wait for the next update 

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I love the new design, i dont understand why people dont.

Anyways, the story is interesting, keep doing this great as ever! :)

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thank u!

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