Great Writing 3 Answer Key PDF
Great Writing 3 Answer Key PDF
Great Writing 3 Answer Key PDF
Paragraph 5:
Paragraphs to Great 1. good supporting sentence, supports the
Essays, 3rd ed. topic sentence by giving a quality of a good
Answer Key restaurant (quality of the food)
2. unrelated sentence, does not talk about
zUnit 1 qualities of a good restaurant
3. good supporting sentence, supports the
Activity 1, page 6 topic sentence by giving a quality of a good
1. a restaurant (pleasant atmosphere)
2. b Paragraph 6:
3. a 1. good supporting sentence, supports the
4. a topic sentence by explaining what they
5. b did in Washington, DC (visit some of the
Smithsonian Institution’s museums)
Activity 2, page 7 2. good supporting sentence, supports the topic
Preview Questions sentence by explaining what they did in
Washington, DC. (walk around)
Answers will vary.
3. unrelated sentence, gives information that
Post-Reading does not tell about the trip to Washington, DC
1. d Activity 11, page 21
2. underline: There are many steps in changing a 1. fragment, Students encounter an incredible
tire on your car. amount of new vocabulary every day as they
3. 8 read English.
Activity 3, pages 8–9 2. fragment, Some learners overcome this
problem by using flash cards.
1. smartphones, a
3. correct; correct
2. Nino’s Pizzeria, b
4. fragment, A flash card is a small card for
3. dolphins, c
learning vocabulary.
4. snowboarding, a
5. correct; fragment, Learners write the new
5. seashells, c
word on one side of the card, and they write a
Activity 4, page 10 definition on the other side.
1. b, the drink of choice 6. fragment, Serious learners study flash cards
2. c, a terrible day at work every day or two to learn new vocabulary.
3. a, had a wonderful time
Activity 12, page 22
4. c, has increased in popularity
1. families, correct
5. a, was a catastrophe
2. correct, correct
Activity 5, page 11 3. correct, members
Answers will vary. 4. elders, correct
5. correct, correct
Activity 6, pages 12–13 6. caregivers, hours, correct
Answers will vary. Possible answers:
Paragraph 2: Not eating breakfast every day can Activities 13–17, pages 23–28
have bad consequences for our body. Answers will vary.
Paragraph 3: Th
ere are six steps for finding a great Activity 18, pages 29–30
job.
Paragraph 4: There are many different types of Preview Questions
acting. Answers will vary.
2 answer key
2. They give the reader specific examples of the Activity 15, page 59
types of people in a kitchen. 1. 48 or 49 1 1. the movement
3. possible answers: hustle (in and out), hurry 2. on a wall 12. the origin
4. a. hectic place, b. tremendous pace, c. empty 3. very good 13. to clean
plates, d. huge sinks, e. constant flow, f. 4. the speed 14. very busy
complicated juggling act 5. winter 15. different
6. a type 16. to move quickly
Activity 10, page 51 7. effect 17. large, a lot
1. circle: I, them, they; change them to rice cakes 8. very good 18. to modify
2. circle: it, They; change They to People 9. not extreme 19. in a bedroom
3. circle: them, he; change them to the chicken 10. parallel 20. rules
and potatoes; may also change he to my cousin
or Frank Activity 16, page 60
4. circle: They, It; change It to Hummus
1. follow 9. lit
Activity 11, pages 52–53 2. catch 10. mashed
1. Miami 3. a purpose 11. layer
2. Chicago’s 4. impact 12. of
3. Miami 5. of 13. floor
4. Chicagoans and Miamians 6. traffic 14. of
5. Miamians 7. on 15. plot
6. my cousin and I 8. books
3
3. In sum, few people realize that writers and Activity 12, pages 82–83
ballerinas share these common traits. 1. runners
4. restatement 2. In the world of track and field, there are
5. to tell about the similarities between good three different types of runners: sprinters,
writers and a good ballerina middle-distance runners, and distance runners.
6. Sample answer: The purpose of this paragraph 3. Because of the variations, almost anyone can
is to tell about the similarities between good fit into one of the three running categories.
writers and good ballerinas. 4. opinion
7. check marks next to a, b, and c 5. to describe the three different types of runners
8. a, The paragraph showed the similarities 6. Sample answer: The purpose of this paragraph
between writers and ballerinas. is to describe the three different types of
runners.
Activities 5–6, pages 73–74 7. a, runners. b, sprinters, middle-distance
Answers will vary. runners, and distance runners. c, sprinters,
middle-distance runners, and distance
Activity 7, page 76
runners. d–e, Answers will vary.
1. Mexicans celebrate …
2. On December 31st, many countries celebrate… Activity 13, pages 84–85
3. People across the world use … Answers will vary.
Activity 8, page 77 Activity 14, pages 85–86
1. Change “absolute” to “absolutely.” 1. easy to see 11. too much
2. Change “academy” to “academic.” 2. stamina 12. characteristics
3. Change “technological” to “technology.” 3. for a short time 13. old things
4. Change “portability” to “portable.” 4. a show 14. very
5. Change “environmental” to “environmentally.” 5. empty 15. for science
6. Change “heavily” to “heavy.” 6. a word or phrase 16. essential
7. Change “container” to “contains” 7. features 17. difficulty
8. to improve 18. to make happen
Activity 9, pages 78–79
9. not fat 19. expensive
Preview Questions 10. cannot see 20. examples
Answers will vary.
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Post-Reading IV. Body Paragraph 3: In the far right corner of the
1. I walk into the restaurant’s dining room and restaurant, a middle-aged man is sitting alone.
take in all the action — people from all walks A. Middle-aged man sitting alone
of life interacting with each other. 1. not lonely
2. four young women, a young couple, five men 2. on cell phone
in their thirties and forties, a middle-aged man 3. alternating tone
4. drinking coffee
Activity 2, pages 94–96 V. A–B. Answers are given.
1. Describing a restaurant.
2. It is 8:00 p.m. and I scan the restaurant and Activities 4–5, page 98–99
take in all the action — people from all walks Answers will vary.
of life interacting with each other.
3. Paragraph 2: In the left corner of the restaurant Activity 6, pages 100–101
are several small round tables, and at this Post-Reading
moment, they are all occupied. 9–10:30 a.m.: greeted by small, unassuming tour
Paragraph 3: In the center of the dining room company bus (Fiat); single type of tree (palm tree),
things are happening. short drive away from port; along the coast low,
Paragraph 4: In the far right corner of the squat buildings, shaded by breathtaking palms
restaurant, a middle-aged man is sitting alone. 10:30 a.m.–1 p.m.: walking tour in town center;
4. Description of what people do on the leisurely stroll through the town; buildings were
weekends. whitewashed and adorned with blue window
5. a. Brightly colored career shutters; porcelain faces with penetrating azure
b. cashmere eyes
c. top-of-the-line
d. lighthearted 1 p.m.–end of excursion: old stone path; local
e. socially rewarding eatery; tanned, middle-aged woman who
6. refers back to the job. was balancing a big jog of water on her head;
late afternoon sun…magical blue shutters of
Activity 3, pages 96–97 Kaouther’s living room
I. A–B. Answers are given.
C. It is 8:00 p.m., and I scan the restaurant Activity 7, pages 109–110
and take in all the action – people from 1. come together 11. to make a sound
all walks of life interacting with each 2. clothes 12. speak
other. 3. for fishing 13. serious, anxious
II. Body Paragraph 1: Answer is given. 4. perfect 14. happy
A. Answer is given. 5. to say softly 15. deeply
1. laughing 6. to fall 16. happy
2. telling a joke 7. look 17. sweater
3. wearing bright outfits. 8. little differences 18. modern
B. Couple 9. to go to a place 19. nervous
1. Answer is given 10. wait 20. noise
2. playing with her ring
3. tearing her napkin Activity 8, page 110
4. holding his cup 1. stand 9. fear
III. Body Paragraph 2: Answer is given. 2. happy 10. pieces
A. Five men are sitting around a table. 3. like 11. remind
1. talking and laughing 4. potatoes 12. all
2. whispering 5. trouble 13. from
3. elegantly dressed 6. names 14. survey
B. Answer is given. 7. office 15. with
1. Appear to be having lively discussion 8. to
2. All want to add something to the
5
Activity 9, pages 110–112 Activity 5, pages 125–126
Answers will vary. Answers will vary.
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6. slower Activity 15, pages 133–134
7. Answers will vary. Possible answer: I was 1. cold 11. kind, nice
surprised at how similar his model was to the 2. to increase 12. bad
real thing. 3. to expect 13. a bad dream
4. about 75 14. a part of a plane
Activity 12, page 132 5. however 15. gasoline
Although a (article) real airplane is controlled 6. to stop 16. something bad
from within the cockpit while a model plane is 7. unseen 17. to change your routine
controlled with a remote control, to fly / flying 8. important 18. the opposite
(word form) each of our planes requires a similar 9. similarly 19. wet
technique. Consequently, because I know how to 10. to drop in a pile 20. although
fly my real plane, I was easily able to fly the model
plane. Both have (subject-verb agreement) a
Activity 16, pages 134–135
throttle that controls the speed of the plane. Both
use (verb tense) a rudder on the vertical tail fin 1. strong 9. have
that steers the plane left and right while in the air. 2. turn 10. communication
Also, both use ailerons on the wings that bank the 3. control 11. of
plane to the left or to the right. Both use wheels to 4. similar 12. in
taxi to the runway on the ground. In fact, in a real 5. company’s 13. hit
plane, the same foot pedals steer (verb tense) the 6. on 14. in
plane left and right while in the air and guide the 7. effects 15. pivotal
plane left and right while on the ground. Similarly, 8. experience
the (article) same left-right motion on the remote
control moves (passive voice) both the rudder and Activity 17, pages 135–136
the wheels. Answers will vary.
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3. circle: The truth is, no matter how much these Activity 10, page 155
administrators focus on keeping students in 1. For instance 4. In addition
school, there are always reasons for them to 2. also 5. Another
drop out. No. 3. so that 6. Thus
4. a. financial
b. demanding coursework Activity 11, page 156
c. personal pressures 1. benefits
5. a. away from home for the first time 2. Regular exercise produces endorphins, which
b. living with strangers are the body’s natural mood enhancer.
c. absence of family 3. gives
6. categorically 4. People who exercise
5. Most important, people who take care of
Activity 4, page 147 themselves agree that they feel better about
1. Answer is given. 6. increase themselves. Because they look better, they have
2. choose 7. vigor an increased confidence in themselves.
3. existing 8. regular 6. Remove the last sentence.
4. difficult 9. well
5. absent 1 0. examination Activity 12, page 157
Taking proper care of one’s health also leads
Activity 5, pages 148–149 to a (article) better social life. The confidence
Answers will vary. that a person gains from feeling healthy and in
shape improves his or her social and business
Activity 6, page 149
relationships. Because health-minded people
1. Due to being unprepared for all the studying engage in a variety of physical activities, they
involved in maintaining good grades, these increase (verb tense) their chances of meeting
students end up leaving the university after a people. For example, many people make (subject-
short time. verb agreement) friends at the local (word
2. Another cause for students to drop out of form) gym. Similarly, someone who goes to the
school is that they find the rigors of the (article) beach frequently to play volleyball greatly
coursework too demanding. increases his or her chances of meeting people.
3. As a result many students drop out of college Since people who pursue a healthy lifestyle look
because of a shortage of funds. (verb tense) and feel better about themselves, they
4. As a result many students drop out of college are more likely to have fulfilling social lives.
because of a shortage of funds.
Activity 13, page 158
Activity 7, page 151
1. makes 6. their
1. want 4. do 2. to 7. until
2. have experienced 5. work 3. are 8. While
3. did not have 6. are not 4. changing 9. healthy
5. do not 10. are
Activity 8, pages 152–153
1. for 4. of
Activity 14, page 158
2. At 5. in
3. on 6. in 1. healthy lifestyles
2. effects
Activity 9, page 154 3. Answers will vary. Possible answer: “Because of
a significant increase in the number of obese
Answers will vary. Possible answer: Because of a
adults and children in many countries, people’s
significant increase in the number of obese adults
eating and exercising habits have become
and children in many countries, people’s eating
regular topics in the media.”
and exercising habits have become regular topics
4. physical benefits, psychological benefits, and
in the media.
social benefits
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5. underline: In fact, there are physical, Activity 3, pages 171–174
psychological, and social benefits to living Preview Questions
a healthy lifestyle. Yes. Restated Thesis: It Answers will vary.
certainly makes sense to live a healthy lifestyle;
the benefits are clear. Post-Reading
6. Answers will vary. Possible answers include: 1. c. type of acting
slim, athletic figure; reduced risk of disease; 2. circle: Acting has been a form of entertainment
increased energy, longer lifespan, healthier- for millennia.
looking skin 3. underline: Still keeping some of its roots from
7. categorically Greek times, acting can be classified in three
ways: television acting, stage acting, and film
Activity 15, page 159 acting. Yes. Restated Thesis: Whichever form
1. to change 1 1. even it takes—television, stage, or film—acting
2. because of 12. money as a form of entertainment ranks very high
3. to say 13. not recent on most people’s lists of favorite activities to
4. very negative 14. the effect watch.
5. not lean 15. a disagreement 4. sets, dialogs, and scenes
6. to follow 16. thin 5. paragraph 4. Because directors may request
7. damage 17. by the ocean that an actor repeat a scene until they are
8. a shortage 18. many happy with the results.
9. surroundings 19. to get, take 6. opinion; Regardless of the type of acting
10. to participate in 20. clothing one enjoys, it is safe to say that the audience
appreciates the craft of acting and the many
Activity 16, page 160 hours of enjoyment that it provides.
1. an effect 9. with
2. to 10. involved Activity 4, page 175
3. of 11. healthy 1. Answer is given. 5. chronological
4. from 12. affect 2. deliver 6. boredom
5. significantly 13. risk 3. repeatedly 7. rank
6. benefits 14. serious 4. entertaining 8. appreciate
7. smile 15. for
8. reason Activity 5, pages 175–176
Answers will vary.
Activity 17, pages 161–162
Answers will vary. Activity 6, pages 177
1. This type of acting generally takes the form of
television programs produced on studio lots.
zUNIT 7 classifying
2. For instance, if the story line of a film happens
Activity 1, page 167 to take place in Russia, the film crew and
The correct answers are 2, 4, 7, 8, and 10. actors can go on location in that country to
film. giving an example
Activity 2, pages 169–170 3. Another form of acting is stage acting. listing
I. Introduction 4. During this time, listeners had to imagine the
C. Thesis statement sets, the scenery, and even the physical form of
II. TV acting the performers. time relationship
B. 1. Stories change every week 5. That is, actors may memorize their lines for
D. 1. Written notes the ending of the movie and film those scenes
III. A. Form before working on the beginning. restating
B. 2. Same set
D. 1. No editing Activity 7, page 178
IV. Type/Category 3 1. Mistakes were made by students.
A. 1. Screenplay 2. An anniversary party for my parents was
C. 1. Memorize lines organized by my sister.
D. 2. Boredom
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3. A gift was given to John by Ursula. the great foods they are eating, and the amazing
4. The forest near our home was destroyed by experiences. Traveling alone can have other
fire. benefits as well. Single travelers are more likely to
meet others while on vacation. They do not have
Activity 8, page 180 anyone else to worry about, so they are free to
1. was driven, correct strike up conversations with strangers. Many single
2. who teaches travelers love the solitary adventure and say that
3. correct, correct they learn a lot about themselves while traveling.
4. that is located / which is located
5. correct, correct Activity 13, page 184
6. correct, are sent 1. forms 6. their
7. correct. that is felt 2. People 7. are solitary
8. is said 3. who 8. choose
4. vacations 9. choice
Activity 9, page 181 5. want 10. everyone
Answers will vary. Possible answer: It can be a long
weekend, a spontaneous getaway, or a trip around Activity 14, page 184
the world. 1. travel
2. travel companions
Activity 10, page 182
3. underline: On hearing the word vacation, most
1. If
people react positively.
2. Another
4. circle: Vacations can be classified on the
3. For example/For instance
basis of travel partners. Yes. Restated Thesis:
4. Finally
Different forms of travel are available for
5. For example/For instance
everyone.
6. Regardless of
5. Traveling with friends can be an unforgettable
Activity 11, pages 182–183 experience.
1. Omit the sentence. 6. opinion; Whatever the personality, there is a
2. Possible answer: Because each person is paying travel choice for everyone.
for himself or herself, transportation costs Activity 15, page 185
tend to be lower as well.
1. duties, jobs 1 1. a trip
3. who
2. important 12. to practice
4. easier
3. to make clear 13. not important
5. Indeed
4. currently 14. correctly
6. is created
5. usually cost 15. to change
7. good
6. assistance 16. negative
Activity 12, pages 183–184 7. to put in order 17. not surprising
Finally, people can choose to travel alone. It 8. to connect 18. $500
takes a special person to feel comfortable doing 9. almost dead 19. to not eat lunch
this. This type of individual feels comfortable 10. experienced 20. a story
being alone and having limited company. As
for transportation, single travelers are often the Activity 16, page 186
luckiest travelers. They have more chances of 1. to 9. into
getting plane seats on stand-by, and sometimes 2. of 10. destination
their seats are upgraded to first class. This 3. from 11. conversation
would be impossible to do with a larger group. 4. specific 12. on
Sightseeing is also not a problem for single 5. get 13. get
travelers. They can choose to wake up late in the 6. course 14. on
day, sightsee at night, or skip lunch if they feel like 7. on 15. traveler
it. Conversely, they might experience feelings of 8. fight
loneliness from not being able to talk to someone
else about the wonderful things they are seeing, Activity 17, page 187
Answers will vary.
10 answer key
Brief Writer’s Handbook with Activities bushes. Officer Jenkins saw one of the robbers and
grabbed him. The police officer said, “All right,
Capitalization Activities come with me. Now we have you!” As the police
officer was taking away this criminal, the robber
Activity 1, page 205
looked back at the other bush and said, “Hey,
1. Two months that are more than thirty days come on, Mike! They’ve caught us!”
long are March and July.
2. Why does February never have thirty days? Activity 5, page 206
3. In the original calendar by the Romans, PARAGRAPH 27
September was the seventh month. Facts about the Month of September
4. The month of August was named for Caesar September is the ninth month of the year.
Augustus. However, the word September comes from the
5. The word April can be the name of a month or Latin word septem, which means “seven.” This
a girl. disparity between seven and nine is because
long ago, a different calendar was used in which
Activity 2, page 205
September was indeed the seventh month. When
1. Union, Soviet Julius Caesar, leader of Rome, redid the calendar,
2. September he designated September as the ninth month.
3. Ankara
4. Answers will vary, but the first letter of each Activity 6, page 207
word must be capitalized. PARAGRAPH 28
5. Neil Armstrong A Summary of A Tale of Two Cities
6. World War I (or WWI) Charles Dickens published his great work
7. Answers will vary, but the first letter of each A Tale of Two Cities in 1859. “It was the best of
word must be capitalized. times, it was the worst of times; it was the age of
8. South Korea wisdom, it was the age of foolishness . . .” With
9. June, July, August these famous lines, Charles Dickens opens this
10. Answers will vary, but the first letter of each dramatic story, which tells of life in Paris and
word must be capitalized. London at the time of the French Revolution. This
famous Dickens novel describes life in one of the
Activity 3, page 205
world’s most chaotic times.
1. The Causes of War
2. Some Common Reasons for Leaving College
Punctuation Activities
3. The Beatles’ Contribution to Rock Music
4. My First Day Working at a Restaurant Activity 1, page 208
5. The Impact of High Gasoline Prices 1. Wow, I cannot believe how tall you are!
6. A Comparison of Mark Twain’s The 2. Is Abigail going to take her dog for a walk?
Adventures of Tom Sawyer and The Adventures 3. Make sure you brush your teeth before you go
of Huckleberry Finn to bed.
7. The Damaging Effects of a Tsunami 4. How many people are going to the circus?
8. Why I Want to Attend Oxford University 5. Rick leaned the guitar against the wall.
Activity 4, page 206 Activity 2, page 208
PARAGRAPH 26 Answers will vary.
Not Smart Enough to Be a Robber
One night, two guys decided to rob a small Activity 3, page 209
store. They got inside the store and began to put 1. For the past three years, Jeff has been the IT
things in a bag. Officer Jenkins was driving his car Manager for a large medical office.
by the store at that very moment. Suddenly, the 2. Despite the foul weather, we had a remarkably
robbers saw the police car coming near the store. smooth flight.
They rushed outside, but they did not have time 3. My favorite vegetables are broccoli, carrots,
to escape. There were two big bushes near the and corn.
window, so each robber went behind one of the 4. Ron’s favorite vegetables are summer squash
and green beans.
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5. T omorrow afternoon, I plan on going biking 4. W hen my English friend speaks of a “heat
and swimming. wave” just because the temperature reaches
6. First, make sure you clean your room. over 80°, I have to laugh because I come from
7. Spain, France, and Italy are fun countries to Thailand, where we have sunshine most of the
visit. year. The days when we have to dress warmly
8. Without their ability to use sonar, bats would are certainly few, and some people wear shorts
not be able to fly at night. outside almost every month of the year.
9. The lion, which is often referred to as the king 5. The directions on the package read, “Open
of the jungle, is a ferocious hunter. carefully. Add contents to one glass of warm
10. Because of his broken arm, Emanuel will not water. Drink just before bedtime.”
be able to play tennis tomorrow.
11. As part of their vacation, Ben, Mike, and Activity 6, page 211
Adam went to visit the village of Tomok. 1. Mark and Kathy originally met in California;
12. The restaurant is very large and can seat more they moved to Texas two years ago.
than 300 people at once. 2. The test was easy; everyone passed it.
13. Ellen and Steven’s anniversary is April 26th, 3. Chicken is required for chicken noodle soup;
the same day as Jeff ’s birthday. celery is not.
14. My brother who lives in Morocco has straight 4. Two-story houses have stairs in them; ranches
hair. (I have several brothers.) do not.
15. My brother, who lives in Kazakhstan, has
curly hair. (I have only one brother.) Activity 7, page 212
16. That laptop is the lightest one that I have ever Answers will vary.
held.
Activity 8, page 212
17. Venezuela produces a great deal of oil, so it is
PARAGRAPH 29
a member of OPEC.
Lawn Care
18. Sun Cash Coffee Shop, which has hundreds
Taking care of your lawn can be rather simple.
of locations, just opened a new one down the
First, if you live in an arid climate, you must water
street.
your lawn once a week. In addition, it is important
19. When you go to bed, make sure you turn off
to fertilize your lawn three to four times a year.
all the lights.
You must also put weed preventer on your lawn
Activity 4, page 210 in the fall and in the spring. Also, make sure you
1. I am going to Stephanie’s house tonight. mow your lawn once a week; however, make sure
2. My three friends’ children are all well you do not cut it too short. Following these simple
behaved. steps can mean the difference between an average
3. Both airlines’ logos consist of a dark blue lawn and a great lawn.
wing with multiple stars.
Activity 9, page 212
4. Many people have said that it can’t be done.
PARAGRAPH 30
5. The children’s toys were strewn all over the
Healthy Choices
floor.
There are many healthy alternatives to
Activity 5, page 211 children’s ideas of traditional desserts. For
1. As I walked past the room, I heard the teacher example, instead of eating ice cream, people
say, “Be sure to turn in your homework can eat frozen yogurt, which is lower in both fat
tomorrow.” and calories. Rice cakes make a great afternoon
2. According to research published in the snack. Cut-up vegetables can also make a great
Ultimate Medical Guide, “19.6% of people do midday snack. To satisfy their sweet tooth, people
not brush their teeth on a daily basis.” (p. 75) can drink a can of iced tea without sugar, which
I find that statistic hard to believe. has zero calories, instead of iced tea with sugar,
3. My wife says that I should buy her flowers which may have up to 200 calories per serving. By
once a week. I told her that would be fine as making minor improvements in what we eat and
long as I could pay with her credit card. drink, we can significantly improve our health.
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to 26.2 miles. Because it is completed after Activity 8, page 219
the athlete has already swum and biked, it 3. Physical inactivity is another major
is often considered the most difficult event. cause of [no article] heart disease. For example,
Most [no article] triathletes train for the people who do not exercise regularly have a
run by doing a combination of [no article] significantly increased risk of having a heart
long runs, [no article] tempo runs, and [no attack than people who are active. [no article]
article] speed workouts. However, [no article] regular exercise helps to reduce one’s risk
triathletes need to be careful. Because there of a heart attack by controlling [no article]
are [no article] three events, it is easy to cholesterol levels. In addition, it strengthens
become injured while [no article] running. [no the heart and blood vessels, further protecting
article] pulled hamstrings or [no article] stress a person from experiencing a heart attack.
fractures are common injuries among athletes Even engaging in [no article] moderate activity
who overtrain. several days a week will greatly increase a
person’s life expectancy. In other [no article]
Activity 5, page 218 words, it is possible to greatly reduce the risk of
5. In conclusion, training for a triathlon [no article] heart disease simply by maintaining
can be both challenging and rewarding. a regular workout routine.
Triathletes can often be seen riding a bike in/
around town or swimming in the local pool. It Activity 9, page 219
is also not uncommon to run into/by them on 4. Comma splice 1: Stress causes a rise in
a jogging trail with another triathlete or to see blood pressure, this puts added demands on
them on a treadmill by themselves. Wherever the heart.
they are, triathletes spend a great deal of time Correction 1: Stress causes a rise in blood
training hard for their sport. pressure. This puts added demands on the heart.
Correction 2: Stress causes a rise in blood pressure,
Activity 6, page 218 and this puts added demands on the heart.
1. Coronary heart disease is the number (Also correct: Stress causes a rise in blood pressure,
one cause of death worldwide. In fact, it kills which puts added demands on the heart.)
more than 12 million people across the globe Comma splice 2: This increases the risk of blood
each year. Heart disease is the leading cause clots, they can in turn lead to a heart attack.
of death in adults and is also the leading cause Correction 1: This increases the risk of blood
of death in developed nations. Most people clots. They can in turn lead to a heart attack.
are aware that genetics does indeed play a role Correction 2: This increases the risk of blood
in determining whether or not a person will clots, and they can in turn lead to a heart attack.
become afflicted with heart disease. However, (Also correct: This increases the risk of blood
there are many additional causes that people clots, which can in turn lead to a heart attack.)
do have control over.
Activity 10, page 220
Activity 7, pages 218–219 5. While some factors that cause heart
2. While many people recognize smoking disease is [are] not preventable, many
as a leading cause of lung cancer, few realize contributing factors are [correct], to a certain
that it is also one of the main causes of heart extent, preventable. People can choose [correct]
disease. In fact, most smoking-related deaths not to smoke or spend time in smoke-filled
are the result of the effect that smoking has environments. People can to choose [choose]
on the heart and blood vessels. Specifically, to maintain an active lifestyle. People can also
smoking increases blood pressure, tightens takes [take] actions to limit the amount of stress
arteries, and causes irregular heartbeats, all of in their lives. In conclusion, takes [taking] an
which put added stress on the heart. Various active role in preventing heart disease can adds
chemicals in cigarette smoke also cause the [add] many years to anyone’s life.
buildup of fatty plaque in the arteries, which
can cause a person to have a heart attack. One
can of course avoid all of these risk factors
simply by choosing not to smoke.
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Practice 12, Unit 4, page 240 Practice 17, Unit 6, page 243
A. According to several recent surveys, the A. Young people often begin bullying because
biggest fear of most people is their fear of they want to control those who are weaker
making a speech in public. than they are.
B. More than a fear of spiders or death, public B. Another reason that some kids bully other
speaking is something that often causes people children is to establish a well-known identity
to break out into a cold sweat, start shaking in school.
uncontrollably, and even feel as though they C. Finally, some children become bullies to get
are about to die. attention.
C. Many people are unaware that the fear of
speaking in front of others can be overcome Practice 18, Unit 6, pages 243–244
by visualization exercises, deep breathing, and A. In fact, there are physical, psychological, and
preparedness. social benefits to living a healthy lifestyle.
B. Another physical benefit that people notice is
Practice 13, Unit 5, pages 240–241 healthier looking skin.
A. Chicagoans enjoy summer, fall, winter, and C. Eating healthy gives your body the nutrients it
spring weather. needs for radiant skin and strong muscles.
B. On average, the high temperature reaches
only around 32 degrees Fahrenheit, and the Practice 19, Unit 7, page 244
low each night goes down to about 20 degrees A. Perhaps the best-known type of acting is
Fahrenheit. television acting.
C. Finally, they worry about different weather B. This type of acting generally takes the form
problems. of television programs that are produced on
studio lots.
Practice 14, Unit 5, page 241 C. Film acting begins with a screenplay, which
A. Chicagoans’ biggest weather fear is a blizzard. includes all the written information about the
B. For instance, Hurricane Andrew destroyed set and the actors’ dialogs, and grows into a
large parts of the city of Miami in 1992. movie.
C. In the end, my cousin and I learned that each
of our climates has its unique characteristics. Practice 20, Unit 7, pages 244–245
A. During this time, listeners had to imagine the
Practice 15, Unit 5, pages 241–242 sets, the scenery, and even the physical form of
A. I was delighted to discover that I could the performers.
experience the wonder and thrill of flight by B. Rehearsing for stage acting can take months
flying a model airplane. because all the actors must memorize their
B. Both models and real planes have similar lines.
controls. C. Because it is not a live performance, directors
C. I was glad to share this amazing experience may request that an actor repeat a scene until
with my good friend. they are happy with the results.
Practice 16, Unit 6, page 242 Practice 21, Unit 7, page 245
A. University administrators call it “retention,” A. The success of a trip often depends on the
and it refers to the number of students who relationship that the family members have
choose to stay in college. with one another.
B. This, unfortunately, leads many students to B. A special closeness is created during the trip.
drop out of college because of a shortage of C. They have more chances of getting plane seats
funds. on stand-by, and sometimes their seats are
C. These individuals are away from home for the upgraded to first class.
first time and living with strangers.