Atonement - Ian MC Ewans
Atonement - Ian MC Ewans
Atonement - Ian MC Ewans
Atonement
JULIE ELLAM
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The Novelist 1
2.
The Novel 21
3.
Critical Reception 61
4.
Novel’s Performance and Adaptation 67
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Further Reading and Discussion Questions 77
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The Novelist
with the liberal identity in crisis’ (Head, 2007, p. 4). This point is
proven plainly in his early fiction and with more confidence and
complexity in later novels such as Enduring Love (1997), Atonement
and Saturday (2005).
Dominic Head gives further biographical details of this period
and outlines how in 1972 McEwan joined the hippie trail to
Afghanistan. In 1974, he moved to Stockwell from Norwich and
became involved with the New Review, which became a magnet for
other emerging writers such as Martin Amis, Julian Barnes and
Craig Raine. At this time, he was also awaiting the publication of
First Love, Last Rites and working on In Between the Sheets in pursuit
of a writing career (Head, 2007, p. 4).
Early fiction
McEwan’s writing career from this period into the 1980s is sig-
nificant because of the use of violence, obscenity and taboo-
breaking subject matter. Morality is twisted or rejected, as in the
story ‘Homemade’, which is included in First Love, Last Rites and
was his first publication after being accepted by The New American
Review. This is where the adolescent first-person narrator decides
to lose his virginity by raping his 10-year-old sister, Connie, and the
story begins at the end with her crying. It goes on to detail how he
learns to become an adult with Raymond, who is a year older, and
begins to think of his virginity as a ‘malodorous albatross’ (McE-
wan, 1991, p. 29). This chilling tale succeeds in being as shocking
and disturbing as appears to have been intended.
The eponymous short story, ‘First Love, Last Rites’, is set over
the period of a summer and is also preoccupied with the devel-
opment from adolescence into adulthood. The first-person narrator
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and his girlfriend, Sissel, hear noises behind the skirting board and
the last rites refer to the death of the rat that they have heard,
which the narrator refers to as ‘our familiar’, as well as the end of
their youth (McEwan, 1991, p. 96).
McEwan’s first novel, The Cement Garden (1978), is an unsettling
take on family life and culminates in sibling incest after the four
children are orphaned. When they are left alone, their circle
tightens in a harsh parody of the institution of the family and it is
only disrupted by the outsider, Derek. In McEwan’s interview with
Deveney, he explains how this novel is about ‘absent parents’. He
also says how it addresses the sentiments he had while growing up
in which he wished his parents would ‘somehow painlessly melt
away’ as this would leave the ‘ground cleared’ for him (Deveney,
2005). This daydream echoes the Freudian formulation of the
family romance, where the child imagines being free of his or
her parents, and is connected to the process of growing up
and separating from the once idealized parents. The orphaned
child has been a significant figure in literature as he or she is then
given a freedom and independence from parental (and societal)
control.
The Comfort of Strangers (1981) is his second novel and is set in
an unnamed city that can only be Venice. The narrative follows two
tourists, Colin and Mary, as they become caught up in a relation-
ship with Robert and Caroline. Just as The Cement Garden refuses to
offer a traditionally moral perspective of the family, The Comfort of
Strangers destabilizes the truism of a loving relationship as it
represents sado-masochism rather than dismisses it. Because it
refuses to simply criticize violence it is an unsettling work, as the
concept of collusion in the perpetration of violent acts is placed in
the foreground (again) and the readers are entrusted to evaluate if
it is possible to be complicit as a victim. In terms of questions of
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Since then, Atonement, Saturday and On Chesil Beach (2007) have also
been shortlisted for this award, and McEwan has been named
twice as a contender for the Man Booker International Prize (in
2005 and 2007). He has also been the recipient of numerous other
awards, such as the National Book Critics’ Circle Award in 2003 for
Atonement and the Whitbread Novel Award for The Child in Time. As
if to confirm his stature as a highly thought of British author, and
perhaps to confirm his place in the establishment now, he was also
awarded the CBE in 2000.
Over the decades, his writing has moved from placing a covert
rather than overt psychological pressure on his characters and
readers. In 1994, Ryan argued the case that claims of a vast change
in McEwan’s writing should only be made cautiously: ‘The focus of
McEwan’s did shift dramatically after The Imitation Game. But the
temptation to reduce his development to an exemplary tale of
moral maturation or artistic depletion needs to be resisted. Such
simplified accounts of his trajectory obscure the continuities and
contradictions of his work’ (Ryan, 1994, p. 4).
Following Ryan’s reasoning, a sweeping account of his oeuvre
would only be detrimental to the individuality of each of his works,
but one only needs to compare Atonement, Saturday or On Chesil
Beach with The Cement Garden to see a more developed use of
characterization and intricacy of structure in each of these later
works. It is also necessary to remember that Ryan’s point was made
in the early 1990s and so he did not have the luxury of seeing the
considerable change in McEwan’s later style. It is not that his
earlier writing was immature, but the point stands that a desire to
please with more complexity has taken over from the desire to
shock, and this is evident when considering his trajectory. McEwan
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career: ‘For since McEwan won the Booker Prize in 1998 with
Amsterdam, the fight over the custody of his sons has earned him
even more publicity than his professional success’ (Kellaway,
2001). He was finally awarded custody after repeated visits to
court and, as Kellaway argues, it would have been understandable
if there had been no more novels. For one who is generally reluc-
tant to discuss his private life in the public arena, he is drawn out
in this interview to explain how he continued writing during and
after this period. His reasoning is simply that the division between
writing and the family has to be overcome, and Atonement is the
novel that came out of this period.
He has also stated that after having children he felt he could
not return to the same themes he used in The Child in Time. This
shift in interest may be a signifier of his change in perspective, or
a heightened sense of maturity; it is not necessarily an indication
of encroaching conservatism. In Saturday, for example, Henry
Perowne may be seen to reflect aspects of McEwan’s views about
the war in Iraq and is reactionary in his fear of attack from outside
forces, but he is not a mouthpiece for McEwan as, again, this is a
work of fiction.
Whatever the reasons for this move to a more secure or even
stifled world, John Banville’s review of Saturday is damning for
what he perceives as relative narrowness despite McEwan being
inspired by 9/11, and is nostalgic for the earlier McEwan incar-
nations that took perverse delight in the discomfort of others.
Banville has argued since in the documentary Being John Banville
(2008) that he was being critical of the fawning critics rather than
McEwan, but does say in the review that McEwan is showing ‘a
disturbing tendency towards mellowness’ of late and wonders if
the decision by Perowne’s son Theo to think small may also be the
‘motto’ of this work (Banville, 2005).
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For McEwan fans this may seem harsh, but it remains a useful
balance against the at times unquestioning adoration, as is dem-
onstrated in Appleyard’s conclusion: ‘T. S. Eliot once said that the
great writer achieves the critical language in which he is to be
understood. That is precisely what McEwan has achieved. But in a
sense he has gone even further. For why does the story of David
carry such resonance and poignancy? Because his understanding of
our world, of what we take seriously, of what ultimately matters,
has infected us all. We are what McEwan’s mirror reflects, uncer-
tain creatures yearning for atonement’ (Appleyard, 2007).
To return to the McEwan biography, as well as the infamous
divorce case and the discovery of his brother, he was also the focus
of a controversy when plagiarism charges were aimed at him for
Atonement in 2006 for drawing on Lucilla Andrews’ No Time for
Romance (1977). Appleyard explains how each of these personal
stories has been regarded as newsworthy, and that the interest
shown is explicable because of his standing in the public realm
rather than being attempts to revile him: ‘It was a particularly
cretinous charge since McEwan had acknowledged Andrews in the
book and all novelists, particularly when writing historically, must
use some nonfiction sources. But the prominence given to all three
stories – the brother, the divorce and the plagiarism charge – are all
evidence of McEwan’s stature in the national imagination.
Increasingly he is seen as our national writer’ (Appleyard, 2007).
Although generalizing, this claim has some weight as McEwan still
resists demonization, despite the high profile, and still tends to be
understood through his fiction rather than his biography.
This charge of plagiarism brought other authors out in defence
of the practice of using contemporary documents to help sub-
stantiate historical novels. Nigel Reynolds in the Telegraph reports
how Margaret Atwood and Thomas Keneally are among those who
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shows how McEwan was part of the next generation to stake his
claim on this ‘house’: ‘Young Ian McEwan was well-placed to break
a few windows and establish squatters’ rights.’ He sees him as
being ‘well-placed’ at least partly because ‘he was both part of
post-imperial Britain, and outside it’ in the time he spent abroad
when his father was serving in the army and in his education
(McCrum, 2005, p. 5).
Moss argues how these writers have since become ‘the literary
old guard’, as there are few rivals appearing to succeed them:
‘Amis, Rushdie, McEwan and Barnes are our modern canon, but
the canonization has a singular contemporary feel: increasingly, we
know more about their lives, loves, fights – even their teeth – than
their work. They have become the Great Writers we have to read
about; reading what they write appears to be optional’ (Moss,
2001). It is also possible that their influence remains strong due to
merit as well as lack of opposition.
Although known as a novelist and, as Moss states, for some of
his biographical detail, McEwan has also inserted himself in the
public consciousness as one who is prepared to move beyond fic-
tion in his essays and articles. As well as having a background in
literature, he has also expressed an ongoing interest in science and
science writing. His research for several novels, including Saturday
and Amsterdam, makes this evident. When asked by David Lynn
about the writers he most admires, he refers to Creation (2006) by
the American biologist E. O. Wilson and explains that he sees this
as putting ‘a hand out across the divide’ between science and
religion. In this interview, he also eschews aspects of relativism in
postmodern criticism and says that plagiarists, when claiming
events that have happened to others as one’s own, should be
‘named and shamed’. He also warns against drifting away ‘in a
cloud of unknown relativism’ (Lynn, 2007).
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specifically, the Second World War is the backdrop for Spies (2002)
by Michael Frayn, which also draws on an adult’s perspective of
childhood.
Knowledge of the craft of writing also underpins McEwan’s
success and apart from the many distinct literary intertexts that he
uses and the in-depth research he undertakes, his imagination,
needless to say, also plays a part in his success. In his interview
with Lynn, he explains his practice of writing and the pleasure he
takes in unexpected ideas that come through in the process:
‘Sometimes I have to trick myself into doing things. But I do see
writing, the actual physical matter of writing, as an act of imagi-
nation. And the best days, the best mornings are the ones in which
forcing down a sentence may generate a surprise. A combination of
ideas, or simply a noun meeting an adjective that suddenly gives
me pleasure. Whole characters have sometimes emerged for
me simply out of a sentence’ (Lynn, 2007). He refers to the un-
planned appearance of Nettle and Mace in Part Two of Atonement as
an example of this.
The esteem held for McEwan’s writing is seen repeatedly in the
high sales figures and mainly positive reviews, and for now he is
one of the remaining darlings of his generation of promising new
talent of the 1970s and 1980s. He has secured this position as the
focus of his work has moved over the decades from the brutal to
the disquieting. This has come about while he continues to
demonstrate the same penchant for menace that appeared in his
first collection of short stories.
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The Novel
were pitiless. But now I can no longer think what purpose would
be served if, say, I tried to persuade my reader, by direct or indirect
means, that Robbie Turner died of septicaemia at Bray Dunes on 1
June 1940, or that Cecilia was killed in September of the same year
by the bomb that destroyed Balham Underground Station’ (p.
370). It is also ironic that Briony claims to not see the purpose of
revealing that Robbie died at Dunkirk and Cecilia at Balham, but
does so anyway, and it seems as though she cannot resist a final
manipulation of the readers’ expectations.
Part One
The long summer’s day in 1935 that constitutes Part One, which is
divided into 14 chapters, is an exercise in explanation of and, at
times, a subtle excuse for Briony’s actions. In retrospect, the clues
that this is her work are set out for us, as when it is reiterated how
at just 13 she has a precocious love of writing and order. As stated,
it includes familiar aspects of other work by McEwan in that the
slow pace allows the underlying menace to develop as the scenes
shift between the points of view of different characters as Briony is
seen to imagine them. This is mainly brought about by the
movement between the perspectives of these characters as they
view the same scene and, because of this, Part One has the effect
of grinding slowly towards Robbie’s arrest. This inhabiting of the
minds of the different characters also exemplifies McEwan’s pro-
fessed interest in the use of characterization in nineteenth-century
novels and in how such works give the readers the opportunity to
enter the minds of the principal figures (Lynn, 2007). He endows
Briony the writer with the same ability that he admires, and uses
his version of Cyril Connolly to teach her to avoid leaning so
heavily on modernist techniques (in the guise of Woolf) (p. 312).
A comparison between chapters 2 and 3 exemplifies this use of
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Part Two
The lack of chapter divisions in Part Two adds to the disorder of
the situation being evoked and enhances the eventual chaos of
Robbie’s thoughts. This disorder is made all the more apparent
because it differs so sharply from the way Part One is organized.
Part Two moves abruptly to what transpires to be the war and
more specifically the Dunkirk retreat. The break from the past is
described as ‘savage’ by McEwan, and a different tone and style are
used to reflect this dislocation from what has gone before with a
sense of immediacy (DVD, 2008). The disruption of the daydream
at the country house, where the superficial has been seen to
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a tree and carried Pierrot on his shoulders and Jackson in his arms,
across the park’ (p. 262). He thinks of the boy left behind as ‘more
unfinished business’ and wants to go back to the field and ‘ask the
Flemish lady and her son if they held him accountable for their
deaths. For one can assume too much sometimes, in fits of con-
ceited self-blame’ (p. 263). His self-recriminations mix with self-
justification as he goes on to think how this ‘lady’ might say that he
carried the twins but not ‘us’ and also that he is ‘not guilty’ (p.
263). Yet again, the guilt that he has been tarnished with because
of Briony’s lie is also seen to infect his thoughts.
His point of view of the time when he was arrested is also given
and how Cecilia had said, ‘I’ll wait for you. Come back’ (p. 265).
This memory of her words haunts this passage and they re-appear
in Part Three when she tells Robbie to ‘come back’ as he argues
with Briony (p. 343). The words signify the bond between them
and emphasize her faith in him despite his arrest. They also epi-
tomize their romantic love for each other as formulated by Briony.
Part Three
This section is dominated by descriptions of Briony’s training to be
a nurse and continues in the third person. It explains how the
period of strictures and calm is abruptly altered with the arrival of
the Dunkirk wounded. There are no chapter divisions here either,
which again contrasts with Part One. The narrative avoids bringing
Robbie in as one of the injured men as may have been expected,
and this expectation is heightened in the film adaptation when
Briony mistakenly believes she has seen him outside the hospital.
Instead, the dying and wounded are given their own role to con-
demn the violence of war and are not used to simply move the
story on to a simplistic conclusion.
This is also the first time that the adult Briony is given warmer
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‘London, 1999’
The final section set in 1999 is partly a conclusion, as final refer-
ences to Lola and Paul Marshall, Briony, Leon, Jackson and Pierrot
are given, as well as indications of their lives for the past 64 years.
This is also where the role of the author is examined in most
detail, and where Briony is allowed to be ‘pitiless’ in her telling of
the deaths of Cecilia and Robbie (p. 370).
The first-person narrator is used for the first time here, and it is
possible to interpret this as Briony asserting her position of
authority as she compares herself, as a novelist, to God. This is also
where the readers are given a more personal understanding of her
as she explains her recent diagnosis of vascular dementia and tells
how this has to be the final draft of the novel she has been
rewriting for years. The future outlook that she is given is bleak:
‘Loss of memory, short- and long-term, the disappearance of single
words – simple nouns might be the first to go – then language
itself, along with balance, and soon after, all motor control, and
finally the autonomous nervous system’ (p. 355).
By giving her a direct voice, this final part delineates how this is
both her last chance for finding atonement as well as introducing
the most unreliable of narrators to the unwitting reading public.
This short section is woven through with ambiguities as she moves
between gaining the sympathy of the readers and asserting her
power for the last time. It deconstructs all that has gone before
and because of this it is also the most crucial of sections.
The novel is completed with her return to the Tallis home,
which is now a golf course and hotel. Although it has been altered
considerably, the setting is used to frame the narrative and its
importance to events is signposted. The influence of the past on
the present is also reiterated as some of the survivors from 1935
finally watch a performance of The Trials of Arabella.
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Themes
way Atonement examines the role of the writer through her: ‘Briony’s
play, The Trials of Arabella, written for the house party, but for
various reasons not then performed, was the fantasy of a very young
writer enchanted by the idea that she could in a few pages create
a world complete with terrors and climaxes and a necessary sort
of knowingness. The entire novel is a grown-up version of this
achievement, a conflict or coalescence of truth and fantasy, a
novelist’s treatment of what is fantasised as fact’ (Kermode, 2001).
It becomes, then, a fiction that always remembers the child’s
ambition and tells the readers how she never relinquishes it. Her
dangerous imagination, which has led to the vilification of Robbie,
becomes the necessary drama of the plot. In this light, the role of
the imagination is central to the writing and, consequently, places
doubts over the claim that this is a work of atonement.
This doubt about Briony’s authenticity, in her professed aim to
atone for her sin, is made more secure on a close reading of
‘London, 1999’. This may be interpreted as a first-person narrated
slice of ambivalence when the novelist is described as omnipotent
and the readers are jolted out of the apparently realist security of
the earlier sections: ‘The problem these fifty-nine years has been
this: how can a novelist achieve atonement when, with her abso-
lute power of deciding outcomes, she is also God? There is no one,
no entity or higher form that she can appeal to, or be reconciled
with, or that can forgive her. There is nothing outside her. In her
imagination she has set the limits and the terms. No atonement for
God, or novelists, even if they are atheists. It was always an
impossible task, and that was precisely the point. The attempt was
all’ (p. 371). In this quotation, Briony simultaneously pleads
for understanding while flaunting the privilege she has attached to
her role.
Judith Seaboyer argues that the narrative has an ethical element
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Writing a novel
There is a crossover between the themes of the dangerous literary
imagination and the art of the novel, as both are concerned with
the process of writing. This is because the process of writing, and
novel-writing specifically, is inscribed in the self-reflexiveness of
the narrative. This is after all a novel that the readers are led to
believe is written by a successful novelist (Briony) at the end of
her career.
Robert MacFarlane considers the way Atonement ‘examines its
own novelistic mechanisms’ as one of its greatest strengths, as it
avoids the weakness of other contemporary novels when there has
been only ‘authorial gesturing’ towards the concept of representing
the past with language: ‘In Atonement, however, McEwan focuses on
the way in which we create the future by making it fit templates of
the past; how the forms into which the imagination is shaped by
fiction are applied to life. It is in this way, he suggests, that lit-
erature can make things happen, and not always for the good’
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separate his art from the outside world and this has resonated in
his fiction and non-fiction throughout his career as a writer. His
concern with politics, morality and the ethical treatment of others
have been long-standing themes in his work and he has challenged
the aesthetic line of thinking that it is possible to separate art from
the society it comes out of. In Atonement, this is made acute in parts
Two and Three most notably, but also in the underlying conflicts of
the 1935 of Part One. Warfare is made central to the entirety of
this ‘creative activity’ as the main protagonists are seen to live
through fear and separation as well as being the means to decon-
struct class barriers.
War
Although Part One might be described as the Jane Austen novel
McEwan had never previously written, Part Two resists any such
containment as it begins abruptly in the chaotic events sur-
rounding the Dunkirk retreat. In Part One, the sense of the
impending war is alluded to in the work of Jack Tallis and Paul
Marshall and figuratively in the rising tensions in the house, but it
is in Part Two that the narrative switches altogether to embrace
the full disparity between the then and now of peace and war.
Further to this, the urgency of the tone emphasizes the situation of
panic and this is made particularly clear in relation to the pre-
ceding section.
McEwan’s desire to be faithful in this reconstruction of the
retreat and of the care taken for the injured and dying has an
ethical dimension that depends on veracity according to the detail
that still remains from this period. This perhaps explains his
extensive use of Lucilla Andrews’ No Time For Romance in Part
Three, but this loyalty to the past also lends the narrative a
believability that is steeped in a tradition of realism and even
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Characters
Briony
An understanding of the development of Briony is more difficult to
negotiate or conclude when compared to other characters as she is
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Robbie
Robbie is the son of Grace and Ernest Turner, and after Ernest
disappeared she worked as the cleaner for the Tallises. Thanks to
Jack Tallis, Robbie was supported during his time at grammar
school, having won a scholarship, and after gaining a first at
Cambridge he is considering studying to be a doctor (in Part One).
He is working class, and the divide between him and the Tallises
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Cecilia
In Part One, Cecilia is depicted as being at an intermediary stage
of her life as she has drifted through the summer without quite
deciding what she wants to do next after leaving university.
Chapter 2 is useful for the descriptions it gives of her state of mind
earlier in the day before Robbie’s arrest as it explains her rest-
lessness: ‘She could not remain here, she knew she should make
plans, but she did nothing’ (p. 21). It is also related that nobody is
‘holding her back’ and yet she resists leaving not only as a form of
‘self-punishment’, but also because of a desire to be needed by the
family and because of half-formed thoughts of Robbie (pp. 21–22).
As with Robbie, she studied literature at Cambridge, but gained
a third in comparison to his first. However, because of the reg-
ulations against women students, this was not conferred on her.
Women did not receive this equal treatment at Cambridge until
1948.
She is also described in Part One as being disordered and this is
made to contrast with Briony’s more fastidious habits. She acts as
Briony’s counterpoint because she gives further emphasis to
Briony’s desire for order. Cecilia is also used as a counterpoint
when Briony makes the decision to follow her into the controlled
environment of nursing rather than university. This exemplifies
Briony’s self-flagellation wrapped up as atonement as well as an
unspoken adherence to her sister over the rest of the family.
After the close of Part One, Briony and Robbie dominate most
of the rest of the novel, with Cecilia being used at specific times as
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The Tallises
The distance from the reader that is maintained in Part One also
captures an identifiable representation of a 1930s English bour-
geoisie family as they suffer from the heat on a rare hot summer’s
day. Although Leon says it is acceptable to break the rules on a day
such as this, this idea is seen to be as insubstantial as he is always
implied to be. John Mullan points out the dramatic irony behind
his conversation, as Briony has already seen Robbie in the library
with Cecilia, which confirmed he was the maniac she had imagined
(Mullan, 2003c, p. 32). This remark by Leon also registers his lack
of perception. He is able to perform to the part of acting as the
social lubricant with ease, but as Cecilia argues in a letter to
Robbie, he and the rest of her family are to be condemned for their
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belief in Robbie’s guilt: ‘My mother never forgave you your first.
My father preferred to lose himself in his work. Leon turned out to
be a grinning, spineless idiot who went along with everyone else’
(p. 209). With the exception of Cecilia, the Tallis family are gra-
dually revealed to be as dysfunctional as they are stereotypically
English, and the swift movement from almost accepting Robbie as
a member of the family to believing in his guilt acts as a trope for
the antagonism displayed against the class outsider.
Because Part One culminates in Robbie’s arrest, the section as a
whole allows for a questioning of the pre-war superficial calm with
the use of characters such as Leon and Emily, and also makes use
of the backdrop of their opulent but crumbling home. On the
surface they appear to be enviable for their privileged existences,
but not far beneath they are seen to be as damaged and unoriginal
as the 40-year-old house that aspires to be thought of as
embodying centuries of tradition but is riddled with faults. We are
told how it was acquired by the grandfather who made his money
in locks and was intended to be a demonstration of his wealth.
This money has also allowed the Tallises to be raised into
the upper ranks of the class system, but the news that this is a
privilege only recently bought means that the readers are invited
to mock their position in the hierarchy that they embrace so
readily.
This deconstruction of the class system through characteriza-
tion is also in place in Chapter 6 of Part One when Emily lies in
bed aware of the movements in the house, but is too self-absorbed
and incapable to intervene in the status quo. Her migraine is the
vehicle and the metaphor to explain her distance from her chil-
dren, but this chapter also reveals the values associated with
maintaining her position as she mentally criticizes Cecilia for
wasting her time studying for a degree and hopes Leon will bring a
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friend home one day for her to marry, ‘if three years at Girton had
not made her an impossible prospect’ (p. 64). Emily is drawn as
pragmatic in her Englishness and mediocrity as she puts up with
her husband’s affairs while making claims of genteel propriety. Her
relatively weak position as a married unskilled woman is tied to her
being ‘understanding’, as the scandal caused by her sister’s divorce
suggests is necessary, but she is also depicted as accepting of this:
‘She could send her tendrils into every room in the house, but she
could not send them into the future. She also knew that, ulti-
mately, it was her own peace of mind she strove for; self-interest
and kindness were best not separated’ (p. 71).
Although he is not a member of the family, Paul Marshall’s visit
to the house is predicated by his friendship with Leon and his
membership to the right set. His success and class mean he is
accepted and he is never suspected of harming Lola long after the
rape takes place. Cecilia and Robbie, for example, believe Danny
Hardman is the culprit. Marshall is drawn unsympathetically by an
older, recalcitrant Briony and it is elemental to her atonement that
she also reveals his guilt. His mismatched face is made much of
and the signs of his guilt, such as the scratch on his face and the
noises Emily hears upstairs, are set out with enough suggestion for
him to be suspected if not initially condemned.
In ‘London, 1999’, he and Lola are included in the narrative
most obviously because Briony has seen them. This gives her an
opening to describe how they appear in old age and how they have
remained untouchable and secretive since the day Lola was raped
in 1935. There is something of the caricature about these villains,
and the plural is used because Lola is included now by association,
and this is emphasized when Lola is compared to Cruella de Vil of
The Hundred and One Dalmations (1956) (p. 358). By describing the
influence these two still have, Briony exculpates herself somewhat
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as well, and gives the narrative closure as she ties up the loose ends
of what happened to some of the key characters.
The servants
Atonement is concerned primarily with the Tallis family and Robbie,
rather than the servants, and so it is understandable that these
play only minor roles. The most notable one is Grace, as she is
Robbie’s mother, and her inclusion adds to the development of his
characterization. Her position as cleaner is a sign of her social
status and signifies the gulf between Robbie’s and Cecilia’s par-
ents. She was given patronage by Jack Tallis after her husband
deserted her, and Robbie has also benefited from this in that he
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The vase
The vase, which Cecilia and Robbie struggle over at the fountain,
is elemental to the plot, as Briony’s imaginative misunderstanding
of this scene feeds into her castigation of him later. Its importance
is later indicated in the way she uses this scene in the story she
sends to Connolly.
It serves the symbolic purpose of signposting the family’s pre-
tensions, yet its journey to the Tallis home is almost as convoluted
as the return of the heirloom watch that belongs to Butch in Pulp
Fiction (1994). It is a gift from when Uncle Clem served in the First
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World War and is valued for this rather than its heritage; it also acts
as a connection between Robbie and Cecilia.
The damage it undergoes is also of further relevance to the
novel. Kermode notes the triangular pieces that break off into the
fountain and says in an aside how ‘triangles form a leitmotif for
readers to puzzle over’, and also explains that the breakage reso-
nates later: ‘The wounded vase will later meet an even worse fate,
and this premonitory damage echoes what happens to other fragile
objects highly valued but easily ruined, such as Cecilia’s virginity,
and indeed life itself ’ (Kermode, 2001). Emily informs Briony in a
letter in Part Three of its final outcome: ‘Wretched Betty dropped
Uncle Clem’s vase carrying it down and it shattered on the steps.
She said the pieces had simply come away in her hand, but that
was hardly to be believed’ (p. 279). In its last fall, the vase
becomes a metaphor for the tenuous hold we have on objects and
each other. In addition, Emily’s disbelief at Betty’s explanation is
in keeping with her disregard for the lower orders that she has
demonstrated on other occasions.
having grown up over an ironmonger’s shop (p. 19). With this new
money, he bought the family the shell of status that his descen-
dents have taken for granted, but its faults reflect the sham of the
class-ridden society. That is, the house appears to be of a superior
quality, but when one looks more closely it becomes apparent that
it does not deserve the merit it expects. Through this repre-
sentation of the house, then, it is possible to see a figurative
criticism of class bias.
Because it was paid for with the money grandfather made on
locks and bolts, it also represents the centrality of secrecy to this
novel.1 Atonement begins with an explanation of Briony’s ‘passion for
secrets’ and, although at this point she does not have any, she goes
on to keep the falsity of her accusation quiet (p. 5). Similarly, Lola
also never mentions the truth about the identity of her attacker,
and her marriage to Paul Marshall tells us she never will.
The house is returned to in ‘London, 1999’ and is now known as
Tilney’s Hotel. Its rebranding signifies the post-war change in
times for the Tallis family while also indicating how the wider
society has become more leisure-fixated. The name Tilney is also a
reference back to the epigraph, as the Tilney family appear in
Northanger Abbey.
Water
The use of water as a motif in the film version of Atonement is
discussed more fully in ‘Performance and Adaptation’, but it is also
relevant to analyse its usage in the novel here. The artificial lake
and fountain add to the image of surface upper middle-class status.
Again, it is only the appearance of belonging that is signposted,
because the lake is artificial and the fountain has the half-scale
1
Thanks must go to Dr Ana Maria Sanchez-Arce for this insight.
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Narrative devices
Point of view
As stated previously, the use of the shifting point of view in Part
One allows the third-person narrator to give the perspectives of
various characters as the day unfolds. This device allows for a
distance to be maintained as Briony purports to interpret the
opinions of others in her version of her atonement. This has the
intended effect of giving the readers glimpses into the con-
sciousness and emotions of characters and is, then, a useful means
for the development of characterization.
Unreliable narrator
The unreliable narrator is a literary device that has been employed
in works such as The Turn of the Screw (1898) by Henry James and
Wuthering Heights (1847) by Emily Brontë. This is when a first-
person narrator is used and the subjective responses and inter-
pretations of this character are revealed. This means that the
narration is permeated with ambiguity, as, again, the narrator is
deemed unreliable.
The unreliable narrator is used in ‘London, 1999’ as the novel
shifts finally to Briony’s first-person account. It is possible to see
that the device is being used playfully, because Briony’s earlier lie
about Robbie and her explanation of how the novelist is compar-
able to God already mean that she is clearly difficult to trust. This
exaggerates the subjectivity of her narration, which is always going
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Letters
Letters are used as a means to uphold the authentic strain of both
parts Two and Three, as Briony coaxes the readers into believing
this is the truth that is being laid out. They are also useful for
explaining the perspectives of characters such as Cecilia. Rather
than simply recounting the past, this format gives the views of the
writer as is true to the spirit of the novel (especially Part One)
where the narrative switches between the perspectives of the main
characters. These letters allow for a first-person insight into the
thoughts of a character and thereby give another aspect of their
consciousness.
These letters also act as a further textual layer embedded in a
narrative that is already self-conscious about using words to give
order to the past. It is telling that it is a letter from Robbie to
Cecilia – which refers to her ‘cunt’ – that initially condemns
Robbie from Briony’s immature point of view. Because it is the
wrong letter, and the worst of Freudian slips, his arrest that eve-
ning is made all the more poignant.
Briony’s faith in the written word may be seen to also extend to
her old age as she depends on letters for documentary evidence in
the shaping of her narrative. This is made definite in ‘London,
1999’ when she refers to the assistance she has had from old Mr
Nettle and the Imperial War Museum. Furthermore, the letter
from Connolly is included as another supposed touch of realism.
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The revelation
Briony’s late revelation that she is the author, and that Robbie died
at Dunkirk and Cecilia was killed at Balham station are examined
by Mullan in ‘Beyond Fiction’ and described as an aspect of the
metanarrative (a narrative about the narrative). In this article, he
also clarifies the distinction between metafiction and metanarra-
tive to explain more fully how McEwan has drawn the reader into a
complex web of self-reflexivity: ‘Metafiction is persistently self-
referential, like Italo Calvino’s If on a Winter’s Night a Traveller,
which, from its first sentence, makes a story of how reader and
writer conspire to make a story. McEwan’s metanarrative, however,
is a revelation withheld. Some readers have felt cheated by it, like
viewers of Dallas who were suddenly shown by desperate script-
writers that the traumatic events of many previous episodes were
just Pam Ewing’s ‘‘dream’’.’ He also describes the metanarrative as
the short final section ‘that accounts for its existence’ (Mullan,
2003d, p. 32). The disappointment that doubtless accompanies
the news that we are asked to believe this has been Briony’s
creation all along may be contrasted with how this alters the
interpretation of the novel for the better as yet another layer of
meaning has been added.
The use of a metanarrative and metafiction need not be seen as
mutually exclusive as Mullan implies, though. Atonement is not
overly literal in the way it demonstrates that this is a fiction about
fiction, but its repeated allusions to the novel-writing process and
to the dangers of the literary imagination, let alone the many self-
conscious literary references, mean that from the epigraph onwards
this novel hints to the readers this is a novel. It is perhaps down to
the skill of the writer that this is done implicitly enough for the
first-time reader to feel as cheated by the metanarrative as Dallas
fans were by Pam Ewing’s dream.
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when his father was shot in the legs and then ‘teamed up’ with
another man who had been injured in the arms, and between them
they managed to ride a motorcycle to reach the Dunkirk beaches
and finally safety (McEwan, 2006b). This account is used in Part
Two and helps to accentuate the desperate need for the allied
soldiers to reach the beaches in time.
He acknowledges his debt to Lucilla Andrews’ autobiography,
No Time for Romance, here and elsewhere (including in the
Acknowledgements page in Atonement) for the rich detail it gave
him of the nurses’ training and of how the arrival of the Dunkirk
wounded was coped with. He describes this as a ‘shared reality’
and, therefore, makes it explicit that he regards such contemporary
accounts as being in the public realm. In this article, he also
stresses his desire to be authentic and to act in good faith in his
account of the war: ‘In writing about wartime especially, it seems
like a form of respect for the suffering of a generation wrenched
from their ordinary lives to be conscripted into a nightmare’
(McEwan, 2006b).
It is ironic, of course, that the author of a novel such as Atone-
ment, which deconstructs the privileged status of the author while
also reinforcing it, should ask to be believed about his writing
practices. It is also relevant to remember that the ‘shared reality’
he draws upon is embroidered with his fictionalized version along
with stories he has heard in his childhood. Just like Briony, the
author has the power to order the narrative just as he or she
chooses.
Tim Gauthier explains the unsolvable difficulties for the con-
temporary writer that engages with history: ‘Like Byatt and a
number of other contemporary writers, McEwan exhibits a para-
doxical relationship with the past. He knows that it cannot be
known, but this does not prevent him from trying to know it. And
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the truths that are unearthed, whether they be the real truths of
the past or not, are not any less for that’ (Gauthier, 2006, p. 23).
Gauthier uses Black Dogs as the means to make this point, but it
also stands for later works such as Atonement as the past is evoked
with recognition of the influence of postmodernism as well as
demonstrating an abiding desire for truth.
Ideas associated with postmodernism expose the difficulty, if
not impossibility, of knowing the absolute truth, and this is
because postmodern thinking has destabilized the concept of
defining absolute meanings. It is a given that Atonement draws on
historical truths, or as close as McEwan is able to manage this, but
because he also draws on the influence of postmodernism in
‘London, 1999’ he asks the readers to adopt a position that both
accepts and refuses the absolute. Using a framework of Gayatori
Spivak’s for the purpose of this reading, it is possible to argue that
the novel offers a strategic essentialist understanding of truth and
demonstrates the ethical need to find it even if it is no longer an
absolute post-poststructuralist theory. This is a refashioning of
Spivak’s theory as it was originally used in the context of querying
the possibility of speaking as a subaltern, but is useful in this
instance for understanding how Atonement queries the division
between fact and fiction while also representing the devastation
caused by a lie. As seen in the first chapter, ‘Novelist’, McEwan
subscribes to the need for truth and questions the relativism of
postmodernism. It is also evident in Atonement that the relativity of
truth and lies is exposed via the use of Briony and her ambiguous
hold on her version of reality which is laid out as truth. By using a
strategically essentialist position in order to broach the subject of
ethical responsibility in a culture where absolute truth is dimin-
ished, McEwan manages to show that it is still worth searching for
and adhering to. Put more lucidly, despite the boundary between
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Conclusion
Critical Reception
described as ‘‘the only thing that really, for me at least, will produire
L’OEUVRE’’. Not quite how McEwan would put it, perhaps,
but still the substance of his method, especially if one adds a
keen technical interest in another Jamesian obsession, the point of
view’ (Kermode, 2001). The comparison with James’s technical
skill is given weight by the analysis that Kermode offers. He
explains his interpretation with reference to the ‘march of action’
and point of view and with regard to Atonement the interest in the
latter is most marked in the use of shifting perspectives in Part
One.
Just as Kermode draws parallels between McEwan and Henry
James, Geoff Dyer in the Guardian argues that there is parity
between McEwan, Virginia Woolf and D. H. Lawrence, as each one
has demonstrated the ‘transformation’ of individuals. By placing
McEwan in such company both critics make a tacit request to have
him placed in the modern canon of authors. According to Dyer,
Woolf and Lawrence have helped to bring this transformation
about and McEwan has developed this: ‘McEwan uses his novel to
show how this subjective or interior transformation can now be
seen to have interacted with the larger march of twentieth-century
history’ (Dyer, 2001). The appeal of Atonement for Dyer rests in its
breadth rather than in what may be seen as its gimmicks (such as
Briony’s final revelation), and the main interest lies in its under-
standing of literature and in the way this is tied to the historical
process of change. By echoing the voices of other writers and
making their work new in his revitalized use of realism and mod-
ernism, McEwan is seen to have the capacity his prodigy Briony
has always hoped for. This reading by Dyer should not be under-
estimated as, although it attempts implicitly to predict the future
of the value of Atonement in ranking McEwan alongside such
accepted literary figures, and therefore runs the risk of being seen
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Romola Garai) signs up as a nurse and tries to atone for her ghastly
sin’ (Christopher, 2007).
A similar criticism is made in The New York Times by Scott who
also regards it as becoming weaker as it moves away from the first
scenes of 1935. Scott argues that it is not that this is a ‘bad literary
adaptation’, but that it is instead ‘an almost classic example of how
pointless, how diminishing, the transmutation of literature into
film can be. The respect that Mr Wright and Mr Hampton show to
Mr McEwan is no doubt gratifying to him, but is fatal to their own
project’ (Scott, 2007). This loyalty to the novel has also meant that
the abrupt shift to the war has not translated to the screen as
would have been hoped. Visually, the separate sections have the
effect of making the film disjointed, and if a smoother movement
through time is required, the adaptation needs to steer away from
the novel more obviously.
Cosmo Landesman offers another negative perspective and
suggests this is a film that has nothing new to offer: ‘Irritatingly,
Atonement gives us the worst of two worlds stylistically: it exploits
the taste and nostalgia for 1930s and 1940s Hollywood melodrama,
yet it has an annoying postmodern knowingness to it. At its heart is
a concern with the unreliability of narrative, be it that of a 13-year-
old girl one hot summer’s day or that of British history. Thus, when
Robbie, who chooses the army instead of prison, winds up at
Dunkirk, waiting for evacuation, we see that episode in a different
light. Instead of a heroic exodus, we get a nightmarish vision of
horses being shot and men going crazy’ (Landesman, 2007). Both
the book and film elaborate on a version of the retreat that goes
against the traditional view that it was as Landesman claims ‘a
heroic exodus’, which has been the prevailing British ideology
since the Second World War. Robbie is constructed as a hero, but
no comfort in defeat is offered for the viewers or readers, as this
70 Ian McEwan’s Atonement
Analysis
effectively with the cut from Cecilia diving into the lake to Robbie
sitting up in the bath after being immersed.
It is also the means for heightening Robbie’s hallucinatory state
at Dunkirk, as well as emphasizing his and his mother’s virtue.
This comes when he imagines his mother has taken off his boots
and then washes his feet. The image of the mother showing love
for her son is overlaid with the idea that she and Robbie are above
reproach as the washing of feet also alludes to Jesus’ selfless
service.
Peter Childs regards the use of ‘water, mirrors, and the trans-
parency of barriers’ as a ‘series of identity motifs’ and also
demonstrates this with reference to the cut from Cecilia diving to
Robbie surfacing from the bath water (Childs, 2008, p. 151). As
stated, he points out that windows act as transparent barriers, and
this is made particularly significant when Briony watches Robbie
being taken away after being arrested. This barrier is also in place
when she watches him and Cecilia at the fountain.
One of the key features of the film is the long tracking shot of
the recreated chaos on the beach at Dunkirk as the Allies attempt
to make their escape. The uneven reception given to the film on
its release may be measured by critics’ views of this scene. Whereas
French regards this as evidence of ‘masterly’ cinematography,
others have been lukewarm at most in their appraisals. It lasts for
just over five minutes as the panorama includes fear and violence
and a moving Ferris wheel, and it is as though the film stands still
in time to encompass this landscape where horses are shot and
Bibles are burned so they will not fall into enemy hands.
Peter Bradshaw wonders in his review if this film will not be
populist enough to be as successful as he thinks it deserves to be:
‘There are moments – delirious, languorous, romantic moments –
when this film appears to have the lineaments of a classic. Yet
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could it be that its epic, haunting story of tragic love in the Second
World War is too oblique and opaque, with too complex an enigma
at its heart, to press the right commercial buttons?’ (Bradshaw,
2007, p. 9). As Bradshaw suggests, whether it receives high box-
office sales or not, the quality of the adaptation will ensure it a
longevity of its own apart from its connection with the well-sold
novel.
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Introduction
Discussion questions
and discuss the influence these have on the narrative and your
understanding of it. References to work by Virginia Woolf, D. H.
Lawrence, Jane Austen, Henry James and T. S. Eliot have all been
spotted in reviews, as well as many others; explain how, if at all,
this literary signposting adds to the novel’s depth.
6. Truth and lies are placed in the foreground of the novel, as
when Briony lies about Robbie, and Cecilia and Robbie believe
they know the ‘truth’ that Danny Hardman raped Lola. This is also
a novel about secrets as Briony’s atonement is connected to
revealing the truth about what she did or did not see on the night
she accuses Robbie. Consider how these references to lies, secrets
and truth impinge on a reading of the novel and make it difficult to
believe if or when Briony is telling the truth. To make more of this
point, make references to ‘London, 1999’ and the use of the
unreliable narrator.
7. Think about the relevance of the epigraph in relation to the
rest of the novel. Remember that McEwan has called this his ‘Jane
Austen novel’, at least with regard to Part One, and compare the
way both Atonement and Northanger Abbey expound on how the lit-
erary imagination can manipulate narratives.
8. Compare the portrayal of war in the film and novel and
explain how Part Two (in the novel) differs in terms of form and
content to Part One (which is set in the Tallis country house in
1935). Think of the difficulties, if not impossibilities, of repre-
senting the past with good faith and explain if the novel is con-
vincing in its depictions of the Dunkirk retreat.
It is also useful to consider the role of nursing during the war
and in your analysis of Part Three consider the effect of this sec-
tion playing such a large role in the novel. Is it possible to see this
as balancing the narrative in that it gives space to the role of
women as well as men?
Further Reading and Discussion Questions 81
Novels
Amsterdam (1998), London: Jonathan Cape.
Atonement (2001a), London: Jonathan Cape.
Black Dogs (1992), London: Jonathan Cape.
The Cement Garden (1978), London: Jonathan Cape.
The Child in Time (1987), London: Jonathan Cape.
The Comfort of Strangers (1981), London: Jonathan Cape.
The Daydreamer (1994), London: Jonathan Cape.
Enduring Love (1997), London: Jonathan Cape.
The Innocent (1990), London: Jonathan Cape.
On Chesil Beach (2007), London: Cape.
Saturday (2005), London: Jonathan Cape.
Other Fiction
First Love, Last Rites (1975/1991), London: Jonathan Cape.
For You: The Libretto for Michael Berkeley’s Opera (2008), London: Vintage.
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The Imitation Game: Three Plays for Television (1981), London: Jonathan
Cape.
In Between the Sheets (1978), London: Jonathan Cape.
Or Shall We Die? (1983), London: Jonathan Cape.
The Ploughman’s Lunch (1985), London: Methuen.
Soursweet (1988), London: Faber.
Non-fiction
‘A Parallel Tradition’ (2006a), Guardian, 1 April.
‘An Inspiration, Yes. Did I Copy from Another Author? No’ (2006b),
Guardian, 27 November.
‘Beyond Belief ’ (2001b), Guardian, 12 September.
‘The Day of Judgement’ (2008), Guardian, 31 May.
‘How Could We Have Forgotten This Was Always Going to Happen?’
(2005), Guardian, 8 July.
‘Only Love and Then Oblivion’ (2001c), Guardian, 15 September.
Film
Atonement (2007) (2008 DVD), dir. Joe Wright.
Being John Banville (2008), dir. Charlie McCarthy.