Critical Writing and Reviewing PDF
Critical Writing and Reviewing PDF
Critical Writing and Reviewing PDF
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Introduction……………………………………………. iv
What you will Learn in this Course…………………… iv
Course Aims…………………………………………… iv
Course Objectives …………………………………….. v
Working through this Course …………………………. v
Course Materials ………………………………………. v
Study Units …………………………………………….. v
Textbooks and References…………………………….. vi
Assignment File ……………………………………….. vi
Assessment …………………………………………….. vi
Tutor-Marked Assignment (TMA) ……………………. vii
Final Examination and Grading ……………………….. vii
Course Marking Scheme………………………………. vii
How to Get the Most from this Course………………… viii
Tutors and Tutorials ……………………………………. ix
Summary............................................................................ x
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INTRODUCTION
The overall aim of this course is to expose you to the basic concepts in
journalistic criticism as a means of giving guidance in reporting and
criticising the arts. The meaning, structure, components and functions of
criticism will be treated along with creative essentials of critical writing.
This course will also assist you to appreciate the major differences
between a review and critical article and their similarities with other
forms of writing.
COURSE AIMS
The major aim of this course is to expose you to the general principles
and practices of critical writing and reviewing, this will help you to learn
how to apply the basic techniques of criticism and be an increasingly
effective critic of value. The course also aims at helping you realise the
full extent of your responsibility as a critical journalist; so as to remain
aware of your readers’ needs, but go beyond these to assist readers in
forming and tastes.
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COURSE OBJECTIVES
explain how to appreciate the fine and popular arts and apply the
basic principles of criticism in reporting and evaluating them
discuss the approaches, components and techniques of critical
writing and how to write critical articles and reviews on the fine
and popular arts.
You are expected to read the recommended texts and other materials
provided by the National Open University of Nigeria (NOUN) to
effectively harness and retain the rich information in this course. In each
unit, the self-assessment exercise spelt out must be done; you are
expected to submit these assignments for periodic assessment. There
will be an examination at the end of this course.
COURSE MATERIALS
1. Course guide
2. Study units
3. References
4. Assignment file
5. Presentation
STUDY UNITS
There are 17 study units in this course. These are as listed below.
Module 1
Module 2
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Module 3
Module 4
Module 5
ASSIGNMENT FILE
In the assignment file, you will find details of the work you are expected
to submit for marking to your tutor. Marks you obtain for these
assignments will count towards the final grade you obtain in this course.
PRESENTATION SCHEDULE
ASSESSMENT
The assessment of the course has two aspects. These are Tutor-Marked
Assignments and the final written examination. Tutor-marked
assignments are based on information and knowledge gained in this
course. You must submit assignments to your tutor for marking
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TUTOR-MARKED ASSIGNMENT
When you have completed each assignment, send it to your tutor. Make
sure that each assignment reaches your tutor on or before the deadline
given. If, however, you cannot complete your work on time, contact
your tutor before the assignment is done to discuss the possibility of an
extension.
The final examination for this course will be of three hours’ duration
and have a value of 70% of the total course grade. The examination will
consist of questions which reflect the type of SAEs, practice exercises
and tutor-marked assignments you have come across. All areas of the
course will be assessed.
You are advised to revise the entire course after studying the last unit
before you sit for the examination. You will find it useful to review your
tutor-marked assignments and the comments of your tutor on them
before the final examination.
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The study units replace the university lecturer in distance learning. One
of the great advantages of distance learning is that you can read and
work through specially designed study materials at your own pace, and
at a time and place that suit you best. Reading the lecture serves instead
of listening to a lecturer. In the same way that a lecturer might set you
some reading to do, the study units tell you when to read your set books
or other materials. Just as a lecturer might give you an in-class exercise,
your study units provide exercises for you to do at appropriate points.
4. Turn to unit 1 and read the introduction and the objectives for the
unit.
6. Work through the unit. The content of the unit itself has been
arranged to provide a sequence for you to follow. As you work
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through the unit you will be instructed to read sections from your
set books or other articles. Use the unit to guide your reading.
7. Review the objectives for each study unit to confirm that you
have achieved them. If you feel unsure about any of the
objectives, review the study material or consult your tutor.
10. After completing the unit, review the course and prepare yourself
for the final examination. Check that you have achieved the unit
objectives (listed at the beginning of each unit) and the course
objectives (listed in this course guide).
You must mail your tutor-marked assignments to your tutor well before
the due date (at least two working days are required). They will be
marked by your tutor and returned to you as soon as possible. Do not
hesitate to contact your tutor by telephone, e-mail, or discussion board if
you need help. The following might be circumstances in which you
would find help necessary.
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You should try your best to attend tutorials. This is the only chance to
have face to face contact with the tutor and to ask questions. You can
raise any problem encountered in the course of your study. To gain the
maximum benefit from course tutorials, prepare a question list before
attending them. You will learn a lot from participating actively in the
discussions.
SUMMARY
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MODULE 1
CONTENTS
1.0 Introduction
2.0 Objectives
3.0 Main Content
3.1 Definition of Critical Writing
3.2 What it Means to be Critical
4.0 Conclusion
5.0 Summary
6.0 Tutor-Marked Assignment
7.0 References/Further Reading
1.0 INTRODUCTION
The fine arts such as painting, sculpture, architecture and the popular
arts (motion pictures, radio, television, photography) though neglected,
underrated and underreported have remained a critical part of human
life. They prove how far man has gone in his civilisation. When properly
explored and exploited, the arts offer tremendous economic and socio-
political opportunities.
The arts are treasures in themselves, and the use of the arts to criticise
society has continued to draw the ire of leaders, all over the world.
Power of the arts has, thus, placed enormous responsibility on
professional communicators to, not only help readers have value for
money, but also preserve the values of truthfulness and openness in our
society. This unit defines critical writing with particular emphasis on
what it means to be critical.
2.0 OBJECTIVES
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Critical writing, then, is the writing of essays and articles either for
broadcast or publication which appreciates and judges the arts. It is an
expression of opinion which may be positive or negative.
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SELF-ASSESSMENT EXERCISE
4.0 CONCLUSION
In this unit, you have been exposed to the concept of criticism and how
you can be critical in your writing. Also, this unit has made it clear to
you that criticism is, at once, an appreciation, an evaluation or judgment
and an opinion based on deep knowledge of the subject matter and
standards of measurements. You have also been made to know that
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5.0 SUMMARY
This unit has exposed you to the meaning of criticism and what it takes
to be critical.
i. What is criticism?
ii. Explain how to write a critical article.
Pope, R. (2002). The English Studies Book. London & New York:
Routledge.
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CONTENTS
1.0 Introduction
2.0 Objectives
3.0 Main Content
3.1 Definition of Critical Thinking
3.2 Requirements for Effective Critical Thinking
3.3 Critical Writing and Thinking
4.0 Conclusion
5.0 Summary
6.0 Tutor-Marked Assignment
7.0 References/Further Reading
1.0 INTRODUCTION
One of the primary aims of this course is to develop citizens who are
able to engage in critical thinking and clear writing. NOUN attaches
much importance to enhancing critical thinking and writing
competencies among its students. Critical writing and thinking
encompass much of what we do when using our brains. Critical writing
and thinking skills, particularly, are not restricted to a particular subject
area, but are at the heart of what it means to be a scientist, researcher,
scholar or professional in any field. Whatever you are studying, critical
thinking is the key to learning and to making progress. Critical writing
and thinking is therefore one of the most important skills to be learnt at
this university.
2.0 OBJECTIVES
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Critical thinking has been variously defined over the past 80 years. Let
us consider some of the definitions of critical thinking which have been
put forth. According to Dewey, critical thinking involves “active,
persistent, and careful consideration of any belief or supposed form of
knowledge in light of the grounds that support it and the further
conclusions to which it tends” (Dewey, 1933, p. 118). Also, critical
thinking has been defined as “purposeful, self-regulatory judgment
which results in interpretation, analysis, evaluation, and inference, as
well as explanation of the evidential, conceptual methodological,
criteriological, or contextual consideration upon which that judgment is
based” (Facione, 2006, p. 21).
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categorising, comparing); that is, examine how the key components fit
together and relate to each other or otherwise identify the intended and
actual inferential relationships among statements, questions, concepts,
descriptions, or other forms of representation intended to express belief,
judgment, experiences, reasons, information, or opinion.
Inference- when you look for inference, you are seeking to understand
what is suggested or implied, but not stated; also you are seeking to
identify and secure elements needed to draw reasonable conclusions; to
form conjectures and hypotheses; to consider relevant information & to
educe the consequences flowing from data, statements, principles,
evidence, judgments, beliefs, opinions, concepts, descriptions,
questions, or other forms of representation.
Explanation- Here, you state the results of your reasoning and justify
your reasoning in terms of evidential, conceptual, methodological, and
contextual considerations upon which your results were based; and you
present your reasoning in the form of cogent arguments.
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o a measure of objectivity
o realisation of the climate of opinion
o awareness of the methods of making estimates or arriving at
judgment
o perspective gained through knowledge of the art being evaluated
and understanding of the audience.
These qualities separate the journalistic critic from virtually all his peers
in journalism. Not every journalist possesses these qualities, of course;
but these can all, necessarily, be achieved by the student through study
and practice.
SELF-ASSESSMENT EXERCISE
4.0 CONCLUSION
In this unit, you learnt that critical thinking is the process of applying
reasoned and disciplined thinking to a subject. To do well even in your
studies, you need to think 'critically' about the things you have read, seen
or heard. Acquiring critical thinking skills helps you to develop more
reasoned arguments and draw out the inferences that you need to use in
your assignments, projects, examination, and later, in your work as a
critic. These skills are essential if you want to obtain high grades in your
university study and, like other skills, they improve with practice.
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5.0 SUMMARY
Jones, E. A., Hoffman, S., Moore, L. M., Ratcliff, G., Tibbetts, S., &
Click, B. A. L. (1995). National Assessment of College Learning:
Identifying College Graduates’ Essential Skills in Writing,
Speech and Listening, and Critical Thinking. Washington,
D.C.:US Department of Education.
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CONTENTS
1.0 Introduction
2.0 Objective
3.0 Main Content
3.1 Critical Writing and Broadcast Commentary
3.2 Critical Writing and Editorial
3.3 Critical Writing and News Writing
3.4 Critical Writing and Feature Writing
3.5 Critical Writing and Column Writing
4.0 Conclusion
5.0 Summary
6.0 Tutor-Marked Assignment
7.0 References/Further Reading
1.0 INTRODUCTION
Critical writing shares affinity with other forms of journalism. This unit
shall examine the relationship between critical writing and other forms
of writing in order to help you distinguish them.
2.0 OBJECTIVE
The editorial and the critical article all express opinion; they evaluate,
interpret, and are subjective and hope to influence. An editorial could be
defined as a corporate voice of a medium on issues of public interest; it
is an opinion a newspaper writes to inform or explain, persuade or
convince, and stimulate insight, sometimes, in an entertaining or
humorous manner.
Critical writing does all that and also offers some measure of
entertainment. A humorous piece of criticism, certainly, is a must read.
Aside from influencing readers, criticism also serves as a guide to the
reader. A book review for instance, says Wolseley (1973), must tell the
reader what the book is all about (information), what the critic thinks of
the book (opinion, influence), whether the book is worth spending time
on (guidance); and also, entertain the reader (humor).
A column expresses the opinion or view of persons who work for the
newspaper or magazine, and who are thereby known as columnists. Uyo
(1987:15) defines a column “as an article, usually with some permanent
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SELF-ASSESSMENT EXERCISE
4.0 CONCLUSION
5.0 SUMMARY
This unit has exposed you to the affinity critical writing shares with
other forms of journalism such as broadcast commentary, editorials, the
traditional news story and the feature; but it emphasised the distinctive
mark of the journalistic critic which is appreciation or exercise of
judgment.
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MODULE 2
CONTENTS
1.0 Introduction
2.0 Objective
3.0 Main Content
3.1 The Function of Information
3.2 The Function of Influence
3.3 The Function of Promotion
3.4 The Function of Advertising
4.0 Conclusion
5.0 Summary
6.0 Tutor-Marked Assignment
7.0 References/Further Reading
1.0 INTRODUCTION
2.0 OBJECTIVE
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SELF-ASSESSMENT EXERCISE
4.0 CONCLUSION
5.0 SUMMARY
This unit has exposed you to the functions of critical writing and the
commercial and social difficulties associated with performing them.
This is to help you understand how, increasingly, hard it is to ignore the
impact of commerce and social relations as a journalistic critic.
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CONTENTS
1.0 Introduction
2.0 Objectives
3.0 Main Content
3.1 The Authoritarian Theory
3.2 The Impressionistic Theory
4.0 Conclusion
5.0 Summary
6.0 Tutor-Marked Assignment
7.0 References/Further Reading
1.0 INTRODUCTION
There are two broad theories of criticism. Criticism relies on both the
intimate experience the critic has with the work of art he/she is judging
and his possession of reliable criteria of criticism. These criteria act as
useful guides to writing the criticism.
2.0 OBJECTIVES
The authoritarian critic believes that there exist fixed standards with
which to judge a new book, painting or some other composition or
performance. He/she uses these standards and insists that all works of art
must conform to these standards and any deviation from these standards
is condemned.
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It is his/her own impressions of the work of art under review that are
important to him/her. He/she emphasises his/her own impressions, rather
than the facts or simple description. That is, he/she does not judge a
work of art on how nearly it approaches the qualities or characteristics
of an earlier work but on its own merits and on its effect upon him/her.
The impressionistic critic, at his/her best, may possess knowledge of the
authoritative critic but he/she draws upon himself/herself, rather than on
outside authorities
SELF-ASSESSMENT EXERCISE
4.0 CONCLUSION
5.0 SUMMARY
Critical theories are many, but we have reduced them to two here, for
working purposes. These distinctions, it must be remembered, are
theoretical. The journalistic critic simply performs his/her job, though
he/she benefits from understanding and using these theories consciously
until they become part of him/her ( unnoticed), yet in use.
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A good critic “is he who narrates the adventures of his soul among
masterpieces”. Discuss this statement with reference to theories of
criticism.
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CONTENTS
1.0 Introduction
2.0 Objective
3.0 Main Content
3.1 Moral Approach
3.2 Psychological Approach
3.3 Sociological Approach
3.4 Formalistic Approach
3.5 Archetypal Approach
4.0 Conclusion
5.0 Summary
6.0 Tutor-Marked Assignment
7.0 References/Further Reading
1.0 INTRODUCTION
2.0 OBJECTIVE
SELF-ASSESSMENT EXERCISE
4.0 CONCLUSION
This unit has considered the major approaches to criticism. These are no
set rules, but they are to serve as useful guides to the critic. A critic may
use several of these approaches, depending on the work of art under
consideration.
5.0 SUMMARY
The approaches discussed here are related. The moral and psychological
are related, while the sociological and archetypal are also similar. These
distinctions are therefore not watertight, and one approach can dissolve
into another in a criticism.
Compare two approaches of your choice, and show the strength one
against the other.
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MODULE 3
CONTENTS
1.0 Introduction
2.0 Objectives
3.0 Main Content
3.1 The Critic’s Background
3.2 The Critic’s Attitude
4.0 Conclusion
5.0 Summary
6.0 Tutor-Marked Assignment
7.0 References/Further Reading
1.0 INTRODUCTION
2.0 OBJECTIVES
Also, the critic’s background relates to the following- his/her likes and
dislikes, prejudices for, sense of judgment, experience and observation,
formal schooling and elaborate training, an analytical mind and ability
for self expression. Words for instance, are a critic’s tools. He/she can
add up his/her vocabulary by judicious reading. He/she can, and should,
supplement his/her background experience by acquiring great
knowledge about his/her chosen field (which could be theatre, cinema,
television, music, literature, art).
Of course, all these fields have some relationship to one another. All that
the critic needs to know is everything about every art, history, sociology,
economics, philosophy, language, and religion. You may think this
sounds impossible, but do the best you can to build your background as
you work. A firmer base or standard is established by greater
background and the journalistic critic should not be unwilling to invest
ten years of his/her life into an area without any guarantee of getting
anything back, except personal satisfaction (to secure the background a
critic must have). Exposure strengthens standards of judgment. These
help you know, not only what has gone before so that you are a better
judge of originality and treatment, but you also know what standards can
be achieved in writing and performance.
All his life, a critic must therefore retain an open mind, and respect the
expert practitioner in any field of performance and creative arts. Open-
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4.0 CONCLUSION
5.0 SUMMARY
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CONTENTS
1.0 Introduction
2.0 Objective
3.0 Main Content
3.1 Material
3.2 Form
3.3 Workmanship
4.0 Conclusion
5.0 Summary
6.0 Tutor-Marked Assignment
7.0 References/Further Reading
1.0 INTRODUCTION
2.0 OBJECTIVE
3.1 Material
3.2 Form
3.3 Workmanship
Your experience and abilities should help you make comparisons. New
writer or composer may have used a previous practitioners’ idea, or
structure, and given it a twist. He may, thus, bring freshness of treatment
to the work. In this case, workmanship may be principal factor for
examination. However, whether old or new, it is how convincing the
playwright or composer is- in what he/she says (material) and how
he/she says it (workmanship). The creative artist may have a good idea
(material), but may not have developed it to its fullest extent
(workmanship).
Again, he/she may have a good play idea, the plot may teem with
possibilities, yet the overall structure may not take advantage of all the
material; or the plot may be top – heavy with subplots that impede the
principal action. Here, the imbalance of material and form makes a
faulty structure. Judgment of musical composition, course, also employs
standards of material, form and workmanship. Does the music have
basic worth? Is there sufficient thematic structure?
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4.0 CONCLUSION
5.0 SUMMARY
Direct data is everything present in the music (or other creative work).
Direct data provide the principal basis for appraising a new work of
whatever medium. Direct data is everything present in the performance
or creative work under review. It involves the creative aspects of a new
work of art such as inspiration, originality, freshness, conviction, and
soundness of structure.
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CONTENTS
1.0 Introduction
2.0 Objective
3.0 Main Content
3.1 Indirect Data
4.0 Conclusion
5.0 Summary
6.0 Tutor-Marked Assignment
7.0 References/Further Reading
1.0 INTRODUCTION
Indirect data stem, solely, from outside the creative work itself. It is
everything external to the work. Indirect data may be useful in your
review. It may even influence your judgment. This will be the focus of
your study here.
2.0 OBJECTIVE
Such indirect data must be considered. First of all, there is a label of the
author himself, whether he is well known or not. The name of the author
should, however, not predispose the critic; and each work should be
judged solely on its own merit. When reviewing a new artistic work by a
prominent creator, it is valid to appraise it in terms of the man’s
previous output but only as an aid and not to mislead or to be an end in
itself.
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SELF-ASSESSMENT EXERCISE
Choose a particular art form, describe and give examples of indirect data
that can be useful in its criticism.
4.0 CONCLUSION
In this unit, it has been made clear to you that indirect data, though
useful in criticism and may have a bearing in what you include in your
review, it can sometimes be misleading. The name of the author, for
instance, may sometimes predispose the critic and make criticism an
unwilling apologist. You must be careful to judge each work, solely, on
its own merit- though this is sometimes hard.
5.0 SUMMARY
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MODULE 4
CONTENTS
1.0 Introduction
2.0 Objectives
3.0 Main Content
3.1 Writing the Review
3.2 Preparation of Copy
4.0 Conclusion
5.0 Summary
6.0 Tutor-Marked Assignment
7.0 References/Further Reading
1.0 INTRODUCTION
2.0 OBJECTIVES
You can write your reviews in two basic formats. You can write your
review in form of pure reporting that amounts to a news story about the
material viewed or heard. You can also write a review that may
incorporate expression of opinion and not merely describe through the
senses but attempt to evaluate or appreciate. No accepted pattern of any
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sort exists for writing reviews; but for the less experienced reviewer, it is
safe to emphasise reporting over criticism, and merely describe and
report the news. And because the review is largely news, it is advisable
that it should follow the traditional inverted-pyramid pattern of news
writing.
The beginning- is the most important and difficult part of the review.
The beginning should be well thought of. This part can be called the
lead or opening paragraph or intro. A straight news story usually has the
most important facts in the lead. As with a good news story, the lead
should be as interesting as possible and it should incorporate or
emphasise any of the journalistic five Ws and the H , and immediately,
give the reader information about the what, where, when, who, why, and
how - depending on which is more dominant.
The main body- this can divide the five (5) Ws and H and your views,
unfolding the details in decreasing order of importance. Some parts can
be criticism, either all authoritative or all impressionistic or both and
some parts review. This part of the review can contain the heart of your
views and must be constructed to carry your essential summaries and
opinions and should be brisk and concise.
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The ending- this is the second most important part of the review after
the opening paragraph and is almost as difficult to construct as the
beginning; but several sound possibilities exist for you. One is that your
review can end with your (critic’s) main points. Another is that you can
end your review with a major point that is an integral part of the body of
the review.
Use of pronoun- here, be careful how you use pronoun in your reviews.
Remember that you are speaking for your newspaper, avoiding the first-
person pronoun makes your review appear more factual, rather than
being just one man’s statement of opinion. Therefore, let your review
speak for itself. It carries more weight when expressed in impersonal
terms.
Using words- words are a reviewer’s stock in trade. The bigger your
vocabulary, the better equipped you are. Words help you to express
yourself precisely and to convey fine distinctions. Avoid flamboyant
phrases and esoteric words that are understood by only a minority of
readers or those that send your readers to the dictionary.
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Beginning and ending- facts at the beginning and end of a review often
carry more weight than if placed deeper into the story. Therefore, do not
start or end your review with an observation that is an exception to your
general premise.
The legal angle- you cannot safely be ignorant of the laws of journalism
that cover libel and slander, plagiarism, copyright, and related topics.
Knowledge of these has particular pertinence for you, since as a critic,
you express opinions and opinions are the commonest source of libel
and slander. As a critic, you are at liberty to say what you wish about a
work of art but you must be careful not to reflect upon the artist in a way
that damages him or her, professionally.
SELF-ASSESSMENT EXERCISE
4.0 CONCLUSION
In this unit, it has been made clear to you that no accepted pattern of any
sort exists for writing reviews. Experienced critics begin framing their
reviews while watching or hearing what they are to criticise, and the
opening paragraphs occur to them, effortlessly. By the time the critic
settles down to write, the body of the review may take shape also and
he/she has, well in mind, what he/she wishes to say. For a beginner, a
formula is of considerable help, until you learn, eventually, to dispense
with the pattern.
5.0 SUMMARY
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CONTENTS
1.0 Introduction
2.0 Objectives
3.0 Main Content
3.1 The Critical Article and the Critic
3.2 Writing a Critical Article
4.0 Conclusion
5.0 Summary
6.0 Tutor-Marked Assignment
7.0 References/Further Reading
1.0 INTRODUCTION
Writing the critical article is a major test of the critic’s abilities. The
critical article is more extensive than the review. It is also more
intensive, more penetrating, and analytical. In a critical article, you
cannot stop at merely describing or reporting, but you must also dissect.
2.0 OBJECTIVES
The critical article, like the essay, is difficult to define, for it has no
special form, as does the news story. It resembles the essay in that it,
too, is a short piece of prose, with less emphasis on style, and wider
purpose. It may be intended to inform, guide, entertain, and influence
and it is collection of facts or ideas assembled to gratify on or more of
these intentions. Largely, the critical article can be defined as a piece of
prose which is intended to analyse some phase of the arts, and attempts
to evaluate them. To Wilson (2000), the critical article is a careful
composition that evaluates and appreciates the whole body of a writer’s
work, the whole career of a singer or the complete field.
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In writing the critical article, you can find the following steps very
useful.
Step 1- you are endowed with an idea or you are given an idea by an
editor; either way, you obtain a topic or subject for the critical article.
Step 2- you research and gather facts and opinions relating to your
subject. Research can come from your observation, from interviews,
books and other media.
Step 3- after research, you analyse and relate facts gathered to gain new
insights pertaining to the general purpose of the article in question. Also,
you are to reflect on the different dimensions of the subject, on available
alternatives and consequences, discount prejudices and biases. You can
record your observations and makes use of your notes, clippings, letters
and other sources.
Step 4- you can prepare an outline at this stage and list words, phrases,
and sentences that represent all the different items that will go into the
article regardless of relationship or order. Analyse this list in turn, group
related items together, or arrange them in any desired order. You may
wish to write a paragraph setting forth the purpose of the article at this
point, as a starter.
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Using the deductive method you may start with a general statement that
follows an example or incident, and then provide minor details, all
leading to the general statement of the original proposition. The
inductive method proceeds from the particular to the general; it begins
with minor and works up to the general proposition which is usually
stated at the end as a sort of conclusion.
Step 7- to write is to write and re-write, and write until the critical
article is ready after a number of drafts. You may allow a more
experienced person to read your copy before you finally submit for
publication along with whatever necessary pictures or artwork.
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4.0 CONCLUSION
As you can see from this unit, the design of the critical article is not very
different from that of the critical review. It has a beginning, middle and
an end. Its structure resembles that of a human being- it has a head, a
body and feet. These distinctions must be different. The head must be
smaller than the body, and the feet are of different construction
compared to either of the two.
5.0 SUMMARY
This unit has exposed you to the fact that there are two common
methods of developing a critical article. If you plan to begin inductively,
there are various choices for the opening. You can begin with an
anecdote, or an incident, or a news-peg, or an example which sets forth
the detail, or a slight descriptive passage. You must not forget that the
body of the article stems, naturally, from the type of beginning. If your
article begins with a generalisation, you must proceed to supply the
support for that generalisation in the body. Your ending should grow,
naturally, from the beginning or from the theme of the article.
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CONTENTS
1.0 Introduction
2.0 Objective
3.0 Main Content
3.1 The Reviewer
3.2 The Critic
4.0 Conclusion
5.0 Summary
6.0 Tutor-Marked Assignment
7.0 References/Further Reading
1.0 INTRODUCTION
2.0 OBJECTIVE
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The critic publishes several months after the reviewer has forgotten what
the work of art was even about. As a critic, you are really a kind of a
‘garden-variety’ philosopher. Your virtues are long meditation, a firm
historical sense, profound insight, and truth-(absolute truth). Your
audience finds the reviewer flashy and cheap, the master of snap
judgment. Consequently, you must be overly elaborate bearing in mind
that your arguments may even change the reader or listener’s mind.
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4.0 CONCLUSION
5.0 SUMMARY
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You have learnt from this unit that the reviewer and the critic write in
different ways, in different places, for different audiences. They operate
on different levels and they think in different ways. Nevertheless, as you
can notice, there is a thin line between the two; the same person can
sometimes do the same jobs, sometimes even fuse the two activities.
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CONTENTS
1.0 Introduction
2.0 Objectives
3.0 Main Content
3.1 The Critic’s Style
3.2 The Tone of Criticism
3.3 Developing your Style
4.0 Conclusion
5.0 Summary
6.0 Tutor-Marked Assignment
7.0 References/Further Reading
1.0 INTRODUCTION
2.0 OBJECTIVES
However, as a critic, you share the editorial and article writer’s measure
of freedom; and since you are thought to appeal to a somewhat better
educated group of readers, you are allowed to use a few of the technical
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words of your occupation and the specialised language of the art you are
evaluating.
Style refers to the method, the manner, and the personality of the writer;
but Percy Marks (Wolseley, 1959:93) says “personality is as elusive as it
is real and important. If we could define personality, we could define
style…” He adds that the style of writing should reflect the personality
of the writer, and that when as a student critic you have learned to give a
true expression of yourself, you have achieved style.
The tone of criticism has various characteristic resulting from the nature
of the writer. Some of these include simplicity, smartness, banality,
pomposity, and humour. As a beginning critic, you must learn never to
pretend to be radical and pass judgment in alarming manner or feign
dignity of mind and solidity of judgment when actually you are
concealing the fact that you have nothing to say. Be wary of humor,
wisecracking and punning.
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Also, if you are to become a master critic in your profession, you must
begin to write, write and write for many years. You must not imitate the
styles of others as a means of developing your own and do not try to
develop a style before you begin to write. Thirdly, understand that a
good style should show no sign of effort. Therefore, you must never take
the smallest pains with your style or think about it or try to know
whether it is style at all. Just continue to write as your personality directs
and you will arrive at your objective.
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4.0 CONCLUSION
5.0 SUMMARY
In this unit, you learnt that the journalistic style must first conform to the
stylistic traditions of the press though you share the editorial and article
writers’ measure of freedom. You have learnt also that you can achieve
style through honest self expression, practice, and self-criticism, and that
your style need not be, unnecessarily, ornamental.
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MODULE 5
CONTENTS
1.0 Introduction
2.0 Objective
3.0 Main Content
3.1 Reviewing the Fine Arts
3.2 The Art Review
4.0 Conclusion
5.0 Summary
6.0 Tutor-Marked Assignment
7.0 References/Further Reading
1.0 INTRODUCTION
The fine arts- painting and sculpture- come under the broad subject of
arts. They have been with mankind for long, particularly sculpture. Their
value appreciates with time; many see them as a good investment and
they are increasingly receiving attention in the media in form of
exhibitions and shows.
2.0 OBJECTIVE
The fine arts, painting and sculpture are the most subjective of arts and
the pose problems for the reviewer. Probably, nowhere in the arts forms
is the field more bewildering as on the fine arts themselves-painting and
sculpture. The reviewer of these and other visual arts has a problem,
unlike those who deal with books which have a more or less fixed
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Since the materials and the form are on display, concentrate on the direct
data-form, material and workmanship. Where today critical judgment
comes into play is in the matter of originality and workmanship. Who
first used spray paint on flotsam and jetsam and sold the results to art
connoisseurs, for instance? Is it this artist’s own idea or is he following
in the path of past practitioners? The artist may use a previous
practitioner’s idea and give it new horizons and new force.
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Ask yourself whether the artist is consistent in his execution. One work
will usually stand out in an exhibition and others may be judged, in
relation to it. A retired art critic once suggested the impressionistic
approach for reviewing the arts- take a look at any work of art; ‘shut
your eyes, open them suddenly, and write about your first instantaneous
impression’; but ask yourself if the artist’s methods and style, that is, his
signature, are his own or a forgery.
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4.0 CONCLUSION
The fine arts- painting and sculpture, are the most subjective of arts, and
they pose problems for the reviewer. Formal training for effective art
reviewing is.
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5.0 SUMMARY
In this unit, you have learnt that the fine arts are a bewildering field,
especially for a beginning critic. The best option for you is the material-
form-workmanship formula. It is a workable process in appraising any
work of art. And the basic format for presenting art reviews is the news
format.
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CONTENTS
1.0 Introduction
2.0 Objective
3.0 Main Content
3.1 Reviewing Books
4.0 Conclusion
5.0 Summary
6.0 Tutor-Marked Assignment
7.0 References/Further Reading
1.0 INTRODUCTION
2.0 OBJECTIVE
When you review books, first get a notebook handy and make notes as
you read through the book. Quote page references for startling
revelations and unusual twists as you jot down important points. Write
down striking passages and your reactions to them. Did the book hold
your attention? Classify the book as to biography, fiction, drama,
tragedy, comedy, romance, etc.
Describe its content- give a synopsis of what the book is all about;
communicate something of its quality of paper make, quality of content,
plot, setting, grammar, and such other elements. Also, you are to pass
judgment upon it; in other words, you have to assess whether the
dialogue was natural and true, whether it was didactic or not. You also
have to compare it with previous works by the same author or similar
works by other authors.
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At the top of your review, put the title of the book, author, publisher’s
price, date of publication and number of pages. Do not forget to talk
about its style, typography, type of binding (hard or soft). Higher
standards of book reviewing generally require that you answer the
following , crucial questions, especially in historical writing:
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4.0 CONCLUSION
The fact of book reviews is that they enrich your knowledge and help
you to be a better writer. You improve your writing style; improve
yourself intellectually by writing and reading. Books help you to read
wide and reading wide is the prescription for good writing and
intellectual richness.
5.0 SUMMARY
What six ways can you make a book review complete and interesting?
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CONTENTS
1.0 Introduction
2.0 Objective
3.0 Main Content
3.1 Reviewing Stage Play or Drama
4.0 Conclusion
5.0 Summary
6.0 Tutor-Marked Assignment
7.0 References/Further Reading
1.0 INTRODUCTION
Drama is a part of our culture, and the stage has long been a forum for
projecting national image. Before the advent of television, theatre had
been a place of entertainment and it has continued to fascinate and
attract large audiences. It has still been able to survive television and
motion pictures. Many plays are still been written. So many things can
be dramatised-books, stories; life itself is drama acted daily by people.
2.0 OBJECTIVE
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After you have finished the business of summarising the play, get down
to the business of explicit credits.
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4.0 CONCLUSION
5.0 SUMMARY
As with any art, the review is not necessary written in the inverted
pyramid style but an attention getting lead is desirable. Main body of the
review then will detail the nature of the show, a minimum appraisal of
individual performance and consideration of such technical credits as
writing, direction and the conclusion will be a wrap up comment. The
first paragraph will summarise your impression of the play. Just as types
of news leads in basic reporting are varied, the leads on show reviews
are equally diverse.
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CONTENTS
1.0 Introduction
2.0 Objective
3.0 Main Content
3.1 Reviewing Music
4.0 Conclusion
5.0 Summary
6.0 Tutor-Marked Assignment
7.0 References/Further Reading
1.0 INTRODUCTION
2.0 OBJECTIVE
Therefore check for proper balance of voices and instruments and for
“presence” for surface noise, or other intrusion of extraneous sound.
You check also for realism and balance. A stereo, generally, provides a
better more realistic reproduction of a stage show or other musical event
involving more than one performer. Look at the harmony between voice
and instruments and the balancing of the instruments with the lyrics
whether the base overrides the lead guitar; the quality of recording itself,
whether it is concert, mono or stereo recording.
There may be many tracts but one message. Use your judgment as a
reviewer and say whether the record does satisfy the taste of potential
buyers. Do not forget to classify the record as to rock, pop, highlife,
jazz, and reggae or otherwise. A record reviewer should comment not
only on the quality of the performance but also how it stakes up to
others of the same work. Your reader may want to buy this new
recording upon your recommendation or he may be interested in how his
copy rates in comparison to a new one. You have the problem of
balancing phonographic and interpretative factors in making
recommendations to him.
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4.0 CONCLUSION
5.0 SUMMARY
Today, millions of recordings are available and their types are becoming
complex as a result of the various speeds they are produced and
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If you are assigned to cover a live musical performance, how best would
you approach your assignment?
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CONTENTS
1.0 Introduction
2.0 Objective
3.0 Main Content
3.1 Reviewing Movies
3.2 Reviewing Television Programs
4.0 Conclusion
5.0 Summary
6.0 Tutor-Marked Assignment
7.0 References/Further Reading
1.0 INTRODUCTION
Both television and motion pictures are entertainment media. The screen
dominated the screen until the arrival of television which has made it
possible for people to enjoy movies and other programmes indoors;
because they have much in common, they are treated as such in reviews.
2.0 OBJECTIVES
appraise movies
criticise television programs.
The reviewer essays camera work in the whole pattern- is the trick
photographing a substitute for substance, or does it enhance the story?
Does it help carry the action along or is it merely a gimmick? The
mobile camera is more mobile than the human eye and can achieve
effects impossible in a live stage. The reviewer should not only attempt
to see the movie from the stand point of the group for which it is
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primarily intended but should also appraise the picture in general terms
while still mentioning its specialised appeal.
The reviewer should also decide whether nude scenes (if any) are
properly a part of the story or whether they are tastefully done or merely
inserted for sensationalism. Most of all, the critic should essay the
movie on all its points – plot, characterisation, technical effects,
material, form and workmanship - in terms of the cinematic medium.
There are several points unique to the television medium; the time
allotted for programmes is one- the show must be within 15,30,60,90, or
120 minutes- minus time for commercials and stations breaks. Movies
and stage shows rarely have such a strict time limit. You should check
whether the program has conformed to the time limit. Be conscious also
whether the program is appropriate to the time of the day. A station may
present a program at an hour inconvenient for most of its potential
audience.
You should also question whether the length of time is ideal for the
presentation- is it a drama compressed into half an hour or an hour, but
which cries for lengthier production? Is it a wispy comedy spread out
over an hour or more, but which deserves much less? Is it a show that
would profit by being presented in installments? The television medium
is “prey” to cycles: the western, the situation comedy, the spy story, the
supernatural either in comedy or melodrama, the variety show and sub-
divisions of these categories. Has the program rhymed with its circle?
Program cycle can be in terms of climatic conditions or program type or
seasons. Do not forget to state the sponsors of what program you are
reviewing.
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There are regulations for placement. Some regulations say they should
come at the beginning, some say at the end so as not to break the
program. Watch out for the ground level. It may not be uniform and may
fluctuate - goes down at one point, booms at the next. This is noise;
watch out for it and how it affects the program.
SELF-ASSESSMENT EXERCISE
How does the review of television program differ from motion picture
reviews?
4.0 CONCLUSION
Because television and motion pictures have much in common, they are
treated the same in reviews. The movie critic must be capable of
criticising everything- acting, directing, photograph, staging, casting,
writing, music, news, sports, or any other subject matter visible or
invisible on television.
5.0 SUMMARY
You can see that the criteria used for a movie apply to a drama or
comedy on television-i.e. freshness and originality of story, quality of
action, direction and physical production. The last factor includes
optimum use of camera and, if warranted, special effects.
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