Scribd
Upload
19 views

Smart Research

1) The reviewer recommends major revisions for the manuscript "Intelligent SMART Textiles: Wearable Textile Devices for Solar Cells". 2) While the literature review covered relevant theoretical debates, the manuscript lacks a framework for empirical analysis and better emphasis on practical implications. 3) Revisions needed include adding the authors' analysis and opinions after each quoted paragraph in the literature review, and including conclusive results from the research.

Uploaded by

Mohamed Abd Elgawad
Copyright
© © All Rights Reserved
We take content rights seriously. If you suspect this is your content, claim it here.
Available Formats
Download as PDF, TXT or read online on Scribd
19 views

Smart Research

1) The reviewer recommends major revisions for the manuscript "Intelligent SMART Textiles: Wearable Textile Devices for Solar Cells". 2) While the literature review covered relevant theoretical debates, the manuscript lacks a framework for empirical analysis and better emphasis on practical implications. 3) Revisions needed include adding the authors' analysis and opinions after each quoted paragraph in the literature review, and including conclusive results from the research.

Uploaded by

Mohamed Abd Elgawad
Copyright
© © All Rights Reserved
We take content rights seriously. If you suspect this is your content, claim it here.
Available Formats
Download as PDF, TXT or read online on Scribd
You are on page 1/ 1

8/7/23, 3:44 PM Proof and Print Reviewer Comments

Reviewer Recommendation and Comments for Manuscript Number JADM-D-23-00010

Intelligent SMART Textiles: Wearable Textile Devices for Solar Cells

Original Submission
Mohamed Abd El Gawad, ph.D Reviewer 4

Back Edit Review Print Submit Review to Editorial Office

Recommendation: Major Revision

Custom Review Question(s): Response


Do you have any conflicts of interest? No
Please provide your expertise in this area? Expert
Comments for the committee that will NOT be sent to the authors. The manuscript would demonstrate a promising impact, yet
some major issues need to be addressed before publishing.
The literature review raises interesting theoretical debates.
However, in its current form, it does not provide a good
framework for the empirical analysis.
The manuscript needs a better emphasis on the research
relevance to its practical implications.
This research is considered as a review article, but there are
no an analysis of what was quoted in literature review .
The opinion of the authors is not mentioned in the research .
Please write your review here; identify positives and negatives of the paper, - The study conducted a comprehensive academic and
plus ant suggestions for revisions. Please discuss: 1. The submission's applied survey of major related elements to the research
originality and significance. 2. Technical soundness. 3. Theoretical merit. 4. topic, in addition
Clarity of writing. to collecting a large and sufficient amount of previous
studies related to the subject and point of the research.
- References are accurate, appropriate, updated and
balanced.
- The manuscript would demonstrate a promising impact, yet
some major issues need to be addressed before publishing
- This research is considered as a review article, but there
are no evidence of analysis to what was quoted in literature
review .
- The opinion of the authors is not mentioned in the research
.
- The research does not include conclusive results.
Please rate the manuscript on a scale of 1-10? 6
Do you give this journal the permission to share review data, including your Yes
identity, with Publons?

Reviewer Comments to Author

1-you should write your opinion and make a deep analysis after each paragraph that was listed in the research.

2-The research does not include the results that have been achieved .

Reviewer Confidential Comments to Editor:

The manuscript would demonstrate a promising impact, yet some major issues need to be addressed before publishing.

Back Edit Review Print Submit Review to Editorial Office

https://www.editorialmanager.com/jadm/default2.aspx 1/1

You might also like

pFad - Phonifier reborn

Pfad - The Proxy pFad of © 2024 Garber Painting. All rights reserved.

Note: This service is not intended for secure transactions such as banking, social media, email, or purchasing. Use at your own risk. We assume no liability whatsoever for broken pages.


Alternative Proxies:

Alternative Proxy

pFad Proxy

pFad v3 Proxy

pFad v4 Proxy