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Some people believe that technology has made man more social.

To what extent do you agree or


disagree with this opinion?

It is an idea that the human social community is developed more strongly because the technology has
made people more attached together. I totally agree with this opinion, and this essay is about the
connection of people and countries in the world.

Firstly, the technology has made people more attached together by improving communication skills. The
important reason is that it makes people who are afraid to communicate can connect with other people
confidently. Because it helps they can find easilier other people who have the same concept of life in the
world, they can make friend friends together. For example, if you are afraid to communicate with friends
in your class because of your bad studying, you will find facbook facebook groups including members
who have the same bad studing studying to learn the way to solve this problem together. Moreover, the
technology helps them do this better because the weak communicating people can find the courses for
improving this skill on the verified website that you do not take much time to go to a lot of places to find
a good communication person randomly.

Secondly, the technology helps strong strengthen the connection of between countries in the world by
improving their economy faster. The technology can makes make that enterprises in different countries
cooperate together more strong because its information transmission becomes easiliereasier. For
example, if an enterprise want wants to sell its products, they can post their details on the application
that has online shopping feature features in some different countries such as shopee, lazada, amazon, so
on. Besides, why a country will cooperate with other countries to study and develope technology is
because it makes production faster. For example, if Viet Nam want to produce car, it will cooperate with
some developed countries such as USA, Germancy, Japan to learn and study their techniques and
processes.

In conclusion, the technology is the way that makes people and countries in the world are more attached
together to create a strong community. It helps to connect not only people for improving communication
skillskills, but also the countries for developing their economy.

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