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ANNOTATION
^ partially effective Y Y Y Y Y
DEV development Y
+ effect Y (good Y Y
own (effective
words) use of
own
words)
O overview or Y Y
organisation (effective (overview)
organisati
on / overvi
ew)
LM lifted material Y Y
REP repetition Y Y Y
summative comment Y Y Y
- Reading Reading Reading
- Writing Writing
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SEEN
- viewed – including Y Y Y
- blank and additional
pages
Note: All examiners are instructed that alternative correct answers and unexpected approaches in
candidates’ scripts must be given marks that fairly reflect the relevant knowledge and skills
demonstrated. Nonetheless, the content must be clearly related to and derived from the texts.
Question 1
This question tests reading assessment objectives R1, R2 and R5 (25 marks):
and Question 1(f) only tests writing assessment objectives W2 and W3 (5 marks):
1(a) R5 1
1(b)(i) R1 and R2 2
1(b)(ii) R1 and R2 2
1(c) R1 2
1(d)(i) R1 and R5 2
1(e) R1 and R2 3
Total 30
1(b)(i) Using your own words, explain what the text means by: 2
‘special diet’ (line 3).
• distinctive / different / particular / specific / just for her / tailored (to her
needs) / unique
• food / nourishment / nutrition / meal(s) / alimentation
1(b)(ii) Using your own words, explain what the text means by: 2
‘sole purpose’ (line 5)
Give two characteristics that make the early bumblebee and the garden
bumblebee different.
• Growth
• Reproduction
• (enable plant to produce) food
• range of food / different foods / fruits, coffee and vanilla / appealing foods
• cotton (clothing) / natural clothing materials / natural fabrics
• education / science / the arts / studying them
• not aware of how human decisions impact on bees / do not know that bees
are threatened
• food production is prioritised / want food to be readily available / want safe
food / farmers need to produce food / need to use pesticides
• need to build (more) houses / need to expand towns / need for
urbanisation
• selfish / thoughtless / only thinking about themselves / focused on human
desires / consider only human needs
• do not realise threats to bees (will) affect humans too
Answers which are entirely in the words of the text should not be credited.
1(f) According to Text B, what should people consider and do before taking up 15
beekeeping?
You must use continuous writing (not note form) and use your own
words as far as possible.
Use the Marking Criteria for Question 1(f) (Table A, Reading and Table B
Writing).
0 0 • No creditable content.
Table B, Writing
3 4–5 • A relevant response that is expressed clearly, fluently and mostly with
concision.
• The response is well organised.
• The response is in the candidate’s own words (where appropriate), using
a range of well-chosen vocabulary which clarifies meaning.
0 0 • No creditable content.
Note 1: All examiners are instructed that alternative correct answers and unexpected approaches in
candidates’ scripts must be given marks that fairly reflect the relevant knowledge and skills
demonstrated. Nonetheless, the content must be clearly related to and derived from the texts.
Question 2
This question tests reading assessment objectives R1, R2 and R4 (25 marks):
2(a)(i) R1 1
2(a)(ii) R2 1
2(a)(iii) R1 1
2(a)(iv) R1 1
2(b)(i) R2 1
2(b)(ii) R2 1
2(b)(iii) R1 1
Total 25
2(a)(i) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea as 1
the words underlined:
Abdul does not feel the same confidence about the future as Damian.
• (Damian’s / his) optimism (line 4)
Accept cloze responses that repeat all / some of the question stem with the
correct answer.
2(a)(ii) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea as 1
the words underlined:
Accept cloze responses that repeat all / some of the question stem with the
correct answer.
2(a)(iii) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea as 1
the words underlined:
Accept cloze responses that repeat all / some of the question stem with the
correct answer.
2(a)(iv) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea as 1
the words underlined:
Damian and Abdul look very thoughtfully at all the bees in the acacia
tree.
• (the two men / they) contemplate (the bees) (line 47)
Accept cloze responses that repeat all / some of the question stem with the
correct answer.
2(b)(i) Using your own words, explain what the writer means by each of the 1
words underlined:
A few months earlier Damian and Abdul had been relaxing in Damian’s
field, near his beehives. It had been the first mild morning for many
months and the two men were sipping Damian’s home-made acacia
honey and berry smoothies.
2(b)(ii) Using your own words, explain what the writer means by each of the 1
words underlined:
• mild: not too hot / not too cold, cool(er) / warm(er), pleasant (weather),
agreeable, temperate, calm, nice
2(b)(iii) Using your own words, explain what the writer means by each of the 1
words underlined:
2(c) Use one example from the text below to explain how the writer suggests 3
the thoughts and feelings of Damian about running his own business.
‘I agree with that little bee,’ announced Damian, smacking his lips in
pleasure at the taste of honey and berries. ‘We should venture out of our
own hives and taste the sweet nectar of life. Get ahead of the crowd.
Nice big shop in the middle of town.’
Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create
effect in these paragraphs. Choose three examples of words or phrases
from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices should include
the use of imagery.
Mark holistically for the overall quality of the response, not for the number of
words chosen, bearing in mind that for the higher bands there should be a
range of choices to demonstrate an understanding of how language works, and
that this should include the ability to explain images. It is the quality of the
analysis that attracts marks. Do not deduct marks for inaccurate statements;
simply ignore them.
The following notes are a guide to what good responses might say about the
selections.
Candidates can make any sensible comment, but only credit those that are
relevant to the correct meanings of the words in the context and that have some
validity. Alternative acceptable explanations should be credited. Credit
comments on effects created by non-vocabulary choices such as
grammar / syntax and punctuation devices. These must be additional to
comments on vocabulary.
2(d) Paragraph 5 begins ‘The delicate tracery …’ and is about Damian’s view
of the hive and acacia tree as a worker bee comes out to look for nectar.
Overview might include: the complex activities of the bees as the acacia tree
starts to come into bloom and nature works in harmony
Only credit comments on stylistic effect where these are explicitly linked to
choices.
2(d) Paragraph 11 begins ‘A worker bee …’ and is about a bee arriving in the
kitchen as Damian thinks about his range of smoothies.
Only credit comments on stylistic effect where these are explicitly linked to
choices.
2 4–6 • The response provides a mixture of appropriate choices and words that
communicate less well.
• The response may correctly identify linguistic devices but not explain why
they are used.
• Explanations may be few, general, slight or only partially effective.
• They may repeat the language of the original or do not refer to specific
words.
Note: All examiners are instructed that alternative correct answers and unexpected approaches in
candidates’ scripts must be given marks that fairly reflect the relevant knowledge and skills
demonstrated. Nonetheless, the content must be clearly related to and derived from the texts.
Question 3
This question tests reading assessment objectives R1, R2 and R3 (15 marks):
3 You are Abdul. At the end of your first day selling smoothies at the 25
market, you write a journal entry in which you reflect on your
experiences.
Use the Marking Criteria for Question 3 (Table A, Reading and Table B
Writing)
Candidates should select ideas from the text (see below) and develop them
relevantly, supporting what they write with details from the text. Look for an
appropriate register for the genre, and a clear and balanced response which
covers the three areas of the question, is well sequenced, and is in the
candidate’s own words.
Annotate A1 for references to the most important considerations you had when
wanting to set up the business
Annotate A2 for references to your thoughts and feelings about your
business partner, Damian, and the advantages and drawbacks of being in
business together
Annotate A3 for references to how you see your business developing in the
future and any concerns you may have.
3 A1: explain the most important considerations you had when wanting to
set up the business
A2: explain your thoughts and feelings about your business partner,
Damian, and the advantages and
drawbacks of being in business together
A3: describe how you see your business developing in the future and any
concerns you may have.
• (fear of) rivals (det. may copy business idea) [dev. may be dependent on
Damian’s creativity to fight off rivals / need to be unique / need to carefully
watch market / more regular polls / market research to see what
customers want]
• permanent premises (det. (no other) shop in town, open every day)
[dev. not sure he wants the change / enjoys life as it is now / possibility for
the future / filling a gap in the market]
• broadening product range (det. savoury, pizzas, different milks) [dev.
unworkable idea and/or likely impact on the market / would need to invest
in further resources and/or staff]
• future of bees (det. currently living in Damian’s field) [dev.
practicalities / feels responsible for the bees’ welfare / add to the hives]
• environmental credentials (det. eco-friendly packaging, amount of
packaging) [dev. natural product so should be (more) responsible / look
for greener solutions]
5 13–15 • The response reveals a thorough evaluation and analysis of the text.
• Developed ideas are sustained and well related to the text.
• A wide range of ideas is applied.
• There is supporting detail throughout, which is well integrated into the
response, contributing to a strong sense of purpose and approach.
• All three bullets are well covered.
• A consistent and convincing voice is used.
4 10–12 • The response demonstrates a competent reading of the text with some
evidence of basic evaluation or analysis.
• A good range of ideas is evident.
• Some ideas are developed but the ability to sustain them may not be
consistent.
• There is frequent, helpful supporting detail, contributing to a clear sense
of purpose.
• All three bullets are covered.
• An appropriate voice is used.
1 1–3 • The response is either very general, with little reference to the text, or a
reproduction of sections of the original.
• Content is either insubstantial or unselective.
• There is little realisation of the need to modify material from the text.
3 5–6 • Language is clear but comparatively plain and/or factual, expressing little
opinion.
• Ideas are rarely extended, but explanations are adequate.
• Some sections are quite well sequenced but there may be flaws in
structure.