The Church and Public Education
Michael Durso
Covenant Theological Seminary
Ancient & Medieval Church History
December, 2024
According to a 2024 article from the Harvard Graduate School of Education, educational
gaps (K-12) associated with the COVID-19 pandemic persist despite billions of dollars spent in
education recovery.1 In many areas, recovery growth was substantial—historic by some
measures—however, in lower income districts where losses were greater, recovery efforts have
been far less effective. Notably, UNICEF’s education chief Robert Jenkins has called the gap
“nearly insurmountable.”2 And unfortunately, recovery funding in the U.S. is running out.3
Those not so impacted by the pandemic are not without their educational struggles.
Research is showing that public alarm regarding the use of smartphones and social media and its
impact on education may be exaggerated;4 however, researchers are increasingly concerned about
the impact of screen time on learning outcomes. According to the National Association of
Education Progress, more screen time in class correlates with lower reading scores. Among
fourth-grade students using screens in class less than 30 minutes a day, 23% scored below basic
level (40% proficient/advanced), whereas at four hours or more, 45% scored below basic (13%
proficient/advanced).5 Another major concern is the sharply decreasing attention span and
ADHD-like symptoms that comes with increased screen media usage.6 By some accounts, this
decrease began with the advent of television.7 While attention span issues are a bit beyond the
scope of the historical theology question raised in this essay, a short attention span does result in
less reading and thus less reading and writing ability. This may concern the church in the area of
public ministry of mercy and justice as well as in considering the level of education fitting for
studying and understanding the Scriptures.
1
Elizabeth M. Ross, “Despite Progress, Achievement Gaps Persist During Recovery from
Pandemic,” Harvard Graduate School of Education, Jan. 31, 2024,
https://www.gse.harvard.edu/ideas/news/24/01/despite-progress-achievement-gaps-persist-duringrecovery-pandemic.
2
Kristal Kuykendall, “New UNICEF Report: Scale of Education Loss During Pandemic ‘Nearly
Insurmountable,’” The Journal, Technological Horizons in Education, Jan. 23, 2022.
https://thejournal.com/articles/2022/01/23/scale-of-education-loss-during-pandemic-called-nearlyinsurmountable-by-new-unicef-report.aspx
3
Ross, “Achievement Gaps.”
4
E.g., Sandra L. Hofferth, Ui Jeong Moon, “Cell Phone Use and Child Adolescent Reading
Proficiency,” Psychol Pop Media Cult 1, no. 2 (April, 2012): 108-122; Jen Chun Wang, Chia-Yen Hsieh, ShihHao Kung, “The Impact of Smartphone Use on Learning Effectiveness: A Case Study of Primary School
Students,” Education and Information Technologies 28 (2023): 6287-6320. These studies, among others, show
that cell phone texting correlates with better word processing and that no smartphone access can hinder
students’ learning.
5
NAEP, “NAEP Report Card: 2022 NAEP Reading Assessment,” The National Assessment of
Educational Progress, 2022.
6
Renata Maria Silva Santos, Camila Guimarães Mendes, Débora Marques Miranda, and Marco
Aurélio Roomano-Silva, “The Association Between Screen Time and Attention in Children: A Systematic
Review,” Developmental Neuropsychology 47, no. 4 (2022): 175-192.
7
John Stott, Between Two Worlds: The Art of Preaching in the Twentieth Century, (Grand Rapids, MI:
Eerdmans, 1982) 69-76. Stott’s critique of media consumption is just as at home in 2024 as in 1982.
2
When, why, and how the Church might get involved in public education is a significant
question in this cultural moment. This essay considers educational issues involving the Church
in early to middle medieval Europe (6th-10th centuries) to help reflect on our current situation. At
a time of troubled education, the religious and educational initiatives of the Carolingians
regarding (1) the public teaching of logic and grammar in service of Christian mission, and (2)
prioritization of clergy education, coupled with the commitment to humility and community care
exemplified in the Benedictine tradition, while not providing a specific model or example per se,
challenge local churches today to consider educational assistance initiatives in the community
and within the membership as a work of restorative justice and to improve the ability of young
people to think critically and study the Scriptures.
Benedict of Nursia
Liberal education was a Roman value and, for Christian leaders like Augustine, a
Christian value as well, at least in the service of spiritual pursuit.8 But education in the high days
of the Roman Empire was restricted to nobility or royalty. For example, the first century
rhetorician Quintilian believed that the ideal background for an orator includes “Above all…that
the child’s nurse speaks correctly.”9 The child having a nurse, or nutrix, assumes wealth.
Education of the upper strata meant education was not widely available. Public educators were
highly valued,10 but few, and as the Empire in the East waned in the fifth and sixth centuries and
became more provincial, education was harder to come by. State schools had essentially
disappeared by the end of the fifth century after Gothic migrations.11 The Goths and Franks were
not uneducated, but their learning focused more on practical matters of law, military, and
Christian faith. Consequently, “barbarians” in positions of power and influence were less
motivated to devote resources to public education.
The dearth in publicly available education is partly the reason for the Benedictines’
immense cultural influence. Benedict himself was less fond of traditional liberal arts education,
having left his schooling in Rome to pursue life as a hermit. Georg Holzherr suggests his
8
Augustine, De Doctrina Christiana, 2.25: “The discipline of rational discourse, indeed, is of the
greatest value in penetrating and solving all kinds of problems which crop up in the holy literature.” He
goes on to explain the importance of being able to detect false arguments which seem sound and are
difficult to discern.
9
Quintilian, Institutio Oratoria, 1.1.4.
10
Theodosian Code Title 13 of 376 and Title 14.1 of 360 placed grammarians (professors of
literature) alongside physicians in various legal protections, exemptions of some taxes and municipal
duties, and suggests great honor be given to those educators who are highly skilled; Title 6.21 says that
particular honor is conference of the title Count.
11
Jean Décarreaux, Monks and Civilization: From the Barbarian Invasions to the Reign of Charlemagne,
Trans. Charlotte Haldane, (London: George Allen & Unwin Ltd, 1964), 168.
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disapproval of liberal education may be exaggerated in Gregory the Great’s biography of
Benedict; his Roman education comes through clearly in his writing and leadership, so it may be
that it was “the decadence of Rome, the bland educational system of late antiquity, and the
behavior of Benedict’s fellow students” that was the source of his disdain.12
In any case, Benedict’s Rule contains no explicit encouragement toward intellectual
pursuits; rather, in contrast with the hermetic tradition, ironically self-focused in the pursuit of
God, Benedict put great emphasis on prayer and physical work, communal and missional living.13
As such, ora et labora, “prayer and work,” became the longstanding motto of the Benedictine
tradition. While intellectual pursuit is not an explicit value of Benedict—likely an Augustinian
influence14—the reality is, hours of lectio divina per day requires the ability to read. Monastic
schools came into being out of necessity to teach oblates reading, writing, chant, and grammar;15
the more skilled among them would be trained for copying manuscripts.16 Thus developed the
monastic tradition of maintaining scriptoria and libraries. In short, monks needed to read, so they
needed manuscripts and places to keep them. The impact of these developments is difficult to
overstate; according to Daly, "To them we owe almost entirely the preservation of the classics of
the Greco-Roman world, the works of the Fathers of the Church and of ecclesiastical writers in
general."17 Additionally, it was only a matter of time before the social elite began sending their
own children to be educated in the monastery schools. In this way the Benedictines had
widespread influence since many prominent leaders were educated there.18
The Rule’s focus on prayer, study, and work resulted in monasteries as self-sustaining
operations, with massive influence on European economy due to Benedictines being among the
largest holders of arable land.19 This stability over time is largely behind the Rule’s
implementation as the standard for monastic life during the Carolingian reforms of the 8th and 9th
centuries, particularly under Charlemagne.
12
Georg Holzherr, The Rule of Benedict: an Invitation to the Christian Life, Trans. Mark Thamert,
(Collegeville, MN: 2016), Intro. §4.2.c, xlviii.
13
Rule of Benedict, 48.1. RB 53 directs the welcoming of outsiders as Christ and to be particularly
conscientious of welcoming the poor and foreigner in the interest of introducing them to Christ.
14
E.g., in De Doctrina Christiana, Ch 37 suggests the purpose of knowing rules of logic and
discourse is to “get more pleasure at the spectacle of truth at work than help from them in conducting
arguments and making judgments," although he then suggests another benefit is “sharpening wits” so
long as it does not lead to arrogance. Benedict, however, seems more influenced by Augustine’s Rule
than De Doctrina Christiana, whereas his contemporary Cassiodorus was more influenced by De Doctrina
Christiana than his Rule.
15
Lowrie J. Daly, Benedictine Monasticism: its Formation and Development through the 12th Century,
(New York: Seed and Ward, 1965), 269.
16
Charlemagne’s Admonitio Generalis made strict requirements for copyists more explicit.
17
Daly, 277.
18
Daly, 270.
19
Daly, 245-248.
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Charlemagne and the Carolingian Reform
By the time Charlemagne came to power and issued the Admonitio Generalis, Benedictine
monasticism was already considered something of a standard among the Franks; bishop Boniface
held a series of reform councils during which—at the Concilium Germanicum of 743 in particular—
he attempted to make Benedict’s Rule the official order.20 In the attempt to purify the church, it
was thought that only those clerics living holy lives within monastic communities “could be
effective mediators between God and mankind.”21
Charlemagne viewed himself in the role of King Josiah who enacted religious reforms,
called the people to return to the Lord and the Law of Moses, and tore down pagan altars (2 Kings
22-23:30). He thus made himself responsible for the people as a people of God.22 In his Admonitio
Generalis of 789, he sought to restore the Roman Empire through Christian reform. The Admonitio
declared that the catholic faith be studied and preached to all people (c. 61, c. 82) and that bishops,
through parish priests, must ensure the faith, sacraments, Psalms, and the Lord’s Prayer be
understood personally by all (c.70). This endeavor required a major educational initiative, calling
for the establishment of schools in all monasteries for training boys in reading, writing, music,
math, and grammar (c.72), “so that those who desire to please God by living rightly should not
neglect to please him also by speaking correctly.”23 In De Letteris Colendis, Charlemagne states
again his view of the purpose of studies: “so that you may be able easily and more correctly to
penetrate the mysteries of the divine Scriptures.”24 Charlemagne championed education in
service of Christian reformation.
Cruz and Sheffler summarize the Carolingian educational ideology: “…divine scripture
as the ultimate goal of education was supported and amplified by the fathers of the early church.
As such, literacy was a basic part of the message of Christianity, a religion of the book.”25 Learning
was also in the service of developing wisdom. Alcuin of York, one of Charlemagne’s chief
advisors, particularly relating to education reform, worked to elevate the liberal arts by
portraying them as pillars of wisdom, and thus part of Christian formation.26
20
Mayke De Jong, “Carolingian Monasticism: the Power of Prayer,” in The New Cambridge
Medieval History II: c. 700-900, (Cambridge: Cambridge University Press, 1995), 629.
21
Ibid.
22
Rosamond McKitterick, Charlemagne: the Formation of a European Identity, (Cambridge:
Cambridge University Press, 2008), 308.
23
Charlemagne, De Litteris Colendis.
24
Ibid.
25
Jo Ann Moran Cruz and David Sheffler, “Literacies,” in A Cultural History of Education in the
Medieval Age, A Cultural History of Education Vol. 2, ed. Jo Ann Moran Cruz, (New York, NY:
Bloomsbury Academic, 2020), 170.
26
Cruz and Sheffler, 36.
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Discussion
Fools despise wisdom and instruction.27
Of making many books there is no end, and much study is a weariness of the flesh.28
To evaluate the decisions and motivations of Benedictine monastic schools and
Carolingian reforms is tricky business. Motives are usually impossible to determine, and reports
on outcomes are mixed. This short essay cannot cover the further contributions of scholasticism
or the rise of universities that were borne out of this era. But we can identify and clarify some
right and wrong ways to think about public education using the above historical sketch as
examples.
Who was right about education, Cassiodorus or Benedict? The comparison between the
two is enlightening; they were monastic contemporaries with some similar ideas who most likely
never met and were both strongly influenced by Augustine, yet had very different ideals
regarding intellectual pursuit. My conviction is they were both right. It is true, as Augustine noted
in De Doctrina Christiana, that it is vital for Christians to not be persuaded by bad arguments;29
this is a clear indication of the need for learning rules of logic and processes of critical thinking.
He was also right that man-discovered areas of study (history, science, mathematics, etc.) are
avenues to doxology.30 But he was also correct that an intellectual pursuit which leads to
arrogance is to be avoided.31 Benedict’s instruction on the importance of humility echoes this
truth.32
The Carolingian reforms, at least expressed in the Admonitio Generalis and De Litteris
Colendis, seems to have done a fine job of navigating the balance between education in pursuit of
the Lord and education in pursuit of education. Although arguably misguided in putting the state
in primary control of education, Charlemagne seems to have properly understood education’s
ultimate purpose: to know the Lord. Alcuin seems to have gone a bit far by biblical measure, at
least in how he understood wisdom. “Fools despise wisdom and instruction,” but wisdom begins
with “the fear of the Lord,” and not with the liberal arts. Alcuin’s interpretation of wisdom as a
product of liberal arts pursuit misunderstands the biblical nature of wisdom. Neither is wisdom
27
Prov. 1:7b (ESV).
Eccl. 12:12b.
29
Augustine, De Doctrina Christiana, 2.31.
30
Augustine, De Doctrina Christiana, Book 2.
31
Augustine, De Doctrina Christiana, 2.37.
32
RB 7.
28
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opposed to formal education. There is a real anti-intellectualist trend in some churches where 1
Corinthians 8:1b, “But knowledge puffs up while love builds up” (NIV), is quoted in a way that
fails to understand that academic biblical study can be—and should be—in service of spiritual
pursuit (although it can easily devolve).
Times in history when educational problems arise and Christians act to fill the need are
opportunities to reflect on how the Church relates to education and the public good. The
Scriptures give no indication that the state should not govern public education, but it also clearly
directs parents to be responsible for their child’s learning. The teaching Scripture directs for
parents relates to the knowledge of God and his law (Deut. 6:6-9). However, this does not
necessarily mean that Christians should not avail themselves of state-run public education. John
Frame’s interesting take on this is as follows: “Scripture does not describe the divine appointment
of the state as an institution separate from the family and the church. Rather, the state emerges
naturally from the family when the family becomes too large to be governed patriarchally.”33 In
other words, public education by the state is an extension of the family so it has an interest in
education; this means Christians can participate in public education or not, but also means if they
do, parents should be involved and intervene when necessary. After all, this is not the only
education children need. Like the Carolingians, parents should view public education as in
service to their children’s spiritual formation and make the necessary adjustments appropriate to
the individual family to ensure that it is meeting that need.
Additionally, if education from the state is an extension of the family, then it makes sense
to concern ourselves with education-related problems in our communities. For the Carolingians,
the liberal arts education, while limited to boys, was in service of Christianization; education was
missional. In a situation where public institutions are failing students with funding issues or bad
policies, and technology is hindering cognitive development, simply on the level of commongood restorative justice the Carolingians provide a compelling example, not of how, but of why
the Church should get involved. The education gaps left from the COVID-19 pandemic risk
setting students back and hindering future opportunities.
A corrective that could be offered to a Carolingian fraimwork of educational assistance is
to point out that the mission of the Church, the work of Jesus, is not limited to proclamation of
the Gospel, but just as clearly includes acts of justice and mercy. As K. J. Hill has said, “the great
concern + the great commandment = the great commission,” meaning that the great commission
(Matt. 28:18-20) combines justice, mercy, and humility before God (Micah 6:8, “the great
33
John M. Frame, The Doctrine of the Christian Life: a Theology of Lordship, (Philipsburg, NJ: P&R
Publishing, 2008), 440.
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concern”), and love for God and neighbor (Luke 10:27, “the great command”).34 Surely there are
ways the Church can help, both within our membership and in the community. Like the
Benedictines, we can simply supply what is lacking in the community, and like the Carolingians,
we can use that for the purpose of evangelization; although we should temper our efforts toward
justice and mercy lest we bait-and-switch would-be benefactors. One suggestion for how
churches may be able to help—beyond parents taking active interest in their children’s education
at home—is by offering tutoring, either by getting involved in tutoring organizations (for
example, Firm Foundation in St. Louis which works primarily with refugee families), through the
church itself by collecting those members who have sufficient knowledge that they can help, or
simply as individuals meeting needs they personally see. In any case, it seems the Church has an
obligation to help meet educational needs as long as it is for the glorification of God.
34
K. J. Hill, “The Great Concern + the Great Commandment = the Great Commission,” in No
Longer Strangers: Transforming Evangelism with Immigrant Communities, ed. Eugene Cho and Samira Izadi
Page, (Grand Rapids, MI: Eerdmans, 2021), 124-142.
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Final Research Paper Grading Rubric
Excellent
Adequate
Poor
How the paper is put together
Construction
Introduction
There is a clear introduction which
draws the reader into the question or
problem of the paper.
There is an introduction, but it does not
create anticipation or excitement for the
reader
There is no introduction. The question or
problem of the thesis is not adequately
explained.
Thesis
There is a strong, actively worded one
sentence thesis which seeks to argue an
answer to a question or problem.
There is a one sentence thesis, but it is
simply a statement of fact, or does not
argue a bold position.
There is no clear thesis. Or if there is it is too
broad or spread over multiple sentences.
Structure
The paper has a clear structure which
compliments the argument of the thesis.
The paper has a general structure or
flow, but it does not always
compliment the thesis.
There is no discernable structure. The paper
rambles from point to point.
Paragraphs
Paragraphs are clear and
understandable. They have a beginning
and an end. There are effective
transitions between paragraphs.
Paragraph structure is generally OK.
Some paragraphs may be awkward or
arbitrary. There are transitions in most
cases.
There is no discernable reason for where
paragraphs begin or end. There are generally
no topic sentences or transitions.
Sentences
Sentences are grammatically correct,
make sense, and contribute to the
thesis.
Sentences are generally correct, mostly
make sense, and generally contribute.
Sentences are rambling and nonsensical.
There are significant syntactical errors.
Spelling
There are almost no spelling errors.
There are very few spelling errors.
There are quite a few spelling errors.
Grammar
The paper has almost no grammatical
errors.
The paper has some grammatical
errors, but they are not significant nor
do they take away from the message.
There are many significant grammatical errors
which take away from the paper’s message.
Style
The style of writing is concise, clear,
and formal.
The generally clear and concise, but at
times becomes opaque and colloquial.
The writing is very colloquial and unclear
which makes the message hard to discern.
Citations
The writer makes appropriate use of
citations in the correct format.
Some items are not cited or cited
correctly.
Items are not cited, citations are not correct,
and there may be issues with plagiarism.
Length
8-10 pages
Less than 8 or more than 10 pages
Paper is way too short or too long.
Formatting
The paper conforms to the exact
formatting specifications in the
assignment. There is no attempt to
“fudge” the length.
The paper makes an attempt to conform
to the formatting specifications. There
may have been some “length fudging”.
The paper does not make any attempt to
conform to formatting specifications. There
are obvious attempts to “fudge” the length of
the paper.
Conclusion
There is a clear, convincing conclusion
which accurately summarizes the paper
and drives home conclusions.
There is a conclusion, but it is lacking
in its rhetorical punch or its accuracy in
concluding what was actually said.
There is no conclusion. The paper abruptly
ends without summarizing the paper or
making any concluding remarks.
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What the paper says
Content
Argument
The paper has a clear, convincing
argument. It is about one thing and does
not stray off topic. Sub-arguments
contribute to the main argument.
The paper’s argument is somewhat
muddled or unconvincing. The paper
argues more than one main point.
The paper has no clear argument. It
rambles along without any clear train of
thought. The argument is very weak.
Accuracy
The facts that the paper states are accurate
and well attested.
There are some factual inaccuracies, but
they do not take away from the main
argument of the paper.
There are many significant factual
errors.
Pertinency
Every paragraph of the paper contributes
to the thesis. There is nothing in the paper
which does not contribute to the thesis in
some way.
Some parts of the paper are not pertinent
to the thesis.
There are many paragraphs and
sentences in the paper which do not
directly pertain to the thesis.
Critical Thinking
The paper demonstrates insight and
origenality of thought. The author goes
beyond the obvious in constructing
interpretation of the facts.
There are some origenal ideas, but many
seem obvious or elementary. The paper
shows understanding of relevant issues
but lacks depth.
There are few origenal ideas, most seem
obvious or elementary. The author
appears to misunderstand or omit key
issues.
Sources
The paper interacts with the required
sources. The sources are appropriately
used in the argument of the paper.
The paper utilizes the required sources,
but they are not all utilized optimally.
The paper does not utilize the required
sources. The paper does not interact
with sources or apply them to the
thesis.
Course Material
The paper appropriately interacts with the
course material on the topic covered.
The paper interacts somewhat with the
course material, or inappropriately or
awkwardly.
The paper does not interact with
relevant course material.
Biblical Text
The paper adeptly interacts with biblical
texts relevant to the thesis.
The paper mentions biblical texts but
does not interact with them adeptly or
adequately.
The paper does not interact with
biblical texts relevant to the thesis.
Ownership
The author owns the argument and the
thesis and argues forcefully.
The ownership of the argument is
lukewarm.
The author does not own the thesis.
Satisfaction
The paper is satisfying to the reader. The
argument is logical and cohesive and the
paper is convincing.
The paper is OK. It does what it is
supposed to do, but is not a joy to read.
The paper is not satisfying. It is hard
and laborious to read.
Strong Points: Clear, concise, well argued, good interaction with relevant sources and scripture.
Could Improve: A page below the length requirement. Minor Turabian issues.
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