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Unit 1 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .1
Unit 2 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .4
Unit 3 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .7
Unit 4 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .10
Unit 5 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .12
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 Answer Key

UNIT 1 3. There are 13 supporting sentences. They are after

the first sentence and before the last.
Paragraph to Short Essay
4. And the worst part was that every day I had to
walk past the coconut tree and remember my
Part 1: The Paragraph
foolish risk.
Exercise 1 (p. 3) B. Answers will vary.
A. 1. The writer was in the yard of his family’s house.
1. c Whenever I remember my experience in 2. He was with his friends.
the Mexican Air Force, I think of my flight 3. He fell from the coconut tree and broke his arm
instructor because he taught me how to fly a and one of his ribs.
fighter jet. His nickname was Ice-Man, because 4. Answers will vary.
2. b he was always calm. This was a positive
Exercise 4 (p. 5)
characteristic because he had to teach students
2. My first driving lesson was a disaster.
not to panic in a dangerous situation. For
3. The process of getting a driver’s license has
3. a example, one time, I made a big mistake while
several steps.
we were flying the clouds. Most instructors
4. My ability to speak English has changed my life
would take control and fix the situation, but
in several important ways.
not Ice-Man. He just gave instructions to
5. Some computer games involve the player in
fix the problem. I corrected the mistake and
physical activity.
got confidence in my abilities. I will always
6. Cloudy weather affects certain people in negative
remember his quiet, clear voice and the black
ways.
aviator glasses that he wore. He was a special
person in my life, and I hope that someday I Exercise 5 (p. 6)
can see him again and thank him for helping 2. b 4. c 6. b
me to realize my dream of flying solo and 3. c 5. a
becoming a real pilot.
Exercise 6 (p. 6)
B. 1. The topic sentence is the first sentence circled Answers will vary for the predictions.
above. Yes, the topic sentence does help you 2. Cell phones should not be allowed in classrooms
understand what the paragraph is about. for several reasons.
2. The supporting sentences are underlined above. Prediction: The writer will give reasons why cell
There are five. phones should be banned in classrooms.
3. Yes, all the supporting sentences relate to topic 3. Cancún restaurant has the best seafood in town.
sentence. Prediction: The writer will explain why the food
4. The concluding sentence is the last sentenced at Cancún restaurant is the best.
circled above. Yes, the concluding paragraph 4. Training for the marathon is a complicated
makes the paragraph feel finished. process.
Prediction: The writer will explain the steps in
Exercise 2 (p. 4)
training for a marathon.
Answers will vary.
5. Taking the TOEFL is a hardship for many
The boy takes a risk trying to climb a coconut tree
students.
when he was young, which is dangerous.
Prediction: The writer will express an opinion
Exercise 3 (p. 4) about taking the TOEFL.
A. 1. The topic sentence is the first sentence, “When I
was a boy and first learning about the world, I
Exercise 7 (p. 7)
2. b 3. a 4. b
took a big risk.”
2. Yes, the first sentence is indented.

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Exercise 8 (p. 7) Exercise 4 (p. 11)
Answers will vary.
I love to watch the pelicans in Galveston. I usually
A. 2. Revised topic sentence: Students eat a lot of fast
go in the winter. The weather is not warm enough for
food for several reasons.
swimming, so I usually do not see many people on the
3. Revised topic sentence: When I want to be alone
beach. Pelicans are not elegant, but they are interesting
to think, I visit a beach near my house.
to watch. They remind me of prehistoric birds from my
4. Revised topic sentence: Teenagers spend too
school textbook on dinosaurs. (1) I studied dinosaurs
much time shopping.
a lot when I was young, and I am very fond of then.
5. Revised topic sentence: Hurricanes cause much
The pelicans have large grayish-brown wings that bend
damage to property in Florida every year.
sharply when they are flying, and their beaks are long,
B. 2. Topic: Students eat a lot of fast food
so their faces look peculiar and old. (2) My brother also
Controlling idea: for several reasons
really likes pelicans. They are also graceful in their own
This paragraph will be about: reasons (or causes)
way. A flock of pelicans will fly along the coastline just
of why people eat a lot of fast food
outside the waves, and when they see a good fishing
3. Topic: A beach near my house
spot, they stop, then turn and dive straight down into
Controlling idea: I visit the beach when I want to
the water. (3) Sometimes there is an oil rig or a cargo
be alone
ship in the water, too. Sometimes several pelicans will
This paragraph will be about: a description of the
fish in the same spot for a while before moving down
beach
the beach and away from sight.
4. Topic: Many teenagers
Controlling idea: spend too much time shopping Exercise 5 (p. 12)
This paragraph will be about: an opinion of why Answers will vary.
too much shopping is bad for teenagers 1. Team members can have fun. Team members can
5. Topic: Hurricanes enjoy meeting new people.
Controlling idea: hit Florida every year 2. I met interesting, new people. My teacher taught
This paragraph will be about: the effects of differently from teachers at my old school.
hurricanes in Florida 3. Travelers can explore small towns and scenic
areas. The roads are well maintained and there
Part 2: Unity and Coherence are many hotels, campgrounds, and restaurants
available.
Exercise 1 (p. 9) 4. First, you need to think about what you will need
Answers will vary.
when you arrive at your destination. Second, you
The writer’s grandfather’s talent is astronomy. Her
should pack so that when you need a particular
mother’s older brother’s talent is story-telling. Her
item you can access it easily.
grandmother’s talent is painting.
Exercise 6 (p. 13)
Exercise 2 (p. 10) The writer gives four rules.
1. My mother grew up in a creative and interesting
family in Nepal. It is the first sentence. Exercise 7 (p. 13)
2. Answers will vary. Example: The writer’s mother 1. For people who like to act in the theater, there are
had a fascinating family with many artistic talents. several important rules to remember.
3. The sentence, “After my mother left Nepal, she 2. An actor should remain calm, and make up
studied computer programming in Wisconsin,” is something to say until remembering the next line.
irrelevant. 3. The ideas move from less important to more
4. Answers will vary. Example: This sentence is not important ideas.
about the writer’s mother’s childhood; nor is
it about her family. Consequently, it does not Exercise 8 (p. 14)
support the topic sentence. a. 10 e. 8 i. 7
b. 1 f. 3 j. 9
Exercise 3 (p. 10) c. 2 g. 6
2. a, b 4. b, c 6. a, b d. 4 h. 5
3. b, c 5. a, c 7. b, c

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Part 3: From Paragraph to Short Essay M D
Exercise 1 (p. 16) 6. It is only dangerous when the roads are wet.
The short essay is more interesting because it has more D M
details. The more the reader learns about Uncle Patricio, 7. Because the tide went out, the jellyfish were
the more real he becomes in the reader’s mind. stranded on the beach.
Exercise 2 (p. 17) M D
Answers will vary. 8. My country was invaded many times before we
1. In the short essay introduction there are details formed our current government.
about the members of the writer’s family. The
paragraph only mentions Patricio. Exercise 4 (p. 23)
2. Patricio looks like an interesting, old man now. 2. C 3. I
3. There are details about his physical appearance. I noticed that there was a little dirt on the floor.
4. Patricio has an interesting life story. the The DVD player was missing ; nothing else was
5. There are details about the places he visited. gone.
6. The concluding paragraph tells more about 4. C 5. C 6. I
the writer’s feelings about Patricio, why he is They took statements. later Later that afternoon
interesting, and hoping to learn about the tattoo. they found the robbers and Rachel’s DVD player.
Exercise 3 (p. 18) Exercise 5 (p. 23)
A. a. A restaurant job is a convenient choice for a I am the middle child in my family (1) , but I wish
college student for several reasons. I were not sometimes. My brother and sisters have an
B. During my childhood in El Salvador, I learned an easier life than I do. My older brother is very responsible.
important lesson about being careful. (2) He he is like a third parent (3) . My my sisters and I
have to do what he tells us if our parents are not home.
Part 4: Editing Your Writing He also has more freedom than we do. He can go out on
the weekends and stay out late (4) , but we have to be at
Exercise 1 (p. 21) home by 10:00 p.m. While my brother has more freedom
1. 1 3. 2 5. 2 than I do, my sisters have an easier life. They are twins
2. 2 4. 2 6. 1 (5) and they get a lot of attention from our parents. My
Exercise 2 (p. 21) parents don’t often spend time with me (6) . Instead
2. Almost everyone in her neighborhood speaks her they spend most of their time with my sisters. Because I
language, so she does not have to use English. am not the oldest, I do not have the same power as my
3. Credit cards are convenient, but they are also brother, but I do not get the extra attention either. As a
dangerous. result, I think the middle child is not lucky at all.
4. I did not have experience, but I tried to get a job.
5. Every time I travel, either I take a suitcase or I Part 5: Putting It All Together
take a backpack.
Exercise 1 (p. 24)
6. My lucky number is seven, and my favorite color
is red. 1. Pizza is easy to make if you follow these steps.
2. If you compare a Mini-Cooper with a Volkswagen
Exercise 3 (p. 22) Bug, you will find several important differences.
M D 3. There are several ways to reduce stress.
2. I guess things have changed since I was younger.
4. Not getting enough sleep can have negative
M D effects on a student.
3. I was sad when I left my country. 5. One of my backpacking trips was almost my last.
D M 6. A good journalist has to have special talents and
4. When I am older, I want to have a big house with skills.
a patio and a swimming pool.
Exercise 2 (p. 24)
D M
5. After you understand the meaning of a word, you When I want to eat steak, I go to my favorite
can practice writing sentences. restaurant, Saltgrass Steakhouse, because I always

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have a good experience. I love walking through the breathe fresh air, and dig our toes into the sand. In the
big heavy wooden doors because the spicy smell of afternoon, we played in the shade of the trees, swam in
grilled meat makes my mouth water. The hostess the river, and dug in the gardens. The adults watched us
knows my family, and she always gives us a good seat from the patio (5) . They they could see us and we could
where we can watch the other customers and enjoy see them. This home was the center place of my family
the cowboy decorations on the walls. The service is (6) . I like to think about it when I feel lonely.
friendly and efficient. (1) On the other hand, the cook
is often grumpy. (2) He yells at the waiters sometimes.
The waiters always bring crayons and paper for my UNIT 2
daughters. I always order the rib-eye steak because
the grilled meat is tender and seasoned with delicious
Descriptive Essays
spices. After dinner, we talk and enjoy the atmosphere.
(3) It is not good to eat there every day because the beef
Part 1: Stimulating Ideas
has a lot of fat. (4) All red meat has a lot of fat, and it Exercise 3 (p. 28)
can cause problems such as high cholesterol. (5) I like to 1. F 3. F
eat at Saltgrass Steakhouse once a month, but I would 2. F 4. T
eat there more often if I had the money. It has the best
Exercise 4 (p. 30)
steak in the city.
Answers will vary.
Exercise 3 (p. 25) 1. He wore old clothes and his skin was leathery,
b. Zombie tag is easy to play if you follow the steps tanned and windblown.
below. 2. Bourdain was probably excited to go out in the
beginning, but later he was hungry. He was
Exercise 4 (p. 25) definitely excited to be the first in his family to try
1. I the oyster.
My father decided to go to dental school he . He 3. Bourdain would describe eating the oyster,
was at the top of his class. because he was proud to be the first to try it.
2. I 4. Bourdain probably meant that he realized after
My writing has improved a great deal, but I still tasting the oyster that food and adventure
need to work on my grammar. together would be important in his life.
3. I
When I am an industrial engineer, I want to
Part 2: Brainstorming and Outlining
design kitchen appliances.
4. C Exercise 2 (p. 32)
5. I Answers will vary.
I have never been afraid of snakes. I think they A. 1. spicy, salty
are beautiful. 2. smooth, thick
6. C 3. pungent, familiar
4. colorful, beautiful
Exercise 5 (p. 26)
Exercise 3 (p. 33)
The memory of summer vacations at my The writer believes you can get the best pizza at
grandmother’s home in Ayutta, Thailand, always makes Papa’s in Cabimas, Venezuela.
me happy. I loved this house very much because it
was a beautiful and spacious place (1) where all the Exercise 4 (p. 34)
members of my family could gather to spend time A. 1. c
together and enjoy nature. The house was located on 2. the second paragraph
a quiet stretch of river under a clear blue sky. It was a 3. b
traditional, waterfront, Thai-style home (2) . It it was Answers will vary.
built from teak wood. The tall, green trees around the B. 1. I have eaten pizza in many places, and none is as
house provided shade along the river bank. Inside the good as the pizza of Cabimas.
house, there were many rooms (3) , so my uncle’s and 2. sauce oozes, rich melted cheese, crunchy crust,
my aunt’s families could all come together at the same thick tomato sauce, gooey cheese.
time. When we woke up, we could hear the sound of 3. I enjoy it so much I won’t share it, I feel happy, I
singing birds (4) . We children always rushed outside to am in heaven.

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 4. I am convinced that the best pizza in the world is cages, but one side had a small entrance for the crab to
still at Papa’s restaurant a couple of blocks from go in. There were some small, fragrant fish in the trap.
the house where I grew up. The fishy smell made the crabs hungry, so they crawled
into the traps. We watched the crabs walk into the traps,
Exercise 5 (p. 35) and I smelled the strong smell of the dark, oily fish.
Answers will vary. Overhead, we heard the sounds of seagulls and pelicans
1. I have eaten pizza in many places, and none is as in the sky. I think the seagulls wanted to eat the fish,
good as the pizza of Cabimas. too. Once the traps were full, we took off our shoes and
2. many varieties of pizza, eat two pizzas in one threw them over our shoulders so we could walk on
night, customers have to wait in line the wet sand and feel the water pushing and pulling at
3. The best pizza in the world is at Papa’s restaurant. the beach. Later, we built a fire and ate boiled crabs on
the beach. We cracked their shells. The meat was white
Part 3: Developing Your Ideas and pinkish and tender. It tasted sweet and a little salty.
We did not want to stop eating them. We sat on the
Exercise 1 (p. 37)
sand surrounded by crab shells and watched the sun go
Answers will vary.
down into the ocean.
The writer describes catching and eating crabs on the
beach with his father. From that day on, I knew my father was right. Food
tastes best when it is something that you have caught
Exercise 2 (p. 38)
or grown yourself. I have eaten crab many times since
Answers will vary.
then, but it has never tasted as good as it did that day.
1. The place is very quiet and there are many crabs
walking on the white sand. Exercise 4 (p. 40)
2. The writer feels it was an unforgettable learning Answers will vary.
experience. 2. We quickly returned from the gourmet grocery
3. The writer describes seeing crabs walking on the store.
beach and into the traps, and the sounds of the 3. I entered the large, spacious apartment.
pelicans and the seagulls. He described the strong 4. My friend slowly cleaned the freshly picked
smell of the dark, oily fish. He describes the spinach.
sweet, salty taste of the boiled crabs. 5. We put the spinach in a large, iron frying pan.
4. The writer’s final opinion is that food tastes best 6. Our guests enjoyed the sophisticated dinner.
when it is something that you have caught or
grown. Exercise 5 (p. 41)
1. f 3. e 5. d
Exercise 3 (p. 39) 2. c 4. b 6. a
A. 1. The idea was to float the boat over the fence
walls. Exercise 6 (p. 41)
2. The boat settled on dry ground. Answers will vary.
3. We could walk around the park. 1. My best friend drinks coffee like water.
4. He held an oyster in his rough fist. 2. My place where I grew up looks like paradise.
5. I tipped the shell back into my mouth. 3. My home is like a sanctuary.
6. It tasted of the future. 4. Listening to my favorite music is like relaxing on
a beach.
B. My father told me that we should always respect 5. Coffee is as delicious as chocolate.
nature and learn where our food comes from. He said 6. TV is like food.
that food tasted better when you got it yourself and ate
it in a natural place. To show me this was true, he took
me to the ocean, where we caught our own delicious
crabs and ate them.

I will always remember the taste of the crabs we

caught that day. The beach was quiet and still at six
o’clock. The tide had just come in, so there were many
crabs walking slowly on the white sand. We sat a few
feet away from my father’s special crab traps. The traps
were made of bamboo, and they looked like round

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Part 4: Editing Your Writing sits down in the big, comfortable chairs to enjoy the
Exercise 1 (p. 43) dinner. We talk and eat for hours and enjoy our family.
Everyone feels happy, relaxed and full. Late at night, we
2. Many crabs were walking slowly on the white sand.
finally say goodbye until the next Saturday.
3. The traps looked like round cages.
4. There were some small, fragrant fish in the trap.
Part 5: Putting It All Together
5. The fishy smell made the crabs hungry.
Exercise 1 (p. 48)
6. I smelled the strong smell of the dark, oily fish. 1. On Saturday we walked to the pizza restaurant
7. The meat was white, pinkish, and tender. in Cabimas.
8. It tasted sweet. 2. The pizzas that came out of the oven looked
delicious.
Exercise 2 (p. 44)
3. We watched with excitement as the waiter
1. The movie was very boring.
brought the pizza to our table.
2. The audience was very confused by the story.
4. My favorite pizza comes with sausage and
3. As a student, I found the class very interesting. mushrooms on top.
4. The speaker was very excited by the topic. 5. The cheese on top of it is hot, and the crust
5. The children were tired by the game. crunches in your mouth when you bite it.
6. The new tastes were stimulating to the chef. 6. There are four chairs around each table.
7. There are a few tables outside the restaurant.
Exercise 3 (p. 45)
A. 1. It was a fantastic, new metal sculpture. Exercise 2 (p. 48)
2. They walked down the elegant, old marble
1. The table was long and narrow.
staircase.
3. The museum had beautiful, wooden entrance 2. It had tall, straight chairs on each side.
doors. 3. It gave the dining room an elegant feeling.
4. There were huge, bright blue lights to mark the
4. Small candles decorated each place.
entrance.
5. The food was served in simple, tiny portions on 5. In front of each chair was a delicate lace napkin.
small, modern dinner plates. 6. Each napkin sat on top of a shiny dinner plate.
6. The women wore stunning, new velvet dresses. 7. The guests arrived in beautiful clothing and full
Answers will vary.
of lively conversation.
B. 1. It was a fast racing car.
2. They lived in a large Victorian house. 8. The evening was filled with the warm energy of
3. The house was located on a long, winding street. close friends.
4. She enjoyed the interesting foreign movie.
Exercise 3 (p. 49)
Exercise 4 (p. 46) 1. The exciting, enormous wild jungle was filled
with life.
I love Saturday night dinner at my family’s house.
2. The huge, ancient stone temples could be seen for
We leave at two in the afternoon, and take the (1) drive
miles.
long drive to my parents’ house. They live on a narrow
3. The tall, rough gray steps led to the top.
dirt road. In summer we have to close the windows to the
4. A spectacular, vast green view could be seen in
car so that the dust doesn’t come in. It is a large,
every direction.
(2) wooden white wooden house, with a (3) red, old
5. People marveled at the amazing, ageless tropical
big, old red door. There is a (4) kitchen spacious kitchen
landscape.
where everyone helps prepare the dinner. Everyone in
6. In their amazement, they forgot their small, shiny
my family gathers for dinner on Saturday night, all my
modern cameras.
sisters and brothers and their children. The thing I love
the most about the house is walking into the dining room
after we finish preparing the dinner. The (5) old beautiful
old table is set with a (6) lace, white lace tablecloth and
(7) round, huge round platters of food. Then everyone

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 information because we needed to understand the
Exercise 4 (p. 49)
writer’s actions at the friend’s party.
1. I
2. The main event of this story is when the writer’s
The thing I like most about visiting my parents is
meets the friend’s grandfather and kisses his hand
sleeping in my bed old old bed.
to show respect. Then, he stops the little boy who
2. C
jumped on the grandfather’s lap.
3. I
3. The writers learns that good manners are not
Sebastian enjoyed the delicious meal gourmet
always the same in different countries.
gourmet meal.
B. 1. The hook is two sentences: Where I grew up, the
4. I
rules for family life are very strict. I had five brothers
They painted the house an antique lovely a lovely
and five sisters, and we spent a lot of time with our
antique grey.
relatives.
5. C
2. We learn from the background information that
6. I
the writer was taught very specific ways to
Montreal is a city with a history rich rich history.
respect grandparents: My parents taught us we
should respect grandparents more than anyone in the
world because grandparents had lived the longest.
UNIT 3
They had more knowledge about life, and no matter
Narrative Essays what they said, even if it did not make sense, they were
right. We were taught that to hug or kiss grandparents
Part 1: Stimulating Ideas was disrespectful and that we should greet them by
Exercise 3 (p. 55) kissing their hand.
1. F 3. F 3. The thesis statement is two sentences: I was young,
2. T 4. F and I thought that everyone lived and thought just as I
did. Well, I soon found out this is not true.
Exercise 4 (p. 56) 4. Answers will vary.
Answers will vary. 5. Answers will vary.
1. Carter needed to protect his legs from the flies 6. I explained my customs to her and she explained hers
and bees, and also because the poison would stick to me. Finally, I learned that good manners are not
to his legs. always the same in different countries.
2. This was not a comfortable job. Besides the flies, 7. Answers will vary.
the bees, and sticky poison, Carter’s pants would
not fold at night, and needed to be washed
separately. Carter did not like the job.
Part 3: Developing Your Ideas
3. This job taught Carter about the responsibility Exercise 1 (p. 62)
and value of caring for the cotton plant, and the The scary secret is that the girls did not listen to their
difficult work involved. parents and were robbed when they went out.
4. Answers will vary based on students’ experiences.
Exercise 2 (p. 63)
1. Yes, the hook gets the reader’s attention: My sister
Part 2: Brainstorming and Outlining and I made a dangerous mistake one summer.
Exercise 2 (p. 57) 2. Thesis: We had already decided to go out and explore
Answers will vary. this strange and beautiful city by ourselves.
A. 1. run (around), talk (to), think (about) The body paragraph will discuss what they
2. excited, tired, happy, nervous saw and did when they explored the city by
themselves.
Exercise 3 (p. 58) 3. The events in the body paragraph are that
The writer kissed the friend’s grandfather’s hand the girls go out and that they are robbed. The
and then told the little body not to huge and kiss the writer describes the day very clearly: down a
grandfather. The writer felt embarrassed because of a narrow street, the sun was setting, the light was very
cultural misunderstanding. beautiful, the noises of traffic nearby, the quiet little
street. The writer also describes the robber with
Exercise 4 (p. 59)
vivid detail: he was short, he was wearing a dark
A. 1. The writer’s family and culture has strict rules
green jacket and sunglasses, we could smell cigarettes
for respecting grandparents. This is important
and something terrible in his breath.

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 4. The outcome was that the girls were very scared, 2. We waited a long time for the bus before it
but they also learned something. As a result arrived. Before it arrived, we waited a long time
of being robbed, the girls learned to obey their for the bus.
parents and became obedient daughters. 3. As soon as they saved enough money, they took a
great vacation. They took a great vacation as soon
Exercise 3 (p. 64) as they saved enough money.
My sister and I made a dangerous mistake one 4. She thought carefully about which dress to buy
summer. I was thirteen and my sister was fourteen, and before she bought the red one. Before she bought
our parents had taken us to the city where they grew up. the red one, she thought carefully about which
We felt very grown up as we rode to the hotel in a taxi. dress to buy. (She bought the red dress after
The hotel was very big, and it had a blue tile floor. After thinking carefully about it.)
we unpacked our suitcases, our parents wanted to go to 5. I listened to the radio while I prepared dinner. I
the market. My mother told us not to go outside. “We prepared dinner while I listened to the radio.
won’t,” my sister promised, but I knew that she was 6. She worked very hard for many years, then she
lying. We had already decided to go out and explore this retired.
strange and beautiful city by ourselves. 7. I was very surprised when you knocked on my
door. When you knocked on my door, I was
As soon as my parents were out of sight, we got surprised.
our things and went downstairs. We walked out of the 8. He had a cup of coffee as soon as he got up in the
hotel doors and down a narrow street. The sun was morning. As soon as he got up in the morning, he
setting, and the light was very beautiful. We could had a cup of coffee.
hear the noises of traffic nearby, but the little street was
quiet. Suddenly, a man with a gun stepped out from Exercise 5 (p. 66)
a doorway. He said, “Don’t move!” He was short, and Answers will vary.
he was wearing a dark green jacket and sunglasses. 2. Why were the girls afraid to jump over the
He came very close and we could smell cigarettes and pommel horse? What is a pommel horse? Why
something terrible in his breath. We were terrified and were you tired of waiting? Where were you?
couldn’t say anything. He said, “Give me your shoes.” 3. What made you finally decide? How long did
So I did. Then he took my sister’s purse and her gold it take you to decide? What did the other girls
ring and ran away. I remember that I fell against my think?
sister. I heard her take a deep breath; she was shaking. 4. How did you jump over the pommel horse
Afterward, we ran back to the hotel, across the blue tile without falling down? Who else was overjoyed?
floor and up to our room. How difficult was it to jump over the pommel
horse?
The man scared us, but he also taught us something 5. Why do you like doing things that are a little bit
important. Before this experience, we did not always hard? What other things that are a little bit hard
listen to our parents. We now learned that we should have you done? Who else in your family likes
obey them. My sister and I became obedient daughters, doing things that are a little bit hard?
and we enjoyed the rest of our vacation. However, we
decided not to tell our parents about our adventure.
We knew they would punish us even though we had Part 4: Editing Your Writing
learned our lesson. This dangerous adventure is still a Exercise 1 (p. 69)
secret that I share with my sister.
I will always remember my wedding day. It was
Exercise 4 (p. 65) beautiful. I woke up and looked outside. The sun was
Answers will vary. shining, and the birds were singing. It was as if they
1. We went to the movies after we ate lunch at a were talking to me, telling me to get up. In reality, the
restaurant. After we ate lunch at a restaurant, we circle radio was playing and my brothers were arguing
went to the movies. (The lunch happened before in the hallway, but it still felt romantic. My dress was
the movie.) hanging on the closet door. My mother was cooking
We ate lunch at a restaurant after we went to breakfast in the kitchen, and the coffee was brewing.
the movies. After we went to the movies, we ate My father was talking on the phone to his brother, and
lunch at a restaurant. (The lunch happened after they were discussing who was the better chess player.
the movie.) This was a constant argument between the two of them,

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but I knew my father was just trying to distract himself we (6) jumped were jumping in the car. We drove to the
because he was feeling nervous. Jungfrau Mountain so we could take the tram to the top
and enjoy the view. We eagerly got on the tram. It began
Exercise 2 (p. 69) to climb to the top of the mountain. However, while
Answers will vary. the tram was climbing, it (7) became becoming cloudy.
2. When my uncle visited in 2004, I was living in The tram arrived at the top of the mountain, and we got
California. out. We were in the middle of a cloud. I thought it was
3. Last week was very busy, my roommate and I had exciting, but my father didn’t. We drove back in silence.
many tests and assignments to complete. While Our last day we went to the airport and then (8) got were
I was studying for our tests, my roommate was getting on the plane. Just as the plane was taking off, the
going to parties with her friends. sun (9) began was beginning to shine again.
4. I’m sorry I couldn’t talk last night. When you
called, we were eating dinner.
5. I’m so tired! Last night, my sister and I were Part 5: Putting It All Together
playing video games until two in the morning. Exercise 1 (p. 74)
6. I didn’t hear the doorbell. The radio was playing Answers will vary.
too loudly. 1. The day of my brother’s birthday was very
exciting. First we went to the store to buy all
Exercise 3 (p. 70)
the ingredients, and then we came home and
Answers will vary.
prepared the food for the party.
1. It was an ordinary day at school. I was sitting
2. Before we came home and prepared the food
in class and trying to finish my homework. The
for the party, we went to the store to buy all the
teacher was walking down the hallway. I was
ingredients.
shaking because I felt nervous. The teacher came
3. In the beginning, writing was difficult. Now it is
into the class and asked for our homework. I was
easier.
expecting to be in trouble. Suddenly, the fire
4. Writing became easier for him after he started
alarm went off.
doing it more frequently.
2. It was a cold and rainy night. My father and
5. When I was a child, I used to think I would
mother were visiting relatives and away from
never learn to play baseball, but I was wrong.
home. My sister and I were staying at home
Eventually I became good at it.
alone. We turned on the TV, and they were
6. When I was a child, I used to think I would never
showing horror movies. The wind was blowing
learn how to play baseball.
and the rain was hitting the windows. We were
7. I never enjoyed eating vegetables when I was
both feeling scared. And then someone knocked
young. Later on, I started to like the taste.
at the door.
8. I never enjoyed eating vegetables when I was young.
Exercise 4 (p. 71) 9. I was afraid of the water until we moved to a house
1. S 3. SQ 5. SQ near a lake. After that, I learned how to swim.
2. SQ 4. S 6. I 10. I wasn’t afraid of the water as soon as I learned
how to swim.
11. The movie was long and boring. Sebastian
Exercise 5 (p. 72) thought it would never end. Finally it did.
People go to the mountains on vacation for two 12. While Sebastian was watching the long and
reasons: to ski and to enjoy the view. My family doesn’t boring movie, he had the feeling that it would
ski but we wanted to enjoy the view! In pictures, the never end.
mountains were always beautiful. The flowers were Exercise 2 (p. 75)
blooming and the people were smiling; however, our trip 1. was walking
to the mountains was a disaster. As soon as (1) we arrived 2. was looking
were arriving at our destination, the sun disappeared. 3. thought
It was (2) raining. (3) I We were (4) staying in a friend’s 4. imagined
small apartment. My father went to the window in the 5. arrived
living room every day and checked the sky. Every day 6. noticed
it was the same: rainy and cloudy. One day, while he 7. was looking for
was looking at the clouds, a little sun began to shine 8. heard
through. (5) As soon as he He saw the sun as soon as

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Exercise 3 (p. 76) Exercise 4 (p. 87)
Answers will vary.
One morning I was (1) waiting wait at the bus
A. 1. No, the writer would not agree with someone
stop. I was worried about being late for school, and I
who said the space program does not help
was anxiously waiting for the bus to arrive. It was late
ordinary people, because the writer believes that
as usual, and I began to think of what I would tell my
the space program creates a need for technological
teacher. There were several people at the bus stop, and
advances. These advances are used in other ways
some of them were complaining. When the bus finally
that help people.
came, we all pushed our way on board. Someone folded
2. Space exploration has produced satellite
his umbrella and sprayed water on me. I (2) was felt
technology and many advances in computer
upset, but fortunately, I got a place next to the window. I
technology.
had a good view of the sidewalk. People were hurrying
3. Space exploration is very complicated and
along (3) and clutching their umbrellas. Then a boy on
difficult, and therefore it results in more complex
a bike caught my attention. He was riding beside the
technological advances than normal industries
bus and (4) waving wave his arms. I heard passengers
require.
behind me shouting to the bus driver, but he refused to
4. The writer believes that people do not support
stop until we reached the next bus stop. Still, the boy
space exploration because they may think space
kept riding. He was (5) carrying carried something over
exploration is an expensive luxury that takes
his shoulder and shouting. Finally, when we came to the
money away from other programs, such as health
next stop, the boy was (6) ran running up to the door. I
care and education.
heard an excited conversation. Then the bus drier stood
B. 1. a
up and announced, “Did anyone lose a briefcase at the
2. People have walked on the moon, and robots
last stop?” A woman at the back of the bus, shouted,
have traveled to Mars. These exciting events
“Oh my! It’s mine.” She pushed her way to the front
created history, but they are also important
and gratefully took the briefcase. She thanked the little
because they have provided many practical
boy with enthusiasm. After that, everyone on the bus
benefits for humans here on earth.
began talking about what the boy had done, and the
3. b
crowd of strangers suddenly became friendly.
4. The importance of space programs can be seen in
the technology we use every day.
5. Satellite technology allows people to watch
UNIT 4 TV shows and listen to radio programs from
Opinion Essays everywhere on earth. Also, many of the advances
in computer technology were first invented to
Part 1: Stimulating Ideas support space exploration.
6. Yes.
Exercise 3 (p. 82)
7. Yes.
1. T 3. F
8. Answers will vary. Example: Some people believe
2. T 4. T
that government money should go into health
Exercise 4 (p. 82) care, education, and other programs, rather than
Answers will vary. space exploration.

Part 2: Brainstorming and Outlining Part 3: Developing Your Ideas

Exercise 1 (p. 84) Exercise 1 (p. 89)
Answers will vary. The best medicine is antibiotics.

Exercise 2 (p. 85) Exercise 2 (p. 90)

Answers will vary. 1. a
1. develop, advance Hook: Last week, I noticed that my son had a bad
2. reject, block cold.
3. persuade, convince 2. Every day doctors prescribe antibiotics to help
4. create, prove thousands of patients around the world fight
infections.
Exercise 3 (p. 86) 3. The thesis is I do not like to think about what might
Yes, the writer supports space exploration. happen if we did not have antibiotics. Yes, it does.

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 The writer shows how dangerous the world Part 4: Editing Your Writing
would be without antibiotics. Exercise 1 (p. 96)
4. Antibiotics are one of the greatest medical 1. A lot of
inventions in human history for several reasons. 2. a few
5. The writer gives two main reasons: (1) Infections 3. Several
are frequent. (2) Antibiotics stop an infection from 4. a few
spreading to others. 5. A lot of
6. Yes, the author introduces a counter-argument: 6. a little
Recently, many people have argued that doctors
prescribe antibiotics too often and that the Exercise 2 (p. 96)
bacteria that cause infections are becoming Answers will vary.
stronger as a result. 3. Some computers have the latest software.
7. a 4. A few schools are now wireless.
5. Most medications have side effects.
Exercise 3 (p. 91) 6. Many New Yorkers love their city.
1. F 3. F 5. O 7. Many Asian countries have hot and humid
2. O 4. O climates.
Exercise 4 (p. 91) 8. Pollution affects almost everything.
Answers will vary. Exercise 3 (p. 98)
2. Athletes know they will be tested for 2. O 4. S 6. S
performance-enhancing drugs, so they avoid 3. O 5. O
taking them.
3. Employers do not always pay a person based on Exercise 4 (p. 98)
qualifications alone; appearance may affect how
Most working people will agree that traffic congestion
much an employee will receive.
creates too much stress. As large cities grow even bigger,
4. Cell phones have become very popular, and the
there is often so (1) much many traffic that people’s
industry will continue to be a good place to invest
productivity is reduced. There are two good solutions that
money.
could greatly improve traffic conditions in this city. First,
5. Americans could save a great deal of money if
high occupancy vehicle lanes (HOV lanes) are effective.
they cooked and ate food at home more often.
A vehicle can drive in an HOV lane only if the car has at
6. Pets in the United States are treated very well,
least two passengers. (2) Many Much workers must begin
because pet owners spend a great deal of money
at work at 9:00 every day, so it is easy for them to carpool.
on toys, medical attention, and grooming.
If four people ride together, there are three fewer cars on
Exercise 5 (p. 93) the road. Providing affordable public transportation is
2. Train travel may be inexpensive and relaxing; another good solution. (3) Many Much people like to use
however, airplanes are a much more important public transportation because it is cheap and convenient.
means of transportation because they are fast and However, building an effective public transportation
efficient. system costs (4) a lot of much money.
3. Most people agree that a traditional home-
cooked meal is best, but they have to admit that
Part 5: Putting It All Together
convenience and low cost is making fast food
more popular with students. Exercise 1 (p. 100)
4. While some people believe that online courses 1. F 3. F 5. O
will never be as popular as traditional classrooms; 2. O 4. O 6. F
technology, cost, and convenience are increasing
Exercise 2 (p. 100)
the demand for online instruction.
1. Even though many people say they enjoy visiting
5. Some people criticize credit cards for causing
bookstores, online shopping for books
debt; however, it is the irresponsibility of
is becoming increasingly popular.
consumers, not credit cards, that causes credit
2. Not very many people actually ride in helicopters,
card debt.
so they might not think about them as important for
6. People often comment that technology makes
our society; however, helicopters are necessary for
life easier, but in reality, technology only makes it
possible for people to do more work in less time.

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 many areas of city life, including news agencies, law went back two times last year for two different wedding
enforcement, and emergency medicine. celebrations. For an immigrant, going back home for
3. The hydrogen-powered car is laughed at by many a visit is the best cure for homesickness; (5) in fact in
people because they think it is not possible to use contrast, it sometimes helps them feel better about living
water as fuel, but hydrogen-powered vehicles in the new country. Although many people say that an
may help us solve serious environmental and immigrant’s life is never easy, I am very glad that I live
political problems. in these days and not fifty years ago.
4. Day-care centers offer benefits to the children,
their parents, and society even though there will
always be people who disagree with them. UNIT 5
5. Many people consider a new type of rice as no
big deal; however, the development of rice plants
Comparison and Contrast Essays
that are strong and resistant to disease can help
prevent starvation in many countries.
Part 1: Stimulating Ideas
6. Some people say that traveling to other countries Exercise 3 (p. 108)
is a waste of money, but international travel is 1. F 3. F
worth the cost because it is fun and educational. 2. T 4. F

Exercise 3 (p. 101) Exercise 4 (p. 108)

1. O 3. O 5. S Answers will vary.
2. S 4. S 6. O 1. The students at Boulder communicated with
their professors in a more informal manner. The
Exercise 4 (p. 101) professors were more friendly with their students.
1. A lot At Chittagong University, the students did not
2. a few address their professor unless he spoke to them first.
3. Some 2. Yunus was very shy around the female students
4. Many at Boulder. Perhaps this was because there were
5. Most many fewer female students than male students
6. a little at Chittagong University, and he did not have
much interaction with them.
Exercise 5 (p. 102)
3. Female students were separated from male
Immigrants today have an easier life than students most of the time and did not or were
immigrants of the past because communication and not allowed to participate in some activities such
travel make it easier for us to stay connected to our as politics and drama. There were many fewer
countries. Homesickness and culture shock are big female students than male students, and the
problems; (1) for example in contrast, many people get female students were very shy.
very depressed if they cannot speak their language or 4. The difference between 1965 and the present day
communicate with their parents. In the past, people had represents almost two generations, and it would be
letters and the telephone, but letters took a long time difficult to find any place in the world where the
and the telephone was very expensive, so people had behavior of students today is the same as that of their
a long time to wait for communication. (2) In contrast grandparents’ generation. In many places, a student’s
For example, e-mail allows today’s immigrants to grandparents would never have gone to a university
communicate as often as they want for free. E-mail has at all. However, it is impossible to generalize a single
other advantages too; for example, I send photographs answer for all cultures of the world.
by e-mail, and my friend has a special video camera that
she uses when she talks to her family. She can see them
Part 2: Brainstorming and Outlining
and they can see her. Another advantage for immigrants
today is travel. People sometimes visited their country Exercise 1 (p. 110)
in the past, but it was a long and expensive trip; A. 1. Washington, D.C., and Tokyo
(3) however in fact, traveling overseas is easier 2. Washington, D.C., is in the United States. Tokyo is
nowadays because there are many flights and the tickets in Japan. Washington, D.C., has large parks. Japan
are not too expensive. I know many people who live in has skyscrapers.
the United States, but they go back to their countries for 3. They are both large capital cities.
special occasions; (4) for example however, my friend B. Answers will vary.

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Exercise 2 (p. 111) Exercise 2 (p. 117)
A. Answers will vary. 1. The author compares New York City and
Quetzaltenango, Guatemala.
City Rural Area Beach Bus Station
2. When you compare them, they seem like
stimulating stimulating stimulating dramatically different places, but they have some
tedious things in common, and I love them both.
energetic energetic energetic 3. Each city has a nickname and a “Central Park,”
and many tourists and people from other
boring boring
countries. Conversations in both places are
competitive interesting because the people are so diverse.
peaceful peaceful 4. • Color: Xela is more colorful.
lonely lonely In New York, many people wear black to
be stylish, but in Xela stylish clothing is the
filthy filthy
rainbow-colored clothing of the indigenous
overwhelming overwhelming
people.
B. Answers will vary. In Xela, the beautiful green mountains outside
the city are always visible.
Exercise 3 (p. 112) • Pace of life: In Xela, the pace of life is slower.
Willowbrook Mall reminds the writer of Moreda They say New York never sleeps, and it must
Street in Morelia, Mexico. be true, because I always see people walking
and cars on the streets, even late at night.
Exercise 4 (p. 114)
In the evening, my Guatemalan city definitely
A. Answers will vary.
sleeps. Some younger people go out dancing
1. The writer likes to spend Sunday afternoons
and some families take a walk in the city’s
outside the house.
Central Park, but by ten o’clock the streets are
2. On Sunday afternoons in Morelia, the writer went
pretty deserted.
to Moreda Street.
5. Answers will vary. Example: The writer enjoys both
3. In Houston, the writer goes to the Willowbrook
places for different reasons. However, he/she
Mall.
also appreciates the similarities between the two
4. The writer likes to watch people, have coffee with
places.
friends, and relax.
B. 1. This is a similarities and differences essay. Exercise 3 (p. 118)
2. Thesis: They are very different but also similar in 1. Unlike lemons, limes are green. OR Unlike limes,
some ways, especially on a Sunday afternoon. lemons are yellow.
3. For me, Willowbrook Mall has an atmosphere that 2. On the one hand, many families can live in an
is like Moreda Street’s. apartment building. On the other hand, only one
Similarities: In both places, people gather and or two families usually live in a house.
stroll. 3. Unlike a fish, a frog can live in water or on land.
4. Despite their similarities, Moreda Street and 4. A parrot can fly. In contrast, an ostrich cannot.
Willowbrook Mall are very different. 5. Like Rome, Athens is a city rich in history. OR
Differences: The Willowbrook Mall is more Like Athens, Rome is a city rich in history.
modern than Moreda Street. On Modern Street the 6. Mozart composed his first opera at the age of
people and the architecture are more traditional. 12. Similarly, Mendelssohn composed his first
5. Moreda Street and Willowbrook Mall are very masterpiece in his teens. OR Mendelssohn
different in appearance and culture, but they are composed his first masterpiece in his teens.
also similar because they are both places where Similarly, Mozart composed his first opera at the
people like to go to relax on a Sunday afternoon. age of 12.

Exercise 4 (p. 119)

Part 3: Developing Your Ideas 1. Like
Exercise 1 (p. 116) 2. Similarly
The author loves both cities. He or she doesn’t prefer 3. In contrast
one over the other. 4. On the one hand, . . . on the other hand,

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Part 4: Editing Your Writing Part 5: Putting It All Together
Exercise 1 (p. 122) Exercise 1 (p. 125)
1. more difficult 1. Unlike vitamin D, vitamin C is water soluble.
2. more challenging 2. I am short. In contrast, my husband is tall.
3. smarter 3. On the one hand, CDs record only sound. On the
4. more tired other hand, DVDs contain sound and video.
5. sleepier 4. A river is long and thin. In contrast, a lake is
6. more energetically wider, and usually deeper.
5. A dog can be a friendly pet. Similarly, a cat is also
Exercise 2 (p. 123) friendly.
2. more beautiful than 6. Like a friend, a brother or sister can help you
3. taller than when you have problems.
4. more vigilant than
5. more colorful . . . than Exercise 2 (p. 125)
6. bigger . . . than 1. more difficult
2. prettier
Exercise 3 (p. 123) 3. more exciting
1. more excited 4. faster
2. more enthusiastically 5. better
3. cleaner 6. spicier
4. older
5. taller, shorter Exercise 3 (p. 126)
6. more relaxing 1. more reliable than
2. faster than
Exercise 4 (p. 123) 3. more TV than
Answers will vary. 4. more rapid than
1. taller 5. cheaper than
2. more populous 6. easier than
3. cheaper
4. heavier Exercise 4 (p. 126)
5. larger
I like to go on public transportation whenever I can.
6. quieter
Of course, private transportation is (1) more comfortable
Exercise 5 (p. 124) more comfortable than public transportation in many
ways. But I always feel (2) more free freer when I travel
My old home is very different from where I live on a bus or a train. I don’t have to worry about parking
now. My old home was a house, but my new home is and I can still go wherever I want. Also, taking buses
an apartment. My new apartment is (1) more small and trains is (3) interestinger more interesting. You
smaller than my old house, but the rooms are meet more people and can spend more time enjoying
(2) more large larger. Everyone in my family feels the scenery. For me, this is much (4) more relaxing more
differently about this. My parents liked my old house relaxing than driving my own car. I also find that I
because it was (3) spaciouser more spacious, but I like travel (5) more light lighter when I don’t have my car,
the apartment because my room is (4) more big bigger. so life is (6) more simpler simpler than when I have lots
My brothers don’t like the new apartment so much and lots of suitcases and things to carry.
because they have to share a room. My older brother
is (5) more independent more independent than my
younger brother, and so he wants his own room. My
new apartment is also (6) more close closer to the bus
stop, so it is (7) convenient more convenient, but it is
also (8) noise noisier.

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UNIT 6 Exercise 4 (p. 137)
A. Answers will vary.
Cause and Effect Essays
1. Answers will vary.
2. College students are hoping that a college degree
Part 1: Stimulating Ideas will help prepare them to get a good job with a
Exercise 3 (p. 132) high salary.
1. F 3. F 3. College students have to pay tuition and related
2. T 4. T fees. They have to buy books, computers and
technology-related resources, pens, notebooks,
Exercise 4 (p. 132)
etc.
Answers will vary.
4. The writer admires college students because they
1. A millionaire might look like an ordinary person.
work hard and make sacrifices to reach their
This person would probably not wear expensive
future goals.
clothes or jewelry because he or she likes to save
B. 1. a
money.
2. a, c, d
2. A millionaire probably has a good relationship
3. Two
with his family because he does not borrow or
4. No
lend a lot of money.
5. Topic sentence 1: The first reason college students
3. A millionaire probably works hard and efficiently.
are poor is that they cannot work full-time. Topic
4. various
sentence 2: A second reason college students have
little money is that they have other expenses that
Part 2 working adults do not have.
Exercise 1 (p. 134) 6. Yes
A. Answers will vary. 7. Yes
8. b
Causes Event or Situation
Exercise 5 (p. 138)
something to celebrate
A.
the right guests a successful party
careful planning Mental Clarity Physical Strength
a nice day • fast decisions • a strong body
Causes Event or Situation • cooperation with • no injuries
a good appearance other players
punctuality • stress management • being fast / agile
skills or training a successful job interview
B. Answers will vary.
suitable for the job
friendly Exercise 6 (p. 139)
enthusiastic 1. physical ability and mental clarity
2. The writer has listed three causes that relate to
B. Answers will vary.
each topic.
Exercise 2 (p. 135) 3. physical ability
A. Answers will vary. 4. mental clarity
1. comfortable, happy 5. a
2. achieve, thrive
3. diligence, industriousness
Part 3: Developing Your Ideas
4. change, improve
B. Answers will vary. Exercise 1 (p. 142)
Answer may vary slightly.
Exercise 3 (p. 136) A person must be athletically gifted and have a
1) College students cannot work full-time because strong mind.
they need to study. 2) College students have a lot of
extra expenses related to school.

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Exercise 2 (p. 143) 4. Many people pay bills online so that they will
1. Underline: At this moment, somewhere in the save money and time.
world a young boy is dreaming about becoming a 5. Some people carpool to work so that they will
famous soccer player. save money.
a 6. Many people work very hard so that they will be
2. Answers will vary. Example: Many young people successful.
would like to become famous professional
athletes, but very few can reach this goal. Exercise 3 (p. 149)
3. Thesis: The factors that determine if an individual 2. If an applicant interviews well, he or she will
can have a successful career in professional sports receive job offers. OR An applicant will receive
include physical ability and mental clarity. job offers if he or she interviews well.
The thesis statement focuses on causes. 3. If you exercise regularly, you will be healthy in
4. Two: physical ability and mental clarity. old age. OR You will be healthy in old age if you
5. Yes exercise regularly.
6. Topic sentence 1: In order to become a 4. If a restaurant serves delicious food, it will be
professional athlete, a person must be athletically successful. OR A restaurant will be successful if it
gifted. Topic sentence 2: The other factor that serves delicious food.
contributes to a successful career in sports is a 5. If I work hard, I will be promoted. OR I will be
strong mind. promoted if I work hard.
7. Body paragraph 1: Athletes need the support of 6. If parents are good at solving problems, they will
their families. Body paragraph 2: Athletes need be successful at raising children. OR Parents will
the right kind of equipment to perform at their be successful at raising children if they are good
peak. at solving problems.
8. Yes 7. If she invests money wisely, she will become
9. b wealthy. OR She will become wealthy if she
invests money wisely.
Exercise 3 (p. 144) 8. If students study hard, they will graduate from
A. 1. a. 2 b. 3 c. 1 college. Students will graduate from college if
2. a. 3 b. 1 c. 2 they study hard.
3. a. 3 b. 1 c. 2
4. a. 1 b. 3 c. 2 Exercise 4 (p. 150)
5. a. 3 b. 2 c. 1 Camping is an inexpensive and fun choice for
B. Answers will vary. a family vacation. However, camping trips can end
in disaster. The first problem is usually a lack of
Part 4: Editing Your Writing preparation. If the campers do not make a list (a) ,
they will probably forget something important. And
Exercise 1 (p. 147) they (1) are will be sorry if they do not have the right
Answers will vary.
equipment. Another problem is bad weather. The
2. A hardworking student will learn a lot and get a
campers will have to check into a motel (b) , if it
good grade.
rains. Camping in the rain is never fun. Finally, insects
3. A dedicated employee will work extra hours and
will (2) to ruin a vacation easily. Mosquitoes will make
make money for the company. Then she might get
an evening meal out of any unprotected camper and
a promotion.
then he will (3) be scratching for days afterward. In
4. An overworked and exhausted doctor will not
conclusion, wise campers (4) with know how to prepare
make good decisions.
so that they will not (5) being be surprised by these
5. An employee who has a lot of personal problems
unfortunate causes of disaster.
will have trouble doing his or her job.
6. A person who wants to be a millionaire will not
waste money.

Exercise 2 (p. 148)

2. Students sacrifice many things so that they will
save money for school.
3. Many stores advertise sales so that they will
attract customers.

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Part 5: Putting It All Together Exercise 5 (p. 154)
Exercise 1 (p. 152) Children who participate in sports will be more
1. a. 1 b. 3 c. 2 successful in their jobs. First of all, team sports require
2. a. 3 b. 2 c. 1 kids to play together with their team. In this way, they
3. a. 2 b. 3 c. 1 will (1) to learn cooperation skills. For example, while
4. a. 2 b. 1 c. 3 playing soccer a child might realize that a teammate has
Exercise 2 (p. 152) a better chance of scoring a goal. If he (2) will pass passes
Answers will vary. the ball to his teammate, he will not control it anymore.
1. A person who wants to lose weight will go on However, his teammate will probably score a goal. By
a diet and exercise regularly. He or she will lose learning to cooperate on the playing field (3) , the child
weight. will one day be (4) a more efficient employee. In addition,
2. A terrible teacher will not give fair tests. A terrible children who play team sports will (5) learning learn how
teacher will not prepare for class. to be good sports. If the team (6) will lose loses a game,
3. A careful driver will use the turn signal. A careful the child remembers that it is only a game. Instead of
driver will not talk on a cell phone while driving. getting upset, he will (7) to try to do better next time. And
A careful driver will not get into car accidents. when he works for a company, he will not
4. A vegetarian will not eat meat. A vegetarian will (8) to get upset if he loses an important client or sale.
eat a lot of fruits, vegetables, beans, and grains.
5. A dishonest salesperson will not tell the truth
about a product. A dishonest salesperson will
cheat customers.
6. A successful politician will help the community. A
successful politician will get a lot of votes.

Exercise 3 (p. 153)

1. Many people exercise so that they will be healthy.
2. Many nurses wear special shoes so that they will
be comfortable.
3. Many immigrants work hard so that they will be
successful in their new country.
4. Many homeowners have alarm systems so that
they will feel safe.
5. Many older people have pets so that they will not
feel lonely.
6. Many schools offer financial aid so that they will
attract new students.

Exercise 4 (p. 153)

1. If a person works as an international pilot, he will
travel to other countries.
2. If you learn another language, you will feel a
sense of accomplishment.
3. If you have good computer skills, you will be
qualified for many good jobs.
4. If a person practices yoga, she will feel more
energetic.
5. If you plan your vacation carefully, you will have
fewer problems during your trip.
6. If a person respects others, she will have a lot of
friends.

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