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1) The document discusses point of view (POV) in short stories, which is one of the most important choices a writer makes. POV determines who is telling the story and what they know or don't know. 2) There are advantages and disadvantages to both first-person and third-person POV. First-person provides intimacy but limits what characters know, while third-person gives more flexibility but less identification. 3) Unreliable narrators can be challenging but also interesting choices, as long as the reader can understand what is really happening versus what the narrator says is happening. The document uses "The Yellow Wallpaper" as an example of an unreliable narrator.

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MIT Lecture Note 14

1) The document discusses point of view (POV) in short stories, which is one of the most important choices a writer makes. POV determines who is telling the story and what they know or don't know. 2) There are advantages and disadvantages to both first-person and third-person POV. First-person provides intimacy but limits what characters know, while third-person gives more flexibility but less identification. 3) Unreliable narrators can be challenging but also interesting choices, as long as the reader can understand what is really happening versus what the narrator says is happening. The document uses "The Yellow Wallpaper" as an example of an unreliable narrator.

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21W.

755, Writing and Reading Short Stories (Fall 2006) Shariann Lewitt Session 11: Point of View

Point -

of view (POV) Who is telling the story? Why is this important? Who knows what? Do we trust the narrator?

Point of view is one of the most important choices that a writer makes, and this is one of the very few choices that the writer can change. You can write something in third person, change it to first, and change it to third intimate. Almost any story will be radically different, but possible, told from a different point of view. Point of view is whose shoulder is the camera on? Who is recording these events? A novel can support multiple points of view, a short story cannot. You cannot jump around to various peoples heads because you dont really have the space or time. Keep it tight. Sometimes if a story isnt quite working and you dont know how to make it work, try using a different point of view. Change first to third, third to first, change which character is telling the story. (It can be a useful exercise to do this if youre having trouble, even if you dont go with the change. You will learn a lot about the situation/character by attempting to redraft pieces of a story from another point of view.) Choices of point of view - 1st person: narrator as protagonist vs. narrator tells of someone else - 3rd person: intimate vs. omniscient POV 1st person Advantages Intimacy voice identification natural Author knows things Author can pay attention where the character wont Disadvantages harder to pull off characters dont know things distance from characters

3rd person

Choices in time: Current time (the story is unfolding as the narrator tells it) + immediate, exciting -characters do not have perspective Recent past (the narrator is telling what has been revealed very recently) Reminiscent past (the story happened long ago and now the narrator knows things that s/he didnt know when this happened) +characters can comment and give information that was unavailable -we know that the narrator doesnt die

There is some tradition/assumption that for a story told in first person, especially reminiscent first, that the narrator must give some reason in the beginning as to why s/he is telling this story. I dont think thats necessary but it can be a useful frame or exercise. The Unreliable Narrator Just because someone is telling a story doesnt mean that the narrator knows everything, or is telling the truth. The unreliable narrator can be an exciting choice, but it presents some difficulties. The rule is, the reader has to be able to see what is really happening, not just what the narrator SAYS (which is not always true.) Narrators can be unreliable because they have an agenda, they are lying, they honestly dont know, or their understanding of the situation is faulty. The story must reveal which it is, and this understanding of the narrator must be essential to the now moment. Unreliable narrators are a lot of fun (for the writer as well as the reader) but do present technical challenge. Think here of The Yellow Wallpaper for a story with an unreliable narrator. Explain French scenes French scenes are a useful way to break down events into interactions in the story. A French scene is when one person arrives and interacts with the people already there. When someone leaves and the full complements of characters on stage changes, it is a new French scene. So we can break down events into segments defined by which characters are involved in an interaction. every scene in a story must move the story toward the NOW every scene must be vitally connected to the NOW

All stories: - Why do you think the author made this choice? - How would the story be different if the author made a different choice? Author Atwood Updike Mansfield Gilman Short Story Happy Endings Separating Miss Brill The Yellow Wallpaper POV 3rd 3rd intimate 3rd intimate 1st unreliable

Miss Brill small, intimate storywould it work in 1st person? Why or why not? Happy Endings extreme author omniscient - omniscient out of style right now - reminiscent vs. unfolding - long reminiscent vs. short reminiscent NOTEthis is an experimental kind of storyvery different How does the Gilman work with the unreliable narrator? What is our understanding of what happens in the story? What is hers? How does the reliability of the narrator affect your experience as a reader?

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Discuss each story, look at how the pov contributes to our understanding. Think of how each story would change if you changed the pov.

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