Feedback On Writing Task 1 (Map)

FEEDBACK ON WRITING TASK 1 (MAP)
PRACTICE 1: The maps below show the development of an area before and
after the building of a hydroelectric dam.
=> * Body 1: In 1980,

- North to South (river), both sides of which lay a few scattered mountains.
- To the East of the river, there was irrigated farmland and a village.
- To the West of the river, there were rare plants and animals, coupled with
an ancient structure situated in a forest.
● Body 2: Over the next 20 years,
- The removal of agricultural and historical features => the expansion of a
section of the river => the appearance of the lake with boat and fishing
activities.
- At the southernmost tip of the lake, lay a hydroelectric dam + four
electrical towers.
- The forest was cut down
- Finally, the previous village was moved/ relocated further south in order
to make way for a hotel.
The given map highlights the development which took place in a region
before and after the construction of a hydroelectric dam between 1980 and
2000. Overall, the area had become much more developed, with more facilities
for residential and commercial purposes. Besides, the river was turned into a
lake by removing some natural and historical features.
In 1980, the area still had several natural features, including a forest with
plants and animals. Running from the North to the South of the map is the river,
both sides of it lay a few scattered mountains. To the East of the river, there was
irrigated farmland and a village lay alongside. On the other side, rare fauna and
flora, coupled with an ancient structure were situated in a forest.
After the course of 20 years, there was an expansion of a section of the
river, which resulted in the appearance of a lake, serving as a place for boating
and fishing activities. At the southernmost tip of the lake, lay a hydroelectric
dam and four new electrical towers. In order to necessitate these erections, the
previous forest was chopped down, together with the removal of some
agricultural and historical features. Finally, the previous village was relocated
further south in order to make way for the establishment of a hotel.
PRACTICE 2: The two maps below show the developments along Olive Drive
before and after the construction of new facilities between 1980 and now.
=> Body 1: To the North of Olive Drive

- The park remained unchanged
- A new school to the East + a new road leading to the school
- The addition of a new block of houses/ row of housing units
Body 2: Concerning the changes in the South of Olive Drive
- The shops converted into a shopping center and a supermarket
- The bank, and community center were both reduced in size. The
bank was moved/ relocated to behind the center
- A cafe was built in the area once belonged to the bank
- The hospital remained the same/ remained intact.
The given two maps illustrate how the area surrounding Olive Drive has
changed since 1980. Overall, the area has become much more developed, with
the addition of more residential, commercial, and educational facilities.
To the Northernmost tip of the region surrounding Olive Drive, the park
has remained intact over the period. Additionally, a new school has been
established in the northeastern part above Olive Drive. A row of housing units
was built together with a new vehicle track, leading to the school.
Concerning the changes in the South of Olive Drive, the shops were
converted into a shopping center and a supermarket. The bank and the
community center were both reduced in size, and the bank was relocated behind
the center. Moreover, the area that once belonged to the bank is now a cafe, and
the hospital in this area has been situated at the same place over the given
timeframe.
PRACTICE 3: The two maps below show an island, before and after the
construction of some tourist facilities.
=> Body 1
- The Eastern space remained the same/ remained intact
- The addition of new accommodations in the central area and more
footpaths
- A new pier to the South to accommodate sailboats + connected to vehicle
tracks of the island
Body 2
- A new restaurant and a reception to the West side
- More accommodations consisting of bungalows erected in circular
pattern + footpaths along the surrounding zone, leading to the
beach.
- The beach located in the Westernmost section/ tip of the island
remained intact, offering a swimming area.
The given two maps illustrate how an island has changed after the
addition of some facilities. Overall, the underdeveloped island has been turned
into a tourist destination, with more facilities for commercial purposes, namely/
complete with accommodations, a restaurant, and a pier.
Regarding the Eastern space of the island, there has been no change made
in this part. New footpaths and accommodations were erected in a circular
pattern, situated in the central area of the island. Moreover, to the South of the
island, there was an addition of a pier, accommodating sailboats and connecting
to vehicle tracks of the island.
In terms of the West side’s changes, a new restaurant and a reception
were constructed to serve tourists. More accommodations consisting of
bungalows and footpaths along the surrounding zone were built, leading to the
beach. In the Westernmost tip of the island, the beach remained intact over the
period, and it also offered a swimming area.

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=> * Body 1: In 1980,

=> Body 1: To the North of Olive Drive

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