METRO MANILA COLLEGE

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REVISION MATRIX
___ Concept Paper __ Proposal Defense __x_ Final Defense

Title: Driving Factors of Retired Police Officers in choosing academe to pursue their
profession

Name of Proponent/s:Group5
Leader: James Patrick S. Aquino
Assistant Leader: Jose Rhette P. Bongayan
Members: Benedict R. Magat.
Jeffrey A. Fabiano
Justine O. Cordero

Name of Panel 1: Dean Marcelo Cruz

Comments/Suggestions Action Taken Remarks
1. Change Panel from to Col. Verlito 1. Change to F/SR. SUPT. Oscar B.
Paredes Villegas (Ret.)
2. Change Col. Verlito B. Paredes in 2. Change in to F/SR. SUPT. Oscar B.
acknowledgement Villegas (Ret.)
3. Remove wrong title in the abstract 3. Remove wrong title in the abstract
4. Remove AFP and PCG in Chapter 1 4. Removing the AFP and PCG
The problem and its background
5. Construct the sentence in definition 5. Remove the word work and change
of term, in the retirement age the 55 age into 56 age
remove the work and change the 55
age
6. Delete the Retired Employees in 6. Remove the Retired Employees in
definition of terms definition of terms
7. Construct the sentence in professor 7. Change the meaning of professor in
under the definition of terms the definition of terms
8. Use local reference in Retired 8. Change the meaning and use local
Police Officer under Definition of defenition on Retired Police Officer
term under Definition of Term
9. change the question in Appendix C- 9. Create another question in Appendix
Survey questionnaire under Passion C-Survey questionnaire Under Passion
question 2 & 3
10. Change skill in Curriculum 10. Apply and change the skill in
Vitae Curriculum Vitae

Name of Panel 2: F/SR. SUPT. Oscar B. Villegas (Ret.)

Comments/Suggestions Action Taken Remarks
1. Change Panel from to Col. Verlito 1. Change to F/SR. SUPT. Oscar B.
Paredes Villegas (Ret.)
2. Change Col. Verlito B. Paredes in 2. Change in to F/SR. SUPT. Oscar B.
acknowledgement Villegas (Ret.)
3. Remove wrong title in the abstract 3. Change into our title
4. Remove AFP and PCG in Chapter 1 4. Removing the AFP and PCG
The problem and its background
5. Change civilian employees 5. Change to uniformed employees
6. In definition of terms should be 6. Re-arrange the definition of terms in
alphabetical order alphabetical order
7. Change 55 retirement age in the 7. Change to 56 retirement age in
definition of terms definition of t erms
8. Change 10 years retired employees 8. Change to atleast 20 years of service
in definition of terms
9. Change Luiz in curriculum vitae 9. Change to Luis in curriculum vitae

Name of Panel 3: Dr. Maria Rachelle V. Delos Santos

Comments/Suggestions Action Taken Remarks
1. In the approval sheet, Change the 1. Change to F/SR. SUPT. Oscar B.
name of panel From Col. Verlito Villegas
Paredes
2. In the acknowledgement, The 2. God Almighty was put on the last
paragraph, The God Almighty put page of Acknowledgement
on last page of Acknowledgement
3. Please check the sentence in 3. Some words and sentence in
Dedication Dedication are consructed
4. Remove the wrong title in Abstract 4. Remove the wrong title in Abstract
and change to The Driving Factors of
Retired Police Officers in choosing
academe to pursue their
profession
5. Please spell out and define the AFP 5. The AFP PNP PCG BFP and BJMP
PNP PCG BFP and BJMP p.1 are has a meaning now p.1
6. Construct some sentence in SOP 6. Some sentence in SOP are
 p.5 constructed p.5
7. Answer who, where, when, and the 7. The Scope of deleamitation are
often variable that will be the scope answered the who, where and when
of the delamitation p.5 p.5
8. Construct and change some 8. Some of the sentence and words in
sentence and words in Assumption Assumption are constructed and
p.6 changed p.6
9. Construct and change some word in 9. Some word in Signigficance of the
Signigficance of the study p.7 study are changed and constructed
p.7
10. Delete and change some of 10. Some of terms and meaning in
terms and meaning in definition of definition of terms are constructed
terms p.8 and deleted p.8
11. Add passion,self-fulfillment, 11. The passion,self-fulfillment,
personal-related adjustment, work- personal-related adjustment, work-
related adjustment, environmental- related adjustment, environmental-
related adjustment, physical health related adjustment, physical health
and emotional health in Definition of and emotional health in Definition of
terms p.8 terms are added p.8
12. Add citation in RRLs the quality 12. The citation in RRLs the quality of
of life of retired employee p.14 life of retired employee are added
p.14
13. Paraphrase or summarize the 13. The RRLs, the adjustment of
RRls, the adjustment of retired retired employee Put word in teach in
employee p.19 the academe after retiring are
Paraphrased p.19
14. You can make your own 14. we maked the conceptual
conceptual paradigm using your paradigm by in our own concept p.25
own concept p.25
15. Delete too old souces in 15. The too old souces in research
research design p.30 design are now deleted and change
into new sourced p.30
16. Add how many school in 16. The number of school of
respondents p.31 respondents are added p.31
17. Remove too old sources and 17. The too old sources and the some
pharaphrase or summarize the sentence in sampling technique are
sentence in sampling technique removed and pharaphrased p.31
p.31
18. Simplify by stating why 18. The questionaire are simplified
questionaire is appropriate to use in and the questionnaire are no
your study and describe your described in instrument used p.33
questionnaire in instrument used
p.33
19. Please check and use SOP for 19. The instrument used are now
your guide, intrument used p.34 constructed by using SOP as guide
p.34
20. The last paragraph of 20. The last paragraph of construction
construction of the intrument was of the intrument was transfered in the
transfer in the instrument used p.35 instrument used p.35
21. Are you sure about this? How 21. The administration and retrieval of
about the president of the HEIs are the instrument are constracted p.36
your not going to ask?,
administration and retrieval of the
instrument in administration and
retrieval of the study p.36 22. In the statistical treatment of data
22. In the statistical treatment of under weighted mean are changed to
data under weighted mean change ''one to five'' by the use of our SOP as
the ''two to six'' and use the SOP guide p.38
for guide p.38
23. Add the likert scale in 23. The likert scale shall not be
administration and retrieval of the included in the statistical treatment of
instrument under chapter 3 data because it is not a statistical for
descriptive statistic in chapter 3
24. Delete the too old source of in 24. The too old source of in reference
reference p.39 was deleted p.39
25. Be specific in the question of 25. Changed the question to be
questionnaire number 3 p. 66 specific in questionnaire number 3
p.66

Approved by:

Dhean R. De Ocampo
Thesis Adviser