Writing Assignment Chapter 1 2

Name: ______________________________ Student ID No.
: _____________________ Class: _____________________________
WRITING ASSIGNMENT
Chapter 1: Shared-living experiences
Topic: Write a four-paragraph essay on the topic “Advantages and disadvantages of sharing a room with others at college”
Outline Writing Writing

1st draft: 2nd draft:
Introduction: Sharing a living space with roommate in college is a Sharing a living space with a roommate in college is
+ Hook: Sharing a living unforgetable memory in student’s life. It’s may an unforgettable memory in a student’s life. It can
space with friends at create well experiences but also forgetable times for create valuable experiences but also challenging
college
students. Because of it is relative with two times for students. This experience is closely related
+Thesis statement:
Discussing advantages and significant aspect : Advantages and disadvantages to two significant aspects: the advantages and
disadvantages when living when students have roomate. disadvantages of having roommates.
with roomates It can be seen that sharing living space with another One of the primary advantages of sharing a living
one is synonym with the rent cost is splited equally, space is the reduced cost of rent, as expenses can be
thank for low rent cost student can affort for bills split equally. Thanks to lower rent, students can also
another. What more, roomate is considered the
Body para : Advantages afford to pay for other bills. Moreover, roommates
people who you can talk to them and they seem the
Topic sentence:Obviously, often become the people you can confide in, as they
living with friends is a most person willing to listen your issues. Many long are usually the most willing to listen to your issues.
unforgetable memory in lasting relationships are rose from living together in Many long-lasting friendships develop from living
student’s life university. together during university.
+Make new friends, Therefore, the opposite is true for undeniable some
building a long lasting special cases that roomate is not keep in line with However, the opposite can also be true, as there are
relationship another. Conflict is the most reason due to a nervous undeniable cases where roommates do not get along.
+Save money also living Conflicts are often a result of a tense atmosphere,
atmosphere, some study shown that most arguments
cost with studies showing that most arguments stem
come from different of lifestyles, unrespect personal
limitation... from differences in lifestyles and a lack of respect
Body Para 2:
Disadvantages To sum up, this experience plays a significant role for personal boundaries.
Topic sentence: Can not in shaping a student's college years, offering both
deniable the other side of In conclusion, this experience plays a significant
opportunities for growth and obstacles that require
sharing room role in shaping a student's college years, offering
adjustment and resilience.
+Conflict regularly both opportunities for growth and challenges that
+Over argument when require adjustment and resilience.
sharing soureces
Conclusion:
+
What I learned from getting feedback and revising my writing:

+ grammar:
- verb-tense consistency: present simple
- verb patterns:
Vocab:
Nouns: benefits  numerous benefits
Topic:
Clauses:
Relative clauses
Feedback from: AI, Gramma check

Personal feeling: i can see that AI provides a lot of vocabulary in advance level, and complex structures. I relised that i have a lots mistake mostly in grammatic.
Essay Outline
Body Paragraph : Introduction para: Introduction para:
- topic sentence + Hook / Background information/ General + Hook / Background information/ General
- supporting sentences statement statement: Sharing a living space with friends
+ 1st idea + Thesis statement: at university
+ 2nd idea + Thesis statement: The essay will explore the
- Concluding sentence Body para1 key advantages and disadvantages of living
- topic sentence with others at college.
- supporting sentences
+ 1st idea Body para1: Advantages
+ 2nd idea - topic sentence
- Concluding sentence - supporting sentences
Body para 2 + 1st advantage:
- topic sentence + 2nd advantage
- supporting sentences - Concluding sentence
+ 1st idea
+ 2nd idea Body para 2: Disadvantages
- Concluding sentence - topic sentence
Body para 3 - supporting sentences
- topic sentence + 1st disadvantage
- supporting sentences + 2nd disadvantage
+ 1st idea - Concluding sentence
+ 2nd idea
- Concluding sentence
Conclusion para
Conclusion para + Restate the thesis statement
+ Restate the thesis statement
Chapter 1: Advantage – disadvantage Essay

Topic: Sharing a room with others at college

Writing Assignment Chapter 1 2

Uploaded by

Copyright:

Available Formats

Writing Assignment Chapter 1 2

Uploaded by

Document Information

Original Title

Copyright

Available Formats

Share this document

Share or Embed Document

Sharing Options

Did you find this document useful?

Is this content inappropriate?

Copyright:

Available Formats

Writing Assignment Chapter 1 2

Uploaded by

Copyright:

Available Formats

Name: ______________________________ Student ID No.

: _ Class: _________

Outline Writing Writing

What I learned from getting feedback and revising my writing:

Feedback from: AI, Gramma check

Chapter 1: Advantage – disadvantage Essay

You might also like

Pfad - The Proxy pFad of © 2024 Garber Painting. All rights reserved.