Money...$
What For?
Sharing
Not sure
For bills, need more
Money.
Money...
Plant a seed
It is what we all need
I want to plant you URGENTLY
A Money tree.
Money,
Is it for giving?
Money
High cost of living
Money.
Money,
Such crime
Money,
People doing time
Money.
Money...
Touching, everyones hands
Germs galore; who cares I have plans
For money.
Money...
Does it make the world turn
Yes, No
One day we will learn.$$$$$$$$$$$$
Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL
I guess money is only a problem when people steal or misuse it, A brilliant write, loved it, -Off to buy a money tree.
Beautiful poem about money wonderfully structured won my heart! Kudos!
Short, sharp staccato lines, impact and meaning in tight lines. I Like this a lot.
The Blble says that the love of money is the root of all evil. You have written very responsively on this important subject!
Plant a seed/it is what we need... great slogan but many times we don't do it even we know it....a beautiful poem!
THE NEW PH FORMAT IS DISASTROUS. I THINK CLICKING ON PoemHunter.com, above, will take you to a page to write a complaint.
money is just one poor option stealing the many opportunities for a friendly adoption share and care is where riches lie so much more fun than buy, buy, buy
A beautiful poem with a meaningful message. We cannot deny rhe importance of money. It enables one to put food on the table. And the basic necessities in life is sustainable. Yet, when life is centered on money and that everything revolves on it, then happiness in life ceases.to exist. When we are governed by money, the beauty of our heart is eliminated. Wonderfully written. Liked the form. It conveys the message of this marvelous write more powerful.
A different sort of thinking. Thanks for sharing it with us.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
interesting how you structure your piece great work