This is obviously great. the meaning is clear and enjoyable, Totally fantastic and nice. good job dear.

Wise and sage advice, Written with emotional empact. There is much to think on here. Indeed, a worthwhile write

If we are free from locking our souls within then surely it leads us to the great path of wisdom. i love the clarity and the presentation technique used here. I must give a 10

a wave of satisfaction comes over my mind while I am reading this poem The biggest freedom...really great!

Fabulous write Aufie, so much wisdom here.

A great poem, its message is universal, its style is amazing and it has so many beautiful lines.

Indeed, it is within our discretion to chose bliss or not. A poem with a powerful message. Thanks for sharing. Please have a look at my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

i have a notice writing here hoping it could be useful, , , this line, , , , i pray for spirit it must has been so i pray for my creator because praying must be only for him

Your poem brilliantly shines, yes everything is around us we only need to keep hearts open, how true! Thank you, wish I could give a hundred tens, great poem, I should have it on my faves, thank you for share.

Such a wise poem swimmin in super allegory itself dat i vote for it high.