Comparison Essay - CAP
Comparison Essay - CAP
Comparison Essay - CAP
Pd. 2
Oct. 18, 2018
Comparison Essay
Writer and domestic policy specialist, Eric Liu, in his essay, Notes of a Native Speaker,
initiates a unique conversation on what it means to assimilate and be American. As he takes time
to reflect on the events that altered who he is, Liu aims to resonate with an audience of other
immigrants and distinguish the difference between desiring power and desiring whiteness.
Similarly, James Baldwin, a novelist and essayist born in the 1920’s, also reveals his opinion on
the treatment of race in his narrative, Notes of a Native Son. His purpose is to instigate change
and action amongst readers so that they will not remain complacent. Both authors use metaphor,
symbolism, and imagery in unique ways to develop their arguments about race in America.
Liu and Baldwin seem to vary greatly in their opinions on race. In Notes of a Native
Speaker, Liu interprets race as closely tied to power, and explains that in America power has
been a metonym for whiteness. Throughout the essay metaphors are used to illustrate how this
comparison was drawn. Towards the beginning Liu says that he “[pleads] guilty to the charges,”
such as “learning the ways of the upper middle class.” To Liu, assimilation is a criminal act in
which the damages are ascribed to immigrant families and their cultures. In addition to metaphor,
symbolism is also used to place readers in Liu’s shoes throughout various points in his life. For
example, he describes Yale, his alma mater as “a grand WASP temple” with “wrought-iron
gates.” Like assimilation, his college only let a few participate, but once they do, they are
transformed into members of the most dominant culture. Despite his criticisms of assimilation
throughout his essay, new ideas are presented at the end of Notes of a Native Speaker that
provide further insight into Liu’s opinion on race. He states that he himself does not want to be
white, but rather wants to be integrated. He repeats the phrase “torrent of change” multiple times
in reference to immigrants. The belief that immigrants will come to America in waves to bring
about change brings into light Liu’s point that assimilation is inevitable, but it will not always be
white. With metaphors and symbolism tied directly to ideas, every aspect of the essay is clear to
the reader in its intent. A combination of various stylistic and rhetorical devices make Notes of a
Despite Liu’s various allusions to Baldwin, both in his title and throughout his essay, the
way that Baldwin addresses race in Notes of a Native Son does not bear much resemblance to
Liu’s piece. Baldwin treats race as an important, communal issue, and his call to action seems to
be intended primarily for those of his own race. The basis for much of Baldwin’s essay is the
parallel drawn between two major events in Baldwin’s life that occurred around the same time:
his father’s death and the race riots. An extended metaphor referencing his father’s disease, is
central to tying the two stories together. For example, Baldwin described how his father would
cause him and his sibling’s to “become paralyzed” in a metaphorical sense or how his father was
instances of racism a message is conveyed that racism itself is a disease. The narrative ends with
a call to action, in which Baldwin states that complacency is not an option. He proclaims that
“one must never, in one’s own life, accept these injustices as commonplace but must fight them
with all one’s strength.” This proclamation ties together several ideas presented throughout the
essay.
Both Notes of a Native Speaker and Notes of a Native Son are effective in justifying their
statements on race. Overall, Baldwin’s essay has the slight advantage over Liu’s due to the clear
call to action at the end, which adds an evident intent to the entire essay, as well as the use of
extended metaphor, which ties the entirety of the essay together in a way that Notes of a Native