08 Hmef5053 T4
08 Hmef5053 T4
08 Hmef5053 T4
4 Essay Tests
LEARNING OUTCOMES
By the end of this topic, you should be able to:
1. Identify the attributes of an essay question;
2. Explain the purpose of using essay test;
3. List the advantages and limitations of essay questions;
4. Identify those learning outcomes that are appropriately assessed
using essay questions; and
5. Construct well-written essay questions that assess given learning
objectives.
INTRODUCTION
In Topic 3, we discussed in detail the use of objective tests in assessing students.
In this topic, we will examine the essay test. The essay test is a popular technique
for assessing learning and is used extensively at all levels of education. It is
also widely used in assessing learning outcomes in business and professional
examinations. Essay questions are used because they challenge students to create
their own responses rather than simply selecting a response. Essay questions
have the potential to reveal students abilities to reason, create, analyse and
synthesise, which may not be effectively assessed using objective tests.
(a) The learner has to compose rather than select his or her response or answer.
In essay questions, students have to construct their own answer and decide
on what material to include in their response. Objective test questions
(MCQ, true-false, matching), on the other hand, require students to select
the answer from a list of possibilities.
(b) The response or answer the learner provides will consist of one or more
sentences. Students do not respond with a yes or no but instead have
to respond in the form of sentences. In theory, there is no limit to the length
of the answer. However, in most cases, its length is predetermined by the
demand of the question and the time limit allotted for the test question.
(c) There is no one single correct response or answer. In other words, the
question should be composed so that it does not ask for one single correct
response. For example, the question Who killed JWW Birch? assesses
verbatim recall or memory and not the ability to think. Hence, it cannot
qualify as an essay question. You can modify the question Who killed
JWW Birch? Explain the factors that led to the killing. Now, this is an
essay question that assesses students ability to think and give reasons for
the killing supported with relevant evidence.
to think deeply about their answers that can be judged only by someone
with appropriate experience and expertise in the content area. Thus,
content expertise is essential for both writing and grading essay tests. For
example, the question List three reasons for the opening of Penang by the
British in 1789 requires students to recall a set list of items. The person
marking or grading the essay does not have to be a subject matter expert to
know whether the student has listed the three reasons correctly as long as
the list of three reasons is available as an answer key. For the question To
what extent is commerce the main reason for the opening of Penang by the
British in 1789?, a subject matter expert is needed to grade or mark the
answer to this essay test question.
The discussion that follows focuses on the Examination Essay i.e. the use
of essay questions in examinations which are commonly closed-book
settings. We will discuss further about the Coursework Essay in Topic 5
under Projects.
ACTIVITY 4.1
Select a few essay questions that have been used in tests or
examinations. To what extent do these questions meet the criteria of an
essay question as defined by Stalnaker (1951) and elaborated by Reiner,
Bothell, Sudweeks and Wood (2002)?
(b) To assess thinking skills that require more than simple verbatim recall of
information by challenging the students to reason with their knowledge.
To determine what type of test (essay or objective) to use, it is helpful that you
examine the verb(s) that best describe the desired ability to be assessed (refer to
Topic 2). These verbs indicate what students are expected to do and how they
should respond. They serve to focus on the students responses and channel
them towards the performance of specific tasks. Some verbs clearly indicate that
students need to construct rather than select their answer (e.g. to explain). Other
verbs indicate that the intended learning outcome is focused on students ability
to recall information (e.g. to list). Perhaps, recall is best assessed through
objectively scored items. Verbs that test for understanding of subject matter or
content or other forms of higher-order thinking, but do not specify whether the
student is to construct or select the response (e.g. to interpret) can be assessed
either by essay questions or objective items.
ACTIVITY 4.2
Compare, explain, arrange, apply, state, classify, design, illustrate,
describe, name, complete, choose, defend and name. Decide which of
the verbs in the list above are best assessed by essay questions or
objective tests or both objective and essay questions.
(b) Essay questions have limitations in reliability. While essay questions allow
students some flexibility in formulating their responses, the reliability of
marking or grading is questionable. Different markers or graders may vary
in their marking or grading of the same or similar responses (inter-scorer
reliability) and one marker can vary significantly in his or her marking or
grading consistency across questions depending on many factors (intra-
scorer reliability). Therefore, essay answers of similar quality may receive
notably different scores. Characteristics of the learner, length and legibility
of responses, and personal preferences of the marker or grader with regard
to the content and structure of the response are some of the factors that may
lead to unreliable marking or grading.
(c) Essay questions require more time for marking student responses. Teachers
need to invest a large amount of time to read and mark students responses
to essay questions. On the other hand, relatively little or no time is required
for teachers to score objective test items like multiple-choice items,
matching exercises, etc.
(d) As mentioned earlier, one of the strengths of essay questions is that they
provide students with authentic experiences because students are
challenged to construct rather than select their responses. To what extent
does the short time normally allotted to test affect student response?
Students have relatively little time to construct their responses and this
time limit does not allow them to give appropriate attention to the complex
process of organising, writing and reviewing their responses. In fact, in
responding to essay questions, students use a writing process that is quite
different from the typical process that produces excellent writing (draft,
review, revise, evaluate, etc.). In addition, students usually have no
resources to aid their writing when answering essay questions (dictionary,
thesaurus, etc.). This disadvantage may offset whatever advantage accrued
from the fact that responses to essay questions are more authentic than
responses to multiple-choice items.
ACTIVITY 4.3
Compare the following two essay questions and decide which one
assesses higher-order thinking skills.
(a) What are the major advantages and limitations of solar energy?
SELF-CHECK 4.1
1. What are some limitations in the use of essay questions?
Below are specific guidelines that can help you improve existing essay questions
and create new ones.
(b) Avoid Using Essay Questions for Intended Learning Outcomes that are
Better Assessed with Other Kinds of Assessment
Some types of learning outcomes can be more efficiently and more reliably
assessed with objective tests than with essay questions. Since essay
questions sample a limited range of subject matter or content, are more
time-consuming to score, and involve greater subjectivity in scoring, the
use of essay questions should be reserved for learning outcomes that cannot
be better assessed by some other means.
Example:
Objective Item:
Which of the following differences between birds and amphibians is
correct?
Birds Amphibians
A Lay a few eggs at a time Lay many eggs at a time
B Lay eggs Give birth
C Do not incubate eggs Incubate eggs
D Lay eggs in nest Lay eggs on land
(i) The problem of student responses containing ideas that were not
meant to be assessed; and
Although more structure helps to avoid these problems, how much and
what kind of structure and focus to provide is dependent on the intended
learning outcome that is to be assessed by the essay question. The process
of writing effective essay questions involves defining the task and
delimiting the scope of the content in an effort to create an effective
question that is aligned with the intended learning outcome to be assessed
by it (as illustrated in Figure 4.1).
SELF-CHECK 4.2
2. What is the difference between the task and the scope of an essay
question?
Example:
(Improving Clarity of Task and Scope of Essay Questions)
The verb is evaluate, which is the task the student is supposed to do. The
scope of the question is the impact of the Industrial Revolution on England.
Very little guidance is given to students about the task of evaluating and the
scope of the task. A student reading the question may ask:
(b) Evaluate based on what criteria? The significance of the revolution? The
quality of life in England? Progress in technological advancements? (The
task is not clear.)
(e) Specify the Approximate Time Limit and Marks Allotted to Each Question
Specifying the approximate time limit helps students allocate their time in
answering several essay questions. Without such guidelines students may
feel at a loss as to how much time to spend on a question. When deciding
the guidelines for how much time should be spent on a question, keep the
slower students and students with certain disabilities in mind. Also make
sure that students can be realistically expected to provide an adequate
answer in the given and/or suggested time. Similarly, state the marks
allotted to each question so that students can decide how much they should
write to answer the question.
(f) Use Several Relatively Short Essay Questions Rather than One Long One
Only a very limited number of essay questions can be included in a test
because of the time it takes for students to respond to them and the time it
takes for teachers to grade the student responses. This creates a challenge
with regard to designing valid essay questions. Shorter essay questions are
better suited to assess the depth of student learning within a subject
whereas longer test essay questions are better suited to assess the breadth
of student learning within a subject. Hence, there is a trade-off when
choosing between several short essay questions or one long one. Focus on
assessing the depth of student learning within a subject limits the
assessment of the breadth of student learning within the same subject and
focus on assessing the breadth of student learning within a subject limits
the assessment of the depth of student learning within the same subject.
When choosing between using several short essay questions or one long
one, also keep in mind that short essays are generally easier to mark than
long essays.
(ii) Some questions are likely to be harder which could make the
comparative assessment of students abilities unfair.
The following steps can help you improve the essay item before and after you
administer it to your students.
Before using the question in a test, ask a person knowledgeable in the subject
to critically review the essay question, the model answer and the intended
learning outcome to determine how well they are aligned with each other.
SELF-CHECK 4.3
1. Why should you specify the time allotted for answering each
question?
ACTIVITY 4.4
Discuss the following with your coursemates.
(a) Select some essay questions in your subject area and examine
whether the verbs used are similar to those in the list given in
Table 4.1. Do you think the tasks required by the verbs used are
appropriate?
(b) Do you think students are able to differentiate between the tasks
required in the verbs listed?
The marker reads and compares the students answer with the marking
scheme. If all the necessary elements are present, the student receives the
maximum number of points. Partial credit is given based on the elements
included in the answer. In order to arrive at the overall exam score, the
instructor adds the points earned on separate questions.
Identify in advance what will be worth a point, and how many points are
allocated for each question. Inform your students, so that they do not give
more (or less) than necessary, and they know precisely what you are
looking for. If students come up with an unexpected but correct example,
give them the point immediately and add that point to your answer key, so
the next student will get the point too.
You can develop a description of the type of response that would illustrate
each category before you start, and then try out this draft version using
several actual papers. After reading and categorising all of the papers, it is a
good idea to re-examine the papers within a category to see if they are
similar enough in quality to receive the same points or grade. It may be
faster to read essays holistically and provide only an overall score or grade,
but students do not receive much feedback about their strengths and
weaknesses. Some instructors who use holistic scoring also write brief
comments on each paper to point out one or two strengths and/or
weaknesses so students will have a better idea of why their responses
received the scores they did.
ACTIVITY 4.5
1. Compare and contrast the analytical method and holistic method
of marking essays.
Level of
General Presentation Reasoning, Argumentation
Achievement
EXEMPLARY Addresses the question Demonstrates an accurate
(10 pts) States a relevant argument and complete understanding
of the question
Presents arguments in a
logical order Uses several arguments and
backs arguments with
Uses acceptable style and examples, data that support
grammar (no errors) the conclusion
GOOD Combination of above traits, Same as above but less
(8 points) but less consistently thorough, still accurate
represented (12 errors) Uses only one argument and
example to support
conclusion
ADEQUATE Does not address the question Demonstrates minimal
(6 pts) explicitly, though does so understanding of question;
tangentially still accurate
States a somewhat relevant Uses a small subset of
argument possible ideas for support of
Presents some arguments in a the argument.
logical order
Uses adequate style and
grammar (more than 2 errors)
POOR Does not address the question Does not demonstrate
(4 pts) States no relevant arguments understanding of the
question; inaccurate
Is not clearly or logically
organised Does not provide evidence to
support response to the
Fails to use acceptable style question
and grammar
NO ANSWER
(0 pts)
(a) Grade the papers anonymously. This will help control the influence of our
expectations of the student on the evaluation of the answer.
(b) Read and score the answers to one question before going on to the next
question. In other words, score all the students responses to Question 1
before looking at Question 2. This helps to keep one frame of reference and
one set of criteria in mind through all the papers, which results in more
consistent grading. It also prevents an impression that we form in reading
one question from carrying over to our reading of the students next
answer. If a student has not done a good job on the first question, we may
let this impression influence our evaluation of the students second answer.
But if other students papers come in between, we are less likely to be
influenced by the original impression.
(c) If possible, try to grade all the answers to one particular question without
interruption. Our standards might vary from morning to night, or one day
to the next.
(d) Shuffle all the papers after each item is scored. Changing the order of
papers this way reduces the context effect and the possibility that a
students score may be the result of the location of the paper in relationship
to other papers. If Rakeshs B work is always following Jamals A
work, then it might look more like C work and his grade would be lower
than if his paper were somewhere else in the stack.
(e) Decide in advance how you are going to handle extraneous factors and be
consistent in applying the rule. Students should be informed about how
you treat such things as misspelled words, neatness, handwriting, grammar
and so on.
(f) Be on the alert for bluffing. Some students who do not know the answer
may write a well-organised coherent essay but one containing material
irrelevant to the question. Decide how to treat irrelevant or inaccurate
information contained in students answers. We should not give credit for
irrelevant material. It is not fair to other students who may also have
preferred to write on another topic, but instead wrote on the required
question.
(g) Write comments on the students answers. Teacher comments make essay
tests a good learning experience for students. They also serve to refresh
your memory of your evaluation should the student question the grade.
(h) Be aware of the order in which papers are marked which can have an
impact on the grades awarded. A marker may grow more critical (or more
lenient) after having read several papers, thus the early papers may receive
lower (or higher) marks than papers of similar quality that are scored later.
(i) Also, when students are directed to take a stand on a controversial issue,
the marker must be careful to ensure that the evidence and the way it is
presented is evaluated, NOT the position taken by the student. If the
student takes a position which differs from that of the marker, the marker
must be aware of his or her own possible bias in marking the essay.
There are two types of essay based on their function: coursework essay and
examination essay.
Essay questions have two variable elements the degree to which the task is
structured and the degree to which the scope of the content is focused.
Specifying the approximate time limit helps students allocate their time in
answering several essay questions.
Avoid using essay questions for intended learning outcomes that are better
assessed with other kinds of assessment.