Run-On Sentences
Run-On Sentences
Run-On Sentences
THE SENTENCE
2a A sentence is a group of words that contains a subject and a verb and that
expresses a complete thought.
If a group of words does not express a complete thought, it is a fragment, or an incomplete
part of a sentence.
FRAGMENT the man in the blue coat
SENTENCE The man in the blue coat is my uncle.
FRAGMENT standing in line
SENTENCE We were standing in line.
FRAGMENT before you go to the meeting
SENTENCE Do you want some lunch before you go to the meeting?
Notice that a sentence always begins with a capital letter and ends with a period, a question
mark, or an exclamation point.
The second kind of run-on is called a comma splice. Two sentences are linked together
with only a comma to separate them.
RUN-ONS The Delaware River is in eastern Pennsylvania the Ohio River is in western
Pennsylvania. [fused]
The Delaware River is in eastern Pennsylvania, the Ohio River is in western
Pennsylvania. [comma splice]
You can revise a run-on sentence by using one of the following techniques.
1. Use a comma and a coordinating conjunction (such as and, but, or, nor, so, or yet).
CORRECTED The Delaware River is in eastern Pennsylvania, and the Ohio River
is in western Pennsylvania.
2. Use a semicolon.
CORRECTED The Delaware River is in eastern Pennsylvania; the Ohio River is in
western Pennsylvania.
3. Use a semicolon and a word such as therefore, instead, meanwhile, still, also,
nevertheless, or however. These words are called conjunctive adverbs. Follow a
conjunctive adverb with a comma.
CORRECTED The Delaware River is in eastern Pennsylvania; however, the Ohio
River is in western Pennsylvania.
1. My friend Reiko designed the cover for our yearbook the design won an award
presented by the Houston Arts League. (Use a semicolon.)
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2. Delaware is one of the smallest states, Rhode Island is even smaller. (Use a semicolon
and a conjunctive adverb.)
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3. The sound of the motorcycle woke me up, I still didn’t get out of bed. (Use a comma
and a coordinating conjunction.)
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4. Did you attend the concert my mom wouldn’t let me go on a school night. (Split into
two sentences.)
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5. I have always loved animals someday I’d like to be a veterinarian. (Use a comma and
a coordinating conjunction.)
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2c A sentence consists of two parts: the subject and the predicate. The subject is the
part that names the person or thing the sentence is about. The predicate is the
part that says something about the subject.
The subject may be one word or a group of words. The complete subject contains all the
words that identify the person or thing described in the rest of the sentence. The complete
subject may appear at the beginning, in the middle, or at the end of a sentence.
COMPLETE SUBJECT
EXAMPLES The woman in the red car just got a speeding ticket.
COMPLETE SUBJECT
Did Phoebe’s brother win the poetry contest?
COMPLETE SUBJECT
Into the water dove a brown pelican.
Like the subject, the predicate may be one word or a group of words. The complete predicate
contains all the words that say something about the subject. Like the complete subject, the
complete predicate can appear in many different places in a sentence.
COMPLETE PREDICATE
EXAMPLES The woman in the red car just got a speeding ticket.
COMPLETE PREDICATE
Did Phoebe’s brother win the poetry contest?
COMPLETE PREDICATE
Into the water dove a brown pelican.
2d The simple subject is the main word or group of words within the complete
subject.
EXAMPLE The letter from Sharon is on your desk.
COMPLETE SUBJECT The letter from Sharon
SIMPLE SUBJECT letter
EXAMPLE Did that mysterious Colonel Potter return my call?
COMPLETE SUBJECT that mysterious Colonel Potter
SIMPLE SUBJECT Colonel Potter
NOTE In this module, the term subject refers to the simple subject unless otherwise
indicated.
When you look for the simple predicate in a sentence, be sure to include all parts of the
verb phrase. Keep in mind the various helping verbs, such as am, is, were, do, have, can,
will, and could.
NOTE In this module, the simple predicate is usually called the verb.
The words not and never and the contraction -n’t are not part of a verb or verb
phrase.
1.
The high school band has finally gotten new uniforms after many years.
2.
They are black with orange stripes down the pant legs and the sleeves.
3.
A committee raised the money for the uniforms.
4.
They earned almost $3,000 through car washes, bake sales, and a flea market.
5.
Everyone in the band helped with these activities.
6.
The band members will appear in their new uniforms tonight.
7.
Dr. Beach has arranged for the appearance of four other high school bands from
various parts of the city.
8. All the band members will march into the stadium in uniform.
9. Then they will play “The Star-Spangled Banner” together.
10. Are you going to the concert?
The best way to find the subject of a sentence is to find the verb first. Then ask yourself,
“Who or what is performing this action?”
EXAMPLES Each month at the library, you can meet the author of a best-selling novel.
[The verb is can meet. Who can meet? You can meet. You is the subject.]
The fuel for the lantern is in the shed. [The verb is is. What is in the shed?
Fuel is in the shed. Fuel is the subject.]
2fg You can find the subject in a question by turning the question into a statement.
Find the verb in the statement and ask, “Who or what does this?”
Questions often begin with a verb, a helping verb, or a word such as what, where, when,
how, or why. The subject usually follows the verb or helping verb.
EXAMPLE Has the plane left? becomes The plane has left. [What left? The plane left.]
2h Do not mistake the word there for the subject of a sentence. To find the subject
in this type of sentence, omit there and ask who or what performs the verb’s
action.
EXAMPLE There are many worms in the compost pile.
[What are in the compost pile? The worms are. Worms is the subject.]
NOTE Like there, the adverb here often begins a sentence. To find the subject in such
a sentence, omit here and ask who or what performs the verb’s action.
EXAMPLE Here is your ticket. [What is? Your ticket is. Ticket is the subject.]
2i In a request or a command, the subject of a sentence is usually not stated. In
such sentences, you is the understood subject.
REQUEST Please feed the cat. [Who should feed the cat? You should feed the cat. You
is the understood subject.]
COMMAND Don’t talk during his speech. [Who shouldn’t talk? You shouldn’t talk. You is
the understood subject.]
EXAMPLE Lucia and Sunil brought refreshments for the team. [Who brought
refreshments? Lucia brought them. Sunil brought them. Lucia and Sunil form
the compound subject.]
When more than two subjects make up the compound subject, the subjects are separated by
commas, with a conjunction before the last one.
EXAMPLE Lucia, Sunil, and Sophia brought refreshments for the team. [Compound
subject: Lucia, Sunil, Sophia]
EXAMPLE Either Lucia or Sunil will bring refreshments for the team. [Compound
subject: Lucia, Sunil]
2k A compound verb consists of two or more verbs that are joined by a conjunction
and have the same subject.
EXAMPLES The photographer ran up the aisle and snapped the president’s picture.
I listened to the game on the radio but missed the fourth inning.
Our team won four games, lost two, and tied three.
Congress will either approve the bill or suggest some changes.
Notice that in the last sentence, the helping verb will is not repeated before the second
verb, suggest. In compound verbs, the helping verb may or may not be repeated before the
second verb if it is the same for both verbs.
1. The fielder shielded her eyes, saw the ball, and moved quickly to her left.
2. I opened the door but saw no one on the porch.
3. Tomorrow morning, we will either go to the beach or walk into town for breakfast at
the diner.
4. Odessa will direct the play and perform the role of Lady Macbeth.
5. Ray Charles wrote the music and lyrics for his songs and played the piano extremely
well.
6. You can come to Puerto Rico, relax on the beach, and visit our great shops and
restaurants.
7. At this theater, you can watch a movie and eat dinner in your seat.
8. The new computers at the library have large monitors and are available for everyone’s
use.
9. My cousin joined the Houston Museum of Natural Science last year and has gone to
many interesting programs there.
10. Could you either meet me right after school today or come to my house after soccer
practice?
(2) A predicate adjective is an adjective in the predicate that modifies the subject of
the sentence.
EXAMPLES The wind feels cold.
The ground is wet.
Objects are complements that do not refer to the subject of the sentence.
2n A direct object is a noun or pronoun that receives the action of the verb or shows
the result of the action. It answers the question “Whom?” or “What?” about a
transitive verb.
EXAMPLES Gina called me. [Gina called whom? Me is the direct object.]
Hot soup may burn your throat. [Hot soup may burn what? Throat is the
direct object.]
2o An indirect object is a noun or pronoun that precedes the direct object and
usually tells to whom or for whom (or to what or for what) the action of the verb
is done.
EXAMPLES The coach gave Josh and him awards. [Josh and him are the compound
indirect object of the verb gave, telling to whom the coach gave the awards.
The noun awards is the direct object.]
Juan built his sister a shelf for her books. [The noun sister is the indirect
object of the verb built, telling for whom Juan built a shelf. The noun shelf
is the direct object.]
If the word to or for is used, the noun or pronoun following it is part of a prepositional
phrase and cannot be an indirect object.
PREPOSITIONAL PHRASE I made a card for you.
INDIRECT OBJECT I made you a card.
PREPOSITIONAL PHRASE He gave the extra ticket to Tom.
INDIRECT OBJECT He gave Tom the extra ticket.
1. Can you loan Marley and Pat enough money for their tickets?
3. Dr. Fuller gave the children some good advice about poison ivy.
5. Before the hike, Javon gave each girl and boy trail maps.
8. Take Marshall Boulevard to the top of the hill and turn right.
12. Did you study the life of Sauk leader Black Hawk?
13. He teaches his students the concepts of t’ai chi ch’uan, a system of self-defense and
meditation.
Romesh Gunesekera is a [1] native of Sri Lanka. [2] Sri Lanka is an island nation located
in the Indian Ocean. Gunesekera now [3] lives in London, where he has published
[4] Monkfish Moon. His book is [5] skillful in its blending of appearance and reality. Its nine
short [6] stories give [7] readers several interesting [8] views of life in Sri Lanka.
[9] Some of the stories are [10] frightening. They [11] tell of events related to Sri Lanka’s
long and cruel civil war. Only the [12] setting, however, will seem [13] unfamiliar to readers
outside of Sri Lanka. All of the stories contain complex [14] characters and vivid details.
Because Gunesekera [15] has based this excellent [16] collection of stories on his native
land, he has given the [17] East and the West a new and powerful [18] link. His book
[19] is both a masterpiece of literature and a [20] tribute to a beautiful and complex country.
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In 1991, Paul Sereno discovered a dinosaur fossil in Argentina
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That dinosaur was given the name Eoraptor
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What a fierce animal the dinosaur must have been
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Look up an image of the Eoraptor to see what I mean
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Did it live about 228 million years ago
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Another dinosaur lived at about the same time
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What dinosaur was that
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It was called Herrerasaurus, and Sereno found its fossil in the same rock
formation, as the Eoraptor
_____ 9. Do you believe that dinosaurs once roamed these woods
_____ 10. Wow, they must have been terrifying
C. Writing Sentences
Write 15 sentences according to the guidelines below. Underline the part or parts called for
in the guidelines.
EX. a declarative sentence with a compound verb
Alfonso Cuarón co-wrote and directed the movie Gravity.
1. a declarative sentence with a predicate adjective
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2. an interrogative sentence with a direct object
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3. an interrogative sentence with a compound subject
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4. an imperative sentence with an indirect object and a direct object
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