Paragraph Difinition - IC
Paragraph Difinition - IC
Paragraph Difinition - IC
by definition
◦ To contrast:
although, and yet, at the same time, but, despite,
even though, however, in contrast, in spite of,
nevertheless, on the contrary, on the other hand,
still, though, yet
◦ To show time:
after, afterward, as, as long as, as soon as, at last,
before, during, earlier, finally, formerly,
immediately, later, meanwhile, next, since,
shortly, subsequently, then, thereafter, until,
when, while
SOME USEFUL TRANSITIONS (continued)
◦ To summarize or conclude:
all in all, in conclusion, in other words, in short, in
summary, on the whole, that is, therefore, to sum up
◦ To show place or direction:
above, below, beyond, close, elsewhere, farther on,
here, nearby, opposite, to the left (north, etc.)
◦ To indicate logical relationship:
accordingly, as a result, because, consequently, for
this reason, hence, if, otherwise, since, so, then,
therefore, thus
Editing Paragraphs
◦ What is the editing stage?
The editing stage is when you check your paragraph
for mistakes and correct them.
◦ Grammar and Spelling
1. Check your spelling.
2. Check your grammar.
3. Read your essay again.
4. Make sure each sentence has a subject.
5. See if your subjects and verbs agree with each
other.
6. Check the verb tenses of each sentence.
7. Make sure that each sentence makes sense.
Editing Paragraphs
(continued)
Style and Organization
1. Make sure your paragraph has a topic
sentence.
2. Make sure your supporting sentences
focus on the main idea.
3. Make sure you have a closing sentence.
4. Check that all your sentences focus on the
main idea.
5. See if your paragraph is interesting.
◦Topic sentence:
governs the controlling idea of a
paragraph
◦Thesis sentence:
governs the whole essay consisting
of several paragraphs
Topic Sentence
◦ A paragraph must have a subject (S), that is what you
are talking about
◦ A paragraph must have a controlling idea (CI), that is
what you say about the subject (often with opinion).
◦ List of ideas
1. opening employment opportunities
2. farmers’ utilization of land to its maximum
capacity
3. two to three harvests a year
4. not dependent on seasons
5. simultaneous planting season to fight insects
AGRICULTURAL DEVELOPMENT
Agricultural development in a broad sense needs
continuous improvement. There are several reasons for this.
Firstly, its primary aim is to boost agricultural production
because increased food production will meet the need for
food and the requirements of domestic industries. Secondly,
this will also step up exports, increasing the earnings of
farmers and expand employment opportunities. Also,
improvements in the agricultural sector will support regional
development and intensify transmigration activities. Equally
important, agricultural development will lead to
industrialization which will ultimately create mass production
for the welfare of the whole society. Therefore, a strong
agricultural sector will work toward an economic balance.
Find: (1) Topic sentence (2) Controlling Idea (3) Supporting
sentences (4) Conclusion from the above paragraph
AGRICULTURAL DEVELOPMENT
(1) Agricultural development in a broad sense needs continuous
improvement. (2)
(3) There are several reasons for this. Firstly, its primary aim is to
boost agricultural production because increased food
production will meet the need for food and the requirements of
domestic industries. Secondly, this will also step up exports,
increasing the earnings of farmers and expand employment
opportunities. Also, improvements in the agricultural sector will
support regional development and intensify transmigration
activities. Equally important, agricultural development will lead
to industrialization which will ultimately create mass production
for the welfare of the whole society.
(4) Therefore, a strong agricultural sector will work toward an
economic balance.