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:::Your dismissive tone just confirm what I said above, which is your personal bias against Georgia. It is not "selling" or "touting" anything, it is noting an archaeological fact that Georgia is "one of the oldest" wine producing countries, which is referenced and definitely notable. Cultural aspect of it is also notable if you know anything about Georgia. There are no violations of any policies, it is your personal bias that is against it because it is a small poor country and it bothers you that something not depressing can be said. If something in lede was not discuss at length per policy, you could have also contributed by expanding or ask someone else, we should not do harm and go easy way of delete.--[[User:LeontinaVarlamonva|LeontinaVarlamonva]] ([[User talk:LeontinaVarlamonva|talk]]) 16:57, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
:::Your dismissive tone just confirm what I said above, which is your personal bias against Georgia. It is not "selling" or "touting" anything, it is noting an archaeological fact that Georgia is "one of the oldest" wine producing countries, which is referenced and definitely notable. Cultural aspect of it is also notable if you know anything about Georgia. There are no violations of any policies, it is your personal bias that is against it because it is a small poor country and it bothers you that something not depressing can be said. If something in lede was not discuss at length per policy, you could have also contributed by expanding or ask someone else, we should not do harm and go easy way of delete.--[[User:LeontinaVarlamonva|LeontinaVarlamonva]] ([[User talk:LeontinaVarlamonva|talk]]) 16:57, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
::::Again, the issue is the way the text is written, not the underlying archaeology. Do you have any comments on the specific points I mentioned in th eopening post here? [[User:Chipmunkdavis|CMD]] ([[User talk:Chipmunkdavis|talk]]) 17:05, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
::::Again, the issue is the way the text is written, not the underlying archaeology. Do you have any comments on the specific points I mentioned in th eopening post here? [[User:Chipmunkdavis|CMD]] ([[User talk:Chipmunkdavis|talk]]) 17:05, 5 August 2021 (UTC)
:::::the way text is written? then how should it be written, perhaps provide suggestion instead of easy way out of deleting. my response was already detailed. I don't think it's undue to say its one of the first countries to legalize cannabis. I don't think its undue to say one of the earliest wine producing countries in the world. anything that's "one of the...in the world" is notable and fair to say. also just because something reads like "positive" does not mean it is "selling" or "touting"--[[User:LeontinaVarlamonva|LeontinaVarlamonva]] ([[User talk:LeontinaVarlamonva|talk]]) 17:14, 5 August 2021 (UTC)

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Former good article nomineeGeorgia (country) was a good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
June 21, 2006Good article reassessmentDelisted
March 13, 2015Peer reviewReviewed
On this day...Facts from this article were featured on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "On this day..." column on April 9, 2004, April 9, 2005, May 26, 2005, May 26, 2006, May 26, 2007, May 26, 2008, May 26, 2009, May 26, 2010, May 26, 2011, May 26, 2012, and May 26, 2013.
Current status: Former good article nominee

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Language, Grammar

This is the English language Wiki. However it is riddled with poor grammar, missing articles, etc. And it generally feels like it was written in some sort of Euro-English. Was it translated into English? Or just written by non-native speakers? Honestly the level of English on Wikipedia seems to have dropped rapidly lately. What's wrong with proofreading ? If someone edits a page, it gets fact checked and mistakes or downright lies are removed; but apparently nobody has a problem with broken English. Can this page be reviewed by a native speaker/language expert please? 188.29.57.203 (talk) — Preceding undated comment added 01:24, 12 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

1993 conflict map

Iberieli Re this, you are right that the text is misleading. I think that it is supposed to refer to the evacuation of Georgian civilians by the Russian Navy [1]. I think that it would be a shame to lose such a map, I'll try to find a way to fix it. Alaexis¿question? 22:08, 14 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Mилостивый государь, where did you read that Russian fleet evacuated civilians from Sukhumi prior and after September 27, 1993? Did you mean Ukrainians? Because it was the Ukrainian ships and helicopters that took the civilians out from the conflict zone. From the HRW report, On August 16, Russian paratroopers began to evacuate civilians from the conflict.55 By August 20, nearly 10,000 civilians had been evacuated by sea by the Russian Black Sea fleet. It was on August 20, 1992 and not September 27, 1993. Moreover, those were NOT Georgian civilians being evacuated by Russian black sea fleet but Russian tourists, ethnic Russians who lived in Abkhazia, and Abkhaz as well. The map claim looks as if Russian Black Sea Fleet militarily assisted the Georgian defence (not the defence one will see in the soccer match, but military one) which as I wrote on the other talk page is completely inaccurate and unsubstantiated. So its a shame to lose such a map which was enormous inaccuracy which might suit certain viewpoint or bias but has nothing to do with reality? No my dear friend such parallel reality maps have no place on Wikipedia, especially on sensitive and controversial topics like conflict, war and political dispute. Iberieli (talk) 17:43, 15 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
As I wrote before, I also believe that the current wording is misleading and intend to correct it. I'll check the sources regarding the ethnicity of the civilians evacuated by the Russian navy. Can you point me to a source that says that only non-Georgians were evacuated? Alaexis¿question? 18:49, 15 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The HRW report quite explicitly says that ethnic Georgians were evacuated by the Black see fleet:
So are there reliable sources that contradict this? Alaexis¿question? 18:53, 15 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
It does seem a map worth saving. Placed it to the right as reference. The text box also needs to be shifted left a bit, but as it's an svg changes should be simple enough to make. CMD (talk) 09:50, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The map has been fixed and no longer mentions Russian military support of Georgians in September 1993. Alaexis¿question? 06:24, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks a lot, much appreciated! Iberieli (talk) 14:59, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Semi-protected edit request on 14 April 2021

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Change [[File:Mukhranbatoni Palace (3).jpg|thumb|Château Mukhrani, one of the centers of Georgia's viticulture in the 19th century, has recently been restored to produce its eponymous wine. to [[File:Mukhranbatoni Palace (3).jpg|thumb|Château Mukhrani, one of the centers of Georgia's viticulture in the 19th century, has recently been restored to produce its eponymous wine.]]

}} 93.136.205.181 (talk) 13:43, 14 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

 Done, thanks--Ymblanter (talk) 13:45, 14 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Semi-protected edit request on 18 June 2021

Remove superfluous "was" between "the" and "unified" in the sentence: "In the Middle Ages, the was unified Kingdom of Georgia emerged and reached its Golden Age during the reign of King David the Builder and Queen Tamar the Great in the 12th and early 13th centuries." ShareableTie (talk) 12:17, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

 Done   melecie   t 12:31, 18 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Requested move 11 July 2021

The following is a closed discussion of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on the talk page. Editors desiring to contest the closing decision should consider a move review after discussing it on the closer's talk page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

The result of the move request was: not moved. There is an apparent consensus that, in the absence of a clear primary topic, the disambiguation page should remain at its' current title. (closed by non-admin page mover) Jack Frost (talk) 00:13, 19 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]


– It has been a few years since this same move request was initiated for this page. I agree with the original logic that Georgia as a country should be given preference over the U.S state, and it should not have the words country in the bracket (as no other country does). When this page was created the U.S state was probably more searched for and had more relevance, but now that is not the case. The U.S state page should have its brackets as it does, this bracket should be removed. Johnnytest5 (talk) 10:11, 11 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Note: Georgia titles a page with significant content and so is ineligible to be a target "new" title unless it is also proposed to be renamed. This request has been altered to reflect that fact. P.I. Ellsworth  ed. put'r there 23:19, 11 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
WP:PRIMARYTOPIC says the primary topic should be "more likely than all the other topics combined." I interpret that as meaning that at least 50 percent of total traffic goes to the primary. 99to99 (talk) 03:31, 13 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
It also says that it should be "much more likely than any other single topic". This situation does not meet that criterion. --Khajidha (talk) 07:52, 13 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, that full line regarding respect to usage reads, "much more likely than any other single topic, and more likely than all the other topics combined" (emphasis on the "much more" and the "and"). "Much more" should be higher then 50 percent. Zzyzx11 (talk) 14:35, 14 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

a nation or territory considered as an organized political community under one government.

while the definition of "country" is:

a nation with its own government, occupying a particular territory.

which is quite hilarious. Georgia is a partially sovereign state or a fully sovereign state, depending on which one you're talking about. And the degree of sovereignty a topic holds has never been one of the criteria at WP:PRIMARYTOPIC. Red Slash 16:55, 17 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"The state is a state and the country is a country" if only we had some way to disambiguate the two...parenthetically perhaps, given that neither one is the primary topic for the word "Georgia" in the English language... - Aoidh (talk) 02:47, 18 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Off-topic comment

One more comment. Suppose Tuvalu (population: 11,646; UN votes: 1) decided to change its name to "England". Would you support moving the article on the tiny Pacific island to England, or would you disambiguate it? The England in the north isn't a sovereign state; it's a subnational entity that has, believe it or not, far less sovereign control than Georgia (U.S. state) has. (The UK Parliament has supreme authority over England; however, the United States Federal Government does not even have the authority to require Georgia to use the funds available to it to fund health care for its poorest residents - see National Federation of Independent Business v. Sebelius for details.) If full sovereignty or a UN vote really are the deciding factors, get ready for England and England (UK).

If not... if you think that, even without a UN vote, the subnational entity of England would have primacy over the island sovereign state newly named England, then where do you draw the line? (Don't BS me about there being a longer history for England the subnational entity. Ignorance of the history of Tuvalu does not mean that it does not exist.)

If you say that "North" England's wiki page is more widely read, I would move the same for "South" Georgia (recent months in 2021 excluded due to pressing current events there). If you say that North England has more population, a bigger economy, more influence on a world stage, etc. I would move the same for South Georgia. If you say that sovereignty does not equal primacy, I would move the same for South Georgia. If you say "this is absurd and a total waste of time", I would move the same for this move request. Red Slash 17:54, 17 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

South Georgia (island) is located near the Falklands. And if the international community and mainstream journalists actually acceded to your proposed charade, we possibly would move the article. User:力 (power~enwiki, π, ν) 17:58, 17 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I mean, obviously if Tuvalu changed its name, people would go along with it. Countries do get to decide what their name is. And I did specifically say "South" Georgiato clarify I was referring to the southernmost of the two Georgias, thank you Red Slash 02:44, 18 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

New lead content

The proposed lead changes devote about a sixth of the lead history to wine, in quite a travel-guide style prose. They also reduce the specificity of the HDI for no clear reason, add corruption issues for which the only mention in the article is replacing an entire police force due to corruption, add a lot of detail on cannabis which is almost certainly undue, and duplicates already mentioned NATO aspirations. That other country articles are not good is not a reason to make this article worse to match. CMD (talk) 12:42, 5 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Several observations why I think lead should not be changed like you suggest:
  • It is overly simplistic to say wine is "travel-style". Wine-making is essential part of Georgia's identity, culture, and also worth mentioning in history due to its ancient tradition, which makes it noteworthy in the history paragraph.
  • Your other reasons keep changing and not really supported by what you claimed. For example, after I rearrange some images there was no longer any sandwiching, at least in the section where you removed them. Also, you mention accessibility, but if something can be come more accessible (like providing a description), you are free to make improvement and help out, instead of just deleting. This is not very constructive and very frustrating for people spend time on it.
You mentioned WP:LEDE, which I just read and it says "significant information should not appear in the lead if it is not covered in the remainder of the article". Nothing you removed is really meeting this criteria so much that it worth fight over.
  • Most important, it seems capricious that you seem intent on having problem with such content on Georgia article and not other countries. For example, you recently edit Denmark but did not have problem with this "A developed country, Danes enjoy a high standard of living and the country ranks highly in some metrics of national performance, including education, health care, protection of civil liberties, democratic governance and LGBT equality." I think this is one of those situation where someone has decided that a small poor country cannot have anything nice said about it in the article and nothing more than personal bias, I don't see good reason for it and those policies you cited do not prohibit this information as far as I can tell. Most of it is discuss to some extent and not in violation of policy--LeontinaVarlamonva (talk) 15:34, 5 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Travel style refers to the way something is written. In this case it's written much like a brochure, selling an oldest country claim and touting UNESCO status. As for the lead content, I specifically pointed out the various unsupported items in my post, which you haven't covered. Regarding images, sandwiching remained, noticeably around the United Georgian monarchy subsection. ACCESS in this case relates to ensuring images are in a relevant section. For example, one of the recent edits put a picture of various foods in the Media subsection, to which it does not add much clarity. As for your Denmark analogy, you are welcome to fix that article, I do not heavily edit every country article. CMD (talk) 16:53, 5 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Your dismissive tone just confirm what I said above, which is your personal bias against Georgia. It is not "selling" or "touting" anything, it is noting an archaeological fact that Georgia is "one of the oldest" wine producing countries, which is referenced and definitely notable. Cultural aspect of it is also notable if you know anything about Georgia. There are no violations of any policies, it is your personal bias that is against it because it is a small poor country and it bothers you that something not depressing can be said. If something in lede was not discuss at length per policy, you could have also contributed by expanding or ask someone else, we should not do harm and go easy way of delete.--LeontinaVarlamonva (talk) 16:57, 5 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Again, the issue is the way the text is written, not the underlying archaeology. Do you have any comments on the specific points I mentioned in th eopening post here? CMD (talk) 17:05, 5 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
the way text is written? then how should it be written, perhaps provide suggestion instead of easy way out of deleting. my response was already detailed. I don't think it's undue to say its one of the first countries to legalize cannabis. I don't think its undue to say one of the earliest wine producing countries in the world. anything that's "one of the...in the world" is notable and fair to say. also just because something reads like "positive" does not mean it is "selling" or "touting"--LeontinaVarlamonva (talk) 17:14, 5 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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