Communication Skills Guide Adelaide
Communication Skills Guide Adelaide
Communication Skills Guide Adelaide
PROGRAMS
COMMUNICATION
SKILLS GUIDE
CONTENTS
The University of Adelaide
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1.6 Interviews
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1.12 Memos
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PREFACE
How will you succeed in your degree and
the world of Business?
Much depends on your success as a professional
communicator. The professions seek graduates
who present themselves well as speakers and
writers. Knowledge is not enough, number
crunching is not enough the bottom line is good
communication skills.
In the Bachelor and Master of Commerce, we
expect you to show that you can speak, write, think
and make soundly based judgments. We expect
you to learn independently, by making good use of
all available resources, including this booklet, also at
www.business.adelaide.edu.au/current/comskil/
How do you write professional reports? Case
studies? Executive Summaries? Interview other
professionals? Give convincing oral presentations?
Reference appropriately? Avoid plagiarism? This
Guide shows you how. Its a key resource for
communicating effectively. Check it every time you
begin to prepare an assignment.
The Communication Skills Guide is tailor-made for
the Business School at The University of Adelaide.
Because the lecturers in each pathway have
designed the types of assignments described here,
the Guide tells you what they expect and how you
can meet their standards. The Guide is for you.
Use it!
ACKNOWLEDGMENTS
The Communication Skills Guide is an
initiative of the Business School and the
Professions Learning Centre aimed at
integrating communication skills across
all courses in the Bachelor and Master of
Commerce programs.
INTRODUCTION TO
UNIVERSITY LEARNING
Every educational situation has particular
expectations and ways of doing things. At
university, students are expected to be independent
learners. It is up to you to find out what you need
to know, and to organise your time for classes,
for reading outside of classes and for passing up
assignments on time. Section 2.3 in this Guide lists
some strategies for becoming more independent.
This doesnt mean you are on your own. The
lecturers, your tutors and various resources
available in the University are there to support
you. However, it is up to you to use these
resources effectively.
Your lecturers will provide you with a written course
outline and specific expectations about the course
assignments, as well as information about the
content of the course.
Your tutors are your first point of call if you are not
clear about the content or the course expectations.
Use your tutorial times to clarify any aspects that
are confusing.
The most useful resources available for you
include your School Handbook, your Course Outline
and other course handouts, this Communication
Skills Guide, The Professions Learning Centre
(PLC), The Centre for Learning and Professional
Development (CLPD) and various other web sites.
Your School Handbook includes important dates
for semesters, enrolment, withdrawals and course
additions. It gives information about the different
Pathways, the courses and their lecturers-in-charge,
services from the Undergraduate and Postgraduate
Hub, computing facilities at the School, and rules
and procedures.
Your Course Outlines and assignment handouts
tell you exactly what is expected for each of your
assignments. These must be read very carefully
alongside the Communication Skills Guide, to
ensure your assignments meet the assessment
criteria against which your markers are grading.
HELPFUL WEBSITES
Business School
www.business.adelaide.edu.au/
Communication Skills Guide
www.business.adelaide.edu.au/
current/comskil/
PLC
www.professions.learningcentre@
adelaide.edu.au
CLPD
www.adelaide.edu.au/clpd/students/
LEARNING SUPPORT
WITHIN THE UNIVERSITY
Professions Learning Centre (PLC)
The PLC offers academic skills support for students within the Faculty of
Professions. This is done through transition workshops for post-graduate
students; embedded workshops tailored specifically to cater for course
specific needs; face-to-face consultations for postgraduate students and
first year undergraduates as well as Bridging Programs for international
postgraduate coursework students first arriving in Australia.
Level 1, Postgraduate Hub
10 Pulteney Street
The University of Adelaide
SA 5005 Australia
E: professions.learningcentre@adelaide.edu.au
See ...
CRITERIA
See 2.8
See 2.7
The proposition shows understanding of the question and indicates the points to
be covered;
The final sentence summarises
Present an argument
See 2.8
Purpose
To write a concise and logical answer to a question.
Audience
Your assessor. However, this format is practice for presenting persuasive answers to issues or problems for
business colleagues or superiors.
Structure
Introduction
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(see example). In a sense, the ambit of the answer is in this sentence.
Argument
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What and the Why.
What
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Why
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the answer you give.
Conclusion
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Style
See 2.9
The answer may have only one paragraph. If longer than half a page, consider more paragraphs. The writing
should be impersonal, to give the answer generality and suggest impartiality. However, in some instances the
nature of the assignment task may require a personal style of response where students are asked to relate
personal business experience to concepts and theories.
Steps
See 2.8
Present information and justification for your answer. Include brief examples if they will help to make your
point(s) clear.
Check that all the information included is necessary to your answer - no padding.
Tip
See 2.8
Rote learning is not sufficient for short answers. You will need to think about how the different facts
relate, their purposes and their consequences, and answer the question. See the example below.
Example
Question: Discuss the conditions under which cash accounting provides useful financial information.
Answer
INTRODUCTION
Establishing sentence including Point of View
Cash accounting provides useful financial information only under restrictive conditions.
ARGUMENT
What (explanation)
Pure cash accounting maintains records of an entitys cash flow. It ignores all liabilities and only recognises
one asset cash. Modified cash accounting methods keep the daily records on a cash basis, but augment the
end-of-period results for a few significant non-cash items such as inventories or equipment.
What (explanation)
The main aim of accounting is to provide financial information for use in making economic decisions. The
accountant normally presents this information in terms of an entitys financial position and changes therein as
represented by assets, liabilities and owners equity.
Why (implications of the facts)
When non-cash assets and liabilities are a significant part of an entitys operation, then the cash accounting
method will not provide the information needed for making economic decisions.
CONCLUSION
(logical conclusion drawn restates argument given what has been presented)
It follows that the cash accounting method will provide useful financial information when an entitys operations are
conducted mainly in cash terms, with relatively small or constant carry-overs of inventory and equipment from one
period to the next.
Useful References
See the Business School website for examples and further advice.
SKILLS
CRITERIA
The proposition states your position and is followed by the main points to be covered
The proposition shows understanding of the question
The argument presents your ideas with evidence
The conclusion summarises the points made
Present an argument
Reference thoroughly
See 2.14
Definitions
An essay is a formal presentation of an argument.
An academic essay refers to the most recent and significant research and literature in presenting an argument.
Purpose
To persuade an audience of your point of view.
Audience
Your assessor, who is an academic, will assess the clarity of your argument and how well you justify your position
and acknowledge your sources.
Structure
Proposition
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Introduction
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Presentation of Points
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Essays have a formal tone to indicate impartial analysis and good style is important. Your writing should be clear
and concise, using your own words. Acknowledge sources when others words or ideas are used. Avoid skimpy
paragraphs and overlong sentences and paragraphs.
Steps
Underline the key words in the assignment question and roughly draft an argument, using what you know. Plan
what further information and evidence you need to read.
See 2.8
Read critically and analytically about the topic: interpret, compare information, work out relationships, check
relevance to the topic. Note your sources, being sure to record the page numbers.
Rearrange or redraft your argument as further ideas are found to support or counter your position. With each draft
refine your ideas.
Check that your argument flows well, is introduced in the first paragraph and reiterated in the last.
See 2.14
Proofread, and cross-check references in the essay and the reference list.
Hints
It is often best to write (or rewrite) the introduction last, when you know exactly what position you have argued in the essay.
Use direct quotations to illustrate key points, but avoid excessive use of quotations.
See 2.8
Make sure you have taken a position; not just presented others ideas.
Useful References
Clanchy, J & Ballard, B 1997, Essay writing for students, Longman, Cheshire, Melbourne.
Craswell, G 2005, Writing for academic success: A postgraduate guide, Sage, London.
MunLing, S 2010, Essay writing: A student's guide, Sage, London.
SKILLS
CRITERIA
Purpose
To present an argument insightfully and critically with regard to existing work in the discipline.
Audience
Your lecturer or assessor. You have to convince them that you have read vastly, critically evaluated what you have
read and synthesised information to support your own argument.
Structure
Introduction
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Argument
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Conclusion
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Style
See 2.8
A literature review is written in academic language. One of the fundamental qualities of academic language is that
it attempts to be objective. Criticisms of other authors works need to be fair. It is important to maintain a respectful,
scholarly tone when you are discussing the work of other authors. You need to avoid strong or emotive language.
This is especially true of the authors work you criticise.
Steps
Read widely, critically and analytically about the topic: interpret, compare information, work out relationships and
check the relevance.
See 2.8
Take all the critical comments you made in your readings and structure an academic opinion.
Indicate a clear relationship between your argument and the evidence. Link sentences within the paragraphs to
indicate these relationships and connections. Summarise each section to draw conclusions.
See 2.8
Support your arguments with facts and theory from the literature. Use examples, citation and quotations
where appropriate.
Account for differing opinions rather than ignore them. Present evidence and also make some attempt to
acknowledge opposing viewpoints. Make your preferences clear rather than sitting on the fence or leaving it to the
reader to draw conclusions.
Make sure that the sections of the review are clearly connected. Write an outline statement in the introduction which
makes the order of the arguments clear, and give reasons for ordering the material in that particular manner.
Include in-text citations wherever necessary and a reference list at the end of the review.
Useful References
Cooper, H 1998, Synthesizing research: A guide for literature reviews, Sage Publications, Thousand Oaks, California.
Galvan, JL 1999, Writing literature reviews, Pyrczak Publishing, Los Angeles.
Macauley, P 2001, The literature review, Deakin University, Geelong, Victoria, Australia.
Machi, LA & McEvoy, BT 2009, The literature review: Six steps to success, Corwin Press, Thousand Oaks, California.
CRITERIA
See 2.8
Reading
See 2.8
Evaluation criteria
See 2.9
Provide all the publication details that the reader will find useful
Provide a summary of the article
Describe several points with which you agree or disagree and provide evidence that supports
your position
Refer to other aspects of the article that might be worth commenting on such as
appropriateness of language, use of illustrations and graphics and organisation of text
Be selective about the information and evidence that you include in your review as there is
usually a word limit
Purpose
To read, value and present a critical evaluation of an article so that your reader understands the key content of the
article and your response to it without actually reading it.
Audience
Your lecturer or assessor. You have to convince them through your writing that you have critically read and
evaluated an article using the criteria indicated in the table above.
Structure
Introduction
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important. Identify the purpose of the article.
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Body
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yours.
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Conclusion
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See 2.9
Style
A critical review is a summary of an article that you have read, therefore paraphrase and use quotations sparingly.
Do not plagiarise. Be consistent in the use of tense: choice of past, present perfect or present-present is preferred.
Steps
Take a quick overview of the article.
Read the article without taking notes in order to gain an overall idea of its aim and main idea.
Read the article again and highlight important ideas and make brief notes in the margin.
Check your notes to ensure that they include the main aim of the paper (analyse, evaluate, argue, criticise, etc.),
its methodological approach as well as findings or conclusions.
Evaluate the content and begin writing your critical review.
Useful References
Brandt, C 2009, Read, research and write: Academic skills for ESL students in higher education, Sage, London.
Rose, J 2007, The mature student's guide to writing, Palgrave Macmillan, Basingstoke.
Virgo, G 2005, Writing an academic assignment: Preparing a model essay on globalisation, Pearson Education,
Frenchs Forest, NSW.
See 1.15
SKILLS
CRITERIA
Speak clearly
Clear speech
Steady pace
Some modulation
Appropriate emphasis
Explain or define new terms
Avoid jargon and long sentences
Purpose
To present a persuasive argument or report on a topic.
Audience
Consider your audience to determine how much and how you will present. Choose vocabulary and information to
suit their background.
Structure
Introduction
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Argument
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Conclusion
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Style
The vocabulary and language used should match that used by the audience in similar settings. Avoid an overload
of information and new terminology. Use transition phrases and words to communicate shifts in coverage of
content and refer back to earlier information to help the audience follow the presentation.
Steps
See 2.8
Read critically and analytically about the topic: interpret, compare information, work out relationships, check
the relevance.
Tips
Dont block the audiences vision and limit the time your back is to the audience.
Make sure you know how to operate the equipment; practice operating it ahead of time; have back up files saved
(make sure that you save your presentation on a compatible format).
Useful References
Huff, WAK 2008, Public speaking: A concise overview for the twenty-first century, Peter Lang, New York.
Valentine, N 1993, Speaking in public, Penguin Pocket Series, Australia.
Van Emden, J 2010, Presentation skills for students, Palgrave Macmillan, Hampshire, New York.
1.6 Interviews
SKILLS
CRITERIA
Presenting as a professional
Questioning
Delivery
Closure
Definition
An interview is a formal meeting where specific information is sought from a person through oral questioning.
Purpose
To gain specific information or to assess a persons suitability for a position or role.
Audience
The audience is the person being interviewed (the interviewee). The interviewer will want to impress on the
interviewee that the organisation for which he or she works is efficient and considerate, and the information given
will be treated professionally.
Structure
There are two structures to consider. One is the structure of the total interview, which encompasses the arrival and
departure of the interviewee or interviewer; the other is the structure of the questions, which fits within the structure
of the interview.
Greetings
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The questions
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Steps
Make sure that the interviewee knows the purpose, the time and the place of the interview and has plenty of time
to prepare.
Be clear on what you want to find out from the interviewee.
Write open-ended questions that will elicit this information. (Open-ended questions require more than a yes or
no answer. They often begin with What, How, Which, When, Where or Who).
Put the questions in order, with the more general, background questions at the beginning.
If you are the host, prepare the interview setting so that the chairs are at the same level, at an angle, and not
facing the light.
Greet the interviewee and follow the structure above. Vary the order of your prepared questions if the answers
naturally move into different questions.
Note answers, and check that all questions have been covered by the end.
As soon as practicable fill out your notes so that you have the answers clearly recorded.
Hints
Pace your questions so that all your written questions are answered without rushing. Give yourself and the
interviewee time to think, to add information and to ask for clarification.
Useful References
Corfield, R 2009, Successful interview skills: How to prepare, answer tough questions and get your ideal job, 5th
edn, Kogan Page, London.
Friesen, BK 2010, Designing and conducting your first interview project, Jossey-Bass, San Francisco.
King, N & Horrocks, C 2010, Interviews in qualitative research, Sage, Los Angeles.
CRITERIA
Research information
See 2.9
Organise information
Appropriate headings
Integrated structure, i.e., arguments and conclusions match purpose
Alternative views are considered
See 2.7
Definition
In the business workplace, much of the writing will be in the form of a report. It is a formal account of a situation
produced after consideration of all relevant factors. The report is based on research, with evidence provided from
the literature as well as from research undertaken by the investigator. The argument is drawn from professional
practice, using the language of business appropriate to the audience.
Purpose
To inform senior management or a client about a particular issue, often for the purpose of future decision-making.
Audience
Your audience may be the managing director of your company, its shareholders, people in a government
department or rival firms, or indeed potential clients. Your audience and their needs will influence what you put in
your report, and how you present it.
The length of a Professional Report varies according to the problem. Concise reports for managers rarely extend
beyond three pages, while reports that have been prepared by consultancies may extend to 30 or 60 pages or
more. Thus 2 structures are presented. The first is commonly used for full length and consultancy style management reports, while the second structure is more suitable for concise reports to management on a specific problem.
See 2.9
See 2.13,
2.14
Title page
Report title, author name, course and tutorial, tutors name, date
Table of contents
All sections and appendices listed and numbered; page numbers provided
List of illustrations,
tables, figures
Executive summary
Introduction
Body of report
Conclusion
Summary or restatement of main issues. Basis for recommendations. May indicate 'next
step'. May comment on the limitations of the research (such as generalisability, availability
of data)
Recommendations
References
Use Harvard System and ensure in-text citations relate to reference list
Appendices
Title page
Report title, author name, course and tutorial, tutors name, date
Table of contents
All sections and appendices listed and numbered; Page numbers provided
Executive summary
Body of report
Conclusion
Appendix
Reports have a formal tone to suggest impartiality of the analysis and discussion. Your writing should be clear and
concise and display good style, taking account of the report's purpose and the audience's needs. Your voice and
words should be your own. Use headings to guide the reader.
Steps
Identify the data you will need to collect to satisfy the given purpose, and how you can obtain that information.
See 2.8
Read critically and analytically about the topic: interpret, compare information, work out relationships,
check relevance.
Form an argument and organise the evidence for and against. Develop your recommendations.
Outline your report sections (check whether all sections are required).
Write a draft: develop your argument; provide evidence for your argument; present alternative views; justify your
argument; build logical links; avoid plagiarism; cite sources correctly; write clearly and concisely; format the report.
Check that your argument and recommendations meet the purpose; check structure, language and style; check
flow of argument; copy edit; cross-check references in report and reference list.
Prepare appendices, place in order of referral from your text and also number in that order.
Final preparation: proof read; check that all report elements are present and in the correct order; check grammar
and spelling.
Hints
See 2.13
Be clear whether you are stating your opinion or the views of others, e.g. 'The manager indicated that' and
'The findings suggest that .'
Where appropriate, use direct quotations from research to illustrate key points or to provide definitions. Avoid
excessive use of quotations.
Ask your tutor which reference system is required.
Useful References
Allen, J 1998, Writing in the workplace, Allyn and Bacon, Boston.
Marsen, S 2007, Professional writing: The complete guide for business, industry and IT, Palgrave and Macmillan,
New York.
Silyn-Roberts, H 2005, Professional communications: A handbook for civil engineers, American Society of Civil
Engineers, Reston, VA.
CRITERIA
Format as expected*
*Note: Some academics emphasise on different criteria or format. Always confirm with your lecturer on what they require and write your
executive summary accordingly.
Definition
An executive summary is a concise and complete summary of the essential content of the report of which it is part.
Purpose
To provide the most important information about a report so that the reader, perhaps a manager, can decide
whether the content of the report is relevant. Busy managers and clients may base a decision on reading only the
executive summary.
Audience
An executive summary is for a client, a firms senior management, or an academic with an interest in the report.
Structure
Why?
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Steps
After completing your report, draft an overview of its essentials, using the above structure. Avoid copying and
pasting sentences from the report.
Check that no new information has been introduced and delete any non-essential information or words.
Read the executive summary aloud to make sure that the meaning is clear and it is easy to read. Rewrite clumsy sentences.
Proofread for spelling and grammar.
Title the single page Executive Summary and place it after the table of contents.
Hints
The executive summary is often considered the most important part of a report. It must therefore be clear and have
no errors.
It should be written last when you know exactly what you have discussed and recommended.
The executive summary should stand alone. Do not refer to an appendix or use acronyms.
Do not introduce any idea in an executive summary that is not in the report. The management report must also
stand alone.
Do not use headings within an executive summary.
Useful References
Bretag, T, Crossman, J & Bordia, S 2009, Communication skills, McGraw-Hill, North Ryde, NSW.
Marsen, S 2007, Professional writing: The complete guide for business, industry and IT, Palgrave and Macmillan,
New York.
Silyn-Roberts, H 2005, Professional communications: A handbook for civil engineers, American Society of Civil
Engineers, Reston, VA.
See 2.7
See 2.8
SKILLS
CRITERIA
Support your
recommendations
Definition
A case analysis report presents an analysis of the problems and issues facing a particular company, with
recommendations of a plan of action and justification of that plan.
Purpose
To persuade an audience that your recommendations are feasible, desirable and the best available.
Audience
A case analysis report is for a client or a firms senior management who are seeking a way forward.
Structure
Title page
Report title, author's name, course and tutorial, tutor's name, date.
Table of contents
List and number all sections; include page numbers.
See 1.8
Executive Summary
Page headed Executive Summary.
No more than one A4 page in length.
Single-spaced.
Analyse and explain each issue in terms of the relevant theoretical material and of their advantages and
disadvantages.
Recommendations
Suggest the best next step to take on each of the issues, with justification based on your analysis - no new information.
Appendices
Include additional material relevant to the case and referred to in the report.
Case studies have a formal tone to indicate impartial analysis. Your writing should be clear and concise, and be in
your own words. Use headings to guide the reader and include tables or diagrams that make the case clearer.
Hints
There is generally no single correct solution to a cases issues. Consider alternative solutions before deciding on
one direction.
Case analysis involves the application of sound principles. Consider which of the concepts and principles already
introduced in your course apply in the case.
Useful References
Cottell, S 2008, The study skills handbook, Palgrave Macmillan, Basingstoke, UK.
Kashani, K 1992, Managing global marketing: Cases and text, PWS-Kent Pub., Boston.
Turner, K. 2008, Essential academic skills, Oxford University Press, South Melbourne, Victoria.
CRITERIA
Context in introduction
One idea per paragraph
See 2.7
Purpose
Is your letter to inform, persuade or seek information? The purpose of your business letter will affect its tone and length.
Audience
Consider carefully to whom your letter is addressed. Your audience will influence the tone and language you use.
When you write a business document, you must assume that your audience has limited time in which to read it and
is likely to skim. Your readers have an interest in what you say insofar as it affects their working world. They want to
know the "bottom line": the point you are making about a situation or problem and how they should respond.
Steps
Plan your letter: think about purpose and audience, the main message, how best to convey your message, and
the appropriate tone for the purpose.
Write a draft: give your reason for writing the letter; present the necessary facts completely and logically; finish the
body with any action required, e.g. request, statement of outcome.
Revise: check information; consider audience and purpose; check language and style; check flow of argument;
copy edit.
Final preparation: proof read; check that all letter layout and content elements are correctly presented; check
grammar and spelling.
Marylin Franch
Senior Consultant
Inter-Office Solutions
24 Pirie Street
Adelaide, SA 5005
Australia
Sender's detail
Date
Recipient's address
Salutation
Subject
This is further to our meeting of last week at which we agreed to hold a series of meetings over
the next two months to review your experiences with the pilot implementation of the 1 to 1
Customer Relationship Management Program.
Context
As discussed at that meeting, the objectives of our review sessions will be to...............................
............................................................................................................................................................
............................................................................................................................................................
As agreed, meetings will be held every second Tuesday from 9:00a.m. until noon, and the
location will alternate between our two offices .................................................................................
............................................................................................................................................................
............................................................................................................................................................
Body
Closing
Sincerely,
Sign off
Marilyn Franch
Senior Consultant
Encl.
enclosures/copies
Useful References
Allen, J 1998, Writing in the workplace, Allyn and Bacon, Boston.
Eunson, B 2005, Communicating in the 21st century
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James, N 2007, Writing at work: How to write clearly, effectively and professionally, Allen & Unwin, Crows Nest, NSW.
Silyn-Roberts, H 2005, Professional communications: A handbook for civil engineers, American Society of Civil
Engineers, Reston, VA.
See 2.7
See 2.9
SKILLS
CRITERIA
Develop message
logically
Use formal
conventions
Use a formal font, 12 point (don't use all capital letters/uppercase/oversized fonts)
Lay out message for readability (use spaces and breaks between paragraphs and long sentences)
Begin and end with an appropriate greeting as well as closure
Do not forget to add attachments if you have to
Attachments must be mentioned in the email
Add cc if others should be informed
Use appropriate punctuation and check grammar and spelling (one exclamation point is just
as effective as three)
Do not use emoticons ( , ) or acronyms (2L8-too late, AAMOF-as a matter of fact)
Do not be over-familiar with the recipient (use a title or form of address)
Purpose
The purpose of a professional email is to provide information or to ask a question. The email is an electronic version
of a written memorandum and is an accepted form for business, educational, social and personal purposes.
Audience
An email to a professional should maintain formality unless the professional is also a personal friend. When the
professional is a friend, it is best to maintain formality for any professional communication.
Steps
Type in the email address, but leave the Subject until the email is completed.
Address the recipient by a title: Dr........, Prof........, Mr. Giles, Ms......, Rodney (first name if already familiar), etc.
Type your message, mentioning any attachments.
Finish with a closing decision, brief reminder, hope or apology.
On the next line, type your first and last names unless the receiver knows you well.
Proofread your email and ensure any attachments are included.
Use two or three words to describe the Subject.
Select cc to any others who may be involved, then send.
Hints
An email already includes the sending date and your contact details. The subject alerts the receiver to the topic.
For less formal emails, you can begin with Dear Fred, or even Hi Fred for a colleague.
Do not tag the email as urgent, unless you know the receiver would agree that it is urgent.
Be aware that any email can be traced to the sender, so take care in what you send.
CC:
BCC:
Subject: 2nd Customer Relation Management Program Meeting
Attachment: CRM_minutes.doc
Dear Rodney,
This is to inform you that the next meeting for the Pilot Implementation of the CRM Program will
be on August 14th. As discussed in the meeting last week, the objective of our review sessions
will be:
As agreed, meetings will be held every second Tuesday from 9:00 a.m. until noon, and the
location will alternate between our two offices, the first to be convened at Inter-Office on August
14, 2010. Fred Johnson of your CRM group is to act as the meeting coordinator and recording
secretary throughout the process.
Please find attached the minutes of the last meeting. If you have anything to add or have any
questions, please call me at 8261 2067.
Close with
expectation/instruction
Useful References
James, N 2007, Writing at work: How to write clearly, effectively and professionally, Allen & Unwin, Crows Nest, NSW.
Surma, A 2005, Public and professional writing: Ethics, imagination and rhetoric, Palgrave Macmillan, Basingstoke,
New York.
1.12 Memos
See 2.7
See 2.9
SKILLS
CRITERIA
Definition
A memo (short for memorandum) is a formal written text sent as a record within an organisation.
Purpose
A memo is to put on record work-related information, a concern or a query.
Audience
Your audience will be a colleague or colleagues at any level within an organisation.
Structure
'Memo' or 'Memorandum' at the top indicates that this communication is official.
The memo is headed with the following information: Subject, To, From, Date.
The content provides all relevant details. Make the focus clear in the first paragraph,
then use a paragraph for each of the other main points.
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Steps
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Hints
Use as a guide the format and style of memos sent within your organisation.
Organisations often have paper or templates set up for memos or a format for their employees to use.
You will need a way to file for later reference the memos you send and those sent to you.
Useful References
Berger AA 2008, The academic writer's toolkit: A user's manual, Left Coast Press, Walnut Creek, California.
Eunson, B 2005, Communicating in the 21st century
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Stanton, N 2009, Mastering communication, Palgrave Macmillan, Basingstoke.
CRITERIA
Present effectively
Definition
OHTs (Overhead Transparencies)and Powerpoint presentations are visual summaries of an oral presentation,
for projection onto a large screen.
Purpose
To assist an audience in understanding an argument, a report or other information.
Audience
Generally students, clients or a committee. If your presentation is to be assessed, your marker will be a key
audience member, whose requirements should be carefullly considered.
Structure
Introduction
Focuses attention and tells what the presentation is about. Presents key information that will be covered.
Main Points
Presents the key points only on one or more slides, depending on the time available. Transitions from one topic to
another or one member to another (if group) must be effective and without much disruption.
Conclusion
Summarises what you have covered.
Style
Language
Choose simple language. The main points should be headings and dot points. Keep the points consistent in their grammar.
Font size
Use 24 point or bigger, if it's in a large hall.
Font choice
Use a font that is clear and has serifs, e.g Times, to lead the eye on. Upper and lower case are easier to read than
all capitals.
Colour
Choose contrasting colours for print and background, such as black on white or yellow on blue. Avoid red and pale colours.
Steps
Identify the essential points of your presentation.
If OHPs, choose an appropriate font and size; if Powerpoint, also choose your colours. Type your first slide to
introduce your topic (centre it on the page). This may be a question, a title or a brief statement.
Prepare a single slide with the main points on it. If time permits in your presentation you can then prepare a slide
for each of these main points, listing the sub points under each.
Your final slide should restate your position or conclusion.
Include a simple graph, table, quote or cartoon to support your main point, if there is enough time.
Check well before your presentation that your equipment is working, and placed so that you can face the audience
and the slides will be centred on the screen.
Organise and number your slides so you can pick them up in the right order, and put them down so that you can
locate them again.
Look at your audience while you state your topic or question. Show the first slide before or after this.
Change slides before you speak to them. Don't rush.
You can direct attention at each point on a slide using a pencil or arrow card that you shift on the slide to indicate
each point. Powerpoint allows you to add each point to the screen as you go.
Tips
Check the spelling and grammar of your slides before you finalise them.
Check your timing. Have a practice run through your slides. Use the points as a prompt for what you say and to
give you confidence in speaking to the points. Don't rush.
It is tempting to look at the slides, not at the people! Practise looking at the audience and keep a steady pace.
If you run out of time, don't speed up in an effort to cover everything. Simply summarise your remaining points and
go to the conclusion.
Useful References
Bretag, T, Crossman, J & Bordia, S 2009, Communication skills, McGraw-Hill Australia, North Ryde, NSW.
Powerpoint Presentation - Seminar Tips, 2004, viewed 20 April 2010, www.micab.umn.edu/news/Seminartips.htm
Summers, J & Smith, B 2010, Communication skills handbook
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PART 2:
COMPONENT SKILLS
See ...
FROM:
FORMALITY
TO:
INFORMALITY
Dependence
Independence
Useful References
Brick, J 2009, Academic culture: A student's guide to studying at university, Macmillan Education Australia, Sydney.
Gudykunst, WB & Young, YK 2003, Communicating with strangers: An approach to intercultural communication, 4th
edn, McGraw-Hill, London.
Jackson, J 2010, Intercultural journeys: From studies to residence abroad, Palgrave Macmillan, England.
Ong, D 2009, The international student's handbook: Living and studying in Australia, UNSW Press, Sydney.
Tutorials
The tutors have been carefully selected and trained to develop knowledge and analytical skills. Your tutor is the
person to approach with any academic questions.
There is rarely one right answer to any question and tutors will want you to give your opinions and to question
what you read and hear. They do not want you to simply reproduce what you have heard or read. Many Transfer
students find this new and difficult at first. You will need courage to speak up with a different point of view at first,
but the more you give your opinion, the easier it will become.
Class Discussion
The purpose of class discussion is to develop knowledge and analytical skills and to raise any questions. The
objective is also to learn from the knowledge and experience of classmates and not only that of the lecturer.
There is rarely one right answer to any question and lecturers will expect you to give your opinions and to question
what you read and hear. They do not want you to simply reproduce what you have heard or read. Many students
particularly international students, find this new and difficult at first. You will need courage to speak up with a
different point of view at first, but the more you give your opinion, the easier it will become.
MyUni
MyUni is the University of Adelaide's online learning environment. Every enrolled course of study has an online
presence in the form of a MyUni course. Your lecturers may use the features of MyUni to varying extents. Most
commonly used are the Announcement and Send Email features. Many lecturers also upload course information
and assessment requirements, as well as lecture notes. Some lecturers also use the quiz, discussion board and
group features. In most cases MyUni does not replace face-to-face lectures, tutorials and workshops, but is used
to enhance your learning by allowing you to access information and course materials online at a time and place
that suits you.
Useful Reference
Marshall, LA & Rowland, F 2006, A guide to learning independently, Pearson Longman, Frenchs Forest, NSW.
Get to work!
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must highlight a logical and structured argument that flows. Often group assignments result in papers that are
disjointed as sections written by different people are put together without ensuring that the discussion is coherent
and cohesive. To ensure this, all group members must read the assignment as a whole and identify sections of
the discussion that are not relevant, repeats content or appears to affect the logic of the argument.
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If youre unsure about the task, topic, or assessment, or if the group isnt working, dont just hope for the best. Go
as a group to your tutor or lecturer immediately.
Useful References
Brick, J 2009, Academic culture: A students guide to studying at university, Macmillan Education Australia,
South Yarra, Australia.
Johnson, DW & Johnson, FP 1997, Joining together: Group theory and group skills, 2nd edn, Prentice Hall, London.
Turner, K 2008, Essential academic skills, Oxford University Press, South Melbourne, Victoria.
Defining a Project
Meredith and Mantel (1995) define a project as a specific, finite task to be accomplished. A project can be
identified by a number of attributes:
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t$POGMJDU as projects compete for resources (time, money, skill, equipment) there is invariably conflict.
Project Stages
Each project has a life cycle with a beginning, middle and an end over a finite time span. Each stage will consume
different levels of various resources. A project life cycle generally follows four main phases (see Figure 1).
When multiple projects are operating at one time, it is clear each needs to be planned, monitored and documented
carefully. Obviously, multiple projects place added pressure on timelines, resources and the quality of outcomes. There
are a variety of tools and methods that can be used to plan and monitor complex projects.
DEFINITION
PLANNING
IMPLEMENTATION
FINALISATION
8. Establish control
mechanisms
9. Monitor progress
Gantt Chart
This planning tool is simple in its construction and very easy to read (see Figure 2). Haynes (1997, p. 31) describes
a simple way to create a Gantt Chart:
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at the completion date.
At any time place a vertical (date) line through the chart and observe the current progress of tasks (i.e. completed,
in-progress, yet to begin). Using this method one can quickly see the minimum amount of time necessary to
complete a total project, the sequence of actions to undertake, and the steps to be carried out simultaneously.
TASK A
TASK B
TASK C
TASK D
TASK E
DAY:
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management
skills assignment
1. Results from
self-assessment tools
2. Notes from texts and lecture
3. Relevant journal/journal articles
Week 3 of trimester
40% complete
as at 1st May
Useful References
Cleland, DI & Ireland, LR 2007, Project management: Strategic design and implementation, McGraw-Hill, New York.
Haynes. M 1997, Project management: From idea to implementation, Crisp Publications, London.
Kernzer, H 2009, Project management: Case studies, Wiley, Hoboken, NJ.
Meredith, JR & Mantel, SJ 2000, Project management A managerial approach, 4th edn, John-Wiley & Sons, Brisbane.
Project management software, e.g. Microsoft Office Project 2007 .
COMMUNICATION SKILLS GUIDE 39
There are some obvious, minimal requirements that all students must meet to pass assignments. They are listed
first. The second list of characteristics is a guide for students aiming for high grades. Be sure that you have read
your courses assignment descriptions thoroughly, because some of these may be necessary for a bare pass.
Passing assignments requires, at least:
1. Satisfactorily answering the set question.
See 2.7
See 2.13
See 2.8
See 2.7
See 2.14
2. Claims are consistent with the argument and justified with references and logic.
See 2.12
3. Presentation is as required: type size, line space, margins, headings, referencing, cover page.
See 2.7
See 2.8
See 2.8
See 2.14
See 2.7
Useful Reference
Shields, ML 2010, Essay writing: A student's guide, Sage, London.
Components of an Argument
Well structured writing is writing that a reader can follow easily. It will provide a context for the reader and include
signals such as headings and markers, like firstly, in contrast and as further support, to alert the reader to the
way the argument fits together.
Despite their differences in length and types of evidence, all arguments have the same basic structure:
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the reader and state the position taken in a single sentence, while a case analysis may use several paragraphs to
summarise the context and several pages to set out the main issues. Closure can be achieved in a short answer
without an extra sentence, and in a case analysis and a management report with a listing of the recommendations.
In some assignment answers, the different components of an argument may be combined, particularly in a short
answer, where the context and conclusion are obvious or assumed by the reader. In lengthy assignments, the
reader (for students this will be the marker) needs the expected components in the expected order, and markers
(word signals) to more easily follow the argument.
See 2.14
An academic essay must have the sources of its evidence thoroughly documented, both within the text and at the
end with a reference list. The Harvard reference system is usually the most appropriate. Care must be taken to use
the system consistently and to ensure that all references listed are in fact cited in the text.
The following table can be used to check that an argument is well written.
SKILLS
CRITERIA
Argue logically
Provide evidence
Reference sources
Useful References
Greetham, B 2008, How to write better essays, Palgrave Macmillan, Hampshire.
Shand, J 2000, Arguing well, Routledge, New York.
Virgo, G 2005, Writing an academic assignment: Preparing a model essay on globalisation, Pearson Education,
Frenchs Forest, NSW.
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All good assignments are clear and logical in their arguments. Each section will move easily to the next, and
the reader will be in no doubt about what the writers point of view is. There will be a balance of long and short
sentences, the ideas will be in the writers own words, evidence will be given to support the writers claims and the
sources of this evidence acknowledged.
If the writer has been analytical and critical in his or her approach, the assignment, unless it is a short essay
answer, will contain original ideas and will give some consideration to alternatives to the writers own views. An
investigator who has been questioning what has been read and understood, will see new connections between
concepts and data, will identify weaknesses in others arguments and the evidence provided, and will recognise
fresh possibilities in familiar situations. These original ideas will be firmly based in the accepted concepts, models
and ways of operating in the commercial world. You can check your questioning approach using the following table.
SKILLS
CRITERIA
Being analytical
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Useful References
Bowell, T & Kemp, G 2010, Critical thinking, Routledge, New York.
Cottrell, S 2008, The study skills handbook, Palgrave Macmillan, UK.
Paul, R & Elder, L 2006, Critical thinking: Tools for taking charge of your learning and your life, Pearson/Prentice Hall,
Upper Saddle River, NJ.
Clear Expression
Contrary to what many undergraduates believe, good writing is not complicated. The writers aim should be to express,
rather than impress, and that means short sentences rather than long convoluted ones, and familiar words rather than
obscure words used simply to impress. The best writers are those who get their message across without clutter or
pomposity.
See 2.14
Another aspect of clear, direct writing is the writer's use of their own words so that the writing flows effortlessly and
feels authentic. Only use a quotation instead of your owns words if the quote states an idea in a way that captures
the meaning in a special, desirable way. Always acknowledge a quote or use of another's idea with quotation marks
and by citing the source.
The third element of writing after sentence and word choice that makes for clear expression, is punctuation. The
purpose of punctuation is to make the meaning clear: a full stop ends a complete idea; a comma divides up a list or
separates out a part of a sentence; a colon (:) signals that elaboration will follow; a semicolon (;) divides two ideas
that the writer wants connected. Too much punctuation halts the flow of the ideas and impedes the meaning for
the reader.
Finally, paragraphs and headings assist the reader by dividing up chunks of meaning, signalling that the writer is
moving on to something different. Too many headings or very short paragraphs interfere with the readers efforts
to tie ideas together; too few can cause an overload. A long paragraph needs to hang together well to be readily
understood. Markers (words that signal relationships, such as first and nevertheless), careful use of pronouns,
and having related sentences linked all assist such cohesion.
See 2.7
Clarity of Argument
The centrality of argument in academic writing and its characteristics are spelt out in Section 2.7. The clarity of the
argument rests primarily on clear thinking, which can be assisted by representing the argument diagrammatically.
Representing the main proposition in the centre or top of a diagram, then labelling subsidiary boxes with titles
for each supporting argument, can help to conceptualise how your ideas fit together and how they might be
organised as paragraphs. Then under each box title, list the points to be made for that idea. Counter arguments
can be noted in smaller subsidiary boxes. This diagram can be a valuable reference point in organising the whole
assignment and in keeping on track during the writing.
At all times, the writer must consider the reader. Punchy, direct first and last paragraphs help the reader by, first,
setting up a clear expectation as to what is to follow, and at the end, consolidating all that has gone before.
Language markers that signal how the different ideas and illustrations hang together are also valuable guides to
the argument for the reader.
Impersonal Language
Impersonal, formal language is used to imply impartiality in the analysis and presentation of an argument or
content. It is the language of media reports. Impersonal language is the language of all formal writing and involves
avoiding I, we, this author and this writer. Instead, wording such as the following can be used.
An analysis of the existing costing system of the company shows that
The following discussion presents
This paper explores the relationship between
Without Errors
The first impressions that a report or an assignment conveys to a management group, a client or a tertiary marker
will colour their approach to the argument and the ideas contained in it. Errors encountered in the first few pages
give the impression of carelessness and an inability to attend to detail. While it is very difficult to produce a piece
of writing that is completely error free, students should put in place practices that reduce the errors in their work.
Habits developed as students not only earn marks at university, but continue to impress in the workplace.
The most important habit that a student can foster is to proofread final drafts at least twice: the first time to ensure
that the argument flows smoothly from sentence to sentence and between paragraphs, and the second, to check
spelling. Most writers find they need to proofread a hard copy rather than on screen, as thorough proofreading
requires word by word reading to ensure that the correct word (e.g. there instead of their, product instead of
produce) has been used.
Spell checkers do not identify these as errors. Reading for fluency of argument can lead to reordering, deleting and
rewriting of sections, the insertion of markers and word changes. While this can be easy to sort out with pencil and
paper, the word processor has cut the time needed for such extensive editing enormously.
Proofreading should always be done with a dictionary and a thesaurus on the desk. If any sentence sounds
ungrammatical, try rewriting the sentence in another way or as two sentences. It is helpful to ask a friend to read
awkward sentences. If you often have trouble with English grammar, keep a list of your sentences that are incorrect
and on the adjoining page, the same ideas expressed correctly so you can refer to them later as models. You may
need help from the academic skills support services to identify errors and to correct them.
Useful References
Butler, L 2007, Fundamentals of academic writing, Pearson Education, White Plains, New York.
Morais, E 2006, Academic writing for beginners, Beacon Press, Malaysia.
Rose, J 2007, The mature student's guide to writing, Palgrave Macmillan, Basingstoke, New York.
Useful References
Butler, L 2007, Fundamentals of academic writing, Pearson Education, White Plains, New York.
Jackson, H 2002, Grammar and vocabulary: A resource book for students, Routledge, London.
Leech, GN 2006, English grammar for today: A new introduction, Palgrave Macmillan, Basingstoke, New York.
Useful References
Eamon, M 2007, Essay writing made simple, Pearson Education, Frenchs Forest, NSW.
Greetham, B 2008, How to write better essays, Palgrave Macmillan, Hampshire.
Hunter, I 2008, Writing that essay: A practical guide to writing better essays and achieving higher grades, McGrawHill, Macquarie Park, NSW.
2.12 Presentation
See 2.9
All lecturers and markers look for writing that is easy to understand. They therefore want writing that has all the
characteristics of good academic style as described in 2.9: writing that is clear, impersonal and without errors.
For all major assignments, both formative and summative, the preferred layout is in 12 point Times Roman, with 1.5
line spacing, 5 centimetres left-hand margins and headings. Where an Executive Summary is required, it is to be
single-spaced and no more than one A4 page in length.
Assignments should be word processed or typed. Assignments must be handed in with a cover sheet attached.
Your name, the name of the course, your tutors name and your tutorial time should all be on the cover sheet.
Plastic sleeves can be used, but do not submit each page in a plastic sleeve.
Referencing Style
There are several different author-date referencing styles. The preferred style is the Harvard referencing style. Make
sure you know which style your lecturer requires, and how particular he or she is about referencing.
See 2.14
When using a referencing style the main concern is to be consistent. When using the Harvard system you will
sometimes need to include further depth or explanation to your main text. This extra information should be included
as an appendix and appropriately referred to within the main text.
The Harvard system always includes a reference list at the end of the document to provide full details of all sources
cited within the text.
Footnotes
In the Harvard system of referencing, the use of footnotes is limited to further explanations or extensions,
comments or sub-arguments that the writer wishes to include. If they were included in the text, they might disrupt
the continuity or distract the reader. Footnotes should be numbered consecutively throughout the essay with
superscript Arabic numerals, and placed at the bottom of each page or at the end of the text. Generally, the rule is
to avoid footnotes and endnotes when using the Harvard system and to use appendices instead.
Plagiarism Defined
What does it really mean for you? The following (to be read in conjunction with the pages of your University
Handbook) consider the definitions more closely:
Subsection (i)
This section details the fact that if you present work in any form without appropriate attribution to the original
source you have copied phrases and passages directly without using quotation marks and without a reference.
These phrases and passages might have been copied directly from your text books, books borrowed from the
library, journals, articles, working papers, seminar or conference papers, lecture notes, information stored on
computers or other students work.
Subsection (ii)
If you paraphrase sentences or whole paragraphs without due acknowledgement by reference to the
original work it means that you have used someone elses words, phrases and passages in a way which is very
similar to their original form, and have presented them as your own without acknowledging this in a reference.
These forms of plagiarism can arise firstly through not making an effort, and secondly, through a lack of care when
you are doing your reading and research for your assignment.
If you copy down phrases and passages straight out of your source material, you might think that it is easier than
the more difficult task of writing your own words. After all, composition is hard work. Or you might think that the
author has expressed it so much better than you ever could, so why waste time trying?
If you take notes from your reading in the form of copying down phrases, sentences or paragraphs, and dont
properly record that these were in fact someone elses (with quotation marks and a reference), then you might
forget their source when you write up your assignment and express them as your own ideas.
Later in this section some guidance will be offered on how to avoid these forms of plagiarism. In the meantime,
consider this. You might be tempted to use phrases, sentences and paragraphs from a source without
acknowledging that they were someone elses ideas. Students often think, Im sure that the lecturer wont have
read that or wont remember where that idea came from. Wrong! Lecturers know their courses inside out and
are extremely well read and up to date. They are likely to recognise the source. They are also well-practised
in discerning sudden changes in the style of writing when someone elses words are used. In addition, there
are online tools in the University such as 'Turnitin' that provides an online plagiarism prevention service for both
educators and learners.
Please be careful with your assignments written on the computers in the Computing Lab. Its best not to leave your
computer unattended with your assignment up on the screen. Make sure that when you have copied your latest
version onto your USB stick, that you remember to delete it from d: drive. Take the discarded printouts of your work
home with you, rather than leaving them in the rubbish bin.
Students must not hand in the same piece of work that someone else is also handing in, for separate
assessment. (This does not include group work that is assessable as a group). This includes assignments that
you might have worked on together. It is quite acceptable for you to work together discussing assignments - for
example interpretation of the question, problems, possible solutions and so on. But, you must not prepare your
spreadsheets or your written work together and hand it up as independent work. Make sure your writing is your
own. Students who hand in the same piece of work may both be given zero for their assignments.
In summary, we now know that plagiarism is considered to be cheating. But students usually do it because they
do not know what is expected for the assignment, there are no models, nor instructions provided. If you are in
doubt about what your tutors expect for the assignment, please ask them. They are nice people and they are only
too willing to help you!
The penalties for plagiarism can be severe. You can fail an assignment, which might cause you to fail the whole
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Avoiding Plagiarism
The following examples of how to use your own words when writing assignments are based on the Fundamentals
of Leadership individual assignment and the course text (Carlopio, J & Andrewartha, G 2008, Developing
management skills: A comprehensive guide for leaders, 4th edn, Pearson Education Australia, Frenchs Forest,
NSW). Please note that an actual assignment would include analysis and comment by the student writer as well as
draw on other sources.
Good Examples
This next paragraph uses a good combination of quoting and putting things in the students words.
Carlopio and Andrewartha (2008, p. 18) believe that honest, transparent, ethical behaviour is not only
essential for quality management but that is also universal across cultures. They maintain that through
understanding what is right and wrong, and doing what is right one can develop a set of ethical values
to underpin one's management practice (2008, p. 19). They believe that this alone, however, is not enough
and that one must also be self-aware in order to prevent any bias or prejudice from creeping in to the way
one manages.
The following paragraph makes good use of the students own words.
Carlopio and Andrewartha (2008, p. 18) believe that in implementing a set of ethical management
guidelines, one must not only commit to doing the right thing but also bridge the gap that may exist
between knowledge and behaviour. They point out that self-awareness is the key to preventing possible
bias or prejudice from influencing ones management practice. Indeed, honest, transparent, ethical
behaviour is a cornerstone of quality management that is shared by all cultures (Carlopio & Andrewartha
2008, p. 19).
As you can see in these two examples, Carlopio and Andrewartha are acknowledged right at the beginning as the
source of these ideas and the reader is left in no doubt that the ideas continue to be theirs with phrases like, They
maintain..., They believe..., and They point out....
Some Advice
A good strategy for learning to put information from another text into your own words is to write without the other
text in front of you. Of course, this means that you will need to understand and remember what is in the text. At first
you may only remember the gist of a section. Write down what is relevant to your assignment as you remember it,
and go back to the source for further ideas, but put the source aside before you write them into your assignment,
having checked how they relate to what you have already written.
At all times you need to decide what is relevant to your assignment topic and be aware of where the ideas are
coming from. Mapping out your ideas and how they relate in a diagram before you begin to write can keep your
ideas separate from those of the writers who are contributing to your argument.
In taking notes from other sources, it is essential that you keep the details of your sources. When you copy directly
from your source, make that clear in your notes, along with the page number of the quote. If you are noting, rather
than quoting fully from a source, you will already be on the path of putting the ideas in your own words when you
turn these brief notes back into prose.
Useful References
Lipson, C 2008, Doing honest work in college: How to prepare citations, avoid plagiarism and achieve real
academic success, University of Chicago Press, Chicago.
Pecorari, D 2008, Academic writing and plagiarism: A linguistic analysis, Continuum, London.
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Whenever we use the ideas and arguments of other writers, we are obliged to make reference to the writers and
their work. We need to make clear which words and ideas we have borrowed from others, and which are our own.
By acknowledging the work of others, we avoid plagiarism.
The other main purpose of using references is to show the reader where the evidence comes from, so that an
interested reader may verify that information and consult the source independently. It is therefore important to give
all the necessary information, and present it in a clear and concise way.
In-text References
In the Harvard system all references, regardless of the type of source material used, appear in brackets in the text
each time you use ideas that are not your own. Only the authors surname(s), the year of publication and page
number(s) (if necessary) are stated:
Example 1
Position power is eroding in many organisations; therefore, leaders must derive their influence from
values (Huey 1994).
A reference must be included every time you quote (use exact words), paraphrase (use your own words) or
summarise (refer to main points) someone elses theory, opinion or data. If you are in doubt as to what should be
referenced and what can be considered common knowledge, be cautious and reference.
Direct Quotations
Direct quotations of less than 40 words use quotation marks and are written as part of your sentence or paragraph
(Example 2).
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spacing (Example 2a).
Example 2
Carlopio and Andrewartha (2008, p. 18) believe that in implementing a set of ethical management
guidelines, one must not only commit to doing the right thing but also bridge the gap that may exist
between knowledge and behaviour.
Example 2a
Carlopio and Andrewartha (2008, pp. 18-19) believe that,
in implementing a set of ethical management guidelines, one must not only commit to doing
the right thing but also bridge the gap that may exist between knowledge and behaviour. They
point out that self-awareness is the key to preventing possible bias or prejudice from influencing
ones management practice. Indeed, honest, transparent, ethical behaviour is a cornerstone
of quality management that is shared by all cultures.
Page Numbers
It is necessary to include page numbers when you are quoting or paraphrasing a particular passage, list or figure
from your source. You must include the page number if you are summarising ideas found on a particular page.
Example 3
Besides failing to give recognition to others, analysers typically find it hard to accept positive recognition
themselves (Carlopio & Andrewartha 2008, p. 86).
When you are summarising main ideas, general views or general areas of research that do not come from one
page only, the page number is not included in the citation.
Example 4
Goleman (2001) and Gosling and Mintzberg (2003) emphasise the importance of self-awareness as the
starting point for effective change.
Secondary References
When you read a source by one author (Author 1) who refers to an idea by a second author (Author 2) and you
want to use Author 2s idea, you are making a secondary reference. You must mention both authors in your in-text
citation but will only list Author 1 in your reference list because it is the primary source you consulted.
Example 8
This is consistent with the external value dimension that characterises most Asian cultures (Trompenaars
1999 cited in Carlopio & Andrewartha 2008).
(In this example, Carlopio and Andrewartha are Authors 1 and Trompenaars is Author 2. Carlopio and Andrewartha
will appear in the reference list but Trompenaars will not).
Reference List
The Harvard system requires a reference list at the end of your assignment. It is arranged in alphabetical order by
author surname. For every different source cited in the assignment there must be a corresponding detailed entry in
the reference list at the end of the assignment.
The basic elements of a reference list entry include name, date, title, publisher and place of publication. Slight
variations apply depending on the type of source used.
The following index provides examples of different types of sources.
Basic format for books: Authors family name, Initial(s) year, Title of book, Publisher, Place of Publication.
BOOKS
Example
IN-TEXT REFERENCE
Book by an organisation/
government department
or institute
Encyclopaedia or dictionary
with author
Encyclopaedia or dictionary
without author
No entry is required in the reference list because the name and date
have been provided in the in-text citation.
Basic format for journal articles: Authors surname, Initial(s) year, Title of article, Title of Journal, vol and issue number, page range.
JOURNAL/MAGAZINE/
NEWSPAPER ARTICLES
Example
IN-TEXT REFERENCE
Journal/magazine article
with no author
CPA Australia 2003, Fast forward to your future, Real Business, spring/
summer, pp.12-18.
Newspaper article
Basic format for electronic publications: Authors surname, Initial(s) year date, Title of document or website, date viewed, <URL>.
ELECTRONIC
PUBLICATIONS
Example
IN-TEXT REFERENCE
Electronic book
Trompenaars, A 2002, 21 Leaders for the 21st Century, viewed March 22,
2006 < URL>
Electronic Newspaper/
magazine article
Jameson, A 2006, Shipbuilder with Midas touch for making deals, The
Times, 13 March, p. 50, viewed 16 March, 2006, from Factiva database.
Electronic Newspaper/
magazine article no author
Taste- the wine list 2006, Weekend Australian Magazine, 11-12 March,
p. 48, viewed from Factiva database.
ELECTRONIC
PUBLICATIONS
Example
IN-TEXT REFERENCE
Document on a
World Wide Web site
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Online Survey
Podcast
Basic format for special publications and materials: Authors surname, Initial(s) year, Title of item, description of item, publisher, place of publication.
SPECIAL PUBLICATIONS
AND MATERIALS
Example
IN-TEXT REFERENCE
Personal communication
(e.g. interviews, emails, faxes,
conversations)
Government report
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Pamphlet or brochure
Conference proceedings
Thesis
Video/DVD or
television recording
IN-TEXT REFERNCE
An example of referencing a table:
Table 1: Influence Dimension Results
DIMENSION
COMMUNICATION BEHAVIOUR
Timing
Rapid/gradual
Emphasis
Understate
Thinking
Linear
Focus
Concept
Evaluation
Self
Relationship
Respond
Perceptual
Visual/Experiental
Leadership
Analsyer
Source: Adapted from The McPhee Andrewartha Influence Dimensions in Carlopio & Andrewartha 2008,
p. 55 (in-text)
Carlopio, J & Andrewartha, G 2008, Developing management skills, Pearson Education Australia, Frenchs
Forest, NSW. (reference list)
An example of referencing a diagram:
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90
85
80
% 75
Boss
70
Peer
65
60
Subordinate
55
Self
50
Self
Awareness
Creative
Problem Solving
Supportive
Communication
Gaining Power
& Influence
Empowering &
Delegating
Team work
Acknowledgments
The material for these sections on referencing was compiled from several sources:
Anderson, J & Poole, M 1994, Thesis and assignment writing
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Betts, K & Seitz, A 1994, Writing essays and research reports in the social sciences, 2nd edn, Thomas Nelson, Melbourne.
Bochner, D & Cooper, E (eds) 1990, Study skills booklet, South Australian College of Advanced Education, Sturt Campus.
Euson, B 1994, Writing and presenting reports: The communication skills series
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Learning Connection Learning Guide 2004, University of South Australia, Adelaide.
Style Manual for Authors, Editors and Printers 1994, 5th edn, AGPS, Canberra.
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