The Deer Hunter 1978
The Deer Hunter 1978
The Deer Hunter 1978
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by
Michael Cimino
OR REPRODt:r'l'T('~!
Reg. WGA
.r ~- Prcperty of:
F.Z-!I FILHS' n;c.
1041 North For~osa
uos Angel~s, California 90046 6/7/77
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1. EXT. ALLEGHENY MOUNTAINS, HIGHWAY - LIGHT SNOW - 1968 - DAWN
A big tande~ diesel truck brakes and turns off the highway into a
smaller cor..rr,2.:-::ial :::-o;.ite that is !Jeco:ning a .:orgo:. ·.:en back roud.
The road winds u~der the high~ay, through a high un~erpass, down
towards the little steel town of Clairton, Pa.
Rearing itself enormously over the town, the steel plant is massive,
grime-streaked, squatting in the river valley under five massive
blast furnace stacks, each one over twelve stories high and trail-
ing fat white ~lumes across the winter sky. Fires can be seen
flickering through the windows and long flames weave and dance frorr.
the tops of guyed metal flues. Steam rises in clouds from vents
and chimneys and the sound of it all -- the hissing, the clanging,
the rumbling, the shrieking -- comes faintly, muted by the falling
snow.
A huge sheet of flame roars two stories high as pure oxygen is blowr.
into a furnace. On a stage below, a white-hot i~got is pulled fron
a "soaking pit" by a massive overhead crane. The crane comes screa::·.-
ing down a mile-long track and drops the ingot off onto the rollers.
Another ingot follows it, and another and another and another. The
ingots are huge, trembling with heat, and they come on with a terri-
• fying rumble .
We see a CAST HOUSE CREW preparing to ta_p the furncce •..;hich rises ir. ··.
a spidery network of catwalks and girders and deftly swinging across
the troughs. There are five of them, all of whom are young. ~hey
wear leather aprons, thick goggles and asbestos hoods which ex~end ~c
the waist. Warped in heat waves and glistening with sweat they see~
like figures in some hellish ballet. Since they all wear goggles i~
is hard to distinguish between them, but there are three, who are
younger, who seem to work with particular grace. These are ~;ICK,
STEVEN and MICHAEL.
Michael takes up a long steel pole and rams it through the crust
sealing the open tap hole at the base of the furnace. As the steel
pole penetrates the crust there is a tremendous explosion of white-
hot molten iron which gushes from the tap hole in a spectacu:ar
shower of sparks and pours into a deep trough in the brick floor.
Nick slams open a heavy sluice gate and the molten iron roars out
across the entire floor in a series of inter-connected channels.
This last regulated by two men, one of whom is huge. He is AXEL.
The other, STAN, who is the smallest man, watches as now the molten
iron pours through gaping holes, into brick-lined "hot metal cars"
waiting on railroad tracks below.
The heat is unbelievable, rising in waves, and as the men step back
and forth across the lethal rivers of flowing iron the shap~s of
their bodies go through sudden, spectacular visual changes -- g=owi~;
fat, growing thin, growing short, growing tall. Michael has a~out
him anair of com.rnand, even of arrogance. He is the "Turn Foreman".
FADE CREDITS:
PRIEST.
Yes.
STEVEN'S MOTHER
Are you sure everything's all
right? You wouldn't lie-to me?
PRIEST
{smiles gently)
No' I··>: .· ,:. ,
STEVE:--l' S MOTHER
How many times does a first son
get married? .•• Once.
The priest smiles again.
Steven's Mother puts her hand to her mouth and bursts into tears.
The priest gives his gentle smile again. He takes Steven's ~other,
who is openly weeping now, in his arms and comforts her.
A car lunges up t~e hill, gets about halfway and slides back. As
the car disappears, the door to one of the tilting old houses bursts
open and a group of giggling BRIDESMAIDS begins scampering across
the street. They have all been working on their dresses, which are
not completely finished, a~d they all carry ribbons and scissors
and pieces of material. It is freezing cold and as they make their
way to the other side of the slippery street they grab each other
for support. An icy wind begins blowing. One of the brides~aids
Time clocks line the walls. As a whistle screams to mark the end of
the graveyard shift thousand of steelworkers, many with their hard
hats still on, goggles pushed over the top, and all of them grimy in
thick layers of clothes and boots, begin checking out, streaming
toward acres of parked cars or heading directly for the line of small,
neon-lit bars which adjoin the mill along the entire length of a nea~-
by block on the end of Division Street. Nick, Steven and Michael are
right up in the front ranks and once they have clocked their cards
they gather together in the streaming mass of men. We see them clear-
ly for the first time: They are tall, strongly built, and there is a
melancholy about their faces now, but this can be quickly washed out
with a smile or a laugh. They are intelligent, sensitive, handsorr.e
faces, but very ethnic, very strong.
NICK
Where's Stan?
STEVEN
There's Axel!
(calls)
Hey, Axel!
Axel appears -- six and a half feet tall, huge and strong-musc~ed,
· but with a natural smile like an angel and a stomach as beamy as a
coal barge -- changes course and plows across the river of depart~ng
steelwo.!'kers.
AXEL
How you feeling, Steven?
STEVEN
I feel okay.
· AXEL
(poker faced)
You feelin' hot?
5.
NICK
( (laughs, wraps an
'- ..
arm around Steven).
Watch out, Axel. We'll be calling
him "Old Fire Balls" after tonight ...
AXEL
Fuckin' A.
MICHAEL
There's Stan!
OTHERS
(calling)
Stan! Over here! Stan!
MICHAEL
Get him, Axel. Get Stan!
AXEL
I'll get him.
Axel wades back into the stream of steelworkers, grabs Stan and they
all push out together.
STEVEN
Lookit that! I never saw any-
thing like that before ... What
the hell is it?
MICHAEL
Sun dogs. Holy shit ... sun dogs!
Everyone looks at Michael, then back up at the sky. Around the hazed
winter sun is an enormous, perfect halo. At four equidistant points
around the outer edge of the halo .are four shimmering, faintly glow-
ing disks, each one of which is a miniature reflection of the sun it-
self.
AXEL
What does it mean?
MICHAEL
It means a blessing on the
- hunters sent · by the Great Wolf
to his children.
6.
r What the
STAN
fuck are you talking
about?
MICHAEL
It's an old Indian thing.
STAN
(half-believing)
You're full of shit.
MICHAEL
Would I shit about a thing like
that?
STAN
Mike, there's sometimes nobody
but a doctor can understand you.
MICHAEL
It's an omen. Jesus, could we
have ourselves one great fuckin'
hunting trip tonight!
NICK
Goddamn, Mike, I don't know where
the hell you pick up all this
shit.
STEVEN
Hey, wait a minute, Mike. What
are you ... ? Are you thinking
about going deer huntin'?
The others nod 'no', shruq. They are all embarrassed. Thev start
heading towards Michael's car. A battered old shark-finned- '59
· Caddy Coupe de Ville.
STEVEN {cont)
Not tonight! I'm getting married
tonight! You fuckin' guys would
go up deer hunting tonight?
STAN
Hey. First we'd get you legal.
Tuck you in bed with Angela. I
mean, what the hell is wrong with
that?
(to the others)
Right? Am I ~ight?
AXEL
Fuckin' A.
7.
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STE"vEN
(envious)
You guys are crazy. You know
that? I ~ean, you guys ire
fuckin' nuts!
STAN
You're getting married ... and
we're nuts!
NICK
(arm around Steven)
It's all right. Hey, it's all
right. We'll be right here, right
with you. All of us.
(looks at the
others)
Won't we? Right? Am I right?
MICHAEL
Right.
AXEL
Fuckin' A.
NICK
(with a laugh)
C'mon. C'mon, you guys! I'm
buying the first round this
morning.
They all come through the swirling snow to Michael's old Cadillac,
- all with their arms around Stev~n, laughing a~d jokins, punching
each other, but it's obvious they care about each other. They care.
STAN
Hey, Steven, any help you might
need tonight--
STEVEN
(coldly)
Sometimes your sense of humor
ain't funny, Stanley!
NICK
C'mon, Steven--
MICHAEL
I
Willing fingers--
'-·
STAN
Extra lips .•.
8.
AXEL
Fuckin' A!
NICK
(sardonic)
You're a regular poet, Axel.
AXEL
I couldn't agree with you more!
Plastered to the wall just above the arched stage are three large
blow-ups of Nick, Steven and Michael. The blow-ups are high school
vintage photos, patriotically edged with red, white and blue bunting.
Above them is a caption: SERVING GOD AND COUNTRY PROUDLY.
As TWO OLD MEN on high ladders gingerly hold the bunting with trembli~s
hands, TWO v-iWl VETS on the floor look up at them, their ey,es peering
up intently behind thick corrective glasses. The first vet has a sin-
gle lens blacked out.
VET 1
Up I would say ... What would you
say?
VET 2
Up.
VET l
(signals)
Up closer to Steven's picture!
The old men on the ladders adjust the bunting closer to Steven's
picture. The two WWl vets on the floor study it.
VET 2
Down a bit I wou1d say ... What
would you say?
.VET 1
Down.
VET 2
(signals)
Down a bit.
9.
r Suddenly
all
there is a comr.'.otion.
rush to the door as the older
The women who are setting
women come in with the wedc~~cr cake.
the ~ables
The older women are half-frozen and as they move toward the ta~ie in
the middle of the room t~c cake receives a great chor ~:s o f o~ ~• s a~~
ahh's. Suddenly the oldest woman collacses. Evervc~e ~~shes ~o her
aid, seats her in a chair and rubs her feet and ha;cis. Someo ~e comes
up with a large glass of wine. The oldest woman takes the glass,
tosses it off in one swallow and gives a great, ear-s?litting grin.
Nick, Steven, Michael, Stan and Axel are all laughing. Michael is
at the wheel. The wipers have made two broad arcs in the dirt on the
windshield.
The Caddy bangs over gaping potholes heading straight for the ~ain
gate which opens onto the narrow end of Division Street where it
curves sharply under a railroad trestle. Obviously the caution sign
is not going to be observed.
r 13. EXT. DIVISION STREET - EARLY MORNING
- Michael
trailer
the right
careens through
rig comes barrelling
and swings
the gate and just as he does so a huge
out of the underpass
wide to avoid him ...
on his blinc
tracto~
side tc
AXEL
Stand on it, Mike!
STAN
(to Axel)
You'd never do it.
AXEL
(threateningly)
Are you accusin' me?
MICHAEL
(shouting)
Shut the hell up! I'm trying
to concentrate!
ALL
Go, Mike! Stand on it, babe!
,... ough room for both vehicles on the same narrow stretch of road.
\-. Nick, who has been slar..::-,ed against i:he windo..,, on the t=uck sid0, is
studying the second hand on his watch . .The others are all hollering
at the truck and swearing. Michael half l~ans back against the seat,
eye~ on the road.
MICHAEL
How we doing?
NICK
Never happen! You can't rnake
it!
OVer this last, Nick pulls out his pick-up truck registration and
throws over to Michael.
MICHAEL
What's that for?
NICK
Your Caddy against my pick-up
truck.
MICW\EL
(all concentration)
Today your lucky day?
NICK
It's always my lucky day ...
AXEL
Fuckin' A!
The angry blaring of the truck's air horn echoing in the air around
them fades. Thro~gh the window of the car we see Axel, one eye still
on the disappearing truck, his fist thrust forward in a victory salute.
A loud cheer goes up ... Michael hands Nick back his registration, gives
his spare smile.
MICHAEL
·1 1 d be taking advantage of you--
a million to one shot even money
against a sure thing.
l0A.
,,.. NICX
There is no such thing as a
sure thing.
16. INT. STEVEN'S MOTHER'S IIOUSE - BEDROOM - EARLY MORNING
A plump, country-pretty girl with a solemn, round face and big brown
eyes, leans forwa.?:"d into a mirror. She is At,GEL.A, Steven's b=:.ce-to-
be. · She is dressed in her white bridal crown and veil ·. She ste::is
back from the mirror, standing in t~e middle o: an u~faniliar =com,
looking down at her stomach. Her stomach is definitely swollen and
Angela atternps, with no success, to suck it in.
1(. ( _:,•.. --:· ANGELA ' .
:; ·' .,.-:
Oh, God!
Now, she crosses back to the mirror and stares intently at herself.
ANGELA
(sincerely)
I do.
A pause_. Angela scowls and tries it again.
ANGELA (cont)
(heartfelt)
I do.
Angela tries it a few more times. It sounds worse and worse.
ANGELA (cont)
I do, I do, I do!
Angela stares at herself again. Now she looks desperately alone and
unrelievedly forlorn. Bursting into tears she throws herself on the
bed. Someone has slipped a magazine photograph uncer the clct~es
piled in her beat-up card~oard suitcase. The photogr~?~ is face down
and as Angela pulls. it out she sees that something is writ.en en the
back:
ANGELA
(reading, slow}
"This is it~- more or less.
Love~ Mom."
Angela frowns, turns the magazine photograph over. It is a picture of
Michaelangelo's "David". Angela stares at the figure for a long, long
moment ••.
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11.
Suddenly, Angel~ bursts outside, her bridal gown and veils swirli~g
in the freczi~; wind. S~e runs u~ ~he ste~o, ric~ctv wooden stens
leading to the ~op of the hill, s~oke swirllng in th~ air above ~he
bar~ tree to~s. And bevond, the huoe stacks of the blast furnaces
belching smo~e and flam~ tower abov~ the tiny figure of the bride.
An overbearing sense of her fragility in the vastness of the bleak
industrial lancscape.
JOHN WELCH bangs out from behind the bar with an armload of beer pit-
chers. At the same moment Steven cones in with Michael, Nick, Axel
and Stan. John, who is a great coarse bear of a youth, puts down his
pitchers, wraps his arms around Steven and begins jum?ing him around
the floor, a gap-toothed grin from ear to ear. He has skin that is
rough and pebbly. Still he is, if not handsome, at least not ugly.
He is a few years older than the others, big and strong-muscled like
Axel, but after·you watch him for a moment you notice his extraordi-
narily gentle eyes.
The steelworkers, to a man, all leave their bar stools and chairs and
sw~rm around Steven, pur.ching, joking and shouting congratulations
over the noise of the football game.
NICK
(loudly)
Hey, I got a hundred bucks
says the Eagles never cross
the fifty in the next half--
and Oakland wins by 20!
STAN
(to all)
And I got an extra twenty
says the Eagles' quarterback
wears a dress!
AXEL
Fuckin' A!
He's already put down half a pitcher of beer and for no reason on
earth that he can understand, Axel is suddenly crying.
12.
Linda bites her lip. She crosses to the stove, ladles stew into a
bowl, butters bread, pours a cup of tea and puts it all on a tray.
LINDA
Daddy?
FATHER
(mumbles, still
staring at all
the cars)
Go ... fucking hell! I'll give
every car in the town a flat
tire. Every goddamned car.
I'll do it!
Linda reaches down, takes her father by the shoulder and lifts him
up. It takes some effort and the face that comes up is gray, un-
shaven and implacably bitter. Sal1va dribbles from his mouth, there
is a cut with the stitches still in it seaming his forehead, and as
Linda looks at him he begins cursing again, rolls out of bea ...
FATHER (cont)
I fucking mean what I say, girl.
All around, like a seal Like an
ocean of flat tires ...
Linda gets up and closes the -window subduing the incessant sound of
the mill. She comes back, gets down on the floor beside her father
and pushes him toward the bed. Then, hiking up her brides~aid's
(Revised 5/9/77) 13.
dress, she takes him by the shoulders a~ai~ and heaves him o~~o ·
. the cove 7let. The effort is al~ost too ~uch for her. Tears ~egin
to burn in her eyes, but when he slips back she tries again. Her
father groans, beryins to nu..'11:)le, and t.hen, when she al;:-:ost !7.2.s him
* on the bed, he suc.denly f 1 ails his a~, catches her .:·.:11 in ':.::e
face and knocks her across ~he roo~
Lirida crashes backwards over a fallen chair and s~ashes into the
wall. As she gets to her feet her father advances on her.
FATHER (cont)
Fucking bitch ... all bitches!
He swings, slaps her in the face, hard.
LINDA
Daddy ••• ! Daddy, it's me!
FATHER
Hate 'em. Fucking bitches!
I'll give 'em all flat tires ••.
Linda's father swings at her again, loses his balance and falls on
the floor. Linda stands looking at hi~, holding her jaw. She is
crying. Tears are streaming down her face.
Linda comes outside into the raw cold, down the stairway to the
street, dogs barking in the wind.
21. OMITTED
22. EXT. ALLEY BEHDiD JOHN'S BAR - EARLY MOR~aNG
Steven's mother approac~es wielding a length of t~o-by-four -- a
roar of laughter comes from inside.
* 23. INT. JOHN' s BAR - EARLY Mop_;u~G
Michael, Nick, Steven, A.4<el and John are singinq. A country-western
tune blasting on the juke box is at top volume and the smoke is
thick enough to cut with a Bowie knife. Now we see Stan, arguing
loudly with a hulking TEAMSTERover the use of t~e pool table.
Suddenly, from the back, comes a screech of female recrimination. The
door to the kitchen bursts open and Steven's Mother appears, swing-
ing her two-by-four. The steelworke:::-s take one look, gulp their
drinks, grab their hard hats and all rush for the doors, except for
Stan, who pulls his .gun on.the Teamster. The two-by-four crashing
do~m on tables and chairs. Pandernoni~~!!!
24. EXT. JOHN'S BAR - FRONT ENTRA~!CE - EARLY ~tORNING
The steelworkers all stream into the snow with Steven's mother, like
an avenging angel, close behind still swinging her two-by-four.
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1 -t •
Several ?arting blows are delivered and the howls cf complaint are
met with ang:-y com:nands to hurry a!'l:l get ~.ressed for Steven's wee.di:-.;-:.
Camera closes c~ Steven, who e~er~2s with Nick and '.!ic~ael. The col~
hits him a sobe~ing blow anc he co~es to a stop.
STEVEN
--Boy, this is it. This is
really it. I mean ... here I
go.
NICK
(laughs)
No sense getting too relaxed,
Steven.
AXEL
(stoned)
Fuckin' A.
They all share a laugh then go silent. Steven's mother hurries out
of the alley. She is crying.
STEVEN'S MOTHER
My beautiful boy! My angel ...
who is leaving his own mother
for a strange girl ... a pregnant
girl!
She throws herself in Steven's arms, sobbing.
STEVEN
Momma...
STEVEN'S MOTHER
So cold is your heart to do this
to your own mother, a person who
goes to mass twice a day all her
life?
STEVEN
Momma, we'll be all right, we'll
be right upstairs. We'll have
a family again.
STEVEN'S MOTHER
So cruel is your heart? Is your
heart so uncaring? You marry
this girl, leave me with her.
Then you run off to Vietnam?
15.
STEVEN
(a litany ,;ow)
One flight, :-ion.ma. It's one
j , flight. I'll be li~i~g right
upstairs when I co~e home.
(;>a~ses)
I love lu1gela, t!a. She l"oves
me.
STEVEN'S MOTHER
(after a silence)
Wear a scarf today.
STEVEN
I'm not wearing a scarf with
a tuxedo. You don't wear a
scarf with a tuxedo!
25. EXT. MICHAEL AND NICK'S TRAILER - DAY
The place is cramped, littered with the two bachelors' garbage, but
mostly hunting paraphernalia. A very beautiful deer head is r:1ounted
above the sink. Nick, who is half into his tuxedo, is applying water-
proofing to a pair of heavy boots. Michael smiles, sits on ~he sink
-and tries on his rented patent leather shoes.
NICK
(smiling)
You trying to look like a
prince?
MICHAEL
Whaddya' mean trying?
Nick shakes his head, laughs, continues waterproofing his hunting boot:
MICHAEL
(indicates the
waterproofing)
You should have put that on
.last night.
NICK
I know.
5/9/77) 16.
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Pause.
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·ust wait.
MICHAEL·'-..
NICK
You J1q~~~?
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uh?
MICHAEL
I just wait. For this ... it's what
I w·ai t for .• ~ the r.iountains. It's
the only place I feel free. I wait
all year.
NICK
So do I. I guess.
MICHAEL
(sharp)
You do?
NICK
(nods)
Yeah. What the hell .•. I think
about that. I think about Vietnam.
Nick abruptly takes down his rif{e and begins wiping the oil off it.
"
MICHAEL I
You really t'\dnk about it?
·,, NI K . ,/~/
Yeah. I don 7
t know ..• For Chris;t- s
ake_s, Hike, Steven's gettin<;l-~arried
.n a'-.~ouple of hours... I dont know
what the hell we're even.,aoing talking
abo'u,t hunting a last 9-cte before the
army~ Whole thing' s_,.,erazy.
'csirence - tl}en to
n~<\onne
~n ,Particular)
Fuck. "" ,
HAE!.
I'll tell/ ou one-~thing ... If I found
out my 1ife had to epd up in the moun-
,,..
t___
tains /it would be ail
(watches
right.
Nick f6r a moment)
it has to be ther~Ain
. . you know.
your mind.
NICK
One shot?
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Two is pussy .
NICK
I don't think about one shot that
much anymore, Mike.
MICHAEL
(firmly)
You have to think about one shot.
A deer should be ta~en with one
shot. One shot is what it's all
about. You try to tell people.
They won't listen.
(studies him)
You really think about Vietnam?
NICK
I don't know ... I guess I'm think-
ing about the deer ... going to
Nam maybe. I don't know. I think
about it all. Hell, I like the
trees, you know? I like the ways
the trees are in the mountains,
all the different ways the trees
are too. Sound like some asshole,
right?
MICHAEL
(with a glance
to the window)
I'll tell you something, Nick. I
wouldn't hunt with anyone but you.
I like guys with quick moves and
speed. I won't hunt with an ass-
hole.
NICK
(laughs)
Who's ~n asshole?
MICHAEL
(turns .)
Who's an asshole? Who do you
think's an asshole? They're all
assholes: I mean, they're all
great guys, for Christ's sake,
but.· •. The point is, Nick, without
you, I'd hunt alone. Seriously.
I would. That's what I'd do.
NICK
(laughs)
You're a f~cking nut. You know
that, Mike? · You're a maniac
control freak.
18.
MICHAEL
(grins)
I just d~n•t like s~rprises.
Just then, there is cursing and banqing from outside. Nick opens
th~ door. ~e see big John, and Axel, who is getting drunker by the
minute. Two ~enacing b~t corni~ figures, both in rented tuxedos that
are much too s~all. Loaded with camping gear, they are pounding on
the trunk of the Caddy, trying to get it open. Nick and Michael go
outside.
NICK
Axel! For Christ's sake ...
John! Wait a minute, you guys!
AXEL
It won't open.
MICHAEL
You gotta kick it here. Here,
Axel, not there.
AXEL
Where should I kick it? Just
show me where I should kick it.
MICHAEL
• Here. Kick it here.
Axel kicks the trunk in the inqicated spot and the lid snaps open.
AXEL
Fuckin' A!
JOHN
Too bad you're not still kick-
ing like that for the Steelers,
Axel.
(stops, catches
himself)
AXEL
(trying to ignore
this last)
I love Mike's car. Some cars
sit, you know? This car, a car
like this ... grows. I mean,
you never know, with a car like
this, where this car is going.
NICK
Yeah, it makes me feel safe.
19.
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t·
Michael
toasts
gives
them all
him a long look.
with a can of beer.
Axel, not kno~ing what the hell
Stan comes up, also in tuxedo,
to do.
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dragging a totallv disor=anized clutter of huntina :ear behind him.
But unlike the ot;ers, his tuxedo fits as if it w~r~ tailo= made
for him. His shoes polished to a high gleam, he is the perfect
picture of a band leader in the forties.
STAN
Hey, gimme a hand . ..
JOHN
Shhh! Axel .' s gonna hump Mike's
Coupe de Ville.
Axel looks around at his friends. He surveys the back of the Caddy,
then from some dim dark place in his memory he dredges up an old
litany from his days as an altar boy: blesses the car, sanctifies
his friends with a last sprinkling of beer. Then he expands his
-chest, thumps on it with both fists and yodels out a magnificent,
mile-carrying Tarzan call. As the echo of it comes back the church
bell begins ringing down the street and a group of more excited bri-
desmaids come hurrying up, slipping and sliding on the ice, the mill
below them at the bottom of the hill, as Axel throws himself onto
the Caddy, attacking it.
BRIDESMAID 1
Axel, what are you doing?
BRIDESMAID 2
Hurry up, you guys!
BRIDES~1AID 3
Who's got the carnations?
BRIDESl·1AID 4
Here. They're right here.
BRIDESMAID 1
(to Axel)
Look at you. You're a mess!
BRIDESMAID 3
Put on his carnation .
•
BRIDESMAID 1
Who's got hands? My hands are
frozen.
BRIDESMAID-2
Boy, this crummy tuxedo's been
stuck with a million flowers ...
·Where'd you get this thing? Loo~
at all the holes in the lapel!
20.
I
AXEL
\~ - (proudly)
Fuckin' A.
Nick hears someone call his name. He turns to find Linda sta~ding
beside the trailer where she can't be seen. She looks pale and very
frightened and she holds a small suitcase in her hand.
NICK
(crosses)
Linda ...
LINDA
Hi.
(forces a smile)
Nick, your shoes are soaking.
NICK
Linda, what's the matter?
Linda tries to speak, can't. She fights against it but the tears
begin to come. Nick looks around, pulls her inside the trailer.
28. INT. TRAILER - DAY
,- Nick clears a place in the clutter on the couch. Linda sits, holding
'- her suitcase in her lap.
LINDA
(with great
effort)
I was just wandering, Nick ..•
you and Michael •.• you're all
going into the army in a couple
of days with Steven ..• If I
could use this place to stay
until you guys come back, because ...
NICK
Sure. Are you kidding? For sure!
LINDA
I'd want to pay you both •.• and I
was thinking--
NICK
(kneels in
front of her)
Linda ••• hey, Linda!
LINDA
No. I would want to pay you,
Nick .. .
21.
,...
NICK
'\. . Linda, Linda ... !
LINDl.
(very small
voice, looking
into his eyes)
What?
NICK
(as if wanting
to say more)
I don't know ...
They meeet in a long look. Nothing more is said, but a lot of emotion
is going on.
Nick and Linda are holding the crowns above Steven and Angela who
stand facing each other as an overwhelmingly vibrant chorus of male
voices comes up singing the powerful and haunting Russian wedding
music.
PRIEST
"Blessed be the Kingdom ... now
and forever unto Ages and Ages ...
·tamera picks up Michael, Stan and Axel in a row opposite the brides-
maids. And then John, who is standing in the choir loft singing with
the other men. His great voice booning over the others, see~ing to
carry the entire choir. The expression in his eyes is beyond descrip-
tion, tears welling up in them now.
Michael, Stan and Axel look back up tot-1ard John, all disheveled. Their
tuxedos are suffocatingly too small and their shoes are soaking wet
from walking in the snow. Except for Stan who amazingly, despite the
weather, is as neat as a pin.
Nick catches Linda's eye and they hold each other across the interven-
ing space like two children who are amazed.
The priest hands white tapers to the bride and groom. Camera closes
slowly on the priest. The man is impressive -- gentle, soft, yet
full of power. The priest lights the tapers -- first Angela's, then
St~ven's and looks out across the assembled congregation. The
(OMITTED) 2 2.
23.
great wave of e~otion fron the singing riding over it all, so that
we have to stra~n as he continues ...
PRIES?
"For everyone that docs evil
hates the light, and does not
come to tha light, lest his
deeds will be reproved."
30. EXT. CHURCH, STA~KWEATHERSTREET - TOP OF TIIE HILL - DAY
Save for the lone figure of Linda's father, muttering, trudsing home,
the street is caserted, left to the gently falling s~ow. The music
passes through the walls cf the church. A souna that is so rich, so
vibrant, so darkly pure, that it seems enough to break the heart.
It goes beyond the great onion-shaped domes of the church, beyond the
town, beyond the massive silhouette of the steel mill lit with fire.
Michael, Nick, Stan and Axel Join - the bridesmaids to assist the priest
in the crowning of Steven and Angela. The priest has just crowned
Angela. Now Steven is crowned.
PRIEST (cont)
"The servant of God, Steven, is
crowned for the servant of God,
Angela, in the Name of the Father
and of the Son and of the Holy
Ghost. Amen."
Guiding the cou9le by their joined hands the priest leads Steven and
Angela and the other friends around the little altar. The movement
is very precise, very fornal, a circling to represent eternity. Li~da
meets Michael in a look as the music builds to an unbeara!::::ly e~otional
~limax. Michael's eyes for a long moment on Linda who ~clts hils loo~
at first, then down.
The wedding couple hurries frcm the church down the steps to the one
waiting car, Michael's old black Caddy decorated with colored paper
streamers. Everybody is cheering and shouting and as the car pulls
out toward Ler..ko VFW Ilall, Michael, Nick, Stan and Axel go running
down the street after the·car, slipping and sliding on the ice, grab-
bing up fistfuls of snow and throwing snowballs at the car. Steven
and Angela laughing, waving back at them. And beyond all of this,
the whole congregation noving towards the reception in cars, Nick's
p~ck-up truck, and on foot. John watch~s the congregation from a high
window in the choir loft and follows them with his eyes in the falling
r snow, advancing toward Lemko VFW Hall.
(~ 33 . INT. LEMKO VFW HALL - DAN'CE FLOOR - DAY
Pandemonium. The band ~s going full blast and the whirling COUPLES,
24.
young and old, are laughing. All the servers are women and they are
serving as fast as ?OSs ible -:o all the people j a::i::-,•~:l to;-e ther. Ha 1 f
the men are already quite drunk. Ke see Steven a11~ ~~gela, Ni=~ an~
Linda, Stan, Axel and Joh~. The only one o~ the grcu? no~ dancing
is Michael. Michael is drinking heavily, standirig alone on the side
of the floor chugging beer in tense, rapid-fire gul?s. We sense im-
mediately that he feels out of place, at a loss to join spontaneously
in the spirit of the party. Suddenly all the old ~o~en start clangin;
forks against their glasses. The sound gets very loud fast and every
time the sound is made Angela and Steven must kiss, as they do now. ·
Michael finishes the beer, crumples the can and starts on another.
As he picks up the second can he notices that a sad-looking GI?.L is
sitting against the wall behind him, waiting for someone to ask her
to dance. The sad-looking girl gives Michael a s~lle. Michael pre-
tends not to see and moves behind a post, stares up at his high school
picture above the stage between Nick and Steven's pictures, intensely.
Now all the old women begin singing as the wedding cake that was
carried in earlier is br~ught out, the ~iniature bride and qroo2 are
slightly askew, but still standing in the middle. Unnoticed by Steve~.
his mother and Angela eye the little figures. Both women are in rat~e:
teary condition and begin moving toward the cake. Suddenly, as the
crowd shifts, they encounter each other face to face. Smiles ar~ ex-
changed -- strained smiles, which get stretched and stretched and
stretched. Then, Angela deserts the smiling and removes th~ fisures
from the cake, gives them to Steven 1 s mother who looks down at her
sugar-coated groom and bride. Then they eye each other, burst into
tears and throw themselves in each other 1 s arms, moaning and sobbin;.
Inside the whole place is literally throbbing. The band is now play-
ing· the loudest dancing polka musi _c anyone has ever heard anyw!'lere.
The new man is stopped by John who stands at the head of a receiving
line holding a large basket full of money and envelopes. Next to hi~
is Axel.
MAN
What's this?
AXEL
For a buck you get a shot, a
cigar and a dance with the
beautiful bride.
Axel is swaying slightly but holding firmly onto a large tray with
shot glasses of whiskey each filled to the brim, and laden with
cigars. Before the man goes any further, he puts hi3 dollar in John's
25.
basket, then Axel gives him a shot and a cigar and the man gets·
· a four-s3cond turn on the dance floor with Angela, who is bearnina,
showinq her ring to everybody as sh~ whirls a~d twirls. In the ~
r:lids~ cf all t.":-::.~ ·.•: v-:...-y -=..-Pcl1c.,-, ,· '\'
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carried out. 3~dde~ly, the band s~o~s c~~d, anc t~e ba~d leader
addresses the c=o~d at a shout, without t~e aid of a microphone.
BANDLE,\DER
Quiet! Quiet please! Could
I have your attention ?lease!
Angela and Steven would like
to welcome you and introduce
you to their bridal party,
and especially to Nick and
Michael who are also going to
Vietnam with Steven to proudly
serve their country!
The old vets put their hats over their hearts. Then the old women
begin banging on the glasses agair. and Steven and Angela kiss once
more. Then the whole bridal party switches partners and as the
music starts up again they dance. Michael is now going to have to
dance with Nick's girl, Linda, but his ~anner as he takes ~er ha~d,
is forced. Nick shoves them off onto the dance floor together. He
passes John. John stops him. There is an awkward moment.
JOHN
(in a low, very
soft voice)
If it wasn't for my accident,
I'd be going with you guys,
Nick.
They meet .in a long look. Nick is touched. He puts his arm around
John and hugs him, not knowing what the hell to do. The crowd is
loud with excitement. ·
As we watch Michael dancing with Linda, they seem removed from the
rest. They look at each other - she breathing hard, he in controlled
desire, as if they were separate, alone.
MICHAEL ,
I'm not the. greatest dancer.
LINDA
You're doing·fine.
MICHAEL
(after an uncomfortable
moment and with great
solicitude)
Would you like a beer?
26.
( LINDA
'·- Sure.
(puzzled)
MICHAEL
What kind of beer would you like?
LINDA
(laughing)
I don't know, Michael. I don't
really care. Beer is beer.
MICHAEL
I'll get you a Miller's. Miller's
High Life. That's the best there is.
Michael takes off. Linda sits down at a table shakir.g her head in
puzzlement as Michael goes to the cooler to get a Miller's. He gropes
around in the tub, finds one and pops the tab. Suddenly he notices
that Nick has crossed to the sad-looking girl by the wall. He has
stopped in front of her and is asking her something. The sad-looking
girl gives a blush, gets out of her chair and Nick takes her in his
arms and begins to dance. The sad-looking girl looks transforraed.
She begins chattering and laughing just like the others.
Michael crosses back to Linda and gives her the Miller's. As he pull~
up a chair to sit down beside her he st~~bles and nearly loses his
balance., and for the first time we notice he is very, very drunk, and
it surprises us.
MICHAEL
Sorry.
LINDA
(laughs)
It's okay, Michael. It's a
wedding. You're supposed to
let go .•. have fun, you know--
Nick swings by with the sad-looking girl and makes a dramatic flashy
turn, smiles as they go by.
MICHAEL
(catching L'inda' s
expression)
I guess you really like Nick
a lot •.•
LINDA
(nods)
Yes.
.
• ..
36. INT. ENTRANCE HALL - NIGHT
The rack is s ti 11 more j an:ned with wet, soggy coats. 'icung c:'J:..:?les,
squeezed furtively between tte coats neck passionat~ l y. 7he =acks
qu~ver and shake and the music is now playing sweet and low, ~ut
somehow still manages to sound hectic.
The front door comes open and a young U.S. Army S?ecial Forces
SERGEANT steps into the darkened hallway. The nan ~ears his dress
green uniform and beret. On his chest is a row of battle ribtons
and his jump boots are mirror-polished. The Sergeant gives a slight
shake of his head and moves toward the bar area.
Axel suddenly gives his Tarzan cry, picks the bridesmaid who fixed
his carnation off her feet and marches around holding her above his
head. She had been cutting ribbons from presents and still has the
scissors in her hand when he sweeps her up into the air.
BRIDESt•L?,,ID 2
Axel, what are you doing ... !
Axel! You don't put me down,
I'll stab you with this scissors!
AXEL
I'm gonna kiss you. You gotta
fuck ~r fight!
Meanwhile Stan and John are standing together. Stan is burning
because his girl is dancing with someone else.
STAN
Do you know what that son of
·a bitch is doing? That bastard
is squeezing her ass!
JOHN
It's only a wedding, Stanley.
STAN
What do y~u mean, only a wedding?
The guy is actually .. . There! He
did it again! Johnny, I'm gonna
go get ~y gun out of my coat.
I'll kill hirr.! I'm gonna kill
him right now!
28.
Instead, Stan suddenly marches up ar.c ta?s the man on the shoulder.
The man releases Stan's ~irl. The =irl waits, cne h~~d on her hi?,
and abru?tly ~~~~ decks ~er with 3 0ic~ed left hook, %necking he=
flat on her ass. Stan ~s hOf?i~g ~2 and ao~~, shou~i~~ no~. The
man is getti~g ~~e hell out of there fast. Now, Stan pats his still
neat hair once again, ~aking certain every strand is in place.
Nick, Steven an1 Michael are standing together, looking at the younq
veteran sergeant with as much awe and respect as they can fuanage in
their condition.
MICHAEL
That guy just came back.
NICK
Yeah.
MICHAEL
He looks like a good killer.
See that ribbon on the left?
That's Quan Son.
Michael gestures with his head. Nick and Steven cross with him to
the sergeant.
MICHAEL
We, ah •.. we're going airborne
too.
The sergeant looks at them and delivers a big, blank smile.
SERGEANT
Fuckit!
MICHAEL
What?
MICHAEL (cont)
(to Nick)
What'd he say?
NICK
Fuckit.
MICHAEL
Fuckit?
NICK
Fuckit.
29.
MICHAEL
That's what I thought he said.
Steven nods.
NICK
(clears his
throat)
Uh ... well, maybe you could
tell us how it is over there?
SERGEANT
Fuckit.
MICHAEL
(to sergeant)
Yeah, well, thanks a lot.
SERGEANT
Don't mention it.
They turn away and then, when they are out of earshot, they all break
up, howling. Axel comes up, pouring sweat, his jacket starting to
split down the back.
AXEL
Who the hell is he?
MICHAEL
Who the hell knows!
AXEL
Is he from anywhere around
here?
MICHAEL.
Hell no!
AXEL
Well, where's he from?
MICHAEL
(almost soberly)
Maybe he's lost.
AXEL
Fuckin' A!
30.
The guests have formed all around the staae. Eve=yone is pretty
drunk and they are all arwed with streamers and ~a-:2 rice. As c=
Steven and Angela appear on ~r.e stage there is a -::-e:a~ rov, ,":.: c:!eer.
Ange la throws her bouquet - Linda catches it, then t.::e DRli'.·'..':::R
strikes up a roll, followed by the other musicians. ShowerGd with
streamers, rice, advice and encouragement, Steven .:ir:d :\ngela walk
toward the front edge where Steven's mother carefully brings out t~o
wine glasses on one stern.
Steven and Angela begin to drink down the wine sirnultan~ously. There
is a tremendous cheer. Nick turns to Linda and says abruptly, as if
he wanted to say something else:
NICK
Will you marry me?
LIND/\
, .. Okay.
(after
long
a long,
moment)
L,
NICl~
What?
NICK (cont)
You would? What I mean is, if
we get back from ... I mean, when
we get back. I don't know what
the hell I mean.
LINDI\
I guess what goes through your
mind comes out your mouth.
Linda's lip begins to tremble. Tears stand in her eyes and she tries
to give a little nod of her head.
NICK
Really?
LIND/\
Really!
Nick stares at her. He can still hardly believe she said ~hat she
just said.
3 Oll..
NICK
r Terrific ... !
LINDI\
It is te.!:"rific.
LINDA
{eyes closed,
loving hi;;,)
I don't know what we've been
waiting for!
NICK
I don't know. I don't know
either!
John, Axel and Michael are standing by the door. Their badly fitted
rented tuxedos are stained and torn. Their carnations are squas~ed
and their clip-en bow ties are either missing entirely or dangling
from the open collars of their shirts, all still amazingly guzzling
beer. Stan. looks the best, same as when he walked in; still not a
hair out of place. He turns to Michael, winks at him, grinning ...
MICHi.EL
(looking at Angela)
Bullshit! That's bullshit!
STAN
You wanna bet?
MICHAEL
That's bullshit. You're fulla
bullshit.
STAN
How much? How much do you wanna
bet? Put your money where your
mouth is.
MICHAEL
Go fuck your~elf, Stan.
Steven and Angela struggle into the Caddy to more hollering and
applauding and a shower of ·streamers an~- rice. Angela is helped
31.
in by John. Axel and Nick throw their ar~s around Steven and help
him around to the drive~•s seat. The=e is an awcso~e collection of
tin cans tied to the back of the Caddy.
NICK
Don't worry what Stan says ...
STEVEN
Right.
NICK
Just forget that. Forget
what Stan says. He's got a
big mouth.
STEVEN
(low to Nick)
I never really done it to
Angela, Nicky .•.
NICK
Great. That's great.
,.. That's
life,
my one
Nick ...
STEVEN
true secret in
L NICK
(covering his
astonishment)
It's nothing. It's nothing.
Just ... forget about it.
STEVEN
What about having a kid!
STEVEN
Hang loose?.
NICK
Just hang loose!
Nick just gives Steven a big hug. Steven slides in the car.
32.
NICK
Hey, don't look so sad. Don't
worry. See you ~onday on the
train.
STEVEN
Right. See you Monday.
STEVEN
All set, babe?
Angela nods. Steven puts the car into gear and starts slowly off.
Fists pound on the car. Rice and streamers shower down. Suddenly,
through the front windshield, Michael appears, stark naked, running
in front of the car with colored paper streamers floating out from
his upraised right hand. For a split second Steven cannot believe
what he is seeing. He throws a look at Angela. Angela covers her
mouth in amazement and quickly shifts the hand to the horn.
AXEL
(watching in a
stupor, almost
as if to himself)
Fuckin' A ...
Nick, Axel, Stan and John pound up the steep street behind the Caddy.
Axel carrying Michael's clothes, slipping and sliding in the slush,
goes ass over tea kettle, scattering the clothes all over the street.
ALL
Look at that! Fuckin' maniac!
AXEL
(shouting)
Fuckin' A!
The road forks, one road going high to a beat-up basketball court on
a cliff overlooking the steel mill, the other descending to Steven's
mother's house and to the mill below. Michael runs up the incline
toward the basketball court while the Caddy goes straight down and
disappears around the bend toward Steven's mother•~ house.
33.
Michael slips under one of the baskets and comes to a sliding stop
on the slushy :reezing qround, remains motionless, looking out across
to the blast f~rr.aces going in t~e mill as Nick approaches. The
night is brilliantly c~ear and the fires :rom the furnaces light up
the sky with an eerie glow. And all over the neighborhood dogs are
yapping and howling.
Nick comes to a sliding stop a few feet away from the basket. The
dogs really going at it now.
NICK
Michael?
Michael rolls over, turns. His face is almost blue with a strange,
distant look. He gives Nick an almost feral grin.
MICHAEL
I must be out of my fucking
mind. At my age ... It's all
moving too fast. You think
we'll ever come back?
NICK
(startled;
frightened)
From Nam?
MICHAEL
Yeah.
Nick helps lift Michael up beside him. He removes his tux ja-~: ~·":.
and wraps it around Michael. Both of them huddled there togeth~r
in the moonlight under the basket, the glow of the blast furnace
flickering steadily. Neither of them knows what the hell to say.
NICK
(abruptly)
You know something? The whole
thing is·right here. I love
this fuckin' place ... I know
that sounds crazy, but if any-
thing happens, Mike, don't
leave me over there. I mean,
don't leave me ... You gotta
promise, MH:e.
MICHAEL
(shivering;
half-lai;ghing)
Nick--
34.
( NICK
You gotta promise, definitely.
MICHAEL
Hey, you got it, pal!
Nick lets out his breath ... It is as if some great weight had been
pressing on him.
MICHAEL
(with a laugh)
Let's go huntin' tonight. Now.
I mean, let's keep moving until
we have to get on that train to
the reception center at Dix ...
Nick, Michael, Stan, Axel and John, all of them still in their rented
tuxedos and drunk out of their minds, are ja~~ed in the car bet~een
knapsacks, sleeping bags, huge piles of six-packs of beer and deer
rifle~. Nick and Michael start singing the "Screaming Eagles Air-
borne Song"
STAN
What the hell is that?
JOHN
The Screaming Eagles Airborne
Song.
STAN
Screaming assholes!
AXEL
Fuckin' A! .
(starts singing in
a high sweet voice)
Let me be free! Let me be free!
If ... you ... will let me be free
..• You'll always be happy ... with
me-e-e-e!
35.
:·
I
·•. John looks at Axel, smiles gently.
JOHN
(making a trum-
pet sound)
Wa-wa-wa! ... Waaaaa!
~-r
,_,.,~,.~ ; ..·;·
//~x~;MOUNTA~N -' RO~D.. - DAWN . /
.,. '
-·.
t/ ,•,-The Caddy
. snow_.t-~. . _comes blasting by trailing _a great rooster t~il oz fresh
./ ,/ v· ~-__.,,.,.. t ..,
S1
<t:. .t;:./ ~ -""·~·.-:.;.,-?.'-:.-;:kis hunched over the wheel, his eyes gone completely glassy.
;,--/ i,½c~Ql and John are on the nod, while Axel and Stan, both half-aslee~
are having a lead-voiced conversation hazed by too much alcohol.
AXEL
Angela fucked you?
STAN
She fucked me at the New Year's
eve party in Steve's car out in
the garage.
AXEL
(solemnly)
She fucked me too.
STAN
(appalled)
She fucked you?
AXEL
Fuckin' A.
There is a long gloomy · pause. They both struggle to keep their eyes
open.
STAN
(wonderingly)
Steve don't know she fucked
us both ...
AXEL
,,.. Yeah.
Maybe it's
STAN
one of our · kids ...
I~
u Fucking women ... all alike.
36.
AXEL
(shakes
h.is heaj)
Fuck.in' A.
Everyone in the car comes awake ten bleary eyes staring out throuqh
the windshield.
STAN
Holy shit!
50. EXT. CADDY - ~ p fl, (
Stan, Axel, Nick and John pile out, grabbing up their rifles. Stan
immediately slips and falls down. Michael remains right where he
,- is, unmoved, watching the others and he is beginning to sober up now.
I
\,_ STAN
Son of a bitch! Get him!
For Christ's sake, somebody
get him!
JOHN
Who's got the ammo?
AXEL
Ammo! Get ammo!
STAN
~•11 get it! Where is it?
JOHN
It's in the trunk!
AXEL
It is not!
·JOHN
It's in the trunk, Axel! It's
in the trunkl I'm telling you,
it's in the trunk!
'--
Stan, Axel and John rush around to the trunk. Axel begins kicking
it. He slips, falls on his ass, Stan screaming at him.
37.
, l\XEL
"· Stanley,
shit
you never
anyway!
could hit
Pushing and shoving each other, Stan, Axel and John ransack the trunk
like madmen, scrambling for weapons.
Michael gives tJick a sidelong glance, t~en slips out of the car with
his rifle. He looks at the others with an expression o: absolute dis-
gust -- and t!1en he looks at the deer. The deer is h-Y-?r"i"'...i zec. j ;-. _... he
~e-o-f-1'-±gtrt, still watching. If anything, it ::as edged closer an.::
his expression of polite curiosity throws rtichael into a blind rage.
MICHJ\EL
Get out of here, damn you!
Go home! ••• Scat! ... Shoo!
Michael, whose rifle is fully ready, sla~s a shell into the chamber
and lets off a shot above the deer. Then, as it scatters in panic:
MICHAEL (cont)
Corne on, scat! Shoo! Get
lost!
At this raowent the others all crowd around; watch him watching the
deer disappearing in the snow; they all think he is drunk and has
lost the point of the hunting trip.
oru-r'i'to------------
The sky is co3.4 -- there is the pink glow of first. 'ght over the
rim of the hills -- with low, dark wind-driven c~·ds. Ca;"'.'\era tilts
down and we see the addy cor,,.ing up a narrow r c. flanked .by preci-
pitous, heavily foresE ridges on both side . \
i
I
I Watch
\
STAN
\I ounds Nick on
\ the shoulder)
\
I
H e! This is it! This is
\_ he place we stopped ~t last
' year.
\
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,_ .....
c· .
..
38 •
.JOHN
·---. It's up uheac, Stan.
STAN
There's no way that's it!
STAN (cont)
This is not it! Definitely!
This is not it, they changed
it somehow.
MICHAEL
Why the hell should this be
different from anything else?
AXEL
(ridintj over Michael)
You're full of shit, Stanley!
STAN
Who'd you say was full of shit?
AXEL
You're full of shit. You're
always full of shit!
- They lock in a glare for a moment. Finally, Stan avo!ds Axel's eyes.
STAN
Holy shit, I'm starving!
AXEL
Fuckin' A.
AXEL
Let me ask you a question, Nicky.
How cone I never see you eat any-
thing?
39.
,...
I,
NICK
Sometimes I like tc starve
myself -- keeps the fear up.
AXEL
It ain't natural. What do
you say, John?
JOHN
(as Axel goes
for his baloney)
That's mine!
AXEL
You want it?
JOHN
Damn right!
AXEL
Gimme a Twinkie, Mike.
MICHAEL
Here.
Axel tears off the wrapper, dips it in the mustard and glomps it
down.
JOHN
(disbelievingly)
That's mustard! ·
AXEL
(mouth jam-
med full)
What? •
JOHN
You just put mustard on your
twinkie!
AXEL
(nods)
You sound like a traffic cop!
Gimme another beer.
STAN
(pointing to the
C •Definitely!
location
the road)
beside
AXEL
(unrelentingly)
You can't find your own ass
with two hands!
STAN
(·shifting
subject)
Jesus, it's freezing!
AXEL
Fuckin' A.
JOHN
(abruptly;
remembering)
You know, we forgot to make
a toast to Steven and Angela ...
They all meet in a look, stand silently for a moment frozen in tab-
leau in their crushed rented tuxedos at the side of the Caddy in the
snow, the icy wind beating at their clothes, the dark moun~ains rear-
ing themselves over them, the air filled only with the sound of wind.
Then they raise their beer cans, drink.
After·a moment of silence, Axel kicks the trunk oepn and they all be-
gin taking stuff out.
Michael strips down right where he stands, and begins putting on his
hunting clothes.
Axel and Stan grab their own gear and fc , l low the exarnplP. of :ack an~
.. John, who are changing on the corner of ·:':1c seats.
Hunting gear is hanging all over the fe~~crs, bumpers, etc. They are
all fumbling, struggling, half-naked, half-insane figures ...
JOHN
Whee-uu!
NICK•
Jesus! It's reallv freezing,
Mike!
AXEL
Fuckin' A!
•STAN
You know, you got a really
terrific vocabulary, Axel.
41.
r
AXEL
\ ... Fuckin' A!
STAN
(shakes his head,
then, to Michael)
Mikey, hey Mikey, you got any
extra thermal socks?
Michael who is crouched down studying the hillside, looks over ...
STA?l (cont)
(rummaging around in
the mess of sorry-
looking things he
has brought}
Never mind, Mike. Never mind.
I got 'em •.. Where the hell are
my boots? Anyone · see my boots?
••• Who the hell took my boots!
Dickhead!
sleeping bags,
OTHERS
Watch it!
etc.
l ... STAN
Somebody took my boots ... I
bought 'em special. I know
I brought my special boots.
Stan tears into the trunk again, comes up with nothing and is shiver-
ing now. It is very cold.
STAN (cont)
All right. All right, you
guys. Whoever took my boots
I want 'em back!
Michael, Nick, Axel and John stand by the roadside ~hile Stan is
still half in his tuxedo and patent leat~er dress shoes, draped only
in a gigantic red goose down vest that could only have come from
Axel. They have all seen this a million times, look at each other
and shake their heads. Michael's knapsack lies on the ground in
front of him and we can see that it contains an extra pair of Vibra~-
soled mountain boots.
AXEL (over)
I got a boot· for you, Stan.
(starts a move
as if to kick)
Eere •.. right up your ass!
42.
' ...
. STAN
(dancing c:,:ay
from Axel's
lethal kick)
Hey, Mikey, lemme borrow your
spares, your extra pair.
MICHAEL
No.
STAN
(both hands
in the air)
No?
MICHAEL
No.
The word hangs there in the air for a moment. There is a sudden
tension.
STAN
What do you mean, no?
MICHAEL
What I mean by no, Stan, is
no.
STAN
Some fuckin' friend ... You're
some fuckin' friend, Mike!
MICHAEL
You gotta learn, Stan. Every
goddar:-.ned year you come up here
with your head up your ass--
AXEL
(interjecting)
Maybe the view looks better to
him fro~ up there!
(laughs)
MICHAEL
(continuing
over Axel)
You got no jacket, you got no
pants, you got no knife and you
got no boots. All you got is
that stupid pistol you carry
around like some wise guy cop.
You think t~at's always gonna
take care of you! That's what
you always think!
4 3.
AXEL
What the hell, Mike, give him
the boots.
MICHAEL
No. No boots. No nothin' ...
No more.
STAN
You're a fuckin' bastard, Mike.
You know that? You're a miser-
able fucking selfish bastard!
MICHAEL
(snapping it out,
jabbing his finger
at the ground)
This is this, Stan. This isn't
something else. This is this!
This time you're on your cwn.
STAN
I fixed you up a million ti-mes,
Mike!
(to the others)
I fixed him up a million times!
I don't know how many times I
fixed him up with girls, and
nothing ever happens ... Zero!
(to Michael)
The trouble with you, Mike, no
one ever knows what the hell
you' re talking about! "This is
this"? What does all that bull-
shit mean, "this is this"?
(turnsto""""°the others
for moral support)
I mean, is that.some faggot-
sounding bullshit he's running
down, or is that some faggot-
sounding bullshit! And if it
isn't, what the hell is it?
(to Michael)
You know what I think? There's
times I swear I think you're a
goddamn faggot!
.JOHN
Hey, you guys--
(Revised 5/9/77) 44.
STA."1
( (hopping-mad now)
·. Last week! Last week he coulda
had that new red-headed waitrcs3
at the 3owlac:::-o:::c ~ iie coulda ::2.d
it knocked! And look what he did.
I mean, look wha~ he fuckin' did!
Nothin'! That's what!
JOH~
Stan! Shut the hell up!
This last from John, strona, and it surorises us. Axel just throws
up his hands in a comical ;ay. But Michael's stare at Stan is un-
wavering and it unnerves the others. Nick is watching Michael very
intensely.
JOHN {cont)
I'll give you my boots. I'll
stay in the car and listen to
the radio.
MICHAEL
I said no.
Michael says this last with a hardness we haven't seen him exhibit
with his friends before. John looks at Axel, ~ho is riqht be~ind
him, and they both back away. Stan, who is standing di~ectly op-
posite Michael, begins to tremble. I!is mouth co~es open, closes
. and comes open again. His hand begins moving in his jacket pocket,
stops. Michael's face is grave. Suddenly, ;:~ick ste;,s fon:ard --
he looks long and hard at Michael, crosses to t~e kna?sacl~, takes
out Michael's extra pair of boots, walks over to Stan and throws
them on the road. Stan laughs. He is the only one who does.
55. OMITTED
56. OMITTED
Camera turns as Michael and Nick come in. They both stare at
the men lying in sleeping bags on rusted becsprings on either
side of the broken door • . The wind gusts and moans.
MIClll\.EL
~ - Tomorrow I'll give Stan my
I
boots. I'll take him out
· with me·.
NICK
You'? Hunt with Stan?
MICHAEL
Yeah ••• I mean, he doesn't know
anything about anything!
The cabin shudders and then there is a sudden lull •
.
59. EXT. HIGHliAY OFF-RAMP - NIGHT
Returning weekend traffic is heavy, and unending flow of cars,
a river of headlights suspended on the curved concrete trestle
which seems to float in thin air. Behind is the steel mill,
the furnaces blowing heavy smoke and ablaze with fire.
''
Nick's Caddy appears, horn blaring, weaving through the traffic.
I~
The car sits low. · Trussed to the hood is the carcass of the
magnificent deer.· Rope-ends flutter and bang in the wind. The
car shudders and thuds. Inside, grinning, Nick, Michael, Stan,
Axel and John are all singing, happy.
,_..
·---- ~
46.
r 60. EXT . . DIVISION STREET - ?-;IGHT
r The Caddy appears, swerving through the underpass onto Division St.
·_,,., past the town, t ::cn dow::: cowards St~ven' s house, tires spinning.
AXEL
(shouting)
Hey, Steve, wha'd'ya say!
Piece o'fuckin' .cake!
JOHN
{to all)
Hey, let's go have a nightcap
at my place.
ALL
Absolutely!
As the Caddy comes under the railroad trestle the mill appears behind
it, seeming to loom up~ard under the night-dark sky. A sign on the
door of the ba= proclaims: Closed: Gone Deer Hun~inc.
Camera holds as the Caddy comes towards it. The headlights blaze
white, like huge hungry stars, and the eyes of the be~utiful dead
deer on the hood glitter gold and green and red.
Axel leans out the window and gives his Tarzan call. It seems to
echo as if coming from far away ..•
The men all sitting in different positions around the room, suddenly
silent, unmoving. Outside the bar the sound of the mill comes clearly
through. Michael's attention has been riveted toward the sound. The~
the men look at each ot~er for a moment. Abruptly, John turns to the
.old upright piano against the wall opposite the bar. He sits down ar.c
begins to play Chopin. It is so unexpected, so beautiful, so sensi-
tive, that it startles and moves us. John's face is grave and proud
in the dusty light. Sudcenly from outside beyond the wall cones the
sound of an approaching train. It passes like a tornado, shaking the
whole building, rattling the glasses on the shelves. The Chopin con-
tinuing through it all. Michael gives Nick his spare, closed-mouthed
smile, but the . music reaches him too, as now we
CUT TO:
47.
,...
t. 65. OMITTED
68. OMITTED
The dead woman and baby lie in the dust. A dog tries to play with
the baby. A V.C. soldier, who took a Rolex watch from one of the
dead Rangers, squats nearby, winding it.
76. OMITTED
Michael stands alone with his flamethrower, like the angel with the
flaming sword, surrounded by clouds of billowing black smoke. There
is no sound but the dying rush of heated air and the faint crackle
-of flames. Michael' -s clothes are close to burning. Flames are lick-
ing up his trouser legs. He looks like a blackened scarecro~, or a
standing dead man.
,. T.he cho?:=ier just touc!--.es the fie J.d for secor1ds, .:1o=c R~ngers rush ou '.:.,
movina throuqh the c=ass flutterina fic=cclv in the =otor ~ash. The
chopp;r hauling ass.straight the h ; ll out o~ there.
LIEUTENJ\~T
What the hell are you doing
· here?
.MICHAEL
(numb)
Fuckit ...
LIEUTENAtlT
Move it out, mudfuckers! Move
it out!
The Lieutenant heads down the line. Hick stares at l-~icha.el, shrugs,
in evidence that he does not recognize his friend. As Steven passes,
he looks at Michael close up and fccuses his eyes for a moment, emits
a little gasp of surprise.
STEVEN
Michael ... ? Jesus, Michael!
NICK
Michael!
Suddenly a burst of sharp flat sound rings out. The Lieutenant goes
down and suddenly the Ranger Squad is caught in a ~urderous ambush.
Mortars rain out of the distant trees . .Michael, Nick and Steven dive
for the ground.
Out of the smoking high grass soldiers begin to appear, more and more
of them, swarming out in scores.
78. EXT. RIVER, SOMEWHEREIN THE NEARBY MOUNTAINS - HEAVY RAIN - DAY - 197:
,. that in the sand beach a shallow oit has been dug and fitted with
bamboo gratings held down b'l ston~s, and covered wit~ fishi~g nets.
''
...
-- The river is run~inq high a;c the pit is filling wi~h ~rater to with-
in a foot of the bamboo gratings. In the pit are about a half-doze~
men -- SOUTH VIET~·:1'"1..:·1ESE and so::1e of the A:-:ERICAN R.:"'\~iGERS. Their
hands grip the gratings and their eyes arc hollow. Other than an
occasional groan, there is only the sound of the falling rain. Sud-
denly --
A V.C. soldier trudaes out of the fishincr hut. As he reaches the pit
he walks over the hands an<l begins urina~i~g on the bamboo gratings.
The hands disappear. As soon as one co~es back, the soldier stomps
on it.
And in the darkness under the floor boards; we see faces from a dis-
tance, peering out, unshaved, animal-like, staring up at the cracks
in the floor above them.
A cry comes from the hut. There is the thud of a rifle butt on flesh
and the cry abruptly stops.
In the middle of the hut is a tin kitchen table with a plastic top.
At opposite e~ds of the table are two chairs. A South Vietnamese
prisoner sits in one of the chairs. In t~c other chair, facing him,
is another South Vietnamese prisoner. !:ot!1 South Vietnamese pr isone.:-s
· have welts on their heads which they are ~rapping in filthy red rags,
and one of the half-dozen V.C. soldiers in the hut is scre~rning at
them to hQrry. In the middle of the table, between the South Viet-
namese prisoners, is a single-action, high-velocity magnum.revolver
with a double American eagle carved on its ivory grip.
The v.c. soldier gives one of the South Vietnamese prisoners a final
glancing blow, takes up the magnum revolver with a dramatic flourish
and loads one cartridge into the chamber. Immediat~ly the other sol-
diers begin placing bets.
51.
The betting is now completed. The V.C. in charge waves the maqnum
revolver around and calls for silence -- then, snapping shut t~e
cylinder containing the single cartridge, he points the revolver at
the ceiling and clicks through the empty chambers until the revolver
goes off with a deafening roar. A big hole blows open in the roof
and bits of thatch flutter down from the ceiling, the rain coning
through the hole now.
l.. The v.c. in charge now reloads the revolver with one cartridge again,
snaps the cylinder shut, puts the gun on the table between the South
Vietnamese, and gives it a good spin.
The revolver slows and finally comes to a stop pointing to one man.
He stares at it fer a long beat. Then he picks it up, spins the
cylinder, cocks it, puts it to his temple and pulls the trigger. The
hammer falls on an empty chamber with a loud click.
The V.C. in charge grabs the revolver, throws it back on the table,
and pushes it toward the other South Vi~tnamese priso~er. The South
Vietnamese begins shaking uncontrollably now. Fumbling horribly, he
finally manages to get the gun in his hand. He spins the cylinder,
cocks the hammer and puts it to his ter:1ple. The gun weaves around ...
The South Vietnamese closes his eyes and pulls the trigger. There
is a loud click.
The V.C. in charge quickly takes the revolver again. He spins it,
cocks it -- all in one smooth motion -- puts it to the temple of the
other South Vietnamese and pulls the trigger himself. There is an-
o.ther click. He pushes the· gun back across the table. This tir:le
the other South Vietnamese takes it up with giddy confidence. !le spins
the cylinder, cocks it, puts. it to his temple and pulls on the triggc: .
,... Michael doesn't even blink. Now the guards begin hooting and lauchir ~
(__ wiping S?Ots o~ blood fro~ their clot~es -- and ~:ic~3cl st~res ~= at
th2~, watc~es 0~ery gest~re, every movement ... like a cat, but sudden-·
ly his face splits with a smile, wi?gs ofi quickly.
82. EXT. FISHING Ei.."I' - LATER - DAY
Several bodies lie by t~e steps in the pouring rain. The bodies are
both South Vie~:1a::.ese a:1d American. Huge dark water rats are already
scurrying over them.
MICHAEL
You can do it, Steven.
Steven cannot speak at first, just keeps shaking his head negatively.
Then --
STEVEN
Oh, shit ... oh, shit. I can't
hack it .. .
MICHAEL
• Steven ...
You have
listen
to do it.
to me, Steven!
STEVEN
(in a very
small voice)
I want to go home, Michael. We
don't belong here in the jungle.
MICHAEL
Use your fucking head!
STEVEN
Oh, God. This is horrible!
MICHAEL
Listen to me, Steven. If you
don't go through with !t t~ey'll
put you in that pit. If they
put you in the pit, Steven,
you're gonna die ... you under-
stand?
53.
( STEVEN
..
-- We don't
jungle,
belong
Michael,
here,
I just
in the
wanna
go home!
MICHAEL
Hey, listen, so do I.
(Steven nods,
numbly)
Believe me, you can do this .
If we both do it, then we all
go hom~ee? You and me and
Nicky.
Steven looks down. The pistol is ending its spin and the muzzle
comes up pointing at him. He stares at the gun and tears begin to
fill his eyes. The guards begin yelling at him, urging him on and
then Michael gives him a smile of such unwavering faith that Steven
picks up the gun, fumbles the cylinder around, cocks it and puts it
to his temple. For a moment Michael and Steven look at each other.
Steven is taking his faith straight out of Michael's eyes and now
Michael gives him another encouraging nod.
Steven starts to squeeze the trigger, but at the very last instant
jerks the gun away from his head. There is an explosion and the top
of his head is horribly burned and bloodied.
Steve~ sits motionless, his jaw hanging open and his face formed in
an expression of terrible puzzlement. Then his face begins to move,
begins to twitch, as if the muscles were trying to discover a frown.
Steven looks around, a thin trickle of blood runs from his head do~n
into his eyes._ He looks back again at Michael and he begins to cry.
We can see all the youth being sucked right out of his eyes.
Suddenly, Steven is thrown out of his chair, jerked to his feet and
pushed below. A South Vietnamese is pulled up and placed opposite
Michael. The South Vietnamese is only a kid, even younger tha~
Steven, and he is trembling with terror.
84. INT./EXT. BARBED WIRE COMPOUND- HEAVY RAIN - FOLLOWING DAY
Th~ pit is about twenty feet away. Running mud and river wa~er
gurgle into it, coming out through shallo~ trenches on the cown
side. There are fewer hands tha~ the day befo=e, far fewer. Only
one pair is left and as Michael watches he sees that these hands
are struggling to keep their grip.
Suddenly one of the hands slips away. The hand comes back for a
moment, then both hands disappear under the muddy water.
Michael turns away from the pit. He looks down at Steven, then he
looks at Nick. His expression is one of exasperation, as if he had
been having a long argument.
MICHAEL
I'm telling you, Nick, it's up
to us!
NICK
-r Who do you think you are, God?
MICHAEL
What? Are you hoping? Praying?
What?
NICK
What else?
MICHAEL
I thought you were praying.
(no reply)
How bad do you want to get out
of this, Nick?
NICK
What do you _think?
MICHAEL
Then ... listen to me! We're
outta options! This is no
fucking tim~ for hoping or
praying or wishing or any
other bullshit with angel's
,... wings!
are .•.
This- is it.
And we gotta
Here we
get ouIT
~-- NICK
You're right ... okay, you're
right. You're always right!
Okay?
......-. -~ . ,,. -'
55.
,-.
I MICHAEL
\.... Get off your fu~ki~g ass and
stand up!
(grabs him)
Get off your ass, Nick!
NICK
(stands)
Okay, okay!
(he straightens
his shoulders)
What about Steven?
MICHAEL
Forget him.
NICK
What the hell are you saying?
MICHAEL
I'm saying forget Steven ...
Steven ain't gonna make it,
Nick.
NICK
MICHAEL
Look in his eyes. Nothing but
snakes running around under his
skin. He's in a dream and he
won't come out; You hear me?
NICK
Mike ...
MICHAEL
Listen, Nick! Get it through
your head or you and me are
both dead too!
A shout comes from above. The two surviving South Vietnamese whip
around in fright. Michael and Nick turn.
Through the slits in the floor we see the V.C. guards coming down
from the hut. The guards are all drinking Miller's High Life beer
again and the guard in charge is waving the pearl-handled magnum
revolver.
r
(· NICK
•'-~ What?
NICHAE!...
I'm gotta get more bullets into
that gun, Nick. It's the only
way.
NICK
More bullets in the gun?
MICHAEL
(even)
More bullets in the gun ... The
trouble is that still leaves one
of us with his hands tied up, so
that means we gotta play each.
other.
NICK
(numb)
More bullets? ... Against each
other? ... Are you crazy!!!
NICK
How many more bullets?
MICHAEL
(watching him)
Three minimum.
NICK
(flash of
panic)
No fucking way!
MICHAEL
(evenly, holding
him with his eyes)
I'll pick the moment, Nick. The
game goes on until I move. When
I start shoo~ing, go for the near-
est guard, get his gun and zap
the motherfucker!
. ~-' --•~· -· · - ~· -- ···· ·· ...
57.
NICK
I'm not ready for this!
MICHAEL
(over this last)
Whatever gun you get, you zap
the fuckers.
NICK
(shouting)
You're crazy! No way! Now you're
crazy! You're completely insane!!
The guards begin screaming orders from the stair ladder and one of
them lets off a blast of automatic rifle fire which shreds the pili~;
just alongside Nick's head. Nick looks at Michael and they watch as
the guards grab Steven and drag him out toward the pit.
As Steven emerges from under . the hut one of the guards smashes him
with his rifle butt, screaming orders. Nick and Michael make a move
and are both knocked to the ground by furious blows. When they get
to their feet they see Steven.
MICHAEL
It's up to you, Nick. Now it's
up to you.
NICK
I must be outta my mind.
•
Suddenly the guard standing beside Steven wrenches him around. We
see the pit now, close up. There are four bloated corpses floating
in the muck.
We see Steven's face, close up. He gives a little cry and tries to
turn away.
We see the guards pick Ste~en up, screaming. We see the splash as
-~. Steven hits the water and then we see him surface between the bloated
corpses, still screaming, paddling desperately and trying to find
something solid to hold him up. Then the bamboo grating crashes down
as he grabs hold.
STEVEN
(screaming)
Oh, God, there's leeches in
here!!
58.
.·-
~ - 88. EXT. COMPOUND - DAY
MICHAEL
Him against me! Him against
me!
MICHAEL (cont)
Him against me, goddamn it!
Him against me!
Michael and Nick sit facing one another across the tin kitchen table.
The guards are all grinning and even the South Vietnamese kids are
watching with grim fascination. Nick has the revolver. He is trem-
bling visibly. Already Michael has managed to draw the guards in
closer and as Nick spins the cylinder of the deadly-looki~g ffiagnum
and cocks the hammer, Michael jumps up and begins pounding on the·
table.
MICHAEL
This is it, you mothers! Now
he's going to do it! Watch!
You watch!
Nick almost loses what little control is left and his hand-begins
shaking violently.
MICHAEL (cont)
Look at him! See! This is it
and he knows it!
MICHAEL (cont)
Last chance to lose your money.
There, boys. Good-bye money!
Hurry, hurry. Here he -goes!
Nick puts the revolver against his temple and pulls the trigger.
There is a dull click.
Nick puts the revolver back on the table. His hand is shaking so
badly it falls with a clunk. Michael grabs it, spins it, sticks
it to his temple and clicks out, talking all the time.
59.
r MICHAEL
(throws the
revolver on
the table)
More! Put in more! You under-
stand more? More! More bullets!
(he mimes with
his fingers)
Three bullets! You understand
three?
MICHAEL
Terrific!
The guard in charge takes the revolver, opens the cylinder and begins
sticking in two or more cartridges. Nick is just shaking his head in
disbelief as if wondering how he got there.
MICHAEL
(for the guards'
benefit)
You or me! Now we got it!
You or me!
(he rubs his hands
and leans back in
his chair)
Now we got ourselves a real
game!
The guard in charge places the revolver on the table, spins it.·
MICHAEL
Place your bets, motherfuckers!
MICHAEL
You jokers think I'm in trouble,
right?
Michael picks up the revolver, spins the cylinder, cocks it ...
60.
~
MICHAEL (cont)
C. No way! ~ever!
(b~gins to ch~nt)
Mike is nighty ! s:.. :-:e is st::-ong !
Mike is nagic! Mike lives long!
Lemme hear it f!"'om the bench.
Come on, motherfuckers, lemme
hear it!
• Michael places the revolver to his temple ... and clicks into an empty
chamber.
MICHAEL (cont)
See! Nothing to it ...
He pushes the gun across to Nick. Then he stabs his finger at hi~,
screaming again, as if in a fit of rage.
MICHAEL (cont)
(low and fierce)
I'm gonna will us outta here!
You got an empty chamber in that
gun, Nick. Just put that empty
chamber in your mind.
Nick looks down at the revolver and picks it up. He stares at MichaeJ.
for a moment. Then he spins the cylinder, cocks the han;:::er, puts it
to his head ... . and clicks into an e~pty chamber.
Nick pushes the revolver across the table. His face is twitching but
he gives the gesture a certain flair, as if throwing back a challenge.
MICHAEL
Who's for this asshole?
(thumps his fist
on the table)
Is anyone for this asshole?
61.
MICHAEL
Who here is for ~lichael ... ?
Michael, the Archangel!
There is absol~te silence now except for the sudden drun.~ing of new
rain. It is as if the war had disappeare~, vanished. The guards
stand motionless, hardly breathing, so ca::)tivated bv Michael's per-
formance that t~ey suddenly resemble littie children.
MICHAEL (cont)
Who •.. here ... is for the Angel?
Michael begins his chant again. His voice is low, very dramatic, and
the guard in charge joins in a sing song imitation of Michael's words.
MICHAEL (cont)
The Angel is mighty! The Angel
is strong! The Angel is magic ... !
Suddenly, Michael snaps the revolver level in his hand and blasts the
guard who has been singing, hitting him full in the face.
MICHAEL (cont)
Die, motherfucker!
At the same time Nick throws himself onto the guard who is standing
behind him, spins and slams the · guard's AK 47 into his chin. Two
more shots blas~ out from Michael's magnum and we see two more guards
crash ·over the kitchen table. Nick now opens U? with the AK 47, and
. as Michael backs off beside him, also with an AK 47, they gun down
the remaining guards to the floor, who fire back as they fall .
.
For a moment everything is a roaring blur, then it is over in an
instant. Bodies lie all over the place in a bloody, tangled mess
under a pathetic paper lantern. The rain has stopped --
Nick staggers, badly wounded. Michael picks himself o~f the floor
and pulls Nick out of the fishing hut toward the river ...
Michael comes to a stop, unshoulders Nick and lays him on the ground.
As he stands looking at Steven, gasping for breath, Steven stares up
at him with an expression of pure terror.
62.
Ca~era closes ~:owlv o~ Steven's f~ce. lfis aurns ar8 bleedi~cr an~
his skin is d=a~n tlght so that ev~ry bc~e siancis out in his-skull.
His teeth a=e bd=ed, his eyes are hallo~ and he looks within a
hair's bre~c~~ of bei~s completely mad. Ee makes a strangled ani-
mal sound, so ~aint as to be almost imperceptible. Michael pulls
loose the ba~boo grati~g and raises Steve~ out of the slime.
Michael staggers down into the water with Nick, almost too tired
to move. Steven comes behind. He is hunched over, like a gnome.
The rope which Michael has tied around his neck drags in the water.
His eyes are huge with terror and.his voice comes in a loud rasp.
STEVEN
Michael?
MICHAEL
(a whisper)
Right here.
STEVEN
We don't belong here, in the
jungle, Michael. Are we going
home now?
MICHAEL
(barely moving
his lips)
Yeah, kid.
Another explosion shakes the earth, this one much closer. Nick's
breath rattles in his t~roat. Michael, who lies low in the water
beside Nick, holding hi~, closes his eyes for a rnoment as if to
gather strength.
STEVEN
Michael?
(no answer)
Michael?
·r' ·
{
, Michael loops one strand of ro?e around Nick and ties him down ~ith
a knot he c?.:: instantly =e.!.ease, t:-1en he slips sc:i,e cea(:. b=.;1.nches
under the rope so that he will not be vis~ble from shore.
Michael crosses back to Steven who sits in the water with the rope
around his neck.
MICHAEL
(low voice)
We're going swimming, Steven,
okay?
Michael leads Steven out to his neck in the water. Steven balks,
. staring doubtfully at the boil and swirl of the fast moving current.
A sound comes from the clearing. Michael snaps around. v.c. SOL-
DIERS are coming out of the trees -- about twenty of them.
Steven hesitates and then Michael yanks him to the tree raft and the
heavy run of the current sweeps them silently out around a great,
rainswept bend ...
MICHAEL
How you doing, Nick?
NICK
(delirious)
I don't think I can make it ...
Nick, Michael and Steven sweep around a bend. The river suddenly
narrows, locked on both sides with sheer walls. There is no way to
get to the shore and in the distance there is the ominous rurr.bling
sound of falls.
STEVEN
What's that?
MICHAEL
(lying)
Just wind.
They are racing now, riding a crest of deep, fast-moving water whose
surface is deceptively smooth. The river funnels around another bend.
Suddenly, dead ahead, there is an ancient suspension foot bridge
across the river. The sound of the falls is much louder now and the
64.
derelict bridge, which sags to within only a few feet of the water,
(
is their. last hope. 7he onl v trouble is t:-;a t a young v. c. Gt:E~R!L:..:..
is squatting on one bank, st~nding guard.
Michael claws his way to the upstream end of the huge root S~?porting
Nick, who suddenly lifts the AK 47. Just as he dces so, the v.c.
guerrilla turns and sees him. Nick fires first and the guerrilla
crurnples·down t~rough the rotting slats into the water and sinks
below the surface.
Nick drops the rifle into the river. The sound of the falls is like
thunder now and the bridge is coming up fast.
MICHAEL
Hold on tight, Steven!
Michael steadies himself and as they pass under the suspension bridge
he lunges upward and grabs hold of one of the rotted slats. The
bridge swings sideways, tipping the slat to a vertical position so
that the slat snaps in Michael's grip.
l_,,.
Michael drops the broken slat, releases the rope that holds Nick to
the tree and screams at Steven:
MICHAEL
Get away from the tree! Get
away!
Michael pushes Nick off, holding him on his back. A ~ornent passes.
The tree drifts slowly away. The thunder of the water gets lo~der
and louder and then the huge tree suddenly tilts upward and dis-
appears.
The river drops about thirty feet into a deep pool. There is nothins
visible in the pool except the huge tree log, plunging around like a
great horned beast in the roaring water.
MICHAEL
Hold on. You gotta hold on!
65.
Michael tur~s back tc ~~ick, picks him up and drags him back into the
heavy run o: the current. Steven hesitates. ~ichael oulls him
viciously back into the river with the rope and then ~~ves them all
towards the focus of evacuation.
The choppers have machine guns mounted in their open doors. They
hover with their skids just above the river, the rotor wash whipping
water, and as they rake the tree line with machine gun fire what is
left of the Ranger squad pull themselves out of the water and climb
aboard.
A chopper roars down over Michael, Steven and Nick, who suddenly
slide into view. They are the last to be picked up and the chopper
takes heavy fire from the shore. Michael manages to get Nick pulled
aboard and then, as he is trying to get Steven up, the fire fro~ the
shoreline intensifies and the chopper begins to lift up. Hands reach
down to Steven and Michael who are both now hanging from the skids,
faces blurred in the spray of water. Suddenly, as the chopper reaches
a height of about forty feet, Steven loses his grip. For a split
second Michael watches him falling ... and then he lets go.
Steven and ~ichael hit the rock~strewn river with two plu~es of spray.
They both surface and show an arm or leg, and then disappaar around
a bend.
97. EXT. RIVERBA.~K - DAY
Michael has dragged Steven from the river and props him up in a low
muddy cut of a creek bed. Steven's legs are horribly broken and
Michael kneels over him -- out of breath, tears streaming from his
cavernous eyes -- howling with helpless rage.
MICHAEL
Damn you!_ God damn you!
STEVEN
We don't belong here, in the
jungle, Michael. Aie we going
home now?
66.
r
l
MICHAEL
·,. (nods)
Sure. Sure, Ace. We're going
home. We gotta just keep moving ...
Suddenly a tank approaches with a full bird COLO~EL in it. The tank
is completely encrusted with men. Clinging to every available sup-
port or protrusion are men's hands. The refugees begin scattering
to make way for the tank.
MICHAEL
(to tank commander}
Take him along.
The Colonel and the TANK CO~L'iAND~R get out swearing and start toward
Michael.
.COLONEL
(warily}
Little Rand Rand you'll be
standing tal·l again, son ...
TANK CO~L~1ANDER
·uh-oh, Sir. Hostile vibes!
67.
COLONEL
Put that weapon dm•m, son.
COLOi~EL
Oh, shit!
The Colonel and the tank commander pick up Steven end scra~ble to
the already overloaded tank and pile him on.
COLONEL
(as they
take off)
Fucking maniacs--
MICHAEL
(as if to
himself)
Just keep moving ... I'll be
okay.
Michael is walking with the fleeing refugees. Camera pans past the
uneven rimrock of the mountains holding on nichael as he grows small-
er and smaller. He dwindles to a spot in the distance to the South.
Nick reaches for the big paper marker on his neck and peers down at
it from the corner of his eye. It seems to remind him of something
and he takes out his wallet. In his wallet is a photograph of Linda.
Nick peers at the photograph intently, then closes his wallet and
puts it away. The strain on Nick is now glaringly apparent, both in
his face and in his rnovement·s; a feeling of complete, radical discon-
nection between Nick and everyone else. There is a hint -- a look in
his eye that he is in the edge of madness.
68.
Black body bags are laid out in countless rows on the hot concrete.
PFC's are stacking them on pallets and more PFC's, driving hydraulic
fork lifters, are loading the pallets of coffins into the holds of
the trucks.
Nick turns away from the window and looks down the corridor, down
the rows of blank staring faces. Everything appears grimy, even in
here, and the only clean white thir.g seems to be the cigarette in
Nick's hand. Suddenly a couple of NURSES burst in and a harassee
DOCTOR follows them in.
DOCTOR
(to Nick)
Is your name Nikanor Chevotarevich?
DOCTOR (cont)
Are you sure?
Nick nods.
DOCTOR (cont)
What is that, Russian?
NICK
No. Just American.
DOCTOR
Lemme see this.
The doctor looks at the paper marker on Nick's neck, marked N.P.
DOCTOR (cont)
How old is this thing?
Nick shrugs.
DOCTOR (cont)
Mother and father's names?
NICK
Lou and Eva.
DOCTOR
(extracts a file
from a thick wad
of papers in hand)
Dates of birth?
69.
NICK
(an edge of hysteria
....
.. seeps into ~i~ voice)
What t~e hell rli~~c=e~ce does
that ma ~:e? T!"te:-'' v ,~ tot:1 . !:-.::en
dead for over twenty year~!!!
DOCTOR
Okay, get the hell out of here.
The doctor slams back out the coor, the nurses following in his wake.
Another jet thunders overhead. The hydraulic fork lifts in the court-
yard shriek and whine. Suddenly, from sornew~ere nearby, comes the
sound of a wounded black G.I. 's voice:
VOICE (O.S.)
(laughing; almost
chanting)
Roll 'em all out of Nam. Roll
'em daid! Feet first! Let 'em
all
. .
go home with their boots on ...
102. INT. U.S. AR.HY TELEPHO~:E CE~lTER, GHQ BUILDING - SAIGON - AFTERNOON
Banks of telephones li~e the wall. Stretching out from the telephones
are long, ragged lines of SERVICEME!·l wai tine; to call hone. The roor.1
is huge, full of echoes. Re-enlistment posters arc ?lastered every-
where and ca::ned rausic is playing over the considerable noise of a
hundred nen, all shouting over . their long-distance connections at the
same time.
Nick, wearinc civilian clothes, blends into one of the lines with cnl~
· one ;:·~rson {; f.r-ont of him. He looks anxious. Ee taKes out his wal-
let again, p~e!'.'s intently at Linda's photogra?h, then puts it back. rs
takes a half-step forward -- staring at the telephor.e -- and then he
sto~s, turns and walks away. No one takes any notice.
NICK
(calling)
Michael. .. !
Nick throws himself into the tiaffic headlong, without ~ven looking.
{Reviss-d 5/28/77) 70.
Ve~icles ·sw 7rve and screech to a stop. Nick dodges between the~,
,- gain~ the sidewalk on the other side lunging throush an alley con-
\-.......,. necting to another street line~ with bars. He clac3 his hand on
the back of a passing G.I. The G.I. turns. It is.not Michael at
all but the resemblance is al~ost close.·
NICK
Sorry ... Thought you were
someone else.
* The G.I. makes no reply, just continues on his way into the congre-
gation of A..~1ERICANSOLDIERS milling about the middle o=the streets.
"The crowd streams around it, a sea of bobbing, brilliant color. Nick
enters the nearest bar.
* The place is jammed and very dark, ear-splitting rock music is play-
ing. Bikini-clad GIRLS are dancing with the American soldiers while
above the bar on pedestals half-naked girls are dancing to the music
with obscene contortions.
Nick comes into the smokey and noisy room, wedges into an opening
at the bar. By now a very young, very pretty BAR GIRL is giving
him her undivided attention. She whispers something in his ear
which we do not hear.
NICK
(stares
at her)
What?
BAR GIRL
(softly, in
his ear)
I show you. Come. You come.
(pulls him
to his feet)
Not like with girls home, in
U.S.A.
The bar girl comes around a corner with Nick, guiding him up the
steps of a flight of narrow stairs into a fluorescent lit, horribly
decrepit room with sad little plastic flowered curtains and a torn
mattress on the floor. In one corner of the room, jar..med between
piles of clothes and cooking utensils is a baby, asleep in a tiny
crib. ·The bar girl puts one hand around Nick's waist and slides
(Revised 5/28/77) 71.
the other do~n t~e fro~t of his pants. A look of terrible sac~~ss
crosses his face.
, BAR GIRL (cont}
\.
What you liJ:e . to call me now?
NICK
(abstracted)
Linda.
BAR GIRL
(laughs)
You call me Linda, just like home.
A filthy, grimy dark place loud with the fierce whirring sound of
hundreds of ancient, leaking air conditioners. Seated on a chair
against the wire fence of the opposite building is an OLD !-~'\~: with
an old food stand on bicycle wheels, surrounded by a collectio~ o:
white ceramic elephants for sale. A military police jeep roars in
front of him, a few motorcycles sputter past and a few girls with
soldiers hurry in both dirGctions. The old man sits motionless,
like the guardian of some timeless, silent kingdom.
Nick spins away from the window, tears rolling down his cheeks.
*
NICK
(shouting)
Hey ••• hey, elephants! Look
at those elephants!
* The bar girl stares at him. The baby begins crying now. Suddenly,
Nick, startled at the sound, bolts and charges back down the stairs
with the bar girl hot on his tail.
BAR GIRL
Wait! First you pay me!
NICK
* I can't be in a room with a baby
crying .•.
The sky is alight with fires. Now and then huge distant explosions
rock·the night and sirens wail.
(Revised 5/28/77) 72.
NICK
(toneless, over
and ove:=-)
Hey, hey, the wind does blow
Hey, hey, the snow does snow
Hey, hey, the rain does rain ..•
Suddenly, there is the sharp flat report of a pistol shot fron some-
where nearby. Hick spins, reflectively, staring at a small com?lex
of wooden buildings behind a high corrugated metal gate, and there
is the unmistakable sound of Vietnamese voices, hooting and cheerin~.
From another wooden house, beyond the others and closer to the
river, a tiny light glows inside a pape= lante~n. ~ick moves to-
ward the light coming fro~ the riverfront h~use. Lying on t~e
ground under a grove of bougainvillea r.earby are three CORPS~S,
all of them Asian, all of them with one side of their heads blood-
ied. As Nick stands looking at them a door co~es open of the back
of the building and T;-;o BURLY VIE':'~iA.¾ESE ME~~ bri:1g C'..!'t anothe!'
corpse. The body is that of a yo 11:1g /.1ner ice.n. LD~e the Asians he
"is dead from a bullet in the right temple.
MAN (V .O.}
You seem •.• disturbed.
NICK
(indicating house)
People inside doing it for
money?
. JUI,II:N
Hais certaincm.~nt ... Sor~etimes a
great deal of ,noney. Naturally
I do not do it myself. I myself
do not possess the nerve.
(smiles)
But I am always ... how do. you say ..•
looking out for those things quite
rare. Champagne perhaps? Tch,
tch. Don't say no. When a man
says no to champagne, he says no
to life.
(gives Nick a cup)
You s~w this before?
A moment of silence passes bE:tween them. Then--
'NICK
Up north.
J'ULIEN
Ah, yes.· Of course .••
(smiles)
Allow me please to introduce
myself. I am J'ulien ..• And you
are?
NICK
Nick.
J'ULIEN
Nick. C'est extraordinaire!
Do you know that I have a
second cousin who is called
Nicholas and a nephew Nikolai.
So you are, comme on dit, en
famiile .. _
There is another shot from inside and another round of hooting anc
cheering.
NICK
I have to go.
JULIEN
But you must come in.
,
NICK
No, I--
.-· JULIEN
But I insist.
74.
:
I
NICK
I have to go.
JULIEN
Of what is there to be afraid
after this war? The war is a
joke, a silly thing.
Julien refills Nick's cup. Nick looks at it. The cup is as highly
polished as a ~irro= and the sparkli~g bubbles dance and hiss. Nick
lifts the glass and empties it in one swallow.
NICK
I'm going home, Ace.
JULIEN
(smiles)
To the girl who waits ...
NICK
(gives him
a look)
Yeah.
JULIEN
Naturellement I pay my players
cash American. However, should
you prefer German ma=ks, or per-
haps Swiss francs, this of course
can be arranged. Anything can be
arranged.
NICK
You got the wrong guy, Ace.
JULIEN
But you must come in.
NICK
No, I--
JULIEN
Moncher ami! But I insist!
JULIEN (cont)
After all, it may not quite be
. le Grand Hotel but it is, never-
theless even for Saigon, really
quite extraordinaire. Something
you must not miss. That is my
hope. Afte~ you ...
We watch Nick co:-:-.e through with Julien past cases of American liauor
and cigarettes stacked to the ceilinq, into a room lit only with.a
single fierce overhead drop light. He is now even r.iore unrecognizable.
111. INT. GAHBLIUG Rom-1- NIGHT
CHINESE REFEREE
(Chinese)
Then the game is made, gentlemen.
A CHINESE CLERK taking the last bets, chalks the fi~al odds on a la=~ :
board. The betting has been heavy. Champagne flows like water and
the. atmosphere is one of reckless abandon, as if money, like love,
were good for an hour. The referee holds the pistol up for all to see
and inserts a single cartridge into the empty chamber.
The contestants have finished wrapping their heads with the scarlet
cloth. They sit and look at each other, strange in the eerie light.
It is like a dream. There is a sudden silence; a sense of upcoming
climax among the spectators.
CHINESE REFEREE
(as he lowers
the pistol)
One cartridge. Game to be played
to completion. Forfeit automatic
after delay of one minute.
75A.
r
The Chinese referee puts the pistol on the table in front of the two
C men. Nick, without taking his eyes off the pistol, abru?tly, ~ades
through the crowd, pulls o~e of the contestants out of his chair and
sits at the table opposite the other Vietnamese player.
Nick, resting his elbows on the edge of the table like someone having
a conversation in a bar, spins the ?istol, cocks it, puts it to his
own head. Involuntarily, Michael cries out. For a brief moment, the
two men simply -- and to powerful effect -- stare at each other. Then
Nick gives Michael an odd, searching look. Suddenly -- ·
Michael lunges forward with a great heave, but Nick has already click-
ed out and is being dragged from the table, screaming. Michael strug-
gles fiercely to rip free from the other bodyguards who are stopping
him.
Michael pushes outside, looks around with the confused look of a man
who has a=rived in a strange city for the very first time. He backs
away from the building and hurls himself th=ough the courtyard.
Julien, who has said nothing during the whole scene, follows outside
onto the street.
MICHAEL
(desperately, at
the top of his .
voice)
Wait! Nick, come back! Come
,back!
Then, as if all this last had been too much for him, he stops -- waves
76.
We see Nick fall back into t~e seat and his eyes cl~ ~ ~ -- he ~ooks
half-dead. All the life seems to have aone out of ~i~. Sudcc~ly, he
opens his eyes. J~lien is alongside, d;iving. Julien studies ~~ick
for a moment and then smiles.
JULIErl
If you are truly brave and lucky
I can rnuke you rich.
For a moment Nick doesn't answer. His eyes seem to look thro~c~
Julien, as if to some landscape far beyond. Julien tar~es out a
thick wad of American bills and presses them on r-;ick. nothing at
ali seems to happen for a moment. Suddenly, Nick throws the noney
out the window. Julien says nothing, gives Nick a lo~g look. There
is a sound of scuffling, then shouting. Julien turns to look back.
DISSOLVE TO:
It is freezing cold. The trailer is all decked out like a plum cake,
with_ tiny American flags. Stretching from the trailer to the tele-
phone pole across the street is a huge, hand-lettered banner ~hich
says: "WELCOME HOHE MICH,\EL!" and it whips and snaps in the winter
wind. The billowing smoke from the steel mill, blown by the fierce
wind across the town below, sweeps over it all.
STA.'l
This is it! This is Michael!
(and then, when
it isn' tJ
Not yet! Just ~ol= your water,
I'll tell you when!
AXEL
(abruptly)
Three cheers for the ~ed, white
and blue ... !
ALL
Three cheers for the red, white
and blue!
Suddenly, as the cab comes over the crest of the hill, the trailer
looms into sight, straight ahead. Through one window we see Stan
peering out of the trailer at the approaching cab.
CAB DRIVER
Jesus! Will you look at all
this .•.
CAB DRIVER
What're you, crazy? That's not
it? You said a trailer. You
said corner Logan Street.
MICHl\EL
I was wrong. That's not it.
Keep going. Go straight down
to the highway.
CAB DRIVER
Hey, now listen. You said--
MICHAEL
I'm telling you that's not it!
Now keep going!
78.
Linda is at the window, standing with Stan and Axel pressed close
together, all of them watching the cab.
STAN
It's him. I'm telling you,
this is Michael.
The taxicab comes thudding by. Linda, Stan and Axel all watch as
it disappears under the flapping "Welcome Horne Michael" banner.
AXEL
(to Stan)
I thought that was him, too.
STAN
So, his plane could be late,
Axel. I mean, take it easy.
I mean, you're driving every-
one nuts.
(to Linda)
You okay?
Linda gives a thin smile. Stan puts one arm around her shoulders.
STAN (cont)
I know Nick will be back soon
too. I know Nick. I know
he'll be coming back.
STAN (cont)
Right, Axel?
AXEL
Fuckin' A! •
The taxi driver comes out of one of the rooms, gets back in his cab
and pulls away.
,... 79.
~·
(
120. INT. MICHAEL'S ROOM - NIGHT
Michael stands in the doorway where the driver jus~ ~~ft hi~. His
duff le bag and the rest of his gear are· at t~e ·.-:;:;.._ ···· his :::eet.
His head is thrown back and he is draining the las~ of a bottle
of whiskey, gulping it down in a great raw swallow.
Michaet lowers the bottle, catches his breath. The stark panic is
gone, but there is still fear -- blind, nameless fear, like that
of an animal run to the ground.
Michael crosses to the window, grips the frame with both hands and
looks out across the valley.
The banner stretching to the telephone pole across the street has
been whipped to shreds by the wind. Everyone has ~one home. In
the yard, parked beside Michael's Caddy is only o~e other car
ab9ut the same vintage. There is a case of beer on its roof, the
windows are entirely frosted over and the engine is running. After
a moment, Axel, Stan and John stagger out -- blear~·-eyed, hung-over
and freezing. Linda comes out of the trailer, but just as she
emerges the whistle at the . mill goes off. Axel and Stan begin yell-
ing at each other, then they throw themselves back in the car and
start off . . The case of beer on the roof crashes to the ground.
They stop, pile out, pick up the cans, heave them in the back seat
and take off again.
John stands in the yard alone with Linda. She kisses him lightly
,... on the cheek,
a rickety
John smiles.
wooden stairway,
They hug each
disappears.
other and John starts dow~
MICHAEL
Guess who.
Linda stares at him. The sound of his voice is even more of a shock
to her than seeing him. For a split second she seems not to recog-
nize him. Michael gives a little laugh and steps up into the traile~
lifts his arms out to her.
LINDA
(throws herself
in his arms)
Michael! Oh, Michael, come in!
She hugs him for a moment, as hard as she dares, then they pull apar~.
MICHAEL
(looking at Linda
· who is looking away)
You're more beautiful than I've
ever seen yqu before.
Linda gives him a quick look; then looks away. The intensity in
Michael's eyes and the tone of his voice combine to frighten her.
LINDA
I was hoping ... Oh, Michael, I
was hoping--
(back ~n his arms)
.I was hoping somehow Nick would
be with you!
MICHAEL
No.
BOA.
/-· LINDA
I Oh, Michael! Everyo~e missed
'--·.
you so! Welcome h ~~e.
(hugs him)
They pull apart. She looks at him searchingly. Both are as close
to open expression of feeling as they will ever be. Then Michael
says only:
MICHAEL
Any word on Nick?
LINDA
Not a thing. He's A.W.O.L.
is all I know.
MICHAEL
He'll be back.
MICHAEL (cont)
He's probably confused. A
lot of guys get confused there.
LINDA
C, He never . called
(this last
...
with an
edge of bitterness)
MICHAEL
Maybe he did. · Maybe you were out.
LINDA
(sudden shift of tone)
How are you really?
MICHAEL
(laughs)
How are you?
LINDA
I just go along, you know. I'm
still working at the market. It
just seems there's a million
things to do. Are you sure you're
all right? I mean, what about
your wounds?
MICHAEL
(flat)
Nothing.
LINDA
But--
81.
MICl:.AEL
It was just the usual compli-
I"' cations. All the guys go
\~ . through it.
The remark reaches Linda. They both stand rigidly. Michael's eyes
are on her. There is an awkward pause. Then--
LINDA
I made Nick a sweater.
(she hurries
to get it)
I couldn't remember his exact
size but I think he was about
the same size as you.
MICHAEL
Exact.
LINDA
(in a tight voice)
Here ••. you have to take that
off.
Michael re~oves his fitted jacket. Linda pulls the sweater over him,
touches his shoulders for a moment, gingerly, as if she hadn't touch-
ed a man for so long she can't remember how it went.
The sweater is huge, a great rumpled thing reaching almost to
Mich~el's knees.
LINDA
It is
a little too big ...
(she pulls the
sweater back off)
••• but I can easily fix that.
One thing about wool, it 1 s such
a cinch to fix ... Oh, Chr~st!
The pressure of the moment is too intense for her. She crosses to
one of the garbage pails full of melting ice and stuffs the sweater
iri it.
MICHAEL
(gently)
How's t~e job?
LINDA
Great. Fine ... once or twice we
almost had to ·close. I have to
go to work new.
MICHAEL
Would you mind if I walked you
to work?
Linda softens, they meet in a look.
82.
LINDA'
You're so funny, Michael. You're
( always like a gentle~un.
MICHAEL
(shift of tone)
Cold. I'm not used to it anymore.
LINDA
Do you want some coffee first? I
still have some hot ...
Her face starts to quiver; against her will, she begins to sob.
Camera closes on her face.
LINDA (cont)
I'm so glad you're alive! I'm so
happy! I ... I just don't know
what to feel!
Michael, wearing his uniform, and Linda are some distance away.
Michael is seen shaking hands with an enthusiastic older M.2\N while
Linda stands to one side, watching his face. She looks suddenly in-
vigorated by the cold air and the prospect of mystery, danger. An-
other older MAN comes over. Linda takes the man's arm and presents
Michael to him almost as an object of ~ender. Suddenly noticing
her reflection in a store window, she fixes her hair, aware of
Michael's eyes on her. We cannot hear what is being said. The only
sound comes from the steel mill which looms up behind them out of
the fro2en valle ·y below.
MICHAEL
Linda •.. I fust want to say how
sorry I am about Nick. How .••
I know you loved him and I know
it can never be the same. I mean,
maybe .•. I ~on't know, if you want
to even talk--
(no reply)
Michael's ~and, slapping him on the back and shouting orders all at
the same tine. T~e qirls working as checkers are all smiling, ~d-
\ miring the ~ell o~t cf ~~ic~ael, ru~~i~g their :i~cers ov~~ nis uni-
·--· form; as i: ,:::--.ly by t.0-.:::~1:.nc; r.::.:-:i.cl.,2:i,· could tell :-.:: •.1.3.s =,.::al. :::ve::-·:-
body makins s~all tal~ as the ma~ase= keeps inter=~~ting.
MANAGER
(to Michael)
You did a gooc job, kid.
Petruccio, gir;,r.e a count on
those pears!
(back to Michael)
I think we got 'em now, know
what I mean? Have a cigar.
STOCK BOY
Hi-you, hot lips.
MICHAEL
They ... bother you here?
,. No-o-o!
(takes
LINDA
laughs)
his arm,
Ci (gives
little
him a
wave)
I have to go now.
MICHAEL
Listen, would you mind if I
picked you up after work?
LINDA
I'd like that.
MICHAEL
Hey, Axel!
Axel turns. ·He grabs Stan and pulls him through the departing steel-
workers.
(Revised 5/28/77) 84.
STA..~
What the--!
AXEL
It's Mike!
STAN
Mike ... ?
(sees him}
Jesus, Mike!
Stan grabs Michael's hand, shakes it. Then Axel does the sa~e,
grabs hi~ in a big bear hug.
STAN (cont)
Where the hell were you? We
were all set -- beer, food.
Right? Am I right, Axel?
AXEL
Fuckin' A!
MICHAEL
I got delayed.
AXEL
(hugs him
again)
Hey, Mike! God damn!
STAN
· • Jesus, you must be dying for a
shot of real American booze.
MICHAEL
(can't help
smiling}
I'm fine. Hey, I'm fine.
STAN
How does it feel to be shot?
•
The question hangs there for a moment.
MICHAEL
It doesn't hurt.
r -;
MICHAEL (cont)
How've you guys been?
STAN
Sarne old thing. Nothing's
changed. I get more ass
than a toilet seat and Axel
is getting :atte~.
AXEL
Show him the new gun. Show
him the new gun, Stan.
85.
MIC!!ld:L
What the hell's that for?
STAN
What is it for?
AXEL
He's a worrier!
MICHAEL
Forget it. Let's have a drink:
STEELWORKERS
Let the man through! Let's make
.r a little room!
JOHN
(gives him a
great big hug)
Boy! Doy oh boy! ~re you okay?
MICHJ\EL
I'm fine, John.
JOHN
C'rnon in back. Come on. Axel!
Stan!
The <loor shuts behind him. One of the bartenders bangs in, brings a
pitcher of beer and a bottle of Seagram's whiskey, nods anu leaves.
JOIIN (cont)
nere we go. .
(he pours and raises
an overflowing glass
of beer)
Herc's to you, l1ike!
AXEL
Fuckin' A!
\
{Revised 5/28/77) 86.
STAN
And here's to the other guys .•.
They all stand t~e~e silently for a rnoT-ent looki~g at each ot~er.
The other ffiood is suddenly gone.
MICHAEL
* (in a low·
voice)
How's Angela taking it?
JOHN
Not so good. Worse since she
talked to him.
MICHAEL
Worse since she talked to who?
JOHN
(matter-of
factly)
Steven.
MICHAEL
Angela talked to Steven?
{stares at him)
Steven's alive?
JOHN
(amazed)
You didn't know?
AXEL
John •.•
STAN
Hey, John ...
JOHN
Mike, we don't know where
Steven is .•. Angela won't
tell us.
MICHAEL
(looks up at him)
What do you mean?
JOHN
She won't talk to anybody.
MICHAEL
(gently)
Angela, I just heard Steven
was alive.
(no reply)
Where is he?
MICHAEL
Angela ... ?
Angela just gives him a strange, twisted smile, avoiding his eyes
too directly. ~ichael leans over, kisses her gently on the fore-
head, looks one more tine at t~e smiling boy and goes out .•• Camera
closes on Angela who just keeps staring into space.
Michael walks past on his way to the trailer with the piece of
paper Angela gave him in
his pocket. It is snowing and fro!':'! inside
the church we hear the choir singing. The sound is nassive, deep
and dark, like a great river rolling through the growing ~ight.
Ahead we see a lone telephone booth at the curb. The door is half-
open and snow is blowing in. Michael starts to reach for Steven's
number in his p~cket, stops, closes his eyes, leans forward into
the wind. The telephone looms closer and Michael almost stops, but
doesn't and passes by.
(Revised 5/28/77) 88.
,..
f\
133. I!~T.
Michael
TRAILE?. - tHGHT
LINDA
Michael?
MICHAEL
Right here.
LINDA ·
What are you doing?
MICHAEL
Oh. Nothing .•. getting my gear
out. I'm just leaving.
LINDA
Don't go. I've got some food. I'll
make you a real sit-do¼~ dinner.
LINDA
Why don't we go to bed, Michael?
MICHAEL
(blankly)
What?
LINDA
It's been a long time. Can't we
comfort each other?
.MICHAEL
Not here! I gotta get outta here!
Michael swings all his hunting gear on his back, picks up his rifle
and heads for the door. Linda follows, still clutching her grocer-
ies, her emotions so pulverized she can hardly speak.
MICHAEL (cont)
I'll be ..• I don't know ... I feel a
lot of distance ... far away ... See
you around.
89.
We watch Linda step out of the shower and begin to <lry herself.
When she speaks it is loud enough to be heard in the other room.
LINDA
It just seems sort of strange
corning to a motel ...
Linda wraps on a short fresh bath towel and it is very sexy, then
looks at herself in the mirror. She is very excited, but there is
an uneasy balance between sexual desire and guilt in this monent.
She strikes a pose, pulling down the bottom of the towel a bit.
LINDJ\ (cont)
Do you know what I mean, Michael?
Michael doesn't answer. Linda pulls the door fully open, takes one
last look at herself in the mirror and goes out .
Michael is lying ·on the bed -- sprawled on his back, his uniform and
boots still on, sound asleep on top of the cheap bedspread.
LINDJ\
Michael?
Michael doesn't stir, doesn't budge. Linda crosses and looks at him
-- hungrily, top to bottom -- the group weddinq picture is still
where he left it. His duffel bag unmoved from the previous night.
All the hunting gear piled carelessly around it.
Linda lets out a little moan and pulls down the top spread beside
Michael, then she slips slowly under the covers moving as close to
him as she can get. She moves one arm out from underneath and puts
it around him, staring at the moonlit shadows moving on the ceiling.
Camera holds or. both of them like this for a long moment. Michael's
mirror-polished jump boots gleaming in the shine of the moon.
135. OMITTED
90.
People are coming and going a~a each time one oft~~ :~~er d~~~s
open the sound of the bowling alle? comes. in. ~-;c c ::.c':.:::·: a f:.-:,s-:.::.;,,(:'
glimpse of Linda 1-::tting go of a ball. Her ~ovemen~ .:s uncc:-- . .sc:.ous-
ly erotic, although no enc else but ~ichael seems to be aware o~ it.
The BARTENDER lifts a beer over to Michael, gestures with his hands,
"this round is on the house'', Michael nods. Across fro~ hie, at
the far end of the ~ar is Stan, fast-talking a redhead ~ho is ~ar-
velously stoned, sitting on the bar stool with amazin; e~uil:~r:.u~,
her glass held near her mouth. She occasionally turns her hea~ to
look at Michael, keeping herself in delicate balance, ~oving as if
her head were in danger of snapping off at the neck if she we~e to
move suddenly too fast.
Michael is high and seemingly does not notice her or Stan, continues
watching Linda ~ith growing, obsessive appreciation, exciteme~t. Stan
gets up, comes over to Michael and claps him on the back.
STAN
(signalling for
,.
another beer)
How's it feel to be back?
MICHAEL
(preoccupied)
L Great.
STAN
Hey,Michael.
(gestures with his
head at the redhead)
What do you think?
MICHAEL
I don't know--
STAN
I mean, what do you think of
her?
MICHAEL
I don't know, Stanley.
STAN
Is she beautiful?
MICI!l\EL
(really looking at her)
Straight?
STAN
Yeah.
91.
MICHAEL
(
\._
No.
STAN
Do you think she's intelligent?
MICHAEL
(looks again)
No.
STAN
No?
MICHAEL
(shakes his head)
No.
STAN
Neither do I.
MICHAEL
(hooked)
Then what in hell do you see in
her?
STAN
(judicially)
I don't know. That's what I'm
trying to find out! Maybe she's
good in bed.
(shouts to girl)
You good in bed, honey?
MICHAEL
What the hell happen~d?
LINDA
His ball didn't come.back ... so
he went after it, and the pin
setter came down on hirr..
92.
MICHAEL
(over the laughter)
Stan, get the jack out of my
trunk.
13 8. INT. Bm·lLING LANE - NIGHT
STAN
Axel! Hey, Axel! You all right?
MICHAEL
Axel, you okay?
AXEL
(laughs)
Fuckin' A!
(., JOHN
Hey, Axel, you're sure nothing's
broken?
Axel scoops Linda into his arms and holds her up over his head, then
puts her down, laughing.
STAN
Well, what do you guys wanna do
now?
AXEL
We're going huntin', right?
STAN
Who's askin' you?
AXEL
I was askin' Mike. He's going!
But no women.
JOHN
Mike's going. Right, Mike?
MICHAEL
(turns to John}
Right.
AXEL
Fuckin' A!
STAN
(hopping up
and down)
Just like old tirr.es! Right,
Mike? Am I right?
ALL
(in a ragged chorus)
Fuckin' A!
The buck watches Michael for a moment longer, then turns, throws up
his head and curvets over the hi~h ridge to the west.
141. EXT. ANOTHER, MUCH LOWER RIDGE, CLOSER TO THE HIGHWAY - DAY
,,.. fours.
unsling
John and Axel,
their rifles.
the sound is so magnified
scale war.
who have reached
Shots . are going
by echoes that
a level area
off in every
it sounds
above Stan,
direction
like a full-
and
(t.,
94.
(
STAN
(breath rasping
in his lungs}
What are you, kidcin'? ?<.re
you kiddin' ffie, Axel? Twenty
times we coulda had it!
(wheezing)
If I'd'a been where you were--
JOHN
Psst. Stan!
John signals with his head, Stan turns. Finally a deer, an old
greying buck, has come out of the woods. The deer is rattled by
the gunfire and peers at Stan uncertainly. Stan spins and grabs
his gun, which immediately goes off. He slams another shell in ·
the chamber and scrambles to his feet, but the rifle sling is
hooked on the branches of a bush and his shot ricochets off a near-
by rock. John and Axel dive for cover. As they look up, t~ey see
the deer trot down the slope and then Axel, firing, running after
it ...
Axel and John have dragged their dead deer to an old weathe~ed log
beside the shack. They sit side by side, · drenched in sweat, guz-
zling beer out of both hands.
JOHN
Sweet! Oh, that is sweet!
AXEL
Fuckin' A!
Shots explode nearby. At first the shots are scattered but they
quickly open into a full barrage. Axel and John stand up.
95.
STAN
I got one! I got one!
Stan loses his footing and rolls down an embankment, head over
heels.
S~an's deer staggers through the trees, drops quietly in the softly
falling snow.
146. EXT. A HIGH FROZEN LAKE - DAY
On the rugged cliffs above the lake the wind is blowing in gusts,
slanting the snow first one way and then the other. Michael appears
in the distance, a bl~ck speck in the endless expanse of shifting
white. His pursuit has become nightmarish.
As Michael draws closer we can see that he is near exhaustion. His
clothes are caked with snow, his breath comes in a shallow gasp
and his gait is uneven, favoring one leg. As Mi~hael approaches
camera he falters and limps to a stop. There are no more tracks.
There is nothing to go by and he hunkers down in the driving snow.
The wind bangs in from one way, then it shifts and bangs in again
from another way. Suddenly it stops entirely. In the moment of
pure silence ·there is a sound -- the click of a hoof on rock.
MICHAEL
(shouts)
Okay!
The wind keening through the high passes, and then faintly, the
echo comes back.
ECHO
Okay!
A Coleman lantern hangs from one rafter, rocking in the wind. John
is out cold. Axel and Stan are both high on beer and are cleaning
their deer rifles. Stan finishes first and then pulls out his .38
caliber pistol and begins cleaning it .
. AXEL
(noticing)
What's that stupid little gun
up here for?
,,. In case!
STAN
AXEL
L In case? In case of what?
In case you stumble on one of
your girlfriends suckin' a
forest ranger's cock?
STAN
(fiercely)
Try'it!
AXEL
Mike, easy!
.HIC:~.\..:L
(grimly)
Yeah.
STAN
What t~e hell was that for?
(picks up
the pistol)
Did you think it was really
loaded?
MICHAEL
Gimme that!
,..
blows a hole in the roof. John snaps awake.
MICH.1\EL
You guys want to play ga~es?
I'm going to ?lay your fuckin'
game!
Michael sna?s open the cylinder, empties all but one cartridge and
slams it shut. Stan is chewing his lip. John is staring in utter
disbelief at the ghastly scene about to take place. i:ichael spins
·the cyliricer. Then there is absolute silence.
Axel notices that his hands are shaking. ~ichael suddenly cocks
the revolver and in a single motion grabs Stan by the throat and
puts the gun to his head. Stan's eyes rolling madly in astonish-
ment and outrage.
Michael still clenches Stan, but then slowly, with every last ounce
* of control he has le£~, releases his grip. Stan gasps for air, gags
and throws ~o, then he reels, like a rudderless ship, and crashes
to the floor-where he lies motionless beside Axel's feet. Michael
stands ~ight where he is, nerves alert.
98.
Michael comes out the door and stands for a moment, listening ~o the
wind. He looks down at the pistol turning it over in his ha~ds,
then he heaves it into the trees as hard as he ca~. He looks half-
destroyed. He is stiff, sore and exhausted. Slowly he comes back
into his other world.
GIRL
Linda's in back.
MICHAEL
Thanks.
GIRL
How was the hunting?
MICHAEL
Fine.
The girl is about to say more but Michael goes down a long aisle of
bright packages. Coming out at the back he finds Linda sitting on
the floor surrounded by boxes, crying.
MICHAEL
Linda ... what's wrong?
LINDA
{helpless shrug)
I don't know.
99.
MICHAEL
There must be something .
.•#1'- .-
LI~DA
I'm just so lcnely.
MICHAEL
I 've got m:z' car.
LINDA
(shakes her head)
Just leave me alone. I'll be
fine. Really.
Michael hesitates, then turns and walks back down the aisle between
the bright packages. He is silent but obviously moved.
Michael watches the last light go out in the market. Linda comes
out of the door and crosses towards him.
MICHAEL
You okay?
LINDA
(she nods,
Did you ever think life would
turn out like this?
MICHAEL
No.
He fumbles, opens her door. Linda suddenly slips in and sla.'1ls the
door shut tight.
,..
I,
155. EXT. STI'-<..EET
- NIGHT
r, _\
The wind is blowing. No one. A beer can rolling in the wind ...
We watch ~ichael back awav from the window. For a moment he stands
motionless, turns, looks it Linda asl~~-- -1:' -- 1 y1.ng· '
en ner b ac. k , arr.t5
flung out across the pillo~s, like an angel in a child's story. Ee
hesitates; then ~e pulls on pants, shirt, jacket, and jams his fee~
into a p~ir of bcots.
157 ~ EXT. STAR.Ki;IBATHERSTREET - NIGH7
Michael jams himself into the booth, zippers his jacket. He is irk-
ed with himself, a little frightened. He hears a car door close anc
an engine start up. A car pulls out of a nearby street and comes
past him, slowly. As Michael watches, the tail lights grow small,
then the car dips over a hill and disappears.
,.. Michael
Angela
pulls out the tiny
had given
gins to dial
hin before.
a number .•.
scrap of paper
He lifts
with Steven's
the frozen receiver
number that
and be-
STEVEN
Hello?
(Revised 5/28/77) 101.
MICF.AEL
Steven? Steven, it's me, Mike.
STEVEN (O.S.)
Michael! Hey. How's things?
MICHAEL
Never mind me. How the hell is
it with you?
STEVEN
Hey. Great.
MICHAEL (O.S)
(he can hardly hear)
What's that noise?
STEVEN
Wheelchairs.
MICHAEL
Jesus. When are you getting out?
STEVEN (O.S.)
I'm gonna stay here awhile, Mike .
MICHAEL
. .
What for?
* STEVEN'
(with every-
thing he has)
Place is great. It's like a re-
sort .•. Basketball, bowling. You
name it. Ev·en Princes·s Grace
visited us here. I gotta get back,
Mike. Curfew.
(clicks off)
r---
,
165. INT. HOSPITAL - NIGHT
Camera -closes slowly en Steven. His head has falle:-i to one side --
as if he were drowning. In !rent of him is the dangling receiver.
A nurse approac~es ...
They all slow their approach, stop, looking at the hospital buildins.
It is huge. We watch Axel, Stan and John take seats in the lobby as
Michael heads for the elevators.
STEVEN
Michael. I don't want to go home.
MICHAEL
(nods)
I know.
STEVEN
You go hunting?
MICHAEL
Yeah.·
STEVEN
You get one?
MICHAEL
No.
STEVEN
You didri't get a deer?
MICHAEL
I tracked one, a big buck. God,
he was a beauty!
STEVEN
Angela send you here?
MI<:;:HAEL
No.
103.
,. .
Michael gets behind Steven's wheelchair, pushes him along.
STEVE: -~
Good.
STEVEN (cont)
Angela keeps sending rne socks.
STEVEN (cont)
(direct)
It's not socks I got in there,
Michael.
Michael reaches down, slips a single bill out, feels the paper:
realizes it is real a~d folds it. He looks U?, wa~ching Steven.
Other men in wheelchairs roll slowly by. Steven sits with the
footlocker of ~oney at his feet, utterly bewildered, tears well-
ing up in his eyes.
STEVEN (cont)
One comes every month, Michael,
from Saigon. I don't understand!
Saigon's going to fall any day
·now!
MICHAEL
It's Nick, Steven.
STEVEN
How do you know?
,, * STEVEN
'•· That place .:..s S'Or.na be ca:.ight
in a terri~le shit storm.
Where is a guy li~e Nick getting
money like this?
MICHAEL
Oh .•. cards, maybe. I'll find
him. Don't worry. It's getting
late, Steven. I'm going to call
Angela. The guys are going to
help me bring you home.
* STEVEN
(panicked)
Like hell you are! I don't fit
in!! Mike! No!
MICHAEL
(almost a shout)
Goddamn it, I am! I am gonna
do it!
STEVEN
Do as you heart tells you,
Michael.
.., I
169. OMITTED
LIEUTEHA~T
Please! It's vital I go to
Saigon today. This is very
important!
The sound of the jet whine revving up overrides him as the cargo
doors are slammed shut a~c the big plane lumbers out onto the run-
way. The figure of the lieutenant quavers in the waves of heat,
breaks up like smoke as the plane taxis into position for takeoff.
CUT TO:
171. EXT. SAIGml AIRPORT - DUSK
VIET CONG S~PPERS have just attacked. A number of jet fighters are
burning, bodies are str~wn over the tarmac and jeeps with SOLDIERS
arc racing back and forth. Out beyond, the jet troop tra~sport t~xis
L into view, lumbering like a great silver monster out of the night.
COLO:~EL
Jesus Christ, they're hitting
the goddarnned airport now!
COLONEL (cont)
(to no one in
particular)
Assholes!
COLONEL
Tell you something else, Major.
Don't eat melons. They use
hypodermic . needles here to fill
'em up with river water.
(Revised 5/9/77) 106.
(
i.., .
The
Jeep,
scream of_:: the. sirens
rnountcu with
grows louder.
a 50-ca!i~er machine
Suddcnlv .. a rnilitarv
gun, ca=ecn5
.
into
colice
. ...
view
~
just as a huge black chop?er sets down. The peoplo ~~o stream out
are of all ages, ::cth /1.siu.n a.:1c. A::",erica:r. ':'tev all have identifi-
cation tags whip?ing around their necks in the-rotor wash, and all
are carrying so~e kind of luggage.
M.P.
(arnplified)
Colonel Crispin!
COLONEL
That's me.
(nudges past
Michael and
waves)
Right here, Sergeant! I'm
right here!
M.P.
Right this way, sir. I suggest
we run.
PILOT
(shouting back)
Quick as you can, guys! We're
in a rush!
They take off _just as another round of mortar shells comes screa~in~.
(Revised 5/9/77,) 1 07
.... .
r From Michael's vantage point he can see that the area arou~d the
\..,. swimr-:iing pool in the courtyard below looks like a .!'.'cfugee cam?.
176. EXT. EMBASSY ROOF - DUSK
Michael's chop?er sets down with the doors already open. He and
his three travelling companions jump out and rush to a door leadi~g
to an interior fire stairway.
Michael and the other officers descend the stairs behind two !-.RHED
GUARDS. The doors are open on the landings. Through one doorway
Michael can see into the swimming pool area:
GUARD 1
Coke machine. If anybody wants
one.
MICHAEL
(sharp)
Corporal, we're all running
late!
GUARD 1
(snaps out of it)
We can't get any of you off to
GHQ till morning ... might as
well relax.
DRIVER
Hold onto yer asses!
He snaps the clutch and they smoke off for the still closed ~ire-
mesh gate. Just as the jeep arrives at the gate, the M?'s swing
it open and the jeep careens on two ·wheels down a narrow h~an
corridor of shrieking, jeering, screaming people.
The city seems of two minds, at the very least, about its ap?roach-
ing fall. On scme streets everything is calm, on other streets
refugees are still frantically streaming in, hoping to flee, carry-
- ing every last possession they own on bicycles, ~otorcycles, rick-
shaws, carts, and wagons. The jeep whips through it all, fast. A
grenade is thrown at the jeep. The machine gunner bats it back
with a b~seball bat. As behind them in the receding dista~ce there
is a dull explosion.
There are bumping sounds ahead of him. CLERKS are wheeling out
tall green file cabinets. TWO CORPORALS are carrying huge piles
of A.~erican flags, others carrying trunks, etc .
•
The officers staring at· it all.
The whole area looks as if a tornado had hit it. Papers are all
over the steps. More file cabinets are standing aroi.;.nd every which
.way, some with their drawers torn cut, some lying on their sides,
some empty, some full .. In between the file cabinets, the Colonel
moves up the steps into th-: building, passing a SERGE&~T ,d th horn-
.--
.._,, rimmed glasses which he keeps pushing back up on the bridge of his
nose.
(Revised 5/28/77) 109.
,..
COLONEL
I'm looking for General McDowell.
The sergeant looks around, makir.g a ho?eless gest~re with his hands.
SERGEANT
You're kidding!
The Colonel stares at hi~ for a ~oment, shakes his head. The lights
inside suddenly go off, there is a dull, far-off explosion. ~!ichael
is gone.
180. OMITTED
181. OMITTED
182. OMITTED
183. OMITTED
Traffic streams by the GHQ. In the distance there is the dull crump
~ of artillery fire. A taxi appears and screeches to a stop in front
of the GHQ compound. We see Michael get in the taxi, then the taxi
l. pulls out, merging into the flow of other similar taxis.
185. OMITTED
186. OMITTED
187. OMITTED
188. · OMITTED
Loud, crowded and steamy as ever, except now the dancing girls
above the bar are stark naked. Music is blaring and the place is
almost pitch-dark. The girls dancing, seeming in a frenzy but
with wistful, far-off gazes. We watch Michael walk straight past
the bar, then through a tiny kitchen door, closes it behind him.
A KID appears out of the shadows holding a gun in his hand. Michael
gives a little laugh, gropes in his pocket, takes out his roll anci
counts out a few bills. In the space of an eyeblin~, the ~oney and
the kid disappear. Michael steps into the familiar courtyard.
JULIEN
Who the fuck are you?
Michael comes close, looks Julien long and hard in the eye, remem-
bering him. Julien starts to squirm. Suddenly, M~chael s~acks him
in the face. Julien is shocked, stunned.
MICHAEL
Where is the American gambler,
Nick?
JULIEN
(staring intent-
ly at Michael)
C'est extraordinaire! Nick?
MICHAEL
JULIEN
(uneasily)
~ Fini.
(Revised 5/9/77) 1:2.
(
\... Julien turns, nulls ooen the door to his car, mutteri~g to hi~self
and rubbing his face.-
MICHAEL
Hold it, Ace ...
JULIEN
(angry)
There is nothing here! T~ere
is~ what you see.
MICHAEL
(digs in his pocket
and takes out his
roll)
I want a game, Julien Grinda!
MICHAEL (cont)
Here, this is for you.
JULIEN (cont)
(feigning
toughness)
I am not afraid of you!
MICHAEL
Take me to a game with the
American. Highest stakes.
I'll match his.
MICHAEL
How do you know where?
(Revised 5/9/77) 113.
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\ Julien doesn't answer.
MICHAEL (contt
I say, how do you know?
JULIEN
Because I know.
MICHAEL
Well, then what are we waiting
for?
JULIEN
I must take you by river .•.
MICHAEL
(shakes his
head slowly)
Sure.
l.,.; Michael steps inside and moves into the middle of an empty roorn.
The same room where the audiences for Julien's ga~bling used to
sit.· And everywhere core remnants of black-market crates and
torn cartons of Ar.1erican cigarettes littering the floor. Michael
looks out over the river reflectively. Our view begins to rnove
closer to him~ We begin to hear music of the wedding, happy nusic;
as we move closer to Michael we see
The river is crowded with houseboats of every size, shape and des-
cription ·gently rolling in the wake of passing power boats ...
JULIEN
For some reason I've always
felt better in a white suit.
114.
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192. EXT. RIVER - JULIEN'S BOAT - NIGET
Julien's boat is about twenty feet long and two feet wide. Michael
sits in the frcnt, broken crates sit in the middle, and Julie~ oper-
ates a ~iny but incredibly noisy outboard froM the stern. As they
move up the ri~1er, bridges come gliding overhead, ona -after another,
each of them jam-packed with refugees on the move ~o God knows whe=s .
The bridges are so full that people are alraost falling o!f the sides.
As they pass Michael can hear babies crying. Now and then, as a
rocket hits closer to the city the sky glows and then, like an after-
thought, the sound of the explosion runs out across the night.
The dock is half-rotted, sunken into the water next to two decrepit
Esso gasoline pumps wrapped in chains, and beyond, a two-storied
warehouse-type building surrounded by truck sheds and mountainous
stacks of gleaming silver five-gallon tin cans.
Julien runs his boat right up on the dock, hops into the water,
takes hold of the rope and lurches off. Michael follows; the dock
sinking further, bringing the water almost to his knees. He sur-
veys the scene, shaking his head.
JULIEN
Wait here.
in.Chirlese and pounds on the door. The door re-opens and a dan-
gerous-looking CHINESE MAN comes out ir.to purtial view on the
landing. Julien gees on with his explanatio~. The C~i~cse man
glances down at Michael and says something to Julien in Frc~ch
which we do not translate.
JULIEN
(to Michael}
We must pay to enter.
MICHAEL
No problem.
JULIEN
Five thousand American dollars.
MICHAEL
Tell him I'm coming up!
MICHAEL
He's got the American player?
Julien translates the question. The Chinese man does not answer.
Michael slaps another thousand dollars into the Chinese man's hand.
The Chinese man says something, which Julien translates:
JULIEN
(translating)
He says they have the famous
American who has survived twenty-
seven games ... and that this in-
formation has deprived him of his
valuable time ... and that you owe
him another thousand dollars.
Michael slaps another thousand dollars into the Chinese man's hand
but stinging hard this time. The Chinese man smiles, finally opens
the· door and they all go in.
( . sons were ham.~cring on m8tal cans. The air is thic~: with s~oke.
' The only light in the rco2 comes from a fierce~=~- :i~~t ~~~s
from the ceiling focusing on one a=ea, a broken-~ ~~ ~ ~~b~c. ~e-
cause the lighting leaves o:~er pa=ts dirk or in =~~~-=~s i= ices
not allow us to see it all at once, but there is a s~ggesticn of
armed BODYGUARDSall over t~e place.
appealing.
at Michael,
of one stranger eyeing
Michael leans
studying
another,
his face with the blank
pale,
in closer
exhausted;
toward
detach,-:-.ent
yet irnposi~;
him, stops.
and
He doesn't
C know -- we don't know -- what he is going to do.
MICHAEL
(over the noise)
Nick, it's cc! It's Mike!
MICirl\EL {cont)
(shouting)
For Christ's sakes .• ! You got
no reaction for ~e?
HICHl\EL {cont)
Nick! Talk 'to me!
MICHAEL {cont)
(almost to hinself)
I don't believe this whole thing!
(then, directly
to Nick)
You always told . me I was crazy .• !
Why are you doing this? ••. I don't
know what did this to you ...
llG,\.
:-:ICii.-"\Z::!.,( cc:1. t)
Nickl I ditn't ca~s all-~his
way back he~e for ncthi~g --
this city's runnir:g do•,;~~ill
by the minute! ~e gotta get
outta r.erel
MICHl\EL (cont)
Hey, am I talking to myself
here?
Just then, one of the Vietnamese pulls the trigger, clicks out, pass-
es the pistol to the other man, who S?ins it, cocks it, pulls the
trigger, clicks out, and passes it back ju£t as quickly. Nick still
shows no reaction, and now ~is name is called by one of the Chinese.
The first Vietnamese now has the pistol to his head once more. He
pulls the trigger, clicks cut, and pushes the pistol back the other
man. The nan spins it, cocks it and puts it to his head. Suddenly,
with only the soun~ of the banging from below, his body blows away
from the table. There is a small puff of white smoke in the gloo~.
One man outreac~es his companion and catches the pistol as the dead
man cr~~ples to the floor.
Suddenly Michael whirls, spots Julien, crosses to hira and grabs his
arm.
MICHAEL
Get me in the game! I want to
play Nickl
,.. ·photographs
to the noise
Chinaman
of relatives.,
if to gaze upon hi~ directly.
outside
and the ot~ers
all of them tilting
The noise
and as Michael
are all eating,
and Julien
watching
out from the wall
in the office
are brought
TV.
is fully
in,
as
equa:
the
co·- MICHAEL
I want to play! Now!
117.
CHINAMAN
h"hat for?
MICHAEL
What for? -- I'll show you what
for --
Michael yanks out all of his remaining money, very last bill he has,
slams it down on the table.
MICHAEL (cont)
This!
All of the men at the table stop eating to confer. Suddenly Julien
nods to Michael.
Nick and Michael sit facing each other over the battered table. Nick
holds the pistol to his head -- frowning, staring at Michael with a
puzzled expression -- as if somehow he night have met hin before.
Michael holds his eyes, holds them as hard as he can, trying to brea~
through, trying to reach him, get him to speak. The tension shows i~
Michael's face and manner and tone.
HICHAEL
(shouting over and
over like a litany)
Nick, it's me, Michael! Michael!
Remember ~tichaell Hey, Nick, it's
Mike! What the hell do you think
this is - fourth of July?
This last line delivered to mock the game. Nick says nothing; clic~s
out; pushes the pistol across the table. Trembling like a flame shoo~~
through Michael's body, then he picks the pistol up, spins, cocks, a~ '.
clicks out, talking all the time, trying to feed the faint ember of
recognition beginning to flicker in Nick's eyes.
MICHAEL (cont)
You dislike life so much?
NICK
One shot, remember? I love you,
Mike ...
But Nick's finger was in motion. Michael suddenly lunges across the
table for the pistol -- as Hick squeezes the trigger and the pistol
goes off ... Nick's body is driven back by the bullet out of his chai=.
In slow motion we see Nick and Michael fly slowly away from the table,
producing a stunning effect they crash into stacked cartons of li.rr.eri-
can cigarettes. Michael does not move a muscle; the feeling is alffiosc
perfe~tly suppressed. Only his eyes suggest how ha=d he h~s been hit.
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118.
We see ~Hck lyi:-:g on ~he flocr and ·,•;e watch :-1ichael stur:.S~e to his
_,.' "'-.. feet sta.:-inc at ~Jid:'s blood on his :1a:ids, qrir.1, motionless, strick-
en, as the ~i~ny bangi~g builds a~~ builds.
;
.-·
199.
We see
'"'
EXT • . SOUTH
the
C~:::;A
aircraft
D.:l.Y
of
carrier. an A~erican
/ ·' The
sun is behi~~ it, reflecting
on the water, arid helicopters are
coming in c ·,·e rh-:ad. ~·/
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200.
The flight
deck of'.,the
·,,
EXT. AIRC~~?T CARRIER - FLIGHT DECK - DAY
WOMANCORRESPONDENT
his seems to be the last ch'apter
in the historv of American involve-
ment in Viet Nam. It's also been
the largest
people
single
in the history
~ovement
of America
of '·
.-
itself.
.•.
(pauses)
Hilary
the attack
Brown, ABC News, aboard
aircraft carrier USS
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~ 202. INT. LE~-!KO VFW HALL - DAY - - ------- ~ --
The place is empty. 'N:l~i;;e .,L::, .fe:int-niasw0•E
Elie ~eak.i:·n.-g"""Ste-am-:-
/Vt~/'c
..-.:Ss!at&d -0~f't<2-eC: 1Je=o-i the little stage is one of the old vets.
Beside the flag, with a bugle, ~ trying to play taps. He .fr:l•u,g,.,~•/., -
fi!'e, -&L~Ls oM"r' ___ _,., I-, h .,.,I.. _/
1
/ ·
W.--..
{/ 5 C :,i -r ~ ~I 'A--(-
.,. '. I • I.::, ,Z ~ et_ Pf I
'--~l'\":;'"-t:"<1.....,.....-cHURCR-=-;sTARKWE~TiiERSTREET - o~
~s~aits at the curb. The day is cold and ~~he
gleaming bn-ex--.Jl~hicle
- ....
emits a ghostly cl ~hite exhaust.
119.
,....
In the ringing silence of the music's end the doors to the c~urch
r- swing open. Michael, Stan and John aocear with Nick's flag-draped
coffi~. John is holdinc uo one whole-~idc bv h!~s~:~. ~is ~3cc
is impassive. Next, Ax;l ~heels Steven care~ull~ ~:·:~ the i=v st~ :7
Angela holding lightly onto one of his ·arrr.s :o= s:.:;:::;;:..·:: a:-.::::~lei: : :
her child tightly in the other. They are followE:d by more ;:-.ourne:-s,
as the · coffin is placed slowly into the hearse.
Smoke drifts across the leaden sky as the rnourne~s sta~d together
on a steep hillside of tilted, weather-worn headstones. T::e steel
mill looms behind the~, breathing steam and fire and utteri~g a
dull concordia of rumbling sounds.
The priest we saw at the beginning of the film completes his readin;
of the 23rd Psalm.
Camera closes on Michael, Stan, Axel, John and Steven. Axel helps
Steven to the side of the grave. It is awkward. The chair gets
stuck and they all have to help carry it. Each of them has a sin-
gle flower and then, following Michael's lead, they throw it in.
~ Michael looks uo from the grave to the blast furnaces, then m~ets
L Linda in a long- look. Their faces tell us all we need to know abou~
~ this day.
The place is quite dark and a sign that says "CLOSED" hangs in the
window. Michael, Stan, Axel carrying Steven in his arms, Linda anc
John, and Angela with her child all come inside. They sta~c watch-
ing John as he drags out a table into the middle of the floor. They
have all just come from the cemetery. They are ~11 in thei~ coats
and boots, awkward and tired, and they go bum?ing i~to each other
trying to bring chairs.
AXEL
I think this one has a broken
leg, John.
John takes away the broken chair and replaces it with another. He
appears emotionally drained and physically tired.
JOHN
There's coffee already made.
John goes in . the kitchen and comes back with a p~; of coffee which
he puts on the table. Everyone stares at the pot of coffee, as if
th_ey would lock the memory away_ -Fo rever.
120.
JOHN (cont)
I'll c:;et cups.
(barely a whis?er)
I'll help.
OTHERS
(all together)
We'll give you a hand.
Everyone except Steven follows John into the kitchen and begins
loading up with cups.
JOHN
We don't want to get too many.
MICHAEL
I can take more.
AXEL·
Put some here, Linda. Load me
,..
.
Everyone
are too
up .
goes back to
many cups and
the table
after
with their
counting
cups.
themsel~es
Obviously
and getting
there
it all
0 confused they put the extra cups on adjoining ta~les.
JOHN
How does everyone like their
eggs?
LINDA
What about just scrambled, John.
JOHN
(remembering)
Toast, toast ... !
John rushes back into the kitchen with Stan behind him.
John opens the oven coor and pulls out a tray of toast he prepared
earlier. He goes back . outside. Stan remains alone for a moment.
He gives the little kitchen an odd, searching look. Then, his eyes
suddenly close as if he were bearing a sharp pain.
LINDA
I'll help, John.
121.
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JOHN
~-- It's hot, Linda. Watch out now,
this is hot.
Everyone helps make room on the table. John sets down the tray of
half-burned toast. Stan comes back inside, his eyes all red.
STAN
Hey, maybe we should start with
a beer!
AXEL
I'll get 'em. Wait. Let me ...
JOHN
(huskily)
I'll get going on the eggs.
LINDA
Let me help you, John.
JOHN
You sit down, Linda. Pour the
coffee.
Linda pours the coffee. Angela sits down next to Steven, holding
her child. Both are very moved, though they maintain their reserve.
ANGELA
(to Steven)
You okay?
ANGELA (cont)
(as if she wanted
to say more)
It's such a grey day.
Axel comes back with glasses of beer and puts them on the table.
There is a big awkward pause, then they all sit down. Silence.
Michael looks around at everyone. He looks at the beers sitting on
the table and suddenly, soundlessly, tears begin to well up in his
eyes. He moves his mouth, as if trying to say something, but he
can't say a word and the tears roll on down his face. Linda draws
a deep b~eath.
209. INT. KITCHEN - DAY
r· come great body-wracki~g tears, but the dignity with which he does
all_things is still th~re.
JOHN
... Stand
And guide
beside
her ...
her
Da, da, da
Da, da, da
Da, da, da •••
LINDA
God bless America
Land that I love .••
,,., Over
join
the
in.
sound of her singing we hear Michael and then the others
L OTHERS
(the intensity
increases)
Stand beside her
And guide her
Through the night
With the light from above.
John slowly ccmes out through the door behind Linda. His expressio~
goes from sorrow to astonishment. Now he joins in aloud. ~hey all
seem caught in the intensity of the moment, tut whether in joy, re-
lief, or for some other reason, we cannot tell.
EVERYONE
From the mountains
To the prairies
To the oceans
White with foam.
God bless America
My home sweet home.
All of them there and the singing are like one thing, a thing in-
·evitable, older than the memory of man.
They all stop and there's an awkward moment. Michael looks around
the room: no one will meet his eye except Linda. In the fai~t glo~
of light they look at each. other.
123.
Michael =eaches out for one of the glasses of beer. a~d raises it.
The gesture :.::; ::1a.::e:\-:i. th a £:.li.~e :=ind Li:1da smiles -::.20.
MJCH:\Ei..
Here's to ~?ick.
THE END
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