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Cake and Punctuation: A Definition of Happiness

Claudia Hayes

School of Undergraduate Studies, Excelsior University

English 101: English Composition

Dr. Mindy Walker

August 9, 2022
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Cake and Punctuation: A Definition of Happiness

At one point in the British television show An Idiot Abroad, the cranky presenter Karl

said, “I say happiness is like having a cake. If you have a cake every day, you get sick of that

cake. If you’re happy all the time, you get sick of being happy” (as cited in Pilkington, 2012). Commented [A1]: The author opens her definition essay
with an analogy strategy, using a quote to compare happiness
to having cake.
Happiness is certainly an elusive cultural concept. People use words like “happy” and

“happiness” frequently—in statements like, “I just want to be happy”—but the meaning is

ambiguous. Exploration into the idea reveals the complexities and contradictions of happiness. Commented [A2]: In her thesis statement, the author not
only presents the concept to be defined but also makes an
assertion related to the concept. Here, the author asserts that
According to the Oxford Dictionaries, happiness is “the state of [feeling or showing pleasure or happiness can be difficult to define.

contentment]” (Happiness). If asked, many would likely give similar synonyms. However, the

way the population uses the word happiness distinguishes it from other states of being, such as

contentment. For example, Karl’s assertion that an individual can get sick of being happy Commented [A3]: The author begins with the literal
definition of the concept – denotation. However, she asserts
that this definition is not encompassing enough.
suggests happiness is manic and circumstantial, an unsustainably heightened condition. The

statement “I just want to be happy” similarly suggests happiness is an elusive feeling of pleasure

associated with a set of desirable circumstances. Happiness requires smiles, laughter, and a

carefree spirit, whereas contentment suggests appreciation and peace despite imperfect

conditions. Surely, few could tire of feeling peace and desire internal agitation instead. Commented [A4]: Here, the author explores the implied
meaning of happiness – connotation.
In this context, Karl has a point. Happiness functions best as a punctuation mark rather

than a full essay. Happiness is the euphoria of a new relationship or the elation of a good grade;

it stems from a day without responsibilities or a beautiful family moment. Part of happiness’s Commented [A5]: The author lists some examples to
describe happiness – enumeration.
charm is its novelty. Humans appear to enjoy chasing moments of sheer pleasure, and without

anticipation and contrast, happiness, as with any heightened sense, becomes tiring.

Happiness is not contentment. It does not supersede pain or undesirable circumstances in Commented [A6]: In this paragraph, the author explores
what happiness is not. This is a clear negation strategy.
the way contentment can, and it is not balanced or consistent. The antonym of happiness is
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sadness, which suggests the two feelings lay on opposing ends of a spectrum. A subject can

experience happiness in varying degrees and in relation to different circumstances, but they Commented [A7]: According to APA 7th edition, the
singular they can now be used.
cannot experience happiness and sadness about one stimulus in the exact same moment. Some

may say, “I am both happy and sad,” but this statement reflects happiness at one element of a

situation and sadness at a different element of the same situation. For example, a parent might

make such a statement when his or her child graduates from high school. The parent might be

pleased at the child’s accomplishment and simultaneously sorrowful that the child will be

moving away for college. The parent is not happy and sad, both heightened states, about one

element.

Happiness is just one variety of pleasure. Sometimes individuals acknowledge this detail,

as Karl does when he compares happiness to cake. Other times, entities obscure the nuances,

making happiness synonymous with other kinds of pleasure. The Oxford Dictionaries equate

happiness with contentment, but contentment has different cultural connotations: happiness is the

exclamation point to contentment’s essay. Commented [A8]: In her conclusion, the author
summarizes key points about happiness from her essay,
bringing her audience full circle and reminding them of the
complex nature of happiness. This makes a strong
connection back to her thesis statement.
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References

Happiness. (n.d.). In Oxford Dictionaries online.

http://www.oxforddictionaries.com/us/definition/american_english/happiness?q=happine

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Pilkington, K. (Presenter), Campbell, L. (Director). (2011, September 21). Desert island (Series

2, Episode 1) [TV series episode]. In R. Gervais (Producer), An idiot abroad. RISK

Productions.