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LIRA 1 Responses: AS115: Does Not Gave Up On The Prince

Poldo, the French poodle from the short story, displayed several qualities that confirmed his achievements. Firstly, he was loyal to his master the Prince. He also showed determination in facing dangers like wolves and bears to complete his mission. Additionally, Poldo was brave to take on risks alone for the Prince's sake. These qualities of loyalty, determination, and bravery demonstrated what made Poldo successful in his efforts.
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LIRA 1 Responses: AS115: Does Not Gave Up On The Prince

Poldo, the French poodle from the short story, displayed several qualities that confirmed his achievements. Firstly, he was loyal to his master the Prince. He also showed determination in facing dangers like wolves and bears to complete his mission. Additionally, Poldo was brave to take on risks alone for the Prince's sake. These qualities of loyalty, determination, and bravery demonstrated what made Poldo successful in his efforts.
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LIRA 1 responses: AS115

No Marks (10%)
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Name Student ID Paste your answer in 120-150 words here. Organisation -2
1. There a few of qualities in the character Poldo The French Poodle found in the short story. 4 8
Firstly, Poldo is a brave dog. As Poldo is brave enough to go to the north pole. For example Poldo has 2
to went through the dark pine forest where the hungry wolves and savage bear are and yet Poldo 2
manage to escape from them.
Furthermore, Poldo is a loyal dog. As for example Poldo risk his life to go to his master’s castle to
retrieve the answer of the Malvolia’s Curse
Moreover, Poldo is determined towards the Prince. He does not gave up on the Prince and help the
prince to go out from the imprisonment by giving him the idea to go to his Master’s the Giant castle.
Way of explanation similar with loyal, use other example in the story instead
To conclude, this type of qualities is needed in each one of us to ensure we are a reliable and a
Nurul Najwa 2020827232 trustworthy friend.
2. There are a few massage that author was trying to convey in Prince Sneeze. 3 6
Firstly, who is kind-hearted will get a good punishment. The Prince Sneeze and his family were kind to 1
Poldo that had make Poldo sacrifices itself to find the missing word from madam Malvolia. Being a kind 2
hearted make others fell appreciated. - where is the punishment?
Secondly, we must show effort for things we want to do. The King and Queen tried to find a solution
and called the Doctor for find a way to control the prince from sneeze. Incomplete to strengthen your
topic sentence
Lastly, we need to accept each other. The prince accepted his bride to be for who she is while his bride
to be accepted prince even though she know about his worst sneeve. In this life, we must accept that
nobody perfect.
NOOR HASNIZA In conclusion, the good will comes to us if we be good to others.
BINTI SALLEH 2020491332 (145 WORDS) please edit the language before submission
3. Claudia Allyssia 2020475768 Question One 5 9
Anak Paul There are few qualities that Poldo possesses to confirmed such achievement. 2
Firstly, he was a loyal poodle to the Prince. Since the Prince was still a little boy, Poldo is the one who 2
has been there when he faced loneliness because of his sneezing curse.
Moreover, he was also a determined poodle. Despite knowing that he had to go through dangerous
creatures and dark forest along the way, he was ready and confident of finding the Giant of the North
Pole without any help.
In addition, he was a very brave poodle. On his way to find the Giant of the North Pole, he encountered
many dangerous creatures such as wolves and bears, but he managed to escaped from them without
any injuries all by himself.
In conclusion, Poldo being loyal, determined, and brave learnt from the story confirmed his
achievement.

(141 words)
4. Based on the story that I listen to , Prince Sneeze , there’s a lot of messages that the author want to 3 5
deliver to all of us. 1
1
Firstly ,the message is we need to help our friend in need.Examples from this story is the dog was
willing himself to go to meet someone that can free Prince Sneeze from his curse eventhough he need
to go through all the dangerous alone.

Other than that,the message is we need to be a really resilient person to go through in our life.The
examples that I can take from this story is The Prince Sneeze is never gives up in his life. He enjoy his
life with his dog happily even he can’t be like the others kids.The story didn’t mention he enjoys his life
and that the reason he wanted to be a free man.

Last but not least,we need to accept our partner’s flawless sincerely. Such as , the princess take a risk
to marry with The Prince Sneeze eventhough she knows that her future husband was cursed. At the
end , both of them end the story happily and free from the curses.

In conclusion,we need to be a friend indeed,a resilient person and the one who can accept all flawless
NASREEN of people around us
NAJJAH BT
MOHD HASELI 2020864008 (151 words)197 words
5. AQUINAS 2020854584 There are a few qualities that Poldo possesses that confirmed such achievement. 4 8
RUDOLF Firstly, it is because Poldo is very faithful to his master. This personality was shown when he 2
CHADWICK accompanied Prince Rolandor during his lonely year. Being faithful towards the master could make 2
ANAK PAUL them happy.
ANTANIO Moreover, it is because Poldo is brave dog. In the story, Poldo took his own risk to help the prince by
walking through the black pine forest to meet the Giant at North Pole. Being brave we can overcome
our fear to reach our goals. Can get better marks if the obstacles Poldo met were mentioned
Furthermore, it is because Poldo is kind-hearted dog. He earnestly helped the prince by seeking for the
Fairy Malvolia’s last sentence to break the curse. Being kind-hearted multiples our happiness while
making others feel appreciated. – please use your own words to explain next time
In conclusion, faithful, brave and kind-hearted is the qualities in Poldo that helps the prince from his life
imprisonment.
(141 words)

6. Poldo is the prince’s faithful friend . There are a lot of qualities shown by Poldo that makes him an 3 5
interesting character.23 1st sentence suppose to be a point to be elaborated in Body not in Introduction 1
1
Firstly of all, Poldo is a smart dog . He can speak English and France well. He is also a loyal dog .
Poldo do accompany the prince during his lonely year. It makes the prince happy.33 This should be a
new point as it is not talking about being smart (refer topic sentence)

Besides that, Poldo is a compassionate dog . He give advices to the prince. When the prince feel sad
about living in a tower for the rest of his life, Poodle told the prince to not give up. Surely the prince will
calm hearing the advice.44 would get better marks if example of story is taken as supporting details to
answer the question instead of personal assumptions

Furthermore, Brave is also one of Poldo’s quality. It is showed when Poldo bravely went through the
black forest where there are wolves and bears. Poldo did this to consult to his old master about
Malvolia’s spell. 37

MOHAMAD In a nutshell, Poldo’s qualities can be used by us to become a better person in the future.15
HAIQAL BIN
MOHAMAD (150 words) exclude all the counting of words in each paragraghs – editing is needed before
HANIFF 0202861378 submission
7. FARHANA BINTI 2020475722 There are few worth messages the author convey in the story. 3 6
MOHD RAZALI 1
Firstly, we need to be persevere. Prince Rolandor potrayed this when he had to stay in the tower for 2
years because of Malvolia’s curse that can make something change when he sneezed. This shows us
to keep moving forward while dealing with difficulty. elaboration unclear – What he did that show
perseverance?

Moreover, we need to be compassionate. In the story, Poldo was willing to help Prince Rolandor by
consulting his old master, the Giant to break Malvolia’s curse. This teaches us to succour someone
who is in need. . elaboration unclear – specific the actions that show compassionate

Lastly, we have to be courageous. For example, Poldo crossed the dark forest and the mighty frozen
ocean all by himself until he stopped at the Giant’s palace. This shows us to be fearless in whatever
situation that we face in life. This is some how better yet still lack of clarity.. you might want to say
Poldo is courage enough to endure the extreme weather and cross the fearful dark forest by his own

In conclusion, being persevere, compassionate and courageous makes us become a curvaceous


person.

( 146 words )
8. Based on the short story Prince Sneeze by Henry Beston, Poldo has safe the prince from his life 5 7
‘imprisonment’ in the tower on Golden Mountain with his good qualities.
The first quality of Poldo he is very faithful. Poldo always been there for prince. Poldo has been 1
together with prince since he locked up in the tower. Even Poldo knew the risk staying with the prince,
he never make excuses to ran away from prince. 1
The second quality of Poldo very caring. For example, when the prince wept in sorrow, Poldo asked
him why he is weeping. After prince stating the reason he weeping, Poldo told him not to give up hope.
The final quality of Poldo is very hardworking. He travelled to the castle by his own to find some words
of the Fairy Malvolia to end the spell. He succeeded and because of him the prince free from the spell.

Muhammad Arif Conclusion missing


bin Saji 2020854678
9. Based on the short story ‘Prince Sneeze’, the qualities that Poldo has to confirm his achievement are 4 7
his bravery, wisdom, and devotion. 2
1
Firstly, Poldo is very brave because he fearlessly journeyed out through the Black Pine Forest and
faced hungry wolves and bears whilst on his quest for the Giant up north. Separate topic sentence and
supporting details

Secondly, Poldo exhibits wisdom as he advised Prince Rolandor that he has an idea on how to break
the curse that Malvolia, the elderly fairy has cast upon him by asking his old master, the Giant of the
North Pole. Separate topic sentence and supporting details- can get better marks if the actions of
wisdom is pointed out clearly

Lastly, his willingness to go on a dangerous journey alone is sufficient enough to show his devotion
towards the prince as a companion. Topic sentence for devotion missing
NUR AISHA
IDALIS BINTI To sum it all up, Poldo’s admirable qualities such as being brave, wise and devoted have helped him to
RUDIE ARMAN 2020852178 free Prince Rolandor from his life ‘imprisonment’.
10. Based on the story Prince Sneeze, the character Poldo, a French poodle has expressed brilliant 5 10
character qualities that saved the prince from his ‘imprisonment’. 3
2
For starters, Poldo was kind towards the prince that he accompanied him throughout his life. As an
example, he comforted the prince when Poldo found him weeping one day. This has shown that Poldo
had a kind heart.

Additionally, Poldo’s bravery had proved to be vital to breaking the prince’s enchantment. This was
proven when he ventured to the Giant’s castle. There, he found the crucial clue to breaking the prince’s
curse. He was brave enough to venture where no man would.

Similarly, his dedication had him pushing himself. He never turned back when traversing forests
Aneesa Nyora without roads, evading wolves and bears. Poldo never turned back because of his dedication.
binti Ahmad
Petra Firdaus 2020835938 To conclude, the qualities of Poldo serves as an example of the importance of being compassionate.
11. There are few massage the authour was trying to convey that can found in Prince Sneeze. 3 6
1
Firstly,the massage is helping a friend when needed.Example of the story Poldo wants to help prince 2
go to palace to ask the giant about the key of malovias spell among them.If we helping our friend, one
day they will helping us back. concluding sentence unclear

The next massage is we need to be grateful.In this story,prince rolandor being grateful towards paldo
because paldo wants to help him to find the solutions of all of this.We must be grateful for having a
good friend to help us. Score better if you can tell what Prince did that show his gratefulness.

Moreover,accepted whoever you are.The only princess willing to accept poor prince rolandor.In this
context, no one can be special as you. Topic sentence incomplete, supporting detail – “ poor prince”
need specific elaboration.

In conclusion,helping a friend when needed,be grateful and accept whoever you are is the great
massage that the authour was trying to convey us in our life.
AZIM NAZMI BIN
NOR YAZID 2020824946 Work needs to be edited before submission
12. Alisya Suraya 2020498044 There are few messages that the author was trying to convey. 5 9
binti Mohd Firstly , we can learn to be meticulous.The Queen noticed nobody on the right side of the hall had been 2
Asmadi served with the strawberry tarts. We need to be aware of our guests’ comfort by making sure they are 2
well-served .
Secondly, we can learn to be patient.Prince Rolandor had been isolated for twenty one years in the
castle in order to be preserved by all things that will cause him sneezing. We must always believe
there is a way out to every problem.
Thirdly, we can learn to be kind.The Giant of the North Pole has helped Poldo to seek out for the rest
of the Malvolia’s spell.We must always help people without asking anything in return.
In conclusion , being meticulous , patient and kind are the messages that I learnt from the story .
(148 words)
13. There are few qualities of Poldo found in the story. 5 9
Firstly, Poldo was a loyal friend. He knew that the Prince was being cursed, but he still stayed with him 2
till the curse end. A loyal friend helped us trough difficult times. 2
Next, Poldo was a very brave dog. On his way to meet the Giant North-Pole, Poldo almost got eaten
by hungry wolves and bears, but he still managed to escape from them. Braveness help us to get
troughed obstacles.
Besides, Poldo was a smart dog. He can speak both French and English very well. When he was
SITI NUR looking for the Fairy Malvolia's words at the Giant palace, he spoke very well and wisely to ask the
KHAIRIAH BINTI giant permission for using the chest of secret.
JULPIN 2020893138 In a conclusion being loyal, braveness and smart help Poldo to end the curse of the prince.
14. Based on the short story that was written by Henry Beston, Prince Sneeze, 4 7
There are some qualities Poldo possesses that we can see through the story that confirmed such 2
achievement. 1
Firstly, Poldo is a faithful dog. As we can see ,Poldo was the only friend that Prince Rolandor ever had
in his living life in the tower. Poldo always be there by his side whenever he needs him.
Besides that, Poldo is a caring dog. It was showed when Poldo told Prince Rolandor to never give up
hope and find another way to end the curse that make his life miserable. Never give up is not the
family vocabulary of caring
Finally, Poldo is a kind-hearted dog. This was showed when Poldo volunteered himself to go to the
AHMAD FAHIM North Pole to meet with the Giant to find the way to end the curse even it was dangerous and risky.
BIN MOHD In a conclusion, we need to act these qualities in our daily life to make the world a better place.
HAFIZAL 2020469342 (160 words)
15. MUHAMMAD 2020491816 4 8
HAKIMI BIN Based on the audio that I have heard about Prince Sneeze story, there were some qualities that I got
AHMAD FAUZI from Poldo. 1

Firstly, Poldo is a kind-hearted.For examples, Poldo offer himself to go to Giant’s palace without 2
thinking about the dangerous creatures that he will face.He go to the palace because he want to find
the complete sentences of Malvolia’s curse against Prince Rolandor. Incomplete topic sentence

Furthermore, he is a loyal dog. For instance, Poldo become friend with Prince Rolandor since the
prince was baby. Poldo still friend with the prince until the prince achive 21 years old although he has a
bad curse against himself.

Lastly, Poldo is an honest friend.To illustrate, Poldo always there when the prince got problems.He
also sincere in helping the prince to remove the curse from himself. Elaboration seems to be loyal than
honest

To conclude, Poldo is a role model for us to be a good person to others.

(145 words)

16. There are some messages that the author tried to convey in Prince Sneeze. 5 10
3
First and foremost,we need to be thankful in our daily life.For example,the King was grateful that Poldo 2
had found a solution to break the prince’s spell.Therefore,he rewarded him by electing him as the
Prime Minister.

Furthermore,we have to forgive other's mistake.Fairy Malvolia hold grudges against the Queen
because she did not had the chance to taste the Queen’s handmade strawberry tart.She was furious
so she cast a spell to the baby prince.

Lastly,we must help our friend in need.Poldo was a loyal friend to the prince.He felt bad about the
prince’s condition.Therefore,he seek his old master,the Giant of North Pole to find a solution and
Elisha managed to come back with one.
Cassandra
Wilfred 2020847916 In conclusion,we need to become a better person in order to enjoy our meaningful life.
17. AIN AREZZATUL 2020868488 There are few qualities of Poldo that confirmed he has safe the prince’s life. 3 7
QASHRINA Firstly,Poldo was a devoted animal.He accompanied the prince all the time and become the most 2
BINTI ADZLAND faithful friend .Being loyal can build stronger relationship between us and someone we decided to be 2
with throughout our lives.
Moreover,Poldo was a brave animal.Poldo decided to meet his old master,which was the North Pole
Giant to find the secret on how to break the curse towards the prince.We need to be brave in order to
become successful person in life. Tell the action that shows bravery
Besides,Poldo was very kind-hearted.Poldo willed to help the prince to find the key of Malvolia’s
spell.We must be a kind-hearted person to make others feels good and appreciated. Seem similar with
2nd point
In conclusion,Poldo was a devoted,brave and kind-hearted animal that really safe the prince’s life and
as a person we should learn the lessons from this story to be as good as Poldo.
18. There were many massage that the author was trying to convey in the story. 4 7
First,the author wanted to convey about moral of kind-hearted.It can be seen when Paldo willing to 1
meet the giant and asked for the secrets carrying away by the north wind.Being kind-hearted can make 2
others happy when we help them.
Next,the author wanted to convey about patience.It can be seen when Malvolia cursed the prince
because she did not able to eat the strawberry tart.Being patience was really importance to avoid
ourselves from made a wrong desicion.
Moreover,the author wanted to convey about bravery.It can related when the princess who herself lay
under an enchantment willing to marry with Prince Rolando although Prince Rolando have a cursed.In
MUHAMAD IKLIL our live,we should be brave to overcome our fears.
HAFIY BIN In conclusion,the massages about patience,kind-hearted and bravery delivered by the author can help
RAMLI 2020881458 us to be a better person.
19. Poldo has save the prince from his ‘imprisonment’ life in the tower of Golden Mountain as Poldo 3 6
possesses much quality. 1
Firstly, Poldo is a wise dog. Poldo portrayed this when he gives advice to the prince on how to break 2
the spell. Poldo had showed that he has saved the prince from his life imprisonment. Score better if the
example of advice is given
Moreover, Poldo is a faithful animal. Poldo offers himself to go to the Giant of North Pole to find the last
sentence of Malvolia’s spell. Poldo willingly went out in a journey for twelve days to meet the Giant of
North Pole.the example is more to braveness/ fearless
Besides, Poldo is a fearless dog. Poldo went through a long journey although he knows that the forest
that he went through is full of hungry wolves and savage bears. Poldo still manages to escape from
them.
LUCIA In conclusion, Poldo being wise, faithful and fearless dog has saved the prince from his ‘imprisonment’
LUNGGAN life.
ANAK JOHN 2020820096 (147 words)151 words
20. Noah Lamech 2020285886 Based on the story book, Prince Sneeze from the firelight fairy book by Henry Beston, There are one 2 5
Anak James qualities Poldo possesses that confirmed such achievement in the story book. 1
2
The qualities that Poldo possesses is helpful. Despite being a dog, he is willing to help Prince Sneeze
to break the spell from Malvolia that can change anything with one of a sneeze. For example, He go
consulting with his old master, which is the Giant of the North Pole so that he can find the solution and
help Prince Sneeze to break the spell cursed so that he can live in a peaceful life.

To warp it up, I think this is the qualities that Poldo possesses throughout the story line which is helpful
that safe Prince Sneeze from his imprisonment life in the tower on Golden Mountain. Only 1 point
given
21. There are many massages that the author trying to convey in Prince Sneeze. 5 8
Firstly, the massage is to be equal with everyone. The Queen and King are being equal to everyone as 1
they invite everyone from the Fairyland. Being equal to everyone is a good characteristic. 2
Moreover, the massage is to sacrifice for love one. The King and Queen need to be apart from his son
for his sake, to protect each other from changing. Sometimes, we need to sacrifice for someone we
love to live.
Lastly, the massage is to be a loyal. Poldo always be with Prince Rolandor as a loyal friend and help
Prince Rolandor to find the key to break the cursed. We should always be with our friend whatever
CANARISSA condition.
CHRISTINE In conclusion, the massages from the author are be equal with everyone, to sacrifice for love one, and
ANAK ANIL 2020877794 be a loyal as a good person in life.
22. There are a few qualities Poldo possesses that safe the prince from his life imprisonment in the tower. 4 8
Firstly, Poldo is very loyal to Prince Rolandor.This is because Poldo accompanied the prince during his 2
lonely years.In my opinion,being there for the prince makes the prince more happy because he is not 2
alone.
Furthermore,Poldo is Thoughtful.During the prince`s twenty first birthday,he began to feel very sad for
stay in the tower for all his life.But, Poldo tell the prince to let poldo go to North pole to get the answer
to lift the curse and get his consent.Being thoughtful by giving the prince suggestion help him to never
lose hope.
Wan Lastly,Poldo is friendly.it is because Poldo always treat the prince over the years.Being friendly makes
Fathanulhanif the prince feel less lonely. Similar to loyal
Edruce Bin Wan In conclusion, Poldo being loyal,thoughtful and friendly are the qualities that safe the prince from his
Abdillah Edruce 2020600592 life imprisonment in tower.
23. NUR SOFIYA 2020868172 There are few good qualities in Poldo found in the story. 5 9
FATINI BT 2
MOHD FAUZI Firstly, Poldo is caring. When Prince Rolandor weep because of his fate, Poldo came in to ask the 2
reason of the Prince's sadness. Being caring enable Poldo to know the reason behind his master’s
sadness and gave solution to him.

Next, Poldo is devoted. As shown, Poldo willingly went to the Giant’s Palace to find the key to
Malvolia’s spell in order to end his master’s misery. Poldo being devoted has gave chance of possible
happiness to his master.

Lastly, Poldo is brave. Poldo is not afraid to face dangerous situations on it’s way to Giant’s castle and
overcome all of it. This qualities helped Poldo to reach and found the solution to end Prince Rolandor’s
curse.
In conclusion, being caring, devoted and brave has help Poldo to achieve such achievement and make
everything went back to normal.

Could have scored 10 if language is edited before submit


24. There are few messages that the author try to convey in the story. 5 8
Firstly, author send diligent message .The Prince accomplished teacher taught him 1
history,music,drawing,dancing,and all the other things that the prince ought to know.We need to be 2
persistent and hardworking to become successful.
Moreover, author send smart message.In the story, hungry wolves and savage bears often pursued
him, but somehow he always managed to escape them all.Such value allows us to cleverly use our
skills to overcome challenges in life.
Besides,author send thankful message.As for Poldo the poodle,he was created Prime Minister and
lived to a fine old age.Being thankful multiplies our happiness while making others feel appreciated.
MUHAMMAD In conclusion,being diligent,smart and thankful learnt from the story makes us becomes a well-rounded
FARIS BIN AB person.
RAHIM 2020488686 Could have been better if own words and language are edited before submission
25. Based on the story of Prince Sneeze, there are some messages that conveyed by the author that we 5 8
could identify. 2
First, we could see the mother’s love for her child. For example, the Queen, the mother of the prince, 1
was very sad when she knew that she needed to be apart with her son.
Next, we should never look down on an animal. Such as in this story, Poldo, a French poodle was
described as a faithful friend of the prince. He was so devoted to the prince that he willing to encounter
the danger in the forest just to find the answer to break his master’s cursed.
Also, all of our hard work will pay off. For instance, in the end of the story, we believed that Poldo was
granted a Prime Minister title for his generosity towards the prince.
To sum up, we should be able to identify the goodness and badness in the story and practise it in our
Aleeya Adriana daily life.
Binti Zaidol 2020841624 Could score better if responses are edited to fit the word count.
26. Nur Ain Aqila 2020482138 Question 2 5 9
Binti Mohd Nor There are few messages from the author found in the story. 2
Aripin Firstly, the author conveys us to be responsible when we have made a mistake. The king and the 2
Queen being responsible for Prince Rolandor’s sworn by preserving him from anything that causes him
sneezed. Being responsible helps us to be more aware of our actions.
Moreover, the author wants us to always be positive when something bad happens. Podlo persuaded
Prince Rolandor not to give up when he started to blame his fate for his life. Therefore, we must
believe that every cloud has a silver lining.
Besides, the author conveys us to help people in need. Podlo helped Prince Rolandor by finding the
last Malvolia’s sentences to break the cursed at The Giant of the North Pole’s castle. Thus, we have to
try our best to help others.
In conclusion, being responsible, positive and helpful learned from the story make us become a better
person in our life.
(149 words)Could score better if language is edited before submission
27. Question 1 4 7
There a few qualities that Poldo possess in the story.
Firstly , Poldo is a brave dog . Poldo manage to go through challenge it need to face along the way to 1
meet the Giant . Poldo is brave face the challenge.
Secondly , Poldo is not giving up. Although the prince almost give up , Poldo told him that there will be 2
a way to break the curse and Poldo suggest the idea of meet the Giant. This is shown Poldo believe
there is a way to solve the problem instead of give up.
Lastly , Poldo is a wise dog . Poldo undestrand the Fairy Malvolia’s spell right away and went back to
king palace for the answer. Being wise is important to understand the answers .this example does not
highlight wise
In conclusion , braveness , not giving up ,and wise is the qualities Poldo possesses to save the prince.
ZENIQ JARMIN (148 words)
ANAK PETER 2020451566
28. Nur Faqihah 2020611382 Based on the short story that I have learned Prince Sneeze by Henry Beston ,massages the author 2 4
Husna Bt Mardi was trying to convey in Prince Sneeze is do not give up.There are few reasons why I choose this 1
messages. 1
First,when they sent for Doctor Pill the court physician,the doctor give suggestion that the Prince must
be preserved from the things which cause sneezing.The doctor want to little highness be put into a
special suite of rooms admit no person to them until he has been examined for head-cold.So little
highness was places in the tower on the Golden Mountain since is in a fine healthful locality.This
example shows that the Doctor Pill give the suggestion for dissapear the Malvolia’s spell. What is the
message/lesson learn?You need to point out the message then support with example, not retelling the
story
Secondly,when Paldo ask the Prince do not give up hope..Poldo give suggestion to consulting its old
master the Giant of the North Pole which is he has a large chest in his - almost correct but the rest of
the elaboration is beyond word limit
Could have been better if instruction, advice, and revision are taken and done properly. Hope you
could learn good examples of write up from your friends here and strive better in LIRA2.

palace full of secrets which the winds have overheard and perhaps the key to Malvolia’s spell is among
them.On the next day,Poldo was went at the palace and seek some words of the Fairy Malvolia which
were carried away by the northest wind at Prince Rolandor’s christening and Poldo found the chest lay
the rest of Malvolia’s spell and came back and tell the the King the Queen about the news.This
example shows that Poldo was not give up to find the solution to dissapear the Prince spell until went
to see the giant.
Lastly,Princess Alicia was afraid that the Prince did not accept her as the bride because of the curse a
jealous witch.The witch tell her that if she want to free from the curse she must married with the man
who willingly accept her with her appearance.So Princess Alicia was brave and go to the palace and
accept the request from the Queen since she only princess left in all Fairyland whi herself lay under an
enchantent.She willingly to married with the Prince for dissapear her curse from a jealousy witch.This
example show that Princess Alicia did not give up until she find the man who willingly accept her.
Conclusion,we must not give up if we faced some challenging because every challenge have their
solution.So we must try to find the solution and the result will satisfied us.If we give so early,the
solution do not come to us but we must find our solution with ourselves. 399 words
29. There are a few qualities that Poldo possesses that confirmed such that achievement. 5 8
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Firstly,Poldo was a faithful pet.For instance,Poldo accompanied Prince Rolandor during his lonely year 2
at Golden Mountain Tower.Being faithful was necessary to make sure the others felt comfortable.

Besides,Poldo was a brave pet.In the story,Poldo was taking its own risk to help
Prince Rolandor by entering the dangerous forest and finally managed to escaped from there.Such
that qualities shows us to be brave in order to overcome our own fears.

Moreover,Poldo was a kind-hearted pet.For example,Poldo had offered Prince


Rolandor a help by trying to seek the Fairy Malvolia’s last sentence from the chest own by the Giant of
the North Pole.We need to be kind-hearted to make sure the others feel happy.

MUHAMMAD In conclusion,being a faithful,brave and kind-hearted are the qualities that make us become a noble
SYAHRULNIZA person.
M DANIEL BIN
JAFELY 2020616396 (142 words) Language editing is needed to get a better marks.
30. Sylvia Sayan 2020463914 PRINCE SNEEZE 2 4
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Jonathan Qualities Poldo possesses that confirmed such achievements is that he is brave, helpful, and caring in 1
order to help the Prince Rolando, Prince Sneeze to find the cure for his illness or the spell by Malvolia.
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First of all, Poldo is the brave dog and he can speaks in English fluently with the others people. He is
brave because he has willingly went to the very far away that is a Giant Palace at the mountain. Before
he was going, he asked for a warm shoes and clothes from the Prince as the journey was taking a very
long time and it is very far from the castle where the Prince was staying. Poldo had went through all
the adventurous and challenging way to reach the Giant Palace at the far away mountain. Finally he
was arrived there and met the Giant that is big, tall and has yellow colour

Besides the word went the highlighted words are lines that are unnecessary to answer the question.
Your paragraph need to be focus to answer question not retelling the details of story.

Could have been better if instruction, advice, and revision are taken and done properly. Hope you
could learn good examples of write up from your friends here and strive better in LIRA2.

in hair to tell him about the Prince’s illness.

Second quality of Poldo is that he is very helpful to the Prince and his parents, the King and the
Queen. This can be shown when Poldo had arrived as he came back from the Giant Palace and bring
the very important answer to find the last sentence that Malvolia has not spoken before. Poldo had
found the answer from the secret big chest own by the Giant Palace and he was very happy and
excited to tell the King and the Queen the answer. Then Poldo told that the Prince’s illness will cure
when he found someone who is willingly to marry him. The King and the Queen were so happy and
proud of Poldo for his help and contribution in order to help the Prince.

Thirdly, we can see from the story that Poldo was caring to help the Prince. As the Prince stays alone
in the castle at the mountain and yet he was staying far away from his parents, the King and the
Queen, Poldo was one who stay along with him all the time in that castle. The Prince was always feel
sad, lonely and disappointed because he cannot sees the wide world outside of his castle although he
has learnt and teached in the castle about many things such as drawings, history and many else things
that he should know and learn as the Prince. At that time, Poldo was the only one who can cheers him
up and understands his condition. As the example from the story, Poldo was asking the reason why
the Prince sobbing sadly and alone. He then suggested the very crucial idea to the Prince as he tell
about the Giant who had the big secret chest that hopefully can change his unfortunate fate. Eventually
the Prince was very happy and exciting with Poldo’s idea. He then agreed with Poldo and support him.

As the conclusion based on the story Prince Sneeze, this story was very interesting and beneficial to
all the reader as it contained a lot of moral values, good qualities or characteristics of the character in
the story, exciting events, and the great plot or twist of the story that make it so fun and creative. As we
can see from above, the good qualities of Poldo should be taken and learnt by the readers such that
brave, helpful and caring for the benefits whether they are for ourselves or others people around us.

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