Story Area Documents: Logline
Story Area Documents: Logline
Story Area Documents: Logline
Networks and content creators are notoriously guarded about their planning
documents, but a friend kindly shared one from a one-hour pilot development
deal at NBC. Story area documents can take many different forms, but will
usually contain:
LOGLINE: One sentence including the word “but” to articulate the central
character. Avoid stereotypes and tropes. The joke in the classic, dark satire film
Network (written by Paddy Chayefsky) was that every character on the shows in
development at the fictional UBS network was “crusty yet benign.” Defy
touchstones, i.e.: It’s Gilligan’s Island meets Twin Peaks (Lost). Or: It’s Sherlock
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Holmes as a misanthropic yet brilliant present-day physician, and his cases are
medical (House).
THEMES: It’s super important to explore themes! Find the universal, relatable
thematic “nugget.” 1 Remember, House of Cards is not a show about politics. It’s
a show about power. Transparent isn’t a show about gender dysphoria; it’s an
ensemble show about identity, and this theme extends to the whole Pfefferman
highlights the intended “sweet spot” of the show. In Law & Order, the sweet
spot is crime and punishment, investigation, trial and resolution. In This Is Us,
the sweet spot is the tribulation encountered by triplets and their parents across
encompassing beginning, middle and end. The writing style of the story area
document will ideally capture the tone of the series, so if you’re writing a
comedy, the story area document needs to be funny. Many writers advise
against including dialogue in a story area document, and instead describe the
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funny situations. If you’re embedding dialogue in a story area document, you
run the risk of getting noted to death on specific lines of dialogue—when your
goal is to get the story area approved. But many comedy writers do include it,
Edition), who also helms the WGA Showrunner Training Program, puts it: “If you
don’t know where you’re going, every road will take you there.”
The bottom line for all content creators: When in doubt, simplify. Stay on
point and on theme. Have a roadmap—a series bible or story area document(s)
as a selling tool, but be prepared for the inevitable and delicious detours that
follow.
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