Essay Analysis Week 35
Essay Analysis Week 35
Essay Analysis Week 35
Some people believe that parents of children who attend private schools should not
need to contribute to state schools through taxes. Personally, I completely disagree
with this view.
For a variety of reasons, it would be wrong to reduce taxes for families who pay
for private education. Firstly, it would be difficult to calculate the correct amount
of tax reduction for these families, and staff would be required to manage this
complex process. Secondly, we all pay a certain amount of tax for public services
that we may not use. For example, most people are fortunate enough not to have to
call the police or fire brigade at any time in their lives, but they would not expect a
tax reduction for this. Finally, if wealthy families were given a tax discount for
sending their children to private schools, we might have a situation where poorer
people pay higher taxes than the rich.
In conclusion, I do not believe that any financial concessions should be made for
people who choose private education.
- CONCLUSION: Restatement
+) financial concessions shouldn’t be made for people who choose private
education
TEMPLATES COLLOCATIONS
- Some people believe that - private schools
- Personally - state schools
- I completely disagree with - private education
- For a variety of reasons - tax reduction
- Firstly - public services
- Secondly - tax discount
- Finally - pay one’s share
- In my opinion - members of society
- For example - education system
- In conclusion - equal opportunities
- well-educated workforce
- well-qualified/competent staff
- financial concessions