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casual sex.
Initially, starting WP1, I knew it would be difficult because I always struggled with
writing so I already dreaded it. I had the most trouble with the thesis statement and tieing the
body parts back to the thesis statement. Zack definitely left comments of my paper telling me to
go back and reread my paragraphs and make sure that they were relevant to my thesis. After my
revision, I changed my thesis and went back to my body paragraphs to make sure that they all
had relevance when it comes to my thesis statement. In addition, Zack left a comment on my
WP1 where he was freaked out by the length of my paragraphs which I didnt even realize I did,
so I tried to cut down my paragraph length by either starting a new paragraph, or by eliminating
ideas that had no relevance to my thesis statement. I deleted quite a bit of stuff that I repeated
over and over again. In Zacks words, I kept it pushing after I made a point and supported it.
Overall, I feel like my WP1 is so much better! I feel like the flow is better and the deletion of a
lot of irrelevant information solidified my support of the authors argument. Im now proud of
my WP1. It is really cool to see the all the differences made and how my writing has improved
within the ten week in writing 2.
Next, after editing my WP2 I realized that length was yet again a big issue. I have super
long paragraphs and I found myself struggling to cut them down or eliminate information
because I felt like each point I made was important. I went back and reread the paragraphs a
couple of times and found some places where reading felt forced and not like it flowed, so I
changed a few sentences or words. Along with this, I went back and made sure that my body
paragraphs supported my thesis statement. Im unsure about the revision of this paper. I felt like
it is still too wordy. I felt like doing the reverse outline definitely helped me clarify my ideas in
this paper, but was unable to help me to minimize such longs paragraphs.
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