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「網誌」指的是一種線上日記的個人網站，雖然網誌在眾多實用文

格式中可謂自由度最高，難道也可算作最低，不過在寫作的時候仍

然有很多需要注意的位置，一不留神，分數被扣減便不值得了。

以下便是五個需要留意的位置：

I. 標題

無論在寫作什麼，都需要讓人知道你的主題是什麼，這個時候一個

合適的標題便是您最好的選擇。因此在寫作網誌時最好加上一個適

當的標題，如果題目一早給予了標題的話，便須確保你寫作的內容

跟標題互相呼應，以避免離題。

II. 日期

因為網誌是一種線上日記，所以擁有高自由度，就如自己平日寫日

記一樣，日期是可以加上或不加上的，並沒有硬性規定是格式的一

部分。不過若然題目已經給予日期并要求加上，就必須緊記加上日

期。

III. 上下款
雖然網誌是一種個人的線上日記，但畢竟在線上發放，所以仍然有

預期的觀眾，由此網誌的上下款跟日期一樣，是選擇性質的，可以

寫可以不寫，除非題目固定要求寫作，否則可以不浪費筆墨。（可

能你的網誌在線上根本沒有人觀看呢）

IV. 小標題

有人會話有標題就一定會有小標題，因為小標題的運用令文章段落

可以更清晰，更整潔。錯！大錯特錯！網誌寫的是個人故事、個人

經歷，不同於一般的文章，更屬於一種個人的抒發，又何來需要小

標題的分隔呢？尤其是在寫故事的時候。

V. 語境意識

又到一期一次的語境意識環節，由於網誌的自由度極高而且屬個人

寫作的文體，所以寫作時需要採取的是非正式的態度，而非

formal，所以在用字上需要多加留意，不要只顧追求使用深奧的生

字，需要貼及真實所需。況且在寫作的時候也適宜增加一些與讀者

的互動，例如提問題，畢竟這是網誌可供他人線上閱讀。

Question 6: As part of your drama class, you played the role of the hero

and the villain in different plays.

Write an entry in your drama journal. Reflect on which role you preferred

playing and why.

studying drama was part of the course requirement. My drama teacher

said that the best way to study drama was to act out the plays. So I was

required to play the role of hero and villain in different plays we were

studying as our assignment. I played the role of Mr. Darcy in Pride &

Prejudice and the role of Joker in The Dark Knight. Though I enjoyed

playing the character Darcy as he was a fine noble man, I found playing

the character Joker very demanding and stimulating.

I preferred playing a villain character because I believe that in order to

make my dream of becoming an all-rounded actor come true, I have to

put my acting skill to test and stretch it to the limit. Personally speaking,

it does not take me much effort to play a hero character as I embrace the

universal values of courage, goodness, kindness and love in real life.

However, since I am not used to being a villain in real life, I would like to

dare myself to play a villain character in order to enhance my acting skill

to a professional level and to get closer to become a successful actor.

Moreover, I want to know more about human nature, especially evil.

Despite the fact that I am well aware of good, I seldom have knowledge

about darkness and evil. By tapping into the mind and heart of a villain

character, I am able to gain a better understanding of what evil exactly is

falling into the trap of being a villain in real life.

Another thing is that in real life, we have many chances to be a hero but

we rarely risk our life being a villain. Things as small as giving a helping

hand to an old lady crossing the road, opening a door for a wheelchair-

bound person or doing volunteer services for the sick, the poor or the

disadvantaged are already deemed as an act of a hero. However, most of

us generally won’t choose to be a villain in our daily life because being a

villain will very likely lead to serious consequences under the rule of law

in the modern society. No one will dare to run the risk of being convicted

or sentenced to imprisonment in the court and spending the rest of life

in prison. Therefore, since, in reality, most of us won’t behave like a

villain, only under a pretend setting, that is drama, will I be able to have

a chance of experiencing the complex mind and psychology of a villain

character as well as the evil and the darkness inside.

What’s more, playing the villain character appeals to me personally

because I want to be a hero in real life. As Chinese saying goes “If you

know yourself and your enemy, you can fight a hundred battles without

defeat”, by putting myself into the shoes of a villain, I can better

understand them and thus will more likely to fight against them, save the
world from destruction and bring faith and hope to the humanity in real

life.

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HKDSE English 2013 Q6

Learning English through Workplace Communication (article)

You are a human resources assistant. Your boss has observed that many

people are leaving the office very late. He has asked you to write an

article for the company newsletter describing the situation and

discussing the negative effects. You have also been asked to give two

suggestions to improve the situation. Provide a suitable title for your

article.
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I moved from my house to an apartment in the city center

for my third year because I wanted to be closer to the city

center.

It was great to move back to Liverpool. I felt like I was

coming home, which made my parents very unhappy.

During my first week back, I worked a few days as an

Ambassador for the university. I showed potential new

students around campus while getting to know it again

myself.
When classes started up again, it seemed like summer

was over in a few minutes.

How to write a diary entry? 英文日記的格式和一般的寫法

※ 在上方記下<日期 當天的天氣>,日期均以縮寫呈現,

※ 天氣( cloudy 陰天/ shinny, sunny 晴天/ rainy, wet 雨天/

humid and hot 濕熱)

※ 以第一人稱來起始,故常省略"我 I" ,若有混淆之疑,則不省略。

※ 因為描述的是當天已發生的事,動詞時態多為<過去式>和<完成

式>。

※ <現在式><未來式>的使用通常指出現在的心情或未來的計劃。

Mon, Feb. 20th Sunny

Dear Diary,

On my way back home from school, ( I ) chatted with Jim

and Tom.

( I )Learned that Tom had been thinking buying a new

cell phone.

Jim pointed out the fact that new ones would cost more

and soon
he would find the store selling it cheat three months later.

Is it really necessary for us all to buy new cell phones

when we already have a functional one? These pretty

commercials sometimes push 消 費 者 (...consumers) to

spend too much.

Blog entry

Wed, March. 3rd cloudy, cold

Dear Diary,

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overwork - excessive strain on physical and mental

condition，

like result in insomnia ， energy loss and lack of

concentration

worse still， mental stress，anxiety and depression

premature 过早的 death

solution

recharge your body and spirit ranging from exercise to

stay late during the evening without recharging, feel

exhausted the next day

vicious circle

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You are the director of a play. Yesterday you held the first

rehearsal. Complete your diary entry describing what

happened at the rehearsal, whether you think it was a

success and what you need to improve before the next

rehearsal.