Evaluation Compliance Report On Thesis (MS) Title of Research

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Fatima Jinnah Women University

Department of Business Administration

Evaluation Compliance Report on Thesis


(MS)
Title of Research: “The Role of Seed Money for Women Entrepreneurship, Entrepreneurial
Self-Efficacy, and Intention: Evidence from Pakistan”

Name of Candidate: Huma Rasheed

Registration No: 2017-MS (BA)-004

Name of Supervisor: Dr. Adeel Luqman

Name of External Examiner: Dr. Samreen Fahim Babar

Degree Program: MS Finance

No. Correction required (Suggested by Amendments made Located

Examiner) on Page

Abstract

1. Abstract is too long and very much  Minimize abstract in

elaborated comprehensive style XIII

 Focused on main

objectives

Chapter 1, 2 & 3 : Introduction, Literature review & Theoretical Framework


2. Correction of Formatting errors and  Formatting errors

Missing references corrected


1-8
 Missing references

added

3. Chapter 2, 3 & 4 should be written  Variables, Literature

under the umbrella of one chapter review and theories are

written in one chapter 27-34

with different titles

4. Avoid outdated literature  Updated literature is

added 56

5.  Give strong justification of  Justification provided 68

sample selected and unit of

analysis choosen.

 Correlate the MBA student’s

perception with the problem

of women in practice.

Chapter 6: Data Analysis and Results

6. Table and graph no. should in line  Table and graph

with respective chapters. numbers rechecked 83

Chapter 7: Conclusion.

7.  Conclusion is generic  Conclusion is in lined

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 In line it with study with study objectives

objectives

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