Personal Statement. Student Guide College Day PDF
Personal Statement. Student Guide College Day PDF
Personal Statement. Student Guide College Day PDF
Example 2
2) Please attach to this application a one- or two- page typed personal
statement in which you address the following: a) family background;
b)achievements; c)current educational status; d) career goals;
e)community service/extra-curricular activities f) financial need for this
scholarship; and any other information relevant to this application.
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Family Background
Where were you born? Your ethnicity?
Who do you live with?
Are you the first in your family to attend college?
Have you overcome any personal or economic struggles?
Who or what was your motivation to continue your education?
Academic Plans and Career Goals
What is your major? Who or what has inspired you to pursue this major?
What degrees would you like to earn? (example: Associates Degree,
Bachelors degree, Masters degree or Doctorates degree)
What are your short term and long term career goals?
Have you been employed in any capacity or volunteered in your chosen
field? If so, what have you learned from that experience?
Personal and Academic Achievements
What awards (personal and/or academic) have you received?
What are your major accomplishments, and why do you consider them
accomplishments?
Does any attribute, quality, or skill distinguish you from everyone else?
How did you develop this attribute?
Have you ever struggled for something and succeeded? What made you
successful?
Have you ever struggled for something and failed? How did you respond?
Extra-Curricular Activities
What are your most important extracurricular activities? What made you
join these activities? What made you continue to contribute to them?
How do you schedule you time to include both academic and extracurricular activities?
Past, Current, and Future Efforts Towards Making
a Difference in your Community
How have you served your community in the past?
Are you currently involved in community service?
How will you serve your community in the future?
Financial Need
Do you have to work to pay for school?
How will this scholarship help you financially?
What will your parents have to sacrifice financially in order to send you to
college?
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Review the draft yourself. Give the draft to a peer and an adult (teacher,
counselor, parent) to review at the same time you are reviewing you draft
even if it isnt your best work. Things to keep in mind when reviewing your
draft:
Did I answer the questions?
Spell check
Check the writing tips against your writing
Incorporate feedback from others; make corrections.
Read it once more, if you have time, have someone else read it once
more.
Finalize the draft by incorporation the last revisions.
Make photocopies as well as keeping an electronic copy. The last thing
you want to do is start over if you hard drive crashes, you lose your disk or
your application is lost in the mail.
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Dont simply list the honor awards or achievements that you included on
you application.
Dont compliment yourself with praise that makes you seem immodest.
Dont make too many detailed promises about what you intend to do
(volunteering, initiating special projects).
Dont begin with: Hello, my name is..