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NAZ TUZGER
11-A/151
LOVE SONG BY J. ALFRED PRUFROCK
For as long as I could remember, I thought poetry as something the
teachers made us memorize to commend heroes or that it was some analogous sounds that depicted tulips or roses. Everything about poetry seemed very distant, sterile almost. Until the day I came across a stanza from a poem of T.S Elliot that contemplated asking an overwhelming question about the universe. Then after telling me not to ask what the question was, the lines summoned me to join them to make a visit since the question wasnt going anywhere. Puzzling isnt it? Just tell it to me, I thought but I also knew/learnt that day, that poetry did not work that way. Love Song by J. Alfred Prufrock is a poem that takes the reader through the sterile but insidious city streets down to the chambers of a sea, all through which telling the tale of Alfred Prufrocks life. The speaker of the poem is J. Alfred Prufrock who is very much bored with his life and wishes to become someone or rather something else. He doesnt like the crowds around him and is quite nervous. By saying Ive known them all already, known them all and repeating phrases similar to this the reader sees how stuck this poor man feels. His life is filled with tea parties and social anxiety. Elliot shows this brilliantly by never actually speaking of a human figure but using only fragments of people such as the arms that lie along a table, wrap around a shawl, or the eyes that fix you in a formulated phase so that, one can picture the piccasso-esque creatures that Prufrock wants to get away from. But if he is stuck why doesnt he do something to change his life? Thats the tragic part about Prufrock: he never can, he only thinks about it; he is the paralyzed force Elliot mentions in another one of his poems. He is the portrait of humanity that survived two world wars-which is the time this poem was written in-, the modern, 20th centurys man who is just too afraid. So he defers everything and often repeats the phrase There will be time and says In a minute there is time for decisions and revisions which a minute will reverse after which the reader can see how severe the situation is. In a minute he has the courage to take a stand but the next minute deflates him like a silly balloon.
Remember the overwhelming question that drew me in? Well
Prufrocks life passes by without him ever asking the question but thinking constantly about it. He thinks Do I dare? and then Do I dare disturb the universe? as if his asking a question (which perhaps may be a marriage proposal since the poem is called Love Song by J. A. Prufrock) can tilt the universe on its axis He quite often says How should I begin? or How should I presume? or Should I then begin? These are a lot of questions for a guy who cant ask the question he intends to. He has seen the eternal footman hold his (my) coat and snicker and in short he (I) was afraid which brings me back to my paralyzed man after two world wars theory because he has seen too much. Poor Prufrock thinks if it wouldve been worth it to ask this question; he has passed thinking about asking it; he is thinking, Would it have been worth it after all? The tone is so timorous, depressed and isolated that one cant help but feel how human this guy is and how much he has known pain to even take a step forward. And in the end he grows too old to ask his question. He misses his shot and now his questions become quite simple like Do I dare to eat a peach?. He still cant take action and has to ask himself if he should dare before even doing something insanely mundane. The poem contains a lot of underwater imagery, which endorses how much Prufrock wants to escape his reality. His dream is to become a creature of the seas. He says, I shouldve been a pair of ragged claws scuttling across the floors of silent seas. The sea and the sea creatures symbolize Prufrocks wish to change his life. And in the end after he gets old he dreams about mermaids combing the white hair of the waves, as if the sea has grown old with him. Moreover, The underwater imagery gives the poem a beautiful slow motion quality, which corresponds with Prufrocks inability to take action since it is really hard to talk or move underwater also. And pitifully he feels so inconsequential as he did when he said No Im not Prince Hamlet, nor was meant to be that he thinks, Ive heard mermaids singing each to each/I dont think that theyll sing to me. Even his escape from reality, his mermaids dont want to sing to him. How can the reader not feel sorry for this person? Prufrocks last lines are We have lingered in the chambers of the sea
By sea girls wreathed with seaweed red and
brown Till human voices wake us and we drown The people around him, the social anxiety hence reality is so oppressive that he feels like drowning when he is summoned back and wants to remain underwater (which is ironic since thats how one actually drowns) and stay peaceful with his mermaids. The poem is written in the form of a dramatic monologue in which a fictional character addresses his audience. There is no uniform form or meter in this poem but Elliot experiments with a variety of them. He uses couplets like In the rooms women come and go/ Talking of Michelangelo and the rhymes has song-like rhythms to show that the poem isnt in free verse. This is one of the things that drew me in also, the poem is quite sonorous. Like in the last two stanzas written in the previous paragraph brown and drown are very simple rhymes that draw in the most oblivious reader in. The meterwhen present- is in the form of iambic pentameter, which is the closest rhythm to colloquial speaking such as when he says I shouldve been a pair of ragged claws. The use of alliteration also gives the poem a sing-song quality like in When the wind blows the water white and black. In conclusion, Love Song by J. Alfred Prufrock is a poem that can easily be set apart from the rest. Prufrock, admits to not being a hero. He is stuck and terrified to take action because of the potential consequences. He is so human that it breaks our heart. In the end the poem is actually about a bald guy with social anxiety that we might dismiss in our everyday lives, but T.S Elliot writes him in such a way that the reader can find herself in him and perhaps learn from his mistakes. Thanks to Prufrock I dont ever want to find myself asking Would it have been worth it after all?. Ever.