Chapters 1-3
Chapters 1-3
Chapters 1-3
A Thesis
Proponents:
Gatawa, Blythe G.
Gines, Jhuliana A.
Laran, Lorraine P.
ABELS 3-3
2024
CHAPTER 1
Introduction
due to its versatility in different fields, particularly in writing where it has made
emails, marketing materials, and many more in just one click, making its name in
operate that way, AI tools use algorithms that combine several methods including
language models, neural networks, and deep learning. A vast quantity of text
data analysis is what these algorithms use to analyze linguistic patterns and
relevant to the given topic or prompt. The patterns and structures found in the
text data that AI writing tools have been programmed on are what generate their
answers. Different sources such as books, papers, websites, and other written
materials can also be used to satisfy and fulfill this training data. By identifying
human writing, allowing them to generate and produce text that sounds natural.
However, beyond the huge potential of the said system is its possibility to make
flawed outputs, leading to issues concerning its function. These pave the way for
sprouting arguments regarding AI’s infallibility and the integrity of people using it.
Several concerns that arise with AI writing tools exhibit upright and
practical questions. Despite it being easy to use with real-time feedback and
readily accessible for consultations, one major problem is their precision; even
though these programs have the ability to produce writing with proper syntax,
Noam Chomsky, their deepest flaw is the absence of the most critical capacity of
any intelligence, which then results in inaccurate matches with the topic. In a
guest essay published under The New York Times, the American linguist also
added that the use of such is “basically a high-tech plagiarism” for it does not
really create anything but rather copies existing works of existing artists and
academic paper falls under this concern as it may limit human creativity and
decrease originality. These points bring out a talk on academic dishonesty and
compromised learning which may hinder the development of critical thinking skills
adroitness.
Producing biased text is another issue since AI writing tools can likely create one
user privacy are also flagged by the function of these tools, which makes privacy
a subject matter. Moreover, the growing use of AI writing tools endangers the
Tomas stated in an interview held by 24 Oras on the 29th of January 2024 that
“we can speak of the demise of thinking itself, the death of thinking, the death of
Filipino languages. The researchers will test three (3) AI tools namely ChatGPT,
Google Gemini, and You.com which ranked as the top three most visited AI
aforementioned sites and their respective answers will be obtained as the data of
this study, which will then be checked for grammatical errors, as well as rating
awareness and deliver a focal understanding of AI systems, their limits, and how
they should be utilized properly, especially for those using them in the writing
industry and the academe; to expand the view holistically in such a way that it
would be beneficial in the next generations, and would extend new avenues for
This research seeks to examine the quality of the English and Filipino
essays produced by the world’s top three (3) most visited Artificial Intelligence
Settings:
● Types of Paragraph:
○ Narrative
○ Descriptive
○ Argumentative
2. What existing English and Filipino grammar rules were violated by the
AI-generated texts?
3. How effective are the AI-generated texts in terms of complying with the
a.) Unity
b.) Coherence
c.) Completeness
4. Based on the findings, what is the general impression on the quality of the
Theoretical Framework
The study will use Edward Owusu's Essay Analytical Framework (EAF) to
analyze the quality of the texts generated by the AI writing tools ChatGPT,
Google Gemini, and You.com. This framework (see Figure 1) consists of three (3)
main variables: the structure of the essay, the paragraph theory, and the methods
of development.
body, and conclusion, along with its basic components i.e. the topic sentence,
For the second variable, the paragraph theory concerns the quality of the text
taking into account that there should be unity, coherence, and completeness for it
harmonized on one main topic; while coherence pertains to the continuity of the
between one entity in discourse and other elements that are vital to its
structures as the ideas were arranged in a manner that is clear, orderly, and
Lastly, for the third variable, there exist five methods of development which
refer to the ways on how a paragraph can be written. In a study written by Owusu
and Yeboah in 2014, they featured the five existing methods of paragraph
development namely the narrative, cause and effect, descriptive, comparison and
grammatical errors within the AI-generated texts, which is one reflection of their
credibility. This theoretical framework would serve as a guide on how the study
should be approached, particularly on the actions that must be done for the
purpose of obtaining both data from AI tools and the results of their analysis per
se.
Conceptual Framework
in English and Filipino. The input includes the prompts for the top three (3) most
visited AI text-generating tools globally to write about. The researchers will gather
the texts, specifically the produced essays in both English and Filipino
languages, and a theoretical framework will then be integrated which would serve
as the guiding principle for the analysis of the aforementioned. These inputs will
general use in the industry. This framework ensures that the conclusions,
AI-generated English and Filipino texts. The researchers will examine the quality
fifteen (15) in Filipino, with each of the three (3) tools having five (5) types of
paragraph to generate using the given prompt and requirements. One one (1)
topic sentence will be used for every of these paragraph types per language. All
research validators.
occurrences, while the quality of the produced essays will be assessed and rated
In analyzing the textual aspects of the input, the researchers will focus on
the text generation capabilities and respective quality of the selected AI tools and
will not extensively delve into other functionalities such as image recognition and
tools based on current industry rankings and popularity. Other AI platforms not
ABELS Students. This study will help the English major students to know how
far they should ask for assistance from AI text-generating tools. The results of
this study provide insights on the limitations of AI-generated texts, helping them
discern why they should not depend on these tools alone and when to prioritize
they can utilize the findings of this study to educate students about the
Writing Industry Professionals. This study will aid workers, particularly those in
the field of writing such as content creation and writing tasks, by raising
awareness about the potential pitfalls of relying solely on AI for producing texts
and the necessity of human oversight to ensure its quality. The study also does
not support the declining labor demands on human workforce and would promote
reshaping and redefining job roles rather than full employment displacement due
understanding of the capabilities and limitations of these tools, this study enables
them to make informed decisions about when and how to utilize AI assistance in
AI-generated texts, guiding their investigations into improving the reliability and
accuracy of AI tools for text generation across different languages and contexts.
should work together, and that these tools offer only assistance; not a substitute
The following terms are conceptually and operationally defined to fit the
Artificial Intelligence (AI). This refers to the study that deals with all aspects of
mimicking cognitive functions for real-world problem solving and building systems
text-generating tools, the mention of the said term therefore pertains to those
platforms that produce texts, particularly the top three (3) most visited ones
of the abilities to learn from experience, adapt to new situations, understand and
(Sternberg, 2024).
suggesting or saying the next words; this also serves as the inciting cause of
similar meaning, but mainly focusing on the settings that will be given or posted
Textual Qualities. This refers to how the texts complied with the qualities of a
good paragraph stated in the theoretical framework, covering the structure of the
This chapter presents research studies that contain significant and relevant
the internet. The following are arranged thematically and are based on the key
Settings
The use of AI tools has sparked remarkably around the globe, with the
market even projected to reach a staggering $407 billion by 2027 (Forbes, 2024).
An annual growth rate of 37.3 percent between 2023 and 2030 is expected,
This impact, along with other industries, can be seen in the field of writing as
there exists text-generating AI tools that work with any given prompt, whether in
the form of questions or commands. As the study will make use of AI tools to
acquire data, the researchers then employed certain prompts and requirements
for ChatGPT, Google Gemini, and You.com to write about, adopted from the
study conducted by Kumar and Mindzak in 2024, with some modifications. The
and words to include. However, the number of attempts was reduced to one and
the platforms used were chosen from the statistics of most visited AI tools
provided by Sarkar (2024). Since the research includes both English and Filipino
texts, the prompt and words to include were translated in Filipino in order for the
will undergo rule-based grammar checking and quality assessment whose results
for the types of paragraphs that they would ask the AI tools to generate besides
around the essence of using a thesis statement in expository essays, but a few of
its components contributed to the major details that the researchers could use as
bases to rate the quality of the texts that the AI tools will generate such as the
structure of an essay having the main parts introduction, body, and conclusion,
must adhere to these as part of the variables of the Essay Analytical Framework
that this study will employ, which was also cited from another research published
upon the text generation experiment and textual analysis. Each are described as
follows:
● Cause and Effect: This method should explore the relationship between
errors?
texts, the study can determine how well the AI text-generating tools
throughout. For instance, are the events relevant to one another? Are the
the narrative? Are there grammatical errors and typos in the narrative that
assessing the AI-generated texts with this method, it allows the study to
grammatically is appropriate. This also includes questions such as: are the
language and syntax. For instance, are comparative structures being used
correctly? Are there any grammatical flaws in the texts and do they
Analyzing AI-generated writings using this allows the study to evaluate the
assertions make sense? Does the evidence follow grammar rules? Are
there any grammatical mistakes that make the argument less compelling?
All these will be checked in every generated text as they hold a significant
different writing styles and structures which would reflect not just the practical
language processing.
AI Tools
generate new content, such as text, images, audio, and video (Lyu, 2023).
Examples of this are the chosen AI tools for this study, which are programs
trained on a set of data and learn the underlying patterns to generate new data
that mirrors the training set (Forbes, 2023). The selection process of these AI
tools involves the article “AI Industry Analysis: 50 Most Visited AI Tools and their
text-generating tools, detailing key trends, challenges, and ramifications for the
discusses the impact of AI on the job market. Despite AI's potential to create new
job opportunities and enhance productivity, it also raises concerns about job loss
processing, and data science. The talent gap caused by this is expected to
personal data by AI systems were also highlighted, emphasizing the need for
academia, which poses issues as demand gradually increases and the economy
the list which automatically secures its place in this study. The second in ranking,
Quillbot, is an AI writing tool but its features do not include generating texts and
only serves as a writing assistant that paraphrases texts hence, the researchers
skipped the said tool and the others that do not fall under the category being
seeked upon until the proper one is found. The next selected tool then was
Google Gemini which placed top six on the list, and You.com on the twelfth spot
respectively.
Quality Analysis
capabilities and limitations of current AI writing tools. This study utilizes Edward
Owusu (2020) provided a brief description of these variables in which the first
one, the structure of the essay, examines the traditional components of an essay:
writing, ensuring clarity and logical flow. Each section of the essay serves a
distinct purpose:
that each part is present and effectively constructed. The clarity and coherence
An effective summarization of the main points and a strong final perspective will
be looked upon the conclusions. This evaluation will help us determine the AI
traditional essay structure is not only a marker of good academic writing, but also
a key indicator of the AI's ability to understand and apply logical flow in writing.
general.
completeness in which for unity, all sentences within a paragraph must relate to a
single main idea, ensuring they are centered and harmonized. This characteristic
is crucial for maintaining focus and clarity. Coherence pertains to the logical flow
these criteria, the researchers will evaluate the AI-generated texts to determine
their adherence to good writing practices and how well they conform with those.
Having a clear grasp of AI's ability to create unified, coherent, and complete
paragraphs is crucial for evaluating their overall writing proficiency and their
refer to the different ways a paragraph can be written. According to Owusu and
Yeboah (2014), there exists five primary methods namely narrative which
involves telling a story or recounting events, cause and effect which explains the
vivid details to describe a person, place, thing, or idea, comparison and contrast
which highlights the similarities and differences between two or more items, and
development methods also reflects the AI's capacity to handle different topics
and writing prompts. A tool that can effectively switch between descriptive and
utility for a broader range of writing tasks. This versatility is crucial for
different writing styles are often required. This, in turn, will help users select the
most appropriate AI tool for their specific needs and guide developers in refining
their models to better meet user demands. The results of the analyses would
which may vary depending on how users would accept the inferences.
mistakes to encounter within each AI-generated essay, reflecting how they meet
METHODOLOGY
This section includes the processes done to fulfill the goals of the study, mainly
Research Design
processes, and results will require only textual explanation. This research is
qualitative because it addresses how and why we ought to evaluate any possible
gaps of AI rather than calculating numerical data points regarding the frequency
of the issue.
Descriptive. This research will employ a descriptive design that aims to describe
the text generation capabilities of the selected AI tools and the respective
aspects and paragraph elements using an established criteria for essay quality
assessment. This will reflect on the broader use of artificial intelligence in writing
research.
Sources of Data
The primary source of data for this research will be the essays, gathered
attempts, and specific words to include. The accumulated texts will then be
analyzed by first, listing down all the grammatical errors encountered in each
essay with the existing grammatical rules in English and Filipino serving as a
basis; and second, using a standardized rubric for evaluation which was adopted
from an existing study and modified to fit the specific needs of this study
completeness.
For the data gathering procedure, the researchers plan to follow three
well as the implications of the results in the general use of artificial intelligence.
To start with, the Text Generation Experiment includes the use of AI tools
to create essays based on a given topic sentence in both English and Filipino.
Parameters like paragraph type, length, number of attempts, and specific words
to include will be set. These prompts and requirements will be given to the AI
tools to generate essays, which will then be reviewed for grammatical errors and
overall quality. After that, the researchers will conduct a comparative analysis of
the generated texts to analyze the performance of different AI tools. Criteria such
be used to evaluate the texts. The researchers will then interpret and synthesize
the findings into a report. The interpretation will discuss the strengths and
weaknesses of each AI tool, provide insights into their effectiveness, and offer
text-generating tools by using a consistent set aligned with both the universal
grammar of English and balarilang Filipino, which ensures that the interpretation
will be fair and unbiased. This process is crucial for the study as it helps to
determine the overall quality and reliability of the AI-generated texts. The insights
gained from this analysis will contribute to the understanding of the capabilities
within the essays. This covers checking for issues that include but are not limited
structure, and adherence to syntactic norms. Once the texts have been
screened, the next step is to tabulate the findings. This involves recording the
analysis of the AI tools. The tabulation will help in identifying patterns and trends
in the errors, providing insights into the strengths and weaknesses of each AI
The generated essays will be evaluated using a rubric adopted from Agan
and Deniz (2019) in which each will be rated as poor, moderate, good, or very
good depending on how they adhered to the given characteristics. The said
rubric, which was developed for assessing paragraph level written texts, was
modified to align with the elements of the paragraph namely unity, coherence,
and completeness and fit with the goals of the study. A total of six (6) research
validators, three (3) from the English department and three (3) from the Filipino
Letters, will then be requested to check the assessment done by the researchers
generated texts per language and the overall performance of the AI tools, as well
as the most abided type of paragraph. A clear interpretation of the results will be
Ethical Considerations
For there are no human respondents needed in the study, consent forms
will maintain integrity, accuracy, fairness, and transparency over the details of the
the field of writing which enhances the validity and impact of the research in the
researchers and expert validators for feedback regarding the research findings.
Additionally, the researchers will try to reach out to the creators of the AI tools to
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