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We've got a fine old edit war going over the lead paragraphs of this article. I find the content fine as written, with appropriate redundancy in the lead. That's what's done in encyclopedic writing. However, I do find one sentence needs rewriting for clarity, which I will do once this is settled. --[[User:Drmargi|Drmargi]] ([[User talk:Drmargi|talk]]) 17:19, 16 August 2012 (UTC) |
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We've got a fine old edit war going over the lead paragraphs of this article. I find the content fine as written, with appropriate redundancy in the lead. That's what's done in encyclopedic writing. However, I do find one sentence needs rewriting for clarity, which I will do once this is settled. --Drmargi (talk) 17:19, 16 August 2012 (UTC)