Chandler 1999
Chandler 1999
Chandler 1999
PURPOSE. To describe the rationale, content, and Genevieve E. Chandler, PhD, R N , is Associate Professor
and Director, Center for Nursing Advancement,
results of a group creative writing program to University of Massachusetts, Arnherst, M A .
increase adolescent self-esteem and self-@cacy.
O n e of the primary goals of transition from childhood
METHODS. Subjects were low-income, at-risk minor- to adulthood is to develop a positive sense of self. Miller
ity youth (N = 11).Free writing in response to spe- (1991) maintained that a person’s self-concept is the sin-
gle most important factor that affects behavior.
cific exercises, sharing their own stories in their own Meisenholder (1985) acknowledged that self-esteem and
self-efficacy are key components in the restoration and
language, and responding to their peers were used maintenance of health. In 1992, Hardin, Carbaugh,
Weinrich, Pesut, and Carbaugh reported that one of the
daily for 2 weeks as part of the high school English most important stressors for teens was threat to self. The
authors concluded that because adolescents identified
class. The program was oriented toward health negative coping strategies that were life-threatening,there
is a vital need to develop interventions that reinforce ado-
rather than problems, with the content created by lescents’ healthy coping and a solid sense of self. It is criti-
the adolescents. cal to provide the next generation with knowledge and
skills that will faditate internal strength and resilience.
FINDINGS. The opportunity to tell their own story, in To date, the majority of interventions with adolescents
have been problem focused and administered through
their own language in a safe, structured setting verbal techniques such as lectures and discussion, with
the content determined by adults. This author designed
with positive feedback led to higher self-@cacy and a nursing intervention, Writing for Resilience to Increase
Self-Esteem (WRITE),that was oriented toward health
self-esteem. rather than problems, using material that came from the
adolescents themselves, with the goal of enhancing self-
CONCLUSIONS.This study suggests that a writing esteem and self-efficacy.
intervention focused on building self-in-relation self-
Literature Review
esteem and the four aspects of self-#cacy resulted
Sorrell (1994) documented that traditionally, research
in increased sense of zoell-being. on composition has focused on the written product. In
the 1960s, however, the focus shifted to the writing pro-
Key words: Adolescents, self-efficacy, self-esteem, cess. Observations have shown that in this process there
is a complex interplay between thinking and writing in
writing which initial ideas are reworked into new meanings and
unformed thoughts are given form and clarity (Sorrell).
Writing then enhances thinking and has value as part of
Joumcil of Child arid Adolescent Psychiatric Nursing, the learning process. Emig (1983) observed that writing
Volirme 12, Number 3, pp. 70-78. slows down thinking, transforming the passive thinker
and self-esteem and a change in conceptual perspective. Self-in-relation theory suggests that individuals
Experts recognize that language alone does not lead to develop a distinct identity and sense of their own capa-
reflective, abstract thought. From their study of knowl- bilities in relation to others. The self-in-relation construct
edge development, Belenky, Clinchy, Goldberger, and is a shift from traditional theories of self-esteem, which
Tarule (1986) concluded that “in order for reflection to stress separation and autonomy rather than connection
occur, oral and written forms of language must pass and relationship. In self-in-relation theory, self-esteem is
back and forth between persons who both speak and lis- described as the intimate connection between the growth
ten or read and write-sharing, expanding and reflect- and development of the individual self and the interac-
ing on each other’s experience” (p. 26). The authors sug- tional development of self and others.
gest such interchanges lead to ways of knowing that
enable individuals to enter into the social and intellec-
tual life of their community. Without these interchanges,
people remain isolated from others and, even more The development of supportive
important, without tools for symbolizing, representing,
and sharing their experiences, individuals remain iso- relationships through positive feedback and
lated from themselves. Vygotsky (1962),an expert in lin-
guistics, explained that exterior dialogues are a neces- sharing written work provided a relational
sary precursor to inner speech and an awareness of
one’s own thought processes. Linesch (1988) described context to develop connections to others.
the writing process as a way to communicate personal
experience, engage in social participation, and explore
and experiment with identity. In the traditional school
curriculum, there is little opportunity for students to Self-esteem, then, is an evaluation of self (Rosenberg,
focus on the development of self. 1965) and cumulative feelings about the self (Cooper-
smith, 1967) that evolve in the context of relationships. In
Methods the creative writing program, the development of sup-
portive relationships through positive feedback and
Purpose sharing written work among students and facilitators
provided a relational context in which to develop con-
The purpose of the WRlTE intervention was to intro- nections to others to compare self-concept, values, and
duce creative writing as an opportunity for adolescents goals.
to tell their own story in their own words and to be Bandura (1977)defined self-efficacy as evaluative feel-
respectfully heard and responded to without criticism. ings about one’s ability to carry out a behavior to a suc-
The goal was to provide a positive behavioral alternative cessful outcome. Perceived self-efficacy determines the
for anger, stress, substance abuse, and violence. initiation of a particular coping behavior as well as the
persistence of that coping behavior in the face of obsta-
Conceptual Framework cles. Self-efficacyis based on four sources of information:
performance accomplishments, vicarious experience,
The conceptual framework underlying the design of verbal persuasion, and emotional arousal. Personal mas-
the program incorporated the self-in-relation construct of tery of particular experiences that results in a sense of
self-esteem (Jordan, Kaplan, Miller, Stiver, & Surrey, accomplishment is the most influential aspect of deter-
1991)and Bandura’s (1977) theory of self-efficacy. mining self-efficacy.
Table 1. Exercises for Creative Writing Program for Table 2. The WRITE Program Procedure
Adolescents
Day Stimulus Object
1. The facilitator mtroduced a wnting exercise with an idea
1 Respond to a collection of objects (e.g.,toy car, old about creative writing.
watch, shell). 2. Participants were told to write whatever came to mind in
response to the exercises.
2 Draw a map of a remembered place (e.g., room, 3 Partiapants were reminded not to stop and think, but to
house, neighborhood, and write to what you recall). keep writing. Even if they had nothing to say, write that
3 Respond to one of these lines from a poem: they had nothing to say.
"I've never seen the place I was born "
4. At 9 minutes, the facilitator announced 1minute left to the
"Among my mother's things I found . . "
exercise.
"My soul is like a well of deep water." 5. At the end of 10 minutes, participants stopped writing and
"You are asking me where am I gomg wth those were asked to volunteer to read.
sad faces." 6. After each reading, participants were asked to comment on
"what they like" and "what they remember" from the writ-
4 Write about something from your childhood that you mg. Criticism was not permitted.
had and don't have now.
5 Respond to, "If I woke up tomorrow and I was the
opposite sex . "
6 Wnte down three things you're afraid of and three participant drew a map of a beach and began his story
tlungs you are comforted by, and write about one or with "sea shells remind me of my family's last trip to
several of them. Puerto Rico," and ending with "life in Vieques (Puerto
7 Write to "In the summer when I was . . . " Rico) is very simple."
8 Respond to a collection of objects (e.g.,checkers,
rosarybeads, spatula). Affect
9 Pick a postcard and write about where it takes you.
In the affect category, participants tapped into a whole
range of feelings, from sadness to disappointment to
delight. In response to the statement, 'Write about some-
Memory thing in your childhood that you don't have now," a par-
ticipant started with, "Something I had in my childhood
In the memory category, students generally wrote and I don't have now is a father . . . me, 1love and hate
about happier, simpler times of the past, such as going to him at the same time and that's because when I was 11
the beach, a trip to their home country, or special family years old he walked out on my mother, sister, and I."
moments. For example, in response to the stimulus The participant ended with, "I wish everything could go
object, "Draw a map of a remembered place," one partic- back to around when my sister was born, everything
ipant drew a map of a labor room and wrote, 'When I seemed so perfect then."
think about the birth of my brother, I will never forget
that moment. It was very funny to me, my mom was Ideas
very noisy," and she went on to describe a scene of her
mother telling her father it was time to go to the hospital Writings in the creative idea category were poems,
and her father going crazy, jumping in the car and leav- short stories, and commentaries that came from the
ing the writer and her mother on the front steps. Another heart. One student started her poem with, "Words can
Self-Esteem Self-Efficacy
End-eval “I really enjoyed opening up and telling people a little ’These writing assignments were p a t . It made
about myself.” me express myself better on paper, it makes my
schoolwork easier.”
“It helps me remember fun things.”
“My writing skills have improved, it has helped
“I’ve learned to write about my feelings, express myself, it me be more creative.”
also brought back years of memories.”
“It makes me understand myself more and look back on
some of the things I did wrong. It makes me realize how
much I love my son and how precious memories can be.”
”It‘s given me a chance to talk about my life. I also like
listening to the other students writing and learning a little
about them.”
hurt, words can wound, words can break a heart in two, response to the second session, a co-facilitator wrote, ”I
when we speak before we think.” think it’s good to have something unstructured like
this. I think most of their classes are probably very
Facilitators‘Response structured. I wonder how much they are encouraged to
use their imaginations, to be creative and, most of all,
Throughout the 2-week period, there was one consis- have fun with it?” Following the third session, another
tent facilitator, with a different graduate student co-facil- facilitator commented, ”The group as a whole was
itator every session. The overall responses of the co- quite a bit more interactive than I expected. I was,
facilitators were very positive. After our first meeting, frankly, surprised to see that all of the students engaged
the co-facilitator wrote, ”At first the students were not themselves in reading in front of their peer group. This
impressed, but as the session progressed they were experience made me realize how this alternative method
relaxed, liked what they were doing, and were feeling of instruction would enable these adolescents to feel
good. By the end, the students were all buzzing with more in control of their life. It afforded them the oppor-
curiosity and excitement about the next day’s exercise. tunity to reflect on what had and is happening to them.”
Something good is definitely happening here.” In The fourth facilitator observed, “Most of the kids gave
each other positive feedback. They laugh at each other a time with the kids, get to know them. It was neat to hear
little but it seems all in good humor, and no one seems a little snippet of their lives: being sad, proud, uncom-
off ended .” fortable, excited.”
In the second week of the program, facilitator The co-facilitators’ responses indicated that over the
responses included not only a reaction to the individual 2-week period, the group interaction went from students
writings but also several observations of the collective being withdrawn and reticent to participate to a cohesive
experience of the group: ’Writing came easily, (students) group that responded enthusiastically to each exercise
were very eager and excited about sharing. I was while competing to read and respond to their peers.
impressed with the sensitivity to each other’s writing
and feehgs of closeness that came through when com- Teacher Evaluation
menting on their peers.” After the second day, the f a d -
tator had a similar response: “Overall, I thought they Irutially, it was not anticipated that the teacher would
did great! They seemed very enthusiastic and anxious to be present in the room during the intervention; however,
read; I was amazed how quickly they responded with she chose to work quietly at her desk for the 40-minute
their input. They appeared to be such a tight group and sessions. An unexpected benefit was her daily verbal
seemed to enjoy each other.” The writing was affecting support and the final written evaluation.Before the inter-
not only the individual, but also the group dynamics of vention she reported that attendance in class was very
the class. Group cohesion had increased markedly. erratic. In fact, the day the program was initiated only
“I have read articles about adolescents who think 25% of the class was present, with additional students
they will never live until they are 20, so they live dan- attending every day, so by the last week there was 100%
gerously because they feel they are going to die early attendance. After the final session, she commented:
anyway. Reading about it is one thing, but listening to
an adolescent say this is more shocking,” was the obser- It was good for them, they came to understand
vation of another facilitator. A facilitator on the follow- themselves. These kids have a plethora of problems
ing day observed, ”I was struck by the responsibilities in their personal life and no one to talk to. They
these adolescents have. One 16-year-old worried about want to talk,writing gives them the opportunity. . .
her baby’s father taking h away, while another wrote when they write about their personal life, they begin
about paying regular household bills.” The eighth facili- to reflect, they look back and gain an understanding
tator related her knowledge of the literature to the expe- of themselves . . . it brings back stuff from the past
rience: “I was startled that very young people had a fear that you might not remember . . . it helps to free
of death. It was interesting to hear both boys and girls write to get thoughts down. . . it relieves frustration.
list embarrassment as something they were afraid of.
Additionally, each sex spoke of their fears equally, When asked if there was anything that surprised her, she
which goes contrary to the assumption that boys would said, ”I was amazed that there was no resistance at all. . . .
not talk about feelings or admit them.” All the facilita- The kids looked forward to it every day, they enjoyed it a
tors recognized that the literature suggested there lot. . . . One girl, who never talked before, told another
would be a gender difference in level of participation as teacher that she loved thisclass!”
well as the content of the writings. Throughout the pro-
gram, however, there was no discernible gender differ- Discussion
ence in writing or responding. Following the final ses-
sion, the facilitator wrote, “It felt like it went too fast, it The purpose of this program was to pilot a creative
was over before it got started. I wanted to spend more writing intervention program designed to enhance self-
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