Soothing, breaking one by one,
Peaceful brushing on the shore
In crescendo and then back down
My soul is asking for much more
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There is something about the sea that is so mesmerizing. Soothingly, it draws you in. Feels like I’m there. What an experience. Good job. Enjoyed this Hans.
Another one of your wonderful poem to touch my soul, yes I feel any kind of water songs soothing. But the sea could keep entire me forever. Thank you!
This is beautiful, splashing lines. Thanks for sharing.
lovely and meaningful write with rich story..liked it very much 10/10
Well write small poem and precise... well done loved it....
A poem of give and receive..ebb and flow..The return is incomplete.. I loved it! Good one.; D
see, sea, crescendo, soothing, soul All these have the sound of 'C' in them. I agree with you in that one can never have too much of the sea. Short and precise and to the point. Lovely write.
My soul is asking for much more Beautiful touch on these poetic lines, thanks Aufie for the sharing. Regards, Subhas