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Alyssa Pugnale
Prof. Waggoner
Eng 1201
11 March 2021
grow. In an article written by Camille Crittenden, she mentions that “Ninety-five percent
of teens now report they have a smartphone or access to one; 45% of them say they
are online on a near-constant basis”(Crittenden). That is a lot of teens and a lot of time
spent on social media so it is not a surprise that social media has heavily influenced our
lives for the better and the worse. Social media platforms can be used for a variety of
transformed the way people communicate, it has many negative affects and dangers on
today’s youth like depression and anxiety, cyberbullying, and not being able to form
meaningful relationships.
In just a decade social media has changed the way we communicate with one
another. Myspace was a popular platform that influenced the social media that we know
today. After Myspace, followed Facebook which gained an even larger amount of users.
and Media Authority stated Facebook was the most popular form of social media for
twelve to seventeen year olds (Healey). Now there are platforms like Instagram,
Youtube, and Snapchat which are gaining popularity among the youth. The number of
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kids active on social media continues to grow and the age that kids are introduced to
One of the biggest negative effects of social media on kids is the lack of their
ability to build relationships due to the amount of time they spend online. Before social
media, kids talked face to face and were present when they were with their friends. Now
it is easy to get wrapped up in what is going on online rather than what is going on in
the real world. Social media takes away from teens forming real connections and
relationships. In an article written by Camille Crittenden, she mentions that, nine out of
ten teens believe that their peers waste too much of their time online (Crittenden). This
statistic puts into perspective how big the issue of spending too much time on social
media is.
are facial expressions, body language, and getting to hear tone of voice. Not being able
to see someones emotions or hear their voice can lead to misunderstanding. Also,
conversations online don’t happen in the same time span that they do in real life. Talking
online allows for more time to develop a response. It makes sense why many kids,
including myself, don’t like to talk on the phone because there is more active
communication that can be seen as stressful. Many teachers have noticed that students
have a harder time socializing in the classroom because social media has lessened the
It is easy to waste time on social media. When kids spend too much time online,
it takes away from the time that they should spend focusing on schoolwork or being
outside and staying active. The increase in social media use has negatively affected
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academic performance. In Australia, a profesor carried out a study that found that
students who regularly used social media had lower math, science, and reading scores
than those who rarely used social media(Heitin). Too much social media also distracts
from spending enough time outside and involved in extracurricular activities. Nowadays
kids spend more time inside on their phones than they do playing sports and being
outside in the sun. It is scientifically proven that spending more time outside can have
positive effects on a person’s mind and mood. Kids do not get these same benefits by
school and technology because these activities offer the opportunity to stay healthy and
Another issue regarding wasted time on social media is sleep deprivation. Many
hours of the average teenagers day is wasted on social media. When I am scrolling
through social media at night, oftentimes I lose track of time and suddenly an hour has
passed. This time spent on social media can cut into the time that teens should spend
sleeping. Being active on social media before going to bed can also make it more
difficult to fall asleep and affect the quality of sleep. The professionals at SCL health
write that the blue light created by a phone screen decreases the production of
controls both the sleep and wake cycle(sclhealth.org). Sleep is important, especially for
teenagers. When they don't get enough sleep, it can have affects on their performance
at school and in athletics. It can also cause moodiness and have an impact on their
mental health.
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pediatrician at John Hopikins, recommends that teens get nine to nine and a half hours
other age groups because their bodies and brains are developing quickly. Not getting
enough sleep over a long period of time can have an affect on both their physical and
mental growth.
parents generation, bullying doesn’t only happen at school, it oftentimes follows kids
home. It is easy to say mean things to others online, rather than saying it their face.
Cyberbullying is more common than most people expect. In an article written by the
University of Nevada, they stated that one in every six teenagers have experienced
dangerous online-behaviors like receiving explicit pictures, having their location being
tracked, threats, and having explicit images of themselves leaked by others (“Impact of
Social Media on Youth Mental Health”.). Research also shows that young girls are more
of boys ages twelve to fifteen know someone who has experienced cyberbullying
Figure 1 (Smith)
students in Turkey. The results showed that 35.7% of the students have cyberbullied
others at least once. The article also mentions that the amount of teens experiencing
cyberbullying is greater than the amount of bullies (Beyazit). This means the number of
35.7%. Cyberbullying can have different effects on todays youth like anxiety, suicidal
thoughts, and low self-esteem. It can also make school feel like an unsafe place and
Social media has been linked to have a cause in depression and anxiety. Like I
mentioned before social media can cause sleep deprivation which can lead to
depression and anxiety. Cyberbullying which occurs over social media can also cause
both depression and anxiety. On top of sleep deprivation and cyberbullying there are
unrealistic standards set online that can take a toll on the mental health of teens. The
impacts of social media range from loneliness, feelings of depression, anxiety, negative
models on the covers of magazines with photoshopped bodies that appear perfect. Now
teenagers all over social media are editing their bodies. Teenagers are always
comparing themselves to others and when they see this “perfect” image it can be
the journal Body Image which found that when females viewed a social media profile of
someone that they felt was “prettier”, it caused them to feel worse about themselves.
(“Impact of Social Media on Youth Mental Health.”). Females who had a positive view of
themselves were negatively affected after viewing social media so the affects of social
Teens also face the want and need to be accepted by everyone. An example of
this is when kids are constantly checking the likes that they receive on social media
posts. This issue has lead to instagram adding a feature where users can hide the
number of likes that they get on each post from their followers. The need to be accepted
could also result in many teens participating in unsafe behaviors like using drugs and
alcohol or making bad decisions online. When kids post bad stuff online, they end up
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suspended or expelled from school. A bad decision made online can even jeopardize
things like getting into college or getting a job in the future. Recently, students at my
high school made inappropriate posts online and are facing consequences for their
private story got them in trouble. Even though she though it was private and only her
closest friends could see, someone screenshotted the picture and showed it to the
school. She was in trouble with both the school and her parents. But then a month later
it was shared for millions of other people to see. Now she is dealing with it again and
facing threats.
As smartphone use increases this includes the use of social media which proves
that social media does in fact have an influence on mental health. Crittenden states
that, during 2010 to 2015 the number of deaths by suicide increased by twenty-three
percent and during this same time period the use of social media also increased
(Crittenden). Another study with basically the same results, which was conducted in
2019 on twelve to fifteen year-olds in the U.S., proved that spending over three hours a
day on social media leads to a greater risk for mental health issues(Mayo Clinic Staff).
The increase in self-harm due to social media is affecting countries across the world,
not just the United States. An article written by Elia Abi-Jaoude, that was published in
Canada found that, the number of girls in 2009 to 2014 that were admitted to the
number of deaths from suicide for ages ten to fourteen in 2017 has almost doubled
compared to the number in 1999. Also, the number of deaths for fifteen to twenty-four
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year olds hasn’t doubled but it has increased significantly (“Products - Data Briefs -
Number 330 - September 2018”). Sucide is the second most common cause of death in
Finally, there are dangerous people, products, and ideas all over social media.
Social media makes it easy for people whos intent is to do harm to others to get in touch
with young kids. It allows companies to easily market unhealthy products to a vulnerable
audience (Romer). Products such as tobacco and unhealthy foods and drinks are
Although social media can have many negative affects, it can also add many
positive aspects to a teenagers life. First, it allows kids to stay in touch even when they
aren’t together. During the recent COVID-19 pandemic, social media allowed friends
and families to stay connected when they couldn’t see each other face to face. It also
allowed teachers to keep in touch with their students. My mom is a kindergarten teacher
and she used Zoom to meet with her class during the pandemic. The kids enjoyed
seeing each others faces and my mom enjoyed getting to see her students. Even
though they couldn’t be in the classroom, meeting over zoom added normalcy to
everyone’s lives. Many students also collaborate over social media during group
projects and teachers can communicate information outside of class by using platforms
like a blog. Secondly, most kids learn how to navigate technology and social media at a
young age so they grow up with more technological knowledge which is an important
skill for many careers. However, too much of a good thing can be bad and this applies
to social media. When kids spend too much time online, it can cause them to develop
anxiety and depression, sleep deprivation, poor communication skills, and allows for
Many of the issues that stem from social media can be avoided with moderation.
For example, in the article, “How does social media affect our sleep?”, Dr. Niel Stanely
recommends to limit or stop using all social media a couple hours before going to sleep.
However, he realizes that this isn’t ideal for most people and encourages getting off of
all social media at least 30 minutes before bedtime (Stanely). By just setting the phone
down thirty minutes before bedtime, it can help combat the effects of excess social
media on sleep deprivation. Also, doing things like not being on the phone while eating
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allows everyone at the table to talk about their day or what’s going on in their life and
can help kids communicate outside of social media. No phones at the dinner table is a
rule at my house. After everyone gets home from school, work, or practice, we get to sit
down and catch up over dinner and I enjoy spending this time with my family.
communicate but it creates negative affects and dangers for youth. The use of social
media platforms has lead to increase in anxiety, depression, and self-harm in teens
across the world. It also allows for cyberbullying, causes sleep deprivation, and kids
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