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<h2>ĐỀ

BÀI<o:p></o:p></h2>

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The

table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990,
2000 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main
features and make comparisons where relevant <o:p></o:p>

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data-widget_type=heading.default>

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<h2>BÀI

LÀM<o:p></o:p></h2>
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<div data-id=3bc9927c data-element_type=container>

The

table beneath compares four distinct
nations in terms of the production of milk in three years 1990,
2000 and 2010.

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-

alt:auto'>Overall,
differences in the amount of
litres
were seen clearly in four
countries.
In addition, the Netherlands always
was the top country in producing milk, while the opposite was
true for Guatemala. Besides, only the Netherlands and Australia had the production of milk over 9 million
litres in three years.

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-

alt:auto'>Looking
at the initial inspection, the year 1990 witnessed a large amount in litres in
the Netherlands, by 11,262,000, slightly higher than Australia, by 11,246,000.
After ten years, the production of milk in the two nations took turns at
11,155,000 and 11,105,000 litres respectively. In 2010, while the production of
milk in the Netherlands had an
incline to increase to 11,466,000 litres, its in Australia decreased to 9,165.000.

<p class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-

alt:auto'>Regarding
the milk production in Tanzania in 1990, its figure was 87,000 litres, compared
to only 26,000 litres in Guatemala. In the subsequent ten years, both countries
had a tendency to climb into
production, such as 1,42,000 for the former and 55,000 for the
latter. The year 2010 underwent a
gradual increase in milk production in Tanzania, at 1,55,000
litres, in comparison with 84,000
litres in Guatemala -which was the country that had the lowest
production in four nations.

</div>

<div data-id=58fedcd0 data-element_type=widget

data-widget_type=heading.default>

<div>

<h2>OVERALL BAND SCORE:

7.0<o:p></o:p></h2>

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</div>
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<div>

<div data-id=4532bdc2 data-element_type=container

data-settings="{"background_background":"classic"}">

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<div data-id=410c2c0 data-element_type=widget

data-widget_type=text-editor.default>

<div>

<h3>Task Response: <span

class=tr-0>7<o:p></o:p></h3>

<ul type=disc>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
mso-list:l5 level1 lfo1;tab-stops:list 36.0pt'>Relevance to Prompt: 7<o:p></o:p></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
mso-list:l5 level1 lfo1;tab-stops:list 36.0pt'>Clarity of Position: 7<o:p></o:p></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
mso-list:l5 level1 lfo1;tab-stops:list 36.0pt'>Depth of Ideas: 6<o:p></o:p></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
mso-list:l5 level1 lfo1;tab-stops:list 36.0pt'>Appropriateness of Format: 8<o:p></o:p></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
mso-list:l5 level1 lfo1;tab-stops:list 36.0pt'>Relevant & Specific Examples: 7<o:p></o:p></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
mso-list:l5 level1 lfo1;tab-stops:list 36.0pt'>Appropriate Word Count: 9<o:p></o:p></li>
</ul>

Bài viết đã đáp ứng yêu cầu đề bài khá tốt, trình bày được các
đặc điểm chính và so sánh giữa các quốc gia. Tuy nhiên, một số thông tin chi tiết
chưa được trình bày đầy đủ và chính xác. Ví dụ, bài viết chỉ tập trung vào so
sánh sản lượng sữa của Hà Lan và Úc mà chưa phân tích đầy đủ về Tanzania và
Guatemala. Điểm số các tiêu chí phụ phản ánh mức độ đáp ứng yêu cầu đề bài ở
các khía cạnh khác nhau.

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data-widget_type=text-editor.default>

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<h3>Coherence &

Cohesion: 7<o:p></o:p></h3>

<ul type=disc>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2;tab-stops:list 36.0pt'>Logical Organization: 7<o:p></o:p></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2;tab-stops:list 36.0pt'>Effective Introduction & Conclusion: 6<o:p></o:p></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2;tab-stops:list 36.0pt'>Supported Main Points: 6<o:p></o:p></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2;tab-stops:list 36.0pt'>Cohesive Devices Usage: 7<o:p></o:p></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
mso-list:l0 level1 lfo2;tab-stops:list 36.0pt'>Paragraphing: 7<o:p></o:p></li>
</ul>

Bài viết được tổ chức khá logic, các ý được trình bày theo
trình tự hợp lý. Tuy nhiên, việc liên kết giữa các ý chưa được chặt chẽ và mạch
lạc ở một số chỗ. Việc sử dụng các từ nối và câu chuyển tiếp cần được cải thiện
để tăng tính liên kết giữa các đoạn văn. Điểm số các tiêu chí phụ phản ánh mức
độ mạch lạc và sự gắn kết giữa các ý trong bài viết.

</div>

</div>
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data-widget_type=text-editor.default>

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<h3>Lexical Resource: <span

class=lr-0>7<o:p></o:p></h3>

<ul type=disc>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
mso-list:l4 level1 lfo3;tab-stops:list 36.0pt'>Vocabulary Range: 7<o:p></o:p></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
mso-list:l4 level1 lfo3;tab-stops:list 36.0pt'>Lexical Accuracy: 6<o:p></o:p></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
mso-list:l4 level1 lfo3;tab-stops:list 36.0pt'>Spelling and Word Formation: 7<o:p></o:p></li>
</ul>

Bài viết sử dụng một lượng từ vựng khá phong phú và đa dạng,
tuy nhiên độ chính xác và sự phù hợp của một số từ cần được cải thiện. Một số từ
được sử dụng chưa chính xác hoặc chưa phù hợp với ngữ cảnh. Điểm số các tiêu
chí phụ phản ánh mức độ phong phú, chính xác và sự phù hợp của từ vựng trong
bài viết.

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data-widget_type=text-editor.default>

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<h3>Grammatical Range

& Accuracy: 6<o:p></o:p></h3>

<ul type=disc>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4;tab-stops:list 36.0pt'>Sentence Structure Variety: 6<o:p></o:p></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4;tab-stops:list 36.0pt'>Grammar Accuracy: 6<o:p></o:p></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
mso-list:l1 level1 lfo4;tab-stops:list 36.0pt'>Punctuation Usage: 7<o:p></o:p></li>
</ul>

Bài viết sử dụng các cấu trúc câu khá đa dạng, tuy nhiên độ
chính xác ngữ pháp còn hạn chế. Một số câu có lỗi ngữ pháp hoặc sai cấu trúc
câu. Điểm số các tiêu chí phụ phản ánh mức độ đa dạng và chính xác của ngữ pháp
trong bài viết.

</div>

<div data-id=43afea21 data-element_type=widget

data-widget_type=heading.default>

<div>

<h2>NHẬN XÉT CHI

TIẾT<o:p></o:p></h2>

</div>
</div>

<div data-id=58d2eb11 data-element_type=container>

<div>

<h3>Phân tích chi tiết

bài viết (Detailed Feedback)<o:p></o:p></h3>

<h4 id=gii-thiu-introduction><span style='mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New

Roman"'>Giới
thiệu (Introduction)<o:p></o:p></h4>

"The table beneath compares four distinct nations in terms of the

production of milk in three years 1990, 2000 and 2010. Overall, differences in
the amount of litres were seen clearly in four countries. In addition, the
Netherlands always was the top country in producing milk, while the opposite
was true for Guatemala. Besides, only the Netherlands and Australia had the
production of milk over 9 million litres in three years."<o:p></o:p>

</blockquote>

<h5 id=feedback><span style='mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New

Roman"'>Feedback<o:p></o:p></h5>

-Task Response/Task Achievement: Đoạn giới thiệu tốt, đã

nêu rõ nội dung bảng biểu và tóm tắt được những điểm chính. Tuy nhiên, việc chỉ
ra sự khác biệt lớn giữa Hà Lan và Guatemala có vẻ hơi vội vàng, chưa đủ tổng
quan. Cần bổ sung thêm thông tin về xu hướng chung của sản lượng sữa trong ba
năm, ví dụ như có tăng hay giảm, tốc độ tăng giảm như thế nào. Việc chỉ ra Hà
Lan và Úc luôn trên 9 triệu lít cũng chưa đủ toàn diện, cần kết hợp với thông
tin về các quốc gia khác để tạo nên một bức tranh tổng quan hơn. Thiếu sự so
sánh tổng quát hơn giữa các quốc gia.

-Coherence & Cohesion: Đoạn văn mạch lạc, các câu liên
kết khá tốt nhờ các từ nối như "Overall", "In addition",
"Besides". Tuy nhiên, việc trình bày thông tin còn thiếu sự cân bằng,
tập trung quá nhiều vào Hà Lan và Úc mà chưa đủ chú trọng đến Tanzania và
Guatemala. Cần sắp xếp thông tin một cách logic hơn, tạo nên một cái nhìn tổng
quát hơn về toàn bộ dữ liệu.

-Grammatical Range & Accuracy: Cấu trúc câu khá đơn giản.
"The Netherlands always was the top country" nên sửa thành "The
Netherlands consistently ranked highest". "Besides" có thể thay
thế bằng từ nối phù hợp hơn như "Furthermore" hoặc
"Moreover" để tăng tính học thuật.

-Lexical Resource: Từ vựng sử dụng khá đơn giản.

"Differences in the amount of litres" có thể thay thế bằng
"significant variations in milk production" hoặc "substantial
discrepancies in milk output" để thể hiện sự chính xác và học thuật
hơn.<o:p></o:p>

<h5 id=rewrite-suggestion><span style='mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New

Roman"'>Rewrite
suggestion<o:p></o:p></h5>
<blockquote style='margin-top:5.0pt;margin-bottom:5.0pt'>

"The table presents the annual milk production in four countries—the

Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania, and Guatemala—from 1990 to 2010.
Overall,
while the Netherlands consistently maintained the highest milk production,
significant variations were observed across the four countries, with a clear
disparity between the top producers and Guatemala. Furthermore,
only the Netherlands and Australia consistently exceeded 9 million liters of
milk production throughout the three decades. In contrast,
Tanzania and Guatemala showed considerably lower and gradually increasing
production levels."<o:p></o:p>

</blockquote>

<h4 id=than-bai-1-body-paragraph-1><span style='mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New

Roman"'>Thân
bài 1 (Body Paragraph 1)<o:p></o:p></h4>

"Looking at the initial inspection, the year 1990 witnessed a large amount
in litres in the Netherlands, by 11,262,000, slightly higher than Australia, by
11,246,000. After ten years, the production of milk in the two nations took
turns at 11,155,000 and 11,105,000 litres respectively. In 2010, while the
production of milk in the Netherlands had an incline to increase to 11,466,000
litres, its in Australia decreased to 9,165.000."<o:p></o:p>

</blockquote>

<h5 id=feedback><span style='mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New

Roman"'>Feedback<o:p></o:p></h5>

-Task Response/Task Achievement: Đoạn văn tập trung vào so

sánh sản lượng sữa của Hà Lan và Úc. Tuy nhiên, việc so sánh chỉ tập trung vào
con số cụ thể mà thiếu sự phân tích xu hướng. Cần chỉ ra xu hướng tăng giảm của
sản lượng sữa ở hai quốc gia này trong suốt 3 năm.

-Coherence & Cohesion: Mạch lạc nhưng chưa đủ tổng

quan. Việc chỉ tập trung vào hai quốc gia làm thiếu đi sự cân bằng trong bài
viết.

-Grammatical Range & Accuracy: "Looking at the

initial inspection" rất không tự nhiên, cần sửa lại. "Its in
Australia" sai ngữ pháp.

-Lexical Resource: Từ vựng đơn giản, "an incline to

increase" không tự nhiên, nên dùng từ chính xác hơn.<o:p></o:p>

<h5 id=rewrite-suggestion><span style='mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New

Roman"'>Rewrite
suggestion<o:p></o:p></h5>

"In 1990, the Netherlands (11,262,000 liters) and Australia (11,246,000

liters) were the leading milk producers, with only a marginal difference.
By
2000, their production levels remained relatively close (11,155,000
and 11,105,000 liters respectively). However, by 2010, while
the Netherlands experienced a modest increase to 11,466,000 liters, Australia's
production declined significantly to 9,165,000 liters."<o:p></o:p>

</blockquote>

<h4 id=than-bai-2-body-paragraph-2><span style='mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New

Roman"'>Thân
bài 2 (Body Paragraph 2)<o:p></o:p></h4>

"Regarding the milk production in Tanzania in 1990, its figure was

87,000 litres, compared to only 26,000 litres in Guatemala. In the subsequent
ten years, both countries had a tendency to climb into production, such as
1,42,000 for the former and 55,000 for the latter. The year 2010 underwent a
gradual increase in milk production in Tanzania, at 1,55,000 litres, in
comparison with 84,000 litres in Guatemala -which was the country that had the
lowest production in four nations."<o:p></o:p>

</blockquote>

<h5 id=feedback><span style='mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New

Roman"'>Feedback<o:p></o:p></h5>

-Task Response/Task Achievement: Đoạn văn tập trung vào

Tanzania và Guatemala. Việc so sánh và phân tích xu hướng tăng trưởng của hai
quốc gia này là tốt. Tuy nhiên, việc nhắc lại Guatemala là quốc gia có sản lượng
thấp nhất là thừa.

-Coherence & Cohesion: Mạch lạc, nhưng cần kết nối tốt
hơn với đoạn trước.

-Grammatical Range & Accuracy: "In the subsequent

ten years" có thể thay thế bằng cách diễn đạt khác tự nhiên hơn. "The
year 2010 underwent..." không tự nhiên.

-Lexical Resource: "A tendency to climb into

production" không tự nhiên, cần dùng từ chính xác hơn.<o:p></o:p>

<h5 id=rewrite-suggestion><span style='mso-fareast-font-family:"Times New

Roman"'>Rewrite
suggestion<o:p></o:p></h5>

"In stark contrast to the Netherlands and Australia, Tanzania and

Guatemala showed considerably lower milk production levels. In
1990,
Tanzania produced 87,000 liters, while Guatemala's output was a mere 26,000
liters. Over the next decade, both countries witnessed growth,
reaching 142,000 liters and 55,000 liters respectively by 2000. This upward
trend continued in 2010, with Tanzania reaching 155,000 liters and Guatemala
84,000 liters."<o:p></o:p>

</blockquote>

<h3 id=ci-thin-cach-din-t-expression-improvement><span style='mso-fareast-font-

family:
"Times New Roman"'>Cải thiện cách diễn đạt (Expression
Improvement)<o:p></o:p></h3>

<h4 id=loi-bai-task-type-bng-biu-table><span style='mso-fareast-font-family:

"Times New Roman"'>Loại bài: (Task Type) Bảng biểu (Table)<o:p></o:p></h4>

<h5 id=mo-chinh>Mẹo

chính<o:p></o:p></h5>

<ul type=disc>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
mso-list:l3 level1 lfo5;tab-stops:list 36.0pt'>Sử dụng ngôn ngữ chính xác và học
thuật.<o:p></o:p></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
mso-list:l3 level1 lfo5;tab-stops:list 36.0pt'>Tóm tắt thông tin chính xác và đầy đủ
nhất.<o:p></o:p></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
mso-list:l3 level1 lfo5;tab-stops:list 36.0pt'>So sánh và đối chiếu các dữ liệu một cách
logic.<o:p></o:p></li>
</ul>

<h4 id=cu-truc--xut>Cấu

trúc đề xuất<o:p></o:p></h4>

<ul type=disc>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
mso-list:l2 level1 lfo6;tab-stops:list 36.0pt'>Mở bài
(Introduction): Giới thiệu ngắn gọn về
nội dung bảng biểu. Ví dụ: "The table illustrates the annual milk
production (in liters) across four countries – the Netherlands, Australia,
Tanzania, and Guatemala – from 1990 to 2010."<o:p></o:p></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
mso-list:l2 level1 lfo6;tab-stops:list 36.0pt'>Tổng quan
(Overview): Tóm tắt những điểm
chính, xu hướng chung của sản lượng sữa ở các quốc gia. Ví dụ:
"Overall, the Netherlands consistently ranked as the highest milk
producer, while Guatemala consistently recorded the lowest output.
Australia and the Netherlands showed relatively stable production, whereas
Tanzania experienced significant growth."<o:p></o:p></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
mso-list:l2 level1 lfo6;tab-stops:list 36.0pt'>Thân bài (Body
Paragraphs):
Phân tích chi tiết từng quốc gia hoặc nhóm quốc gia có xu hướng tương
đồng. Sử dụng các từ nối để liên kết các ý. Ví dụ: "Focusing on the
top two producers, the Netherlands and Australia maintained relatively
high and stable production levels throughout the period. However, while
the Netherlands showed a slight increase, Australia experienced a notable
decline in milk production by 2010." Hoặc: "In contrast to the
high production levels in the Netherlands and Australia, Tanzania and
Guatemala had significantly lower outputs. However, both countries
demonstrated a steady increase in milk production over the three
decades."<o:p></o:p></li>
<li class=MsoNormal style='mso-margin-top-alt:auto;mso-margin-bottom-alt:auto;
mso-list:l2 level1 lfo6;tab-stops:list 36.0pt'>(Không cần kết luận
(Conclusion) trong bài viết IELTS Task 1)<o:p></o:p></li>
</ul>

<h3 id=sa-li-ng-phap-va-t-vng-grammar--vocabulary-correction>Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng
(Grammar & Vocabulary Correction)<o:p></o:p></h3>

<table class=MsoNormalTable border=0 cellspacing=0 cellpadding=0 width="100%"

style='width:100.0%;border-collapse:collapse;mso-yfti-tbllook:1184'>
<thead>
<tr style='mso-yfti-irow:0;mso-yfti-firstrow:yes'>
<td style='border:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
Error<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border:solid black 1.0pt;border-left:none;mso-border-left-alt:
solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt
6.0pt'>
Correction<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border:solid black 1.0pt;border-left:none;mso-border-left-alt:
solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt
6.0pt'>
Explanation<o:p></o:p>
</td>
</tr>
</thead>
<tr style='mso-yfti-irow:1'>
<td style='border:solid black 1.0pt;border-top:none;mso-border-top-alt:solid
black .75pt;
mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"The
table beneath compares..."<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"The
table below compares..."<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"Beneath"
không được sử dụng phổ biến trong văn viết học thuật, "below" tự
nhiên hơn.<o:p></o:p>
</td>
</tr>
<tr style='mso-yfti-irow:2'>
<td style='border:solid black 1.0pt;border-top:none;mso-border-top-alt:solid
black .75pt;
mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"differences
in the amount of litres were seen clearly"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"significant
variations in milk production were observed"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
Ngôn
ngữ chính xác và học thuật hơn.<o:p></o:p>
</td>
</tr>
<tr style='mso-yfti-irow:3'>
<td style='border:solid black 1.0pt;border-top:none;mso-border-top-alt:solid
black .75pt;
mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"the
Netherlands always was the top
country"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"the
Netherlands consistently ranked
highest"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"Was"
sai ngữ pháp, "ranked" chính xác hơn trong ngữ cảnh
này.<o:p></o:p>
</td>
</tr>
<tr style='mso-yfti-irow:4'>
<td style='border:solid black 1.0pt;border-top:none;mso-border-top-alt:solid
black .75pt;
mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"Besides,
only..."<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"Furthermore,
only..."<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"Furthermore"
phù hợp hơn trong văn viết học thuật.<o:p></o:p>
</td>
</tr>
<tr style='mso-yfti-irow:5'>
<td style='border:solid black 1.0pt;border-top:none;mso-border-top-alt:solid
black .75pt;
mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"Looking
at the initial inspection,"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"Initially,"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
Cụm
từ "Looking at the initial inspection" không tự nhiên và
thừa.<o:p></o:p>
</td>
</tr>
<tr style='mso-yfti-irow:6'>
<td style='border:solid black 1.0pt;border-top:none;mso-border-top-alt:solid
black .75pt;
mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"slightly
higher than Australia, by 11,246,000"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"slightly
higher than Australia's production of 11,246,000
liters"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
Cần
rõ ràng hơn về đơn vị.<o:p></o:p>
</td>
</tr>
<tr style='mso-yfti-irow:7'>
<td style='border:solid black 1.0pt;border-top:none;mso-border-top-alt:solid
black .75pt;
mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"After
ten years, the production of milk in the two nations took
turns"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"Ten
years later, milk production in these two countries fluctuated
slightly"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"Took
turns" không chính xác, "fluctuated slightly" chính xác
hơn.<o:p></o:p>
</td>
</tr>
<tr style='mso-yfti-irow:8'>
<td style='border:solid black 1.0pt;border-top:none;mso-border-top-alt:solid
black .75pt;
mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"its
in Australia decreased"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"Australia's
production decreased"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
Sai
ngữ pháp, cần sửa lại.<o:p></o:p>
</td>
</tr>
<tr style='mso-yfti-irow:9'>
<td style='border:solid black 1.0pt;border-top:none;mso-border-top-alt:solid
black .75pt;
mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"Regarding
the milk production in Tanzania"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"Tanzania's
milk production"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
Ngắn
gọn và tự nhiên hơn.<o:p></o:p>
</td>
</tr>
<tr style='mso-yfti-irow:10'>
<td style='border:solid black 1.0pt;border-top:none;mso-border-top-alt:solid
black .75pt;
mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"both
countries had a tendency to climb into production"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"both
countries experienced growth in production"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"A
tendency to climb into production" không tự nhiên.<o:p></o:p>
</td>
</tr>
<tr style='mso-yfti-irow:11'>
<td style='border:solid black 1.0pt;border-top:none;mso-border-top-alt:solid
black .75pt;
mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"such
as 1,42,000"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"reaching
142,000 liters"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
Cần
rõ ràng hơn về đơn vị và cách diễn đạt.<o:p></o:p>
</td>
</tr>
<tr style='mso-yfti-irow:12'>
<td style='border:solid black 1.0pt;border-top:none;mso-border-top-alt:solid
black .75pt;
mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"The
year 2010 underwent a gradual increase"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"By
2010, there was a gradual increase"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"Underwent"
không phù hợp, "there was" tự nhiên hơn.<o:p></o:p>
</td>
</tr>
<tr style='mso-yfti-irow:13'>
<td style='border:solid black 1.0pt;border-top:none;mso-border-top-alt:solid
black .75pt;
mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"in
comparison with 84,000 litres in Guatemala -which was the country that had
the lowest production in four nations"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"compared
to 84,000 liters in Guatemala, the lowest-producing
country."<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
Câu
dài dòng và thừa.<o:p></o:p>
</td>
</tr>
<tr style='mso-yfti-irow:14'>
<td style='border:solid black 1.0pt;border-top:none;mso-border-top-alt:solid
black .75pt;
mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"its
figure was 87,000 litres"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"it
stood at 87,000 liters"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"Stood
at" tự nhiên và ngắn gọn hơn.<o:p></o:p>
</td>
</tr>
<tr style='mso-yfti-irow:15;mso-yfti-lastrow:yes'>
<td style='border:solid black 1.0pt;border-top:none;mso-border-top-alt:solid
black .75pt;
mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"four
distinct nations"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"four
countries"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"Distinct
nations" hơi thừa, "countries" đủ.<o:p></o:p>
</td>
</tr>
</table>

<h3 id=t-vng-chuyen-nganh-topic-related-vocabulary><span style='mso-fareast-font-

family:
"Times New Roman"'>Từ vựng chuyên ngành (Topic-Related
Vocabulary)<o:p></o:p></h3>

<table class=MsoNormalTable border=0 cellspacing=0 cellpadding=0 width="100%"

style='width:100.0%;border-collapse:collapse;mso-yfti-tbllook:1184'>
<thead>
<tr style='mso-yfti-irow:0;mso-yfti-firstrow:yes'>
<td style='border:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
New
Word<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border:solid black 1.0pt;border-left:none;mso-border-left-alt:
solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt
6.0pt'>
Word
Type<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border:solid black 1.0pt;border-left:none;mso-border-left-alt:
solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt
6.0pt'>
Definition<o:p></o:p>
</td>
</tr>
</thead>
<tr style='mso-yfti-irow:1'>
<td style='border:solid black 1.0pt;border-top:none;mso-border-top-alt:solid
black .75pt;
mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
Output<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
Noun<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
mso-border-left-alt:solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;
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Sản
lượng<o:p></o:p>
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Fluctuation<o:p></o:p>
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Noun<o:p></o:p>
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Sự
biến động<o:p></o:p>
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black .75pt;
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Trend<o:p></o:p>
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Noun<o:p></o:p>
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Xu
hướng<o:p></o:p>
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black .75pt;
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Substantial<o:p></o:p>
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Adjective<o:p></o:p>
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Đáng
kể<o:p></o:p>
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black .75pt;
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Marginal<o:p></o:p>
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Adjective<o:p></o:p>
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Không
đáng kể<o:p></o:p>
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black .75pt;
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Notable<o:p></o:p>
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border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
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Adjective<o:p></o:p>
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padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
Đáng
chú ý<o:p></o:p>
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black .75pt;
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Modest<o:p></o:p>
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Adjective<o:p></o:p>
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padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
Khiêm
tốn<o:p></o:p>
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black .75pt;
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Significant<o:p></o:p>
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Adjective<o:p></o:p>
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padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
Quan
trọng<o:p></o:p>
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</tr>
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black .75pt;
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Steady<o:p></o:p>
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Adjective<o:p></o:p>
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Ổn
định<o:p></o:p>
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black .75pt;
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Gradual<o:p></o:p>
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Adjective<o:p></o:p>
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padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
Từ
từ<o:p></o:p>
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black .75pt;
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Consistently<o:p></o:p>
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Adverb<o:p></o:p>
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padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
Liên
tục<o:p></o:p>
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</tr>
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black .75pt;
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Relatively<o:p></o:p>
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Adverb<o:p></o:p>
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Tương
đối<o:p></o:p>
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</tr>
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black .75pt;
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Subsequently<o:p></o:p>
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Adverb<o:p></o:p>
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Sau
đó<o:p></o:p>
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Remarkable<o:p></o:p>
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Adjective<o:p></o:p>
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padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
Đáng
chú ý<o:p></o:p>
</td>
</tr>
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black .75pt;
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Minimal<o:p></o:p>
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Adjective<o:p></o:p>
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padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
Tối
thiểu<o:p></o:p>
</td>
</tr>
</table>

<h3 id=nang-cao-ng-phap-grammar-enhancement><span style='mso-fareast-font-family:

"Times New Roman"'>Nâng cao ngữ pháp (Grammar Enhancement)<o:p></o:p></h3>

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style='width:100.0%;border-collapse:collapse;mso-yfti-tbllook:1184'>
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Grammar
Structure<o:p></o:p>
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solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt
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Original
Sentence<o:p></o:p>
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solid black .75pt;mso-border-alt:solid black .75pt;padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt
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Rephrased
Sentence<o:p></o:p>
</td>
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</thead>
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black .75pt;
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Câu
bị động (Passive Voice)<o:p></o:p>
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"Differences
in the amount of litres were seen clearly in four
countries."<o:p></o:p>
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<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
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"Significant
variations in milk production were observed across the four
countries."<o:p></o:p>
</td>
</tr>
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black .75pt;
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Mệnh
đề quan hệ (Relative Clause)<o:p></o:p>
</td>
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"The
Netherlands always was the top country in producing
milk"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
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padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"The
Netherlands consistently held the highest rank in milk
production."<o:p></o:p>
</td>
</tr>
<tr style='mso-yfti-irow:3'>
<td style='border:solid black 1.0pt;border-top:none;mso-border-top-alt:solid
black .75pt;
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Cấu
trúc so sánh (Comparative Structure)<o:p></o:p>
</td>
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"slightly
higher than Australia, by 11,246,000"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
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padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"marginally
higher than Australia's 11,246,000 liters"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
</tr>
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black .75pt;
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Câu
điều kiện (Conditional Sentence)<o:p></o:p>
</td>
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"In
2010, while the production of milk in the Netherlands had an incline to
increase..."<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
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padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"Had
the Netherlands' milk production continued its upward
trend,..."<o:p></o:p>
</td>
</tr>
<tr style='mso-yfti-irow:5'>
<td style='border:solid black 1.0pt;border-top:none;mso-border-top-alt:solid
black .75pt;
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Câu
nhấn mạnh (Emphatic Sentence)<o:p></o:p>
</td>
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border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
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"only
the Netherlands and Australia had the production of milk over 9 million
litres"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
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padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"It
was only the Netherlands and Australia that consistently produced over 9
million liters of milk."<o:p></o:p>
</td>
</tr>
<tr style='mso-yfti-irow:6'>
<td style='border:solid black 1.0pt;border-top:none;mso-border-top-alt:solid
black .75pt;
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Cấu
trúc "It is...that" (Cleft Sentence)<o:p></o:p>
</td>
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padding:6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt 6.0pt'>
"both
countries had a tendency to climb into production"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
<td style='border-top:none;border-left:none;border-bottom:solid black 1.0pt;
border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
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"It
was both countries that experienced a rise in milk
production."<o:p></o:p>
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Cấu
trúc đảo ngữ (Inversion)<o:p></o:p>
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"In
1990, Tanzania produced 87,000 liters"<o:p></o:p>
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"In
1990 did Tanzania produce 87,000 liters of milk."<o:p></o:p>
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Câu
ghép (Compound Sentence)<o:p></o:p>
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"Regarding
the milk production in Tanzania... compared to only 26,000 litres in
Guatemala."<o:p></o:p>
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"Tanzania's
milk production in 1990 was 87,000 liters, while Guatemala's was only 26,000
liters."<o:p></o:p>
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động từ (Gerund)<o:p></o:p>
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"Looking
at the initial inspection..."<o:p></o:p>
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"Initially..."<o:p></o:p>
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black .75pt;
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Cấu
trúc "Not only...but also"<o:p></o:p>
</td>
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border-right:solid black 1.0pt;mso-border-top-alt:solid black .75pt;
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"Only
the Netherlands and Australia..."<o:p></o:p>
</td>
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"Not
only the Netherlands but also Australia consistently exceeded 9 million
liters of milk production."<o:p></o:p>
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</tr>
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MẪU<o:p></o:p></h2>

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<h2>Revised

Essay<o:p></o:p></h2>

(Based On Your Ideas)

The table presents a comparison of annual milk production across four

countries – the Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania, and Guatemala – from 1990 to
2010.

Overall, the Netherlands consistently exhibited the highest milk production,

significantly exceeding the other three nations. Conversely, Guatemala
consistently produced the least milk. Furthermore, only the Netherlands and
Australia maintained production levels above 9 million liters throughout the
three years shown.

In 1990, the Netherlands led with 11,262,000 liters, slightly surpassing
Australia's 11,246,000 liters. A decade later, their production figures were
11,155,000 and 11,105,000 liters respectively, showing a slight decrease in
both countries. By 2010, the Netherlands experienced a rise to 11,466,000
liters, while Australia's production fell to 9,165,000 liters.

Tanzania and Guatemala displayed considerably lower production figures. In

1990, Tanzania produced 87,000 liters compared to Guatemala's 26,000 liters.
Both countries saw increases over the following two decades; Tanzania's
production rose to 142,000 liters in 2000 and 155,000 liters in 2010, while
Guatemala's reached 55,000 liters in 2000 and 84,000 liters in 2010. Despite
this growth, Guatemala remained the lowest producer among the four countries.

<h2>Sample

Essay<o:p></o:p></h2>

(Band 8.5 - 9.0)

The provided table illustrates the annual milk production (in liters) of
four countries – the Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania, and Guatemala – over a
twenty-year period from 1990 to 2010.

A clear disparity in milk production is evident across the four countries.
The Netherlands consistently maintained the highest production levels,
significantly outpacing the others. In contrast, Guatemala consistently
recorded the lowest figures. Australia and the Netherlands were the only two
countries to consistently exceed 9 million liters of milk production annually.

Specifically, the Netherlands started with 11,262,000 liters in 1990,

slightly ahead of Australia's 11,246,000 liters. While both countries
experienced a minor decrease in production by 2000 (11,155,000 and 11,105,000
liters respectively), the Netherlands showed a subsequent increase to
11,466,000 liters in 2010, whereas Australia's production declined to 9,165,000
liters.

In comparison, Tanzania and Guatemala exhibited considerably lower and less
volatile production levels. Tanzania's production increased steadily from
87,000 liters in 1990 to 142,000 liters in 2000 and 155,000 liters in 2010.
Similarly, Guatemala's production grew from a mere 26,000 liters in 1990 to
55,000 liters in 2000 and 84,000 liters in 2010, although it remained
substantially lower than the other three nations throughout the period.

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<p>-<strong>Lexical Resource:</strong> "A tendency to climb into

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