Eapp Module 8
Eapp Module 8
Academic and
Professional
Purposes
Quarter 1 – Module 9
Writing a Concept Paper
English for Academic and Professional Purposes – Grade 11
Quarter – Module : Critical Approaches in Writing a Critique
First Edition, 2020
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English for
Academic and
Professional
Purposes
Quarter 1 – Module 9
Writing a Concept Paper
Introductory Message
For the facilitator:
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At the last part of the module, you will find:
• Handle this module with care. Avoid unnecessary markings in any part
of this module. Use separate sheets of paper in answering the activities.
• Don’t forget to answer “Let Us Try” before moving on to other
activities.
• Read the instructions carefully before doing each task.
• Observe honesty and integrity in answering /performing the tasks and
in checking your answers.
• Finish each task before continuing to the next activity.
• Return this module to your teacher or facilitator on the assigned
schedule.
Remember that this self- learning material aims to enhance your skills
in using appropriate critical approaches in writing a critique. If you encounter
any difficulty in answering the activities in this module, please consult your
teacher or facilitator. They are more than willing to assist you.
Good luck!
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Let Us Learn!
After
using this module, you will have been able to:
•explain what a concept paper is
•identify the features of an effective concept paper
•explain a concept from different fields through definition,
explication, and clarification
• compare and contrast various kinds of concept
• present a novel concept or project.
Let Us Try!
Task 1: Let’s Draw It!
Identify a problem in your community brought by the coronavirus
pandemic. Illustrate the problem in the comic strip provided below as well as
its possible solution. Draw your answer on a separate piece of paper.
Komiks
.
Comic Strip Rubric
CATEGORY 4 3 2 1
Clarity and Comic is easy to Comic is easy to Comic is hard to Comic is hard to
Neatness read and all read and most read with few read and
elements are so elements are clearly illustrations and understand.
clearly written, written, labeled and labels
labeled and illustrated.
illustrated.
Choice of Shows events Shows most of the Shows most Shows some
Scenes that are relevant important related to important events related to
and reasonably the story, however events related to the story, but
accurate as a there is at least one story, highlights information is
sequel to the discrepancy/conflict unimportant incomplete or
novel with the original points. focused on less
important
points.
Spelling & No spelling or No spelling or One to 4 More than 4
Grammar grammatical grammatical spelling or spelling and/or
mistakes on mistakes on a comic grammatical grammatical
comic strip with strip with little text. errors on the errors on the
lots of text. comic strip. comic.
Graphics The graphics The graphics are The graphics Little or no
are meaningful, somewhat are scarce graphics were
colorful, and meaningful, throughout the evident. It is
appropriate. It colorful, and piece and not clear that the
is clear that appropriate. It is much time or effort was
time and effort clear that some time effort was put lacking and they
went into their and effort went into forth. did not
creation. their creation. complete the
assignment.
Format They have They have included They have They have 3 or
included at least 5 frames to their included 4 less frames to
6 frames to comic strip. frames to comic the comic strip.
their comic strip.
strip.
Let Us Study!
During a campaign period for any elections, you most certainly want to hear
what the platforms are of politicians in our country. You would probably want to
hear how they are going to solve the most rampant problems in our society and how
they are going to implement these improvements, so that we can decide if they are
worthy of our vote. The same is done in academic and professional setting, an
institution or agency is able to decide whether a certain project or research is worth
the investment through a concept paper, in which you are going to learn in this
module.
A concept paper is a summary of a project proposal that
reflects the interest of the writer or organization. It presents what
the project is all about, the reasons of conducting it, and how it
will be carried out.
Usage:
*It serves as a foundation of a full project proposal
*It helps determine whether a certain project is achievable or
not.
*It is used to catch the interest of a potential funding agency.
*It is used to gain feedback about the initial proposal prior to
preparing a full blown project
Purpose:
To clarify and explain concepts,
1.Definition ideas, and issues by answering the
question, "What does it mean?"
Structure:
Contains the term to be defined and
the detailed exposition of the term
through the use of illustrations,
examples, and description.
Example:
Subsequent to materials design is the preparation of learning
Task 2: Read and Tell!
materials. Learning materials refer to both printed and non-printed
objects or items that learners use to facilitate language learning.
Nowadays, materials are becoming more and more sophisticated,
incorporating authentic language samples and realias that help make
a connection between classroom and real-life activities. They also
incorporate information and communication technology (ICT), role-
plays, information-gap activities, taped transcripts, integrated
macroskills, and explicit rubrics.
Note:
In presenting your ideas effectively, you should be able to identify the
important elements incorporated in a definition. These includes the term that
is defined, the explanation presented in detail, and the examples presented.
The following signal words can be very useful in writing a concept through
definition.
Introduction:
-The introduction should contain a clearly
stated thesis followed by a detailed analysis of a
passage or text.
2. Explication
Body:
- The body can begin by analyzing and
explaining how the text was constructed .
Conclusion
- Ending explication should be done in a
concise and this can be done by restating your
thesis and major arguments.
Two roads diverged in a yellow wood, And both that morning equally lay
And sorry I could not travel both In leaves no step had trodden black.
And be one traveler, long I stood Oh, I kept the first for another day!
And looked down one as far as I could Yet knowing how way leads on to way,
To where it bent in the undergrowth; I doubted if I should ever come back.
Then took the other, as just as fair,
And having perhaps the better claim, I shall be telling this with a sigh
Because it was grassy and wanted wear; Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Though as for that the passing there Two roads diverged in a wood, and I—
Had worn them really about the same, I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference
Source: https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/44272/the-road-not-taken
Example:
Explication of “The Road Not Taken”
The poem titled “The Road Not Taken” by Robert Frost is about a
man reflecting on a choice he once made. While the outcome of this choice
is not implied to be positive or negative the speaker notes that the choice
in itself and the consequences of that choice have made a huge difference
in the way his life has unfolded.
The poem is about the importance of choices. The poem begins
with the speaker regretting that he could not have been two people so he
could have at some point in his life taken two roads instead of being
confined to one. He looked as far as he could to see what was ahead on
one of the roads he could have taken, but he was limited of seeing only
as far as where it turned and disappeared in the bushes. In the second
stanza he says he took the other road because it was grassy and was
possible better because it was less travelled, though not much more than
the other road. The third stanza says both roads were covered in leaves
that had been walked on infrequently to the extent that the leaves
covering them had not been made black from tramping feet. He also says
he continued on the road he chose, and because he knew that one thing
leads to another (“way leads on the way”) he doubted he would ever return
to this part of the road. Finally, he says he will tell the story when he is
much older (“Somewhere ages and ages hence”) that he had the choice of
taking one road over another, and having taken the one he did made a
big difference in his life.
Source:An Excerp from: http://efford.weebly.com/uploads/1/3/8/3/1383356/poetryexplicationexample.doc
3. Clarification
This entails the analysis of concept
by looking at the examples and
specifying some of its characteristics to
arrive at one working definition which
can be used throught the paper.
Signal Word for Clarification
After all for instance namely that is
as an example in other words put another way to be specific
consider the in particular specifically to clarify
following
for example in short Stated differently To illustrate
Example:
Clarification Text
Use the structure below when you want to propose a certain tangible
project in your discipline.
Proponents
Jestony P. Cabulanan
Grade 11- STEM
Santa Cruz Senior High School
cabulananjestony9@gmail.com
Your institution, the Ayala Corporation, is one of Philippines’ oldest and largest groups.
Your integrity and excellence have ran continuously in seven generations for more than 180
years. We strongly believe that your mission has always been the pillar of your company which
creates synergies as you build alliances with those who share your philosophy and beliefs. We
are well-aware of the implementation of your Text2Teach mobile education intervention in
selected subjects last 2014. It has reached 300,000 students from over 1000 public elementary
schools within the country. As proponents of our newly proposed project Oplan Learning
Assistance Program for Indigenous Students (LAPIS), we have high hopes and strong faith that
you will not fail to provide us with your generous heart and carry us through the reinforcement
of this project since you are an institution that values education.
We are in partnership with the Local School Board (LSB) of the municipality of Santa
Cruz, Davao del Sur. It is a special body created by Republic Act 7160 whose main duty is to
allocate the Special Education Fund (SEF) for the supplementary needs of public schools. In
accordance with section 272 of the mentioned act which states that the SEF proceeds shall be
allocated for the operation and maintenance of public schools, purchasing of books and
periodicals, and educational research, we believe that our project moves in harmony with the
purpose and goals of this agency. It has been regularly allocating financial assistance during
Sports Meets and other curricular activities for talented and skilful students. It has also provided
Santa Cruz, Davao del Sur with additional teaching force to support the Department of
Education (DepED) in achieving excellence in education. With Oplan L.A.P.I.S. and through
the help of LSB, we are driven and motivated to make a difference in the lives of our future
leaders who are the youth of today.
We are worthy of help from your institution because Oplan L.A.P.I.S. can become
many students’ new hope. It will not just add value but also emphasis and motivation for
students to pursue the saying “Education is the key to success”.
The main goal of Oplan L.A.P.I.S. is to help the indigenous students studying in Ciriaco
C. Godoy Elementary School, Balalan, Santa Cruz, Davao del Sur and to promote effective
learning by providing them with learning assistance, discussions, and sufficient learning
materials.
In the implementation of Oplan L.A.P.I.S., the proponents of the project shall undergo
the following methodology:
All needed materials, equipment, and resources shall be collected by the proponents
from their respective sources. Your institution shall provide us with out monetary needs and
the National Book Store, which is owned by your corporation, shall be the source of all school
supplies, bags, and white board sets. Projectors and printers shall be bought at SM Appliances,
Ecoland, Davao City while food for lunch shall be ordered from Jollibee Digos Branch, Digos
City. The LSB shall help us gather volunteers who are willing to provide us with manpower.
Same goes with the renting of transportation vehicles.
The following teaching personnel shall be appointed as motivational speakers for the
discussions during the implementation of Oplan L.A.P.I.S.:
* Mr. Maurice Bacaling, Teacher III at Santa Cruz National High School
- Kythe volunteer for kids with cancer at Southeastern Philippines Medical Center
- Presenter of corrected OBE Syllabi Output for Teacher Education Professional
Courses
* Mr. Ronald Diaz, Teacher III at Santa Cruz National High School
- Science, Technology, Engineering and Mathematics (STEM) Junior High
Coordinator
- Teachers and Employees Association (TEA) President, Santa Cruz, Davao del
Sur
C. Project Plan
Member/s
Day Time Activity Objectives/Purpose
Assigned
To ensure the
Stage Preparation and
harmony of the
Day Checking of
1:00 – 3:00 PM All involved main program that
1 Resources &
will occur on the
Materials
next day
Opening Program and
Introduction of the Jestony
8:00 – 9:00 AM
people behind Oplan Cabulanan
L.A.P.I.S.
Mr. Ronald
To motivate
Discussion about Diaz, to be
9:00 – 10:00 AM students to do well
Education assisted by
in their studies
Ryan Cano
Mr. Maurice To help and inform
Discussion about Bacaling, to students and
10:00 – 11:30 AM Effective Learning in be assisted by teachers on how to
School Maiah achieve effective
Day Dominice learning
2 11:30 AM – 1:00
Lunch
PM
Janna
Educational and To promote and
Cayasan and
1:00 – 2:30 PM Friendly Games for engage students in
Jestony
Students active learning
Cabulanan
Distribution of To help the
Learning Materials to students in school
Students and Turning who do not have
2:30 – 3:00 PM All involved
Over of Teaching much access to
Materials to the advanced learning
Faculty materials
3:00 – 3:30 PM Closing Program
The anticipated outcomes of Oplan L.A.P.I.S. are measured in the following forms:
• The students of Ciriaco C. Godoy ES will gain more knowledge, ideas, and information
that they can use in their daily lives since teachers will be more prepared and skilled in
teaching.
• The students will find more fun and comfort attending school every day.
• The students will be more encouraged to study well and with this, a brighter future awaits
them.
After the occurrence of our planned one day event, we will continue in being a part of
their progress in school. We will gather observations and comments from the teachers
regarding the performance of the students in class. This will involve group activities, board
works, and oral recitations. We will also check their daily attendance to see if they are really
motivated by the set of new leaning materials. Their grades will also be monitored. Changed
in their grades will be the primary basis of the effectiveness of Oplan L.A.P.I.S.. On the other
hand, we will also ask questions to students regarding on how they like or dislike the teaching
methods of their teachers after the project.
The project will be implemented within the month of November 2017 which is when
all needed materials are ready. The stage preparation and checking of materials shall follow on
the next day and the main program will be held after. The monitoring will begin at the end of
the current grading period and will conclude at the end of school year 2017-2018.
The project foresees 150 students to receive the school supplies (notebooks, crayons,
rulers, pencils, papers, and bags). There will be six sets of projectors and white boards with
pens with the proponents aiming to distribute one set per grade level. Snacks and lunch packs
are budgeted for a total of 200 people including all students, teachers, guest speakers,
proponents, representatives, and volunteers. At the end of the school year, the top three
awardees per grade level will be awarded with cash prizes of 1,000 pesos each. The proponents
will have to rent two transportation services each with assumed 3,000 pesos cost and will have
to allocate 10,000 pesos for the honorarium of our two chosen guest speakers and 5,000 pesos
for each proponent for travel expenses.
Disclaimer:
The example above is a mock concept paper project proposal submitted by the learners of Santa
Cruz National High School during their English for Academic and Professional Purposes subject under
Ma’am Glaiza Mae G. Palmero SY: 2017-2018.
Use the structure below when you intend to present an idea or concept
for a research you want to pursue.
Project Overview
L2 pedagogy and research have considerably experienced shifts that continue to bring
about new and perennial concerns, the first of which is the divergence between practitioners
and theorizers. This problem resulted in the struggle of teachers in accommodating and
integrating technical knowledge to their own embedded teaching framework; hence, they
employ various methods and approaches which they feel are more practical and effective based
on their own teaching experiences and classroom realities. Also, teachers employ eclecticism
which seemed to be unsystematic, uncritical, and unprincipled as it reaches classroom level
(Kumaravadivelu, 1994) because “it offers no criteria according to which we can determine
which is the best theory, nor does it provide any principles by which to include or exclude
features which form part of existing theories or practices” (Stern, 1992, p. 11). Another issue
directly linked to the divergence between the theorizers and the practitioners is the lack of
models consolidating the recent theoretical and empirical research findings which will guide
the teachers in employing sound teaching practices (Brandl, 2002). The lack of such model
may be the factor that prompted language teachers to practice teaching without due regard for
current beliefs in language teaching and learning for the reason that they teach the way they
were taught (Borg, 2003).
Teacher’s skills are also an issue. Though teachers are capable of creating curriculum,
learning experiences, assessment to diagnose the needs, weaknesses, strengths of the students
(Wiggins and McTighe, 2005), their skills are sometimes questioned particularly the nonnative
English teachers. As what Dat (2008) has pointed out many teachers from Southeast Asia are
incompetent language users and pedagogically unskilled.
The overwhelming cognitive orientation in contemporary L2 pedagogy has been
criticized by putting much emphasis on the language itself and not L2 in use (Matsuka & Evans,
2004); in short, developing language proficiency is treated as the ultimate goal of any language
course. This leads to the next issue which is the lack of emphasis on, along with the difficulty
in, developing the learner’s pragmatic and sociocultural competence in the context of L2
classrooms (Trosborg, 1995).
With the introduction of new pedagogical concepts, learning process, and information
and communication technology, it is imperative to develop a teaching framework that would
reflect the most current and generally accepted second language learning principles and
integrate them with practical knowledge. Since current trends in language teaching and
materials design are evolutionary rather than revolutionary (Nunan, 1999), this paper does not
intend to reject previously-held, tried, and tested practices but to add value to what is already
existing by consolidating the most recent and established principles and communicate them
clearly for practical use particularly in materials preparation. As Omagio-Hadley (1993) has
pointed out, the mere proliferation of L2 research which is sometimes contradictory would just
lead to confusion unless the results are integrated and well communicated.
And since the study will be conducted in the context of a developing country, the
findings of the study will potentially contribute to the field of language teaching in the
Southeast Asian region by offering a framework that integrates both the sociocognitive and
transformative aspect of language teaching and learning. This paper, through the developed
framework will help teachers expand their repertoire of techniques and best practices to
effectively deal with the learners’ individual differences; consequently re-skilling them.
Design and Methodology
This study will primarily use qualitative research combined with some quantitative
measures (Tashakkori & Teddlie, 2002). Such method will provide the best opportunites for
generating new and creative ideas (Jaccard & Jacoby, 2010). Specifically, the development of
the teaching framework will be anchored in the grounded theory (Glaser, 1922; Glaser &
Strauss, 1967) through analysis of recent literature and studies from the top TESOL and applied
linguistics journal. Consequently, the framework that will be developed will be validated from
both theoretical (researcher-theorizers) and practical perspectives (practitioners) to ensure
utmost applicability and usability.
The following instruments will be used for validation of the framework: rating scale for
researcher-theorizers validation, semi-structured interview for experienced teachers’
(practitioners) validation, and actual classroom teaching with observation. There will be five
experienced teachers and five researcher-theorizers who will validate the framework.
Moreover, such triangulation will be used to obtain a full picture of what is being investigated
(Mackey & Gass, 2006).
Draft Budget
Materials, Reproduction, Data Collection PhP 100,000.00
• Digital Recorder w/ rechargeable battery
• Bond paper (short)
• Bond paper (long)
• Computer ink (BCI 830, black)
• Miscellaneous (Pens, Pencil, Folder, CDs rewritable)
• USB flashdrive
Validator’s Token (in kind) PhP 50,000.00
Transcriber’s Fee PhP 50,000.00
Personnel
This paper will only involve one research proponent who will undertake the project.
However, other personnel will be involved not as researchers but as framework validators,
instrument validators, and transcribers.
Let Us Remember
Fat is important for a healthy diet but one’s intake of it should be always
taken note of. For instance, inadequate intake of fats can cause several
problems in the body particularly, the decrease of the body’s insulation.
When the body is not insulated enough, this could cause one to feel cold
immediately whenever there is a slight drop in the environment’s
temperature.
a. Definition b. Explication c. Clarification d. Narration
Let Us Enhance
Difference Difference
Similarities
Let Us Reflect
I thought....
• What were your misconceptions about the topic prior to taking the
lesson?
I learned that..
• What additional learning have you had after taking up this lesson in
terms of skills and attitude?
References
Book
Barrot, Jessie and Sipacio, Philippe John. Communicate Today English for
Academic & Professional Purposes for Senior High School. Quezon
City: C & E Publishing, Inc., 2016
Online Sources
https://www.sushidog.com/bpss/stories/stars.htm
https://depositphotos.com/2583991/stock-photo-cartoon-teacher-
woman.html
https://filipiknow.net/sa-ugoy-ng-duyan/
http://www.cyberbee.com/artifacts/Photo%20Analysis%20Rubric.pdf
https://www.sushidog.com/bpss/poems_staff/stars2.html
https://www.edutopia.org/sites/default/files/pdfs/stw/edutopia-stw-
yesprep-rubric-literary-analysis.pdf
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