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    Class code: 222_71ENG210023_55

    Student’s name: Dang Thi Tra Giang


    Peer editor’s name: Nguyen Thi Tuyet Giang
    Date: 8/04/2023

    WRITING ASSIGNMENT – LESSON 7

    Topic: UNIT 6

    Brainstorm ideas, make an outline and practice writing paragraphs on the following
    topics. Remember to write from 80 to 100 words.

    2. Describe your favorite food/ dish.


    Here are some guiding questions:
    • What is the dish?
    • What are the ingredients?
    • What does it taste like?
    • How do you feel when you see or enjoy it?

    • 1st draft

    Bài nháp:
    My favorite dish right now is salad dressing with mayonnaise, which is pretty frugal.
    I was fed by my mother when I was in middle school and that dish captured my heart.
    Salads are mixed a lot of vegetables together, including lettuce, coriander, tomatoes,
    cucumbers and corn.My mom would chop the vegetables and mix them well,adding a
    little spices like vinegar, pepper, sugar and mayonnaise.It has the fresh flavor of raw v
    egetables and the greasy touch of mayonnaise,creating a great flavor.The dish will be
    even better when it is put in the refrigerator cooler.The first time I ate a salad I found
    it a bit pale but the more I ate it the more delicious and attractive it felt.This is also a v
    ery healthy frugal dish. It's also part of the reason I love eating salads so much.
    • Self-assessment (checklist)

    Content    Y/N    Comments/ Suggestions   


    Task Response   
    Is the paragraph at least 80 words?    y    
    Does the paragraph have a clear topic sentence that states the main ideas? y
    Does the paragraph have a concluding sentence that rephrases the topic
    y  
    sentence, summarizes main points, and/or gives the writer's opinion?  
    Does the paragraph focus on describing people, objects, or places?
    Coherence & Cohesion   
    Are there one topic sentence, at least two supporting sentences, and one
    y     
    concluding sentence in the paragraph?   
    Is there at least 1 transition word used to link the sentences? (First of all,
    y      
    In addition, Also, In conclusion, ...)?
    Lexical Resource   

    Are there any spelling errors?      y     


    Does the paragraph have descriptive details (using adjectives, information
    N
    related to five senses, prepositional phrase)
    Grammar Range and Accuracy   
    Are there any errors in verb tenses and subject-verb agreement? y       
    Do you capitalize the first letter of each sentence and put punctuation
    y       
    marks at the end of the sentence?

    • Peer assessment (checklist)

    Content    Y/N    Comments/ Suggestions   


    Task Response   
    Is the paragraph at least 80 words?      Y     
    I think you should
    Does the paragraph have a clear topic sentence that states the main ideas? remove the two words
      Y 
    "right now", it will be
    better to read it       
    Between the last two
    sentences you should put
    Does the paragraph have a concluding sentence that rephrases the topic
    a "," don’t put a "." it
    Y 
    sentence, summarizes main points, and/or gives the writer's opinion?   makes the 2 sentences
    separate and reads feel
    inconsistent
    Does the paragraph focus on describing people, objects, or places? Y
    Coherence & Cohesion   
    Are there one topic sentence, at least two supporting sentences, and one
      Y     
    concluding sentence in the paragraph?   
    I think you should add
    the following example
    words in the question so
    Is there at least 1 transition word used to link the sentences? (First of all,
    that the paragraph is not
     N  
    In addition, Also, In conclusion, ...)? boring and it is easy to
    distinguish what is the
    topic sentence and which
    is the conclusion.   
    Lexical Resource   

    Are there any spelling errors?    N       


    Does the paragraph have descriptive details (using adjectives, information
    Y
    related to five senses, prepositional phrase)
    Grammar Range and Accuracy   
    Are there any errors in verb tenses and subject-verb agreement? Y       
    Do you capitalize the first letter of each sentence and put punctuation
    Y       
    marks at the end of the sentence?

    • Final version

    My favorite dish is salad dressing with mayonnaise, which is pretty frugal.


    I was fed by my mother when I was in middle school and that dish captured my heart.
    Salads are mixed a lot of vegetables together, including lettuce, coriander, tomatoes,
    cucumbers and corn.My mom would chop the vegetables and mix them well,adding a
    little spices like vinegar, pepper, sugar and mayonnaise.It has the fresh flavor of raw v
    egetables and the greasy touch of mayonnaise,creating a great flavor.The dish will be
    even better when it is put in the refrigerator cooler.The first time I ate a salad I found
    it a bit pale but the more I ate it the more delicious and attractive it felt.This is also a v
    ery healthy frugal dish, it's also part of the reason I love eating salads so much.

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