OET Official Blog Notes - 3
OET Official Blog Notes - 3
One of the most common questions we are asked is which tense to use to report events from
‘today’s visit’ with the patient. Similar to when writing about relationship statuses, it is important
to use the right tense.
When discussing ‘today’s visit’, you are reporting on a completed past event. However, you may
not necessarily report all details from the visit using the past tense.
While this may sound confusing there are some tips you can follow to help. Here are some that
can help you decide which tense is the right one:
1. Past tense
For details such as test results or vital signs, which were accurate at the time of the visit, the past
tense is appropriate.
Example:
On examination, the abdomen was tender on palpation.
2. Present tense
For details such as lifestyle choices, the present tense is appropriate
Example:
Despite previous advice, Mr Hoskings is still smoking 20 cigarettes a day.
3. Present perfect
For details which describe unresolved situations such as improvement or deterioration in the
patient’s condition, the present perfect tense is appropriate.
Example:
Since her last visit, Mrs Baxter’s pain levels have reduced from an 8 to a 4.
It is fine to use more than one tense within the paragraph describing the visit. But always make
sure you use the correct tense for the meaning you intend so as not to confuse the reader.
Adverbs can be used to modify sentences to give a general feeling about the
information within it. Take a look at this example:
“Interestingly, adverbs are not something many candidates feel confident about.”
The use of ‘interestingly’ at the start of the sentence tells us how the writer or
speaker feels. Alternatively, if the writer or speaker found something to feel regret
over, they would have used regrettably or if they felt frustrated with adverbs they
would have used ‘frustratingly’.
Adverbs are super useful when speaking to patients as they give them an
understanding about what is coming next. They can prepare them for good news,
bad news etc.
Take the quiz!
Can you complete these sentences with the correct sentence adverbs? Choose from:
unfortunately, hopefully, happily, generally, honestly.
1. Happily, I can give you a quick diagnosis by completing a urine dipstick test.
2. Honestly, I think it’s unlikely that the consultant will be able to see you next week, but I
can check if she has a cancellation.
3. Unfortunately, I’ve noticed a mole on the back of your leg. I’d like to book you in for a
biopsy.
4. Generally, most patients don’t experience any negative side effects from this medication.
5. Heopefully, the itching will reduce in the next 24-48 hours which will give you some
relief but if not, please come back.
If you want to test your knowledge of the English language, make sure you check out
other language quizzes on the OET Preparation Blog. You will also find articles, blogs
and whitepapers
As a noun complaint is
a grievance, problem, difficulty, or concern; the act of complaining.
Are you aware that changing the prepositions you use in a sentence can change its
whole meaning?
Prepositions are words that show the connection between a noun (or pronoun) and
some other element in the sentence.
Take this example of a result (for example blood test) and a normal range for this
patient:
The result is above the normal range
The result is under the normal range
The result is within the normal range
We’ve put together a quick quiz to help you understand how the use of prepositions
with common medical verbs also changes the meaning of their sentence.
Take the quiz below
Match up the correct parts of the phrase, left and right.
examined by a dermatologist
examined under anaesthetic
examined for abnormalities
examined in the pathology lab
examined on Tuesday
Once you finish your OET, your papers are sent back to Australia and then graded by
trained OET Assessors! Your answer booklets are assigned to the assessors at
random to avoid any conflict of interest, while Parts B and C of Reading and
Listening are computer scanned and scored automatically.
We believe that fairness and reliability are essential to the assessment of your OET
performance, which is why we take extra precautions. For instance, we:
Do not provide your background or demographic information to assessors to avoid
conflicts of interest.
Double mark your answers to make sure your final scores are accurate
Grade your tests in a single location to prevent regional variation.
Our assessors also use a marking guide for the Writing and Speaking sub-tests that
help them score your answers accurately. What you might not know is that you can
also use them to help you study!
Have you read the Writing and Speaking assessment
criteria?
To grade your Writing and Speaking papers, OET assessors use a series of marking
criteria. Reading and understanding what the assessor is looking for will really help
you to practise this as you prepare AND produce this on test day.
There are six assessment criteria for Writing:
Purpose: Whether the reason for the letter is apparent from the start and developed
throughout the course of the letter
Content: Whether the required information is included in the letter and is accurate for
the reader
Conciseness and Clarity: Whether the letter omits relevant information and is an
effective summary for the reader
Genre and Style: Whether the register, tone and use of abbreviations are appropriate
for the reader
Organisation and Layout: Whether the letter is organised and well laid out for the
reader
Language: Whether the accuracy of the grammar, vocabulary, spelling and punctuation
communicates the necessary information to the reader
For the Speaking sub-test, there are two types of assessment criteria: Linguistic
criteria and Clinical Communicative criteria.
Linguistic Criteria includes:
Intelligibility: The impact of your pronunciation, intonation and accent on how clearly
your listener can hear and understand you
Fluency: The impact of the speed and smoothness of your speech on your listener’s
understanding
Appropriateness: The impact of your language, tone and professionalism on your
listener’s understanding and comfort
Resources of Grammar and Expression: The impact of your level of grammatical
accuracy and vocabulary choices on your listener’s understanding.
Clinical Communicative Criteria includes:
Relationship-building: The impact of your choice of opening to the conversation and
demonstration of empathy and respect on your listener’s comfort
Understanding and incorporating the patient’s perspective: The impact of
how fully you involve the patient in the conversation on your listener’s understanding and
comfort
Providing structure: The impact of how you organise the information you provide
and introduce new topics for discussion on your listener’s understanding
Information-gathering: The impact of the type of questions you ask and how you
listen to the responses on your listener’s understanding
Information-giving: The impact of how you provide information and check this
information is being understood on your listener’s comfort and understanding
Assessors do not count how many mistakes you make. Instead, they assess your
Writing and Speaking against how closely they match these criteria. The Linguistic
criteria contribute more to your final grade than the Clinical Communicative criteria.
You can download and view both the Writing and Speaking criteria from our website:
Writing criteria
Speaking criteria.
For more helpful tips like these as well as videos, preparation tasks and practice
tests, make sure to check out the Preparation Portal. It’s a great place to study for
OET and build your understanding of the test.
Did you know that dashes are informal punctuation?
When writing a formal letter or another kind of document, you should always try to
avoid informal punctuation symbols. Dashes are one example; exclamation marks are
another.
You can avoid informal punctuation by replacing with a more formal punctuation
alternative. Dashes can be replaced by several other punctuations including
commas, colons and brackets.
How to replace dashes in your writing?
If we start with the example in the image, we can think about alternatives. A comma
or even a colon could replace the dash that separates ‘mother’ and ‘Sofia’.
Max was accompanied by his mother, Sofia.
A colon is also a better option than dashes when writing a list of items. It’s also
possible to reorder the planned sentence.
Or you can do both, for example:
Mr Erikson’s current medication – warfarin and Pulmicort – need review
at his next consultation.
At his next consultation, Mr Erikson needs a review of his current
medication: warfarin and Pulmicort.
Remember, dashes are different from hyphens. A dash – is longer than a hyphen -.
Hyphens are used in compound nouns such as check-up or to show the link
between multi-word phrases e.g. self-induced hyperglycemic episode. Hyphens are
appropriate in formal writing.
“Hi Dawn, thanks for coming back for your results today. How have you been this last
week?”
2. You are speaking to the parent of a 3-year-old admitted an hour ago with
breathing difficulties.
[This situation is likely to have caused anxiety for the mother and you are unlikely to
have met him/her before]
“Hello Steph, my name’s Greeta, I’m one of the nurses who’s been caring for your
daughter. I’ve come to give you an update but also to find out some more background
information from you. Is that OK?”
demonstrate an exercise
dress a wound
test reflexes
take a medical history
Request statements
‘Could you please arrange a follow-up visit’ is perfectly grammatically accurate. It is a
request for a colleague to do something for the patient. The difficulty is, because it is
phrased as a request with a question mark at the end, the implication is that your
colleague could say no.
Often when making requests of colleagues on behalf of patients we do not see them
as optional. We want or even need them to happen. Rather than phrasing them as
request questions, it is better to write them as request statements.
For the example above, this would change the question to:
Please arrange a follow-up appointment for him.
The request statement is still polite but now it is clear to the reader that you expect
them to complete the action.
Here are a couple more examples:
Would you be able to contact his next of kin? → Please contact
his next of kin.
Can you please provide a second opinion? → It would be
appreciated if you could provide a second opinion.
What do your patients call cigarettes?
I’m sure you’re all very familiar with the word but are you so familiar with the slang
forms? Patients may use these instead of the full form. For example: fags, smokes,
ciggies and even rollies which describe the self-rolled cigarettes.
When speaking to your patients, it’s best to use cigarettes initially but, if your patient
calls them something else, you can switch to mirror their language. This is a way to
build a relationship with them.
Some countries refer to ‘sticks’ e.g. he smokes 20 sticks a week but this is not a
common expression in British, American or Australian English.
Do you know any other slang expressions for cigarettes?
Example
one Mrs Singh, who was admitted yesterday via ambulance, will be discharged home today.
Example The wound on Miss Delarue’s leg, that has been treated with sulfasalazine dressings, is
two healing well.
These two examples are called ‘non-defining relative clauses’ because they add
some interesting but non-essential information to the rest of the sentence. To show
the information is non-essential, commas are at either end of the clause.
To know if you have put the commas and the information into the sentence
correctly, you should be able to read the rest of the sentence with the commas and
information removed and it will still make sense. In our examples, it would leave
these as the remaining sentences:
Example The Occupational Therapist who visited Mr Mahmoud’s home will provide you with their
one report.
Example The medication which the patient’s GP had previously prescribed has been changed
two following surgery.
In both of these examples, the defining clause is underlined and is providing more
information about the noun in front of it. The information helps the reader
understand this noun more clearly.
In the first example, the defining clause clarifies which OT the writer means. In the
second example, the defining clause clarifies which of the patient’s medication is
being described.
Relative pronouns
In all these examples you will notice certain important words called relative
pronouns: who, which and that.
Who can describe people (Mrs Singh, the OT)
Which can describe things (the wound, the medication)
That can describe both things and people.
So when should you use relative pronouns?
The most effective use of relative clauses are to combine 2 pieces of information
into 1 sentence.
The first example I showed you came from 2 sentences:
By using a relative clause, you can avoid the repetition of Mrs Singh and provide the
information more clearly to the reader. Look out for information in case notes which
would be repetitive if you wrote it in 2 sentences and combine into 1 with a relative
clause.
Finally, a good understanding of relative clauses will make you a better reader as
you will be able to pick out when the writer is adding non-essential information to
the sentence, separated by commas and when the details need to be read together.
Did you know that dashes are informal punctuation?
When writing a formal letter or another kind of document, you should always try to
avoid informal punctuation symbols. Dashes are one example; exclamation marks are
another.
You can avoid informal punctuation by replacing with a more formal punctuation
alternative. Dashes can be replaced by several other punctuations including
commas, colons and brackets.
How to replace dashes in your writing?
If we start with the example in the image, we can think about alternatives. A comma
or even a colon could replace the dash that separates ‘mother’ and ‘Sofia’.
Max was accompanied by his mother, Sofia.
A colon is also a better option than dashes when writing a list of items. It’s also
possible to reorder the planned sentence.
Or you can do both, for example:
Mr Erikson’s current medication – warfarin and Pulmicort – need review
at his next consultation.
At his next consultation, Mr Erikson needs a review of his current
medication: warfarin and Pulmicort.
Remember, dashes are different from hyphens. A dash – is longer than a hyphen -.
Hyphens are used in compound nouns such as check-up or to show the link
between multi-word phrases e.g. self-induced hyperglycemic episode. Hyphens are
appropriate in formal writing.
It will take approximately ten days before you are on the mend.
Flu shot or flu jab?
Do you say shot, jab, injection or vaccination? Maybe you use another word? These
words are one of many examples of local variation in English.
Shot is common in Australian and American English while jab is common in British
English. Injection and vaccination are more formal versions which would be more
common when written down.
Formal punctuation
Did you know that some English punctuation symbols have a level of formality?
Some symbols are neutral. These have to be used whenever we write such as full
stops, question marks and capital letters but even these can get missed off or used
incorrectly in certain types of informal writing. Colons and semi-colons definitely
belong to the formal types of writing while exclamation marks belong to informal
types of writing!!!
Brackets or parentheses are fairly neutral but are most regularly seen in informal
writing as a means of adding extra ideas to the main point. They can often be
replaced by commas.
In the example in the image above, the brackets can be replaced with commas:
Miss Wang is prescribed Amoxicillin, 1g twice daily, and
Omeprazole, 20mg twice daily.
Alternatively, as the frequency of the dose is the same, the sentence could be
improved further to:
Miss Wang is prescribed Amoxicillin, 1g, and Omeprazole, 20mg,
both to be taken twice daily.
What to do if your patient is bewildered
Sometimes, when you give patients unexpected news they don’t quite know how to
process the information they have received.
They might describe themselves as feeling ‘bewildered’. It relates to a previous word
of the week, stunned, but is not so strong: it is closer to confusion than stunned or
shocked.
If a patient describes themselves in this way, you might need to suggest they take a
break for a few minutes to collect their thoughts and then talk them through the
information again, slowly and carefully. Checking their understanding while you do
this will also help them to feel less confused.
Variety of English.
Hi Sally, how’s everything been going recently?
Hello Mrs Stevens. How are you feeling?
After reading these sentences, could you tell which patient is elderly?
Sally, we need to talk about your levels and the possibility of
insulin injections.
Sally, I need to discuss something called insulin with you as a way
of stabilising your blood sugar levels.
What about with these sentences. Can you tell which patient has had diabetes for
some time?
I’m guessing you answered ‘yes’ to both questions. That’s because, when we use
English to its full variety, it’s possible to speak respectfully to patients of different
ages and with different understanding of their healthcare condition.
Each patient is different and as such needs speaking to in a different way. Selecting
the most appropriate vocabulary is a really important part of this.
It’s not just about words
As well as choosing the most appropriate words for the patient you are speaking to,
you also need to consider the other aspects of spoken communication: your speed
and tone in particular.
Would you speak at normal speed or a slower speed to someone who :
you are giving new information to?
is experiencing an emergency situation?
is attending an annual review of their medication?
Probably you answered ‘slower speed’ to the first two options and ‘normal speed’ to
the last. The speed you speak at makes a huge difference to your patient’s
understanding. Some non-native speakers mistakenly believe fluency = speaking
fast. Speaking fast can actually have the opposite effect in the wrong situation,
leaving your patient bewildered and upset.
Tone too can make a big difference to your patient. If you are negotiating lifestyle
changes with a patient who is reluctant to make them, you tone needs to be firm so
the patient understands how important you believe the recommendations you are
making to be. If you are giving the patient some bad or unexpected news, your tone
needs to be much softer to demonstrate empathy.
How can you practise?
A really good way to put all of this into practice is to replay conversations you have
had in the mirror or in your head (or with a friend if you can) but to change the age
or situation of the person you were speaking to. For example, if you have a
conversation at work with an elderly patient who needs a change in medication to
combat the side effects they are experiencing; later that day, replay the conversation
but this time make the patient younger and the medication new rather than
changed. It should make quite a difference to the language you choose, your fluency
and tone. There are hundreds of combinations you can try so do it as often as you
can to really expand and improve your spoken communication.
Complex does not have to mean complicated
Some students make the mistake of thinking that they need to turn each individual
case note into a sentence. They then combine a number of sentences into
paragraphs and paragraphs into a letter. This is not a good strategy.
To score well in OET, you need to demonstrate to the assessor that you can make
decisions about the case notes. Of course, you first need to decide which notes are
relevant to include and which ones to omit. After this, you need to decide which case
notes should be combined. Too many short simple sentences create a letter that
does not read very smoothly and cohesively as in these examples:
The patient is a lawyer. He is a heavy smoker. His diet is poor. He
often works on weekends. He likes to play sport.
What would be better is to combine some of these to make more complex
sentences:
He is a lawyer and often works on weekends. Despite enjoying
playing sport, he smokes and has a poor diet.
Complex doesn’t have to mean long and complicated. Instead, complex sentences
can easily combine ideas to clearly present the information to the reader in an
efficient manner.
How does a stunned person feel?
Patients may use the word stunned to show disbelief at some news they have just
heard. It is similar to shock but to understand the difference, it is good to
understand the other use of ‘stun’.
To stun someone means to knock them unconscious perhaps by a
blow to the head. They become temporarily unconscious.
When stunned is used as an adjective, it is giving a similar impression. For a few
seconds or even minutes, the person is motionless while they attempt to process
the news they have received. Stunned can be used for positive news as in the
example above but also negative news such as when you hear news of the
unexpected death of an acquaintance.