Reflective Essay Final Draft
Reflective Essay Final Draft
Reflective Essay Final Draft
Professor Massie
ENGL 1301
8 May 2021
Reflective Essay
This Spring semester has been a delight. I have enjoyed learning many interesting and
helpful things in all my classes while pushing my own limits. English 1301 with Professor
Massie as my instructor has taught me so much. I never thought I would really learn valuable
lessons from an English class, but I couldn’t have been more mistaken. Throughout the process
of making my first essay I have not just learned things to improve my writing, but also things to
I learned most from my first essay, the documentary rhetorical analysis. I practiced the
skills of detecting bias, researching, analyzing, and writing. During and after the essay I learned
a lot about use and placement of commas and period marks. For example, in my first draft I
wrote, “Reggie says that he’s surprised to hear about his acquaintance landing the interview and
explains that he finds it hard to be positive about the potential good news.” When I first wrote
this, I had an unnecessary comma placed after “interview.” There were many other places within
my first drafts that I had extra and unnecessary commas. While editing and reviewing my essay I
realized how many commas there were and decided to find out how to effectively use commas. I
learned correct comma use and had nearly no marks taken off my final grade for improper
comma placement. After having my essay graded, I learned that period marks and commas are
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placed inside quotation marks rather than outside. This is a lesson I practiced on my second
Furthermore, before I began the process of writing this essay, I did not know or
understand MLA format. I struggled immensely with proper citation. I learned a lot about correct
citation, however, there was still much more I learned after receiving my grade and comments. I
now know that MLA citation calls for hanging indentations, no hyperlinks, inverted dates, and a
Additionally, drafting this essay helped me learn how to find research that corresponds
and compliments the essay content. Not only did I become proficient in how to find appropriate
research, but I also learned where and how to incorporate the research.
Lastly, the most valuable skill that I learned while creating this essay is how to write
what I am thinking. As simple as it may sound, I struggled most with just writing what I wanted
to say. I would sit in front of my laptop full of ideas and thoughts, contemplating how to write
what was on my mind. I never wrote anything down because I did not think my thoughts made
sense written out. Tim Denning wrote, “I don’t practice writing. I practice thinking” (Write to
Think. Don't Think, and Then Write. par.12) These words help remind me that I need to first
focus myself on my thought process rather than writing process. It was a challenge to overcome
this inhibiting mindset, but once I realized that I just need to say what I am trying to say, I could
not stop writing. I have gained the understanding that it is okay to write down imperfect
sentences or ideas because they can always be polished and revised in the future. Overcoming
this obstacle has really boosted my confidence and taught me a lot about how to write.
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My second major essay in this English class has a much higher grade than my first.
However, this is solely because I gained a load of knowledge from writing my first essay. The
analyzing, and detecting bias. These are all valuable skills I hope to continue to hone in the
future.
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Works Cited
"Write to Think. Don't Think, and Then Write." Tim Denning, 16 Nov. 2020,
timdenning.com/write-to-think-dont-think-and-then-write/.