Kudos on allowing the player to attempt to run away. ^_^
I love having choices, regardless of consequences.

While I can't know for sure why Akito chose you, I'd say he picked a good victim.
The perfect target to fall for even a shred of kindness.
He could not have chosen a better girl.

Minor flaw in the writing: She says she slept on a futon, but there is clearly a bed in her bedroom.
It's a minor detail, but if you aim for perfection you may wanna fix that.
It's a single word change fix, so it should be simple.

I like his twin. ^_^
Is there any path where he can be your romantic interest without you dying?

But Akito is cute too.
Although his feeling as difficult to see and understand. o_O
And despite it all he clearly cares nothing for you.
If he had, he wouldn't direct his...bad moods...against you. He'd aim it at the other person instead.
(Trying to avoid giving away spoilers here.)

It's truly a tricky game to survive in.

I keep dying before I meet more than 3 people even! oO;

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Oh, but the game itself is actually very well-written and interesting.

And the artwork is beautiful.

....I just wish I knew how not to die all the time. ^_^;

If Ryuuto has one million haters, I am one of them. If Ryuuto has ten haters, I am one of them. If Ryuuto has one hater, it is me. If Ryuuto has zero haters, I have left this world. If the world is against Ryuuto, I am with the world. If the world is for Ryuuto, I am against the world. Till my last breath, I'll hate Ryuuto.

I remember playing this 2 years ago. How nostalgic

Oh, this brings back memories. I played the shit out of this back in the day. Thank you so much for uploading it here! When it comes to indie otome games, Monochrome Heaven is still second to none in raw atmosphere for me.

wow, thank you for uploading! 

Oh it has been so long since I played this! Thank you so much for translating these games!

one of the first otome i ever played never forgot it. ty for uploading it again <3