.....‘I saw some rocks skipping down hill’. The poet is absolutely thrilled with the rolling rocks! What a keen sense of observation! In the second stanza, I find a sense of joy of the rocks that are having a sublime bath and cherishing their freedom! (cont..)

The third stanza invokes human beings to embrace every turn and tumble of life! The conclusive stanza provides a strong message to us that even after being removed from a top position, we should not lose heart rather we should enjoy life like a piece of rolling rock and Keep on progressing without losing heart, with a ‘never say die’ attitude! What a beautiful poem! Well penned my friend!

Keep on progressing A nice advice! Well done, Simon!

Good poem, motivational as well, thank for sharing Sir H.S

The childlike inquisitiveness and joy of the moment are infectious in this poem. I live in a place where I've been fortunate to see many rocks that were proud to be free... and have helped free a few, just for the fun of watching. The personification just pulls you right into the experience of being there.

This wonderful write will find its way in any class of readers and even those who cannot understand or hate poetry, this poem will find its way to their hearts because of the clarity, beauty and wonderful message it delivers.10+++ and on to my Poem List.

The penultimate stanza and the final stanza are so moving. The way you pen your poems are so clear that even an ordinary layman could understand the meaning and wisdom of this write.

One of the most inspring poems I have ever read aside from your best poem, I Choose The Mountain and Something Big. What a brilliant write. You were able to conceive a poem on rolling rocks. Only a great poet can formulate such idea and weave them into a marvelous poem.