Directions: Only One More: Focused Specific
Directions: Only One More: Focused Specific
Name:
Section:
Part l.
Directions: Read the following statements very carefully. Select only one more
effective thesis in the introductory paragraph of a short essay. Keep in mind that an
effective thesis statement should be sharply focused and specific, not just a general
statement of fact. Write the letter of your answer before each number.
1. A. The Hunger Games is a science fiction adventure film based on the novel of
B. The Hunger Games is a morality tale about the dangers of a political system
2. A. There is no question that cell phones have changed our lives in a very big way.
B. While cell phones provide freedom and mobility, they can also become a leash,
3. A. Finding a job is never easy, but it can be especially hard when the economy
is still feeling the effects of a recession and employers are reluctant to hire
new workers.
B. College students looking for part-time work should begin their search by
4. A. For the past three decades, coconut oil has been unjustly criticized as an
B. Cooking oil is plant, animal, or synthetic fat that is used in frying, baking, and
5. A. There have been over 200 movies about Count Dracula, most of them only very
B. Despite its title, Bram Stoker's Dracula, a film directed by Francis Ford Coppola,
7. A. J. Robert Oppenheimer, the American physicist who directed the building of the
first atomic bombs during World War II, had technical, moral, and political reasons
B. J. Robert Oppenheimer often referred to as "the father of the atomic bomb," was
8. A. The iPad has revolutionized the mobile-computing landscape and created a huge
B. The iPad, with its relatively large high-definition screen, has helped to revitalize
9. A. Like other addictive behaviors, Internet addiction may have serious negative
relationships.\
B. Drug and alcohol addiction is a major problem in the world today, and many
10. A. When I was a child, I used to visit my grandmother in Moline every Sunday.
undeniably haunted.
Part ll.
Example Activity
Topic: You have won the lottery and can choose to travel anywhere in the world.
Write about one place you would like to visit and explain why you’d like to travel
there.
Supports:
2. Paris is one of the most beautiful cities in the world and I would like to see
it.
Sample Answer:
Thesis Statement: If I won the lottery and could travel anywhere in the world,
I would travel to France because I love French food, I want to see Paris, and I
would like to become more fluent in French.
Thesis Statement:
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Thesis Statement:
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Supports:
Thesis Statement:
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Part I.
Answers:
1. A 6. A
2. A 7. A
3. A 8. A
4. B 9. A
5. B 10. A
Part II.
Answers:
Education is important to have because it enable one to get a better job, Education
makes a person more individual and also makes a person more informed citizen.
Topic 2 : Thesis Statement
Bowling is for everyone, it is not limited to anyone it can played anytime and it
doesn’t require any expensive equipment.
Young children must require a lot of care because We must provide their physical
needs, provide their emotional needs, and must help them grow mentally.