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The document discusses the reasons why some individuals become workaholics, attributing it to societal demands and economic pressures that compel people to work overtime to earn more. As living costs rise, individuals feel the need to increase their earnings to manage family expenses, leading to a culture of workaholism. The text also highlights the importance of addressing vocabulary and grammatical accuracy for improved communication.

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Speaking Assessment

The document discusses the reasons why some individuals become workaholics, attributing it to societal demands and economic pressures that compel people to work overtime to earn more. As living costs rise, individuals feel the need to increase their earnings to manage family expenses, leading to a culture of workaholism. The text also highlights the importance of addressing vocabulary and grammatical accuracy for improved communication.

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Topic: Why do some people become workaholics?

Overall Band Score:


6.5

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
Opt for even more advanced words when appropriate.

Vocabulary Repetition:
people: 5
work: 3
they: 3
earn: 3
more: 3
become: 2
workaholics: 2
their: 2
overtime: 2

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Actual Audio Transcript (what native speakers are likely to hear):
Currently, (87%) the (98%) world (99%) demands (93%) people (96%) to (96%)
become (98%) workaholics, (75%) I (83%) believe, (100%) because (99%)
without (93%) doing (98%) much (99%) work, (99%) people (99%) feel (99%) like
(98%) they (99%) cannot (90%) earn (100%) a (98%) lot. (100%) And (91%) it
(94%) is (96%) a (96%) true (98%) thing (100%) at (95%) this (99%) moment.
(100%) All (35%) the (94%) companies (95%) pay (97%) the (74%) employee
(76%) for (89%) their (96%) extra (95%) time, (95%) for (78%) that (87%) people
(94%) are (98%) engaged (77%) with (95%) overtime (98%) work (98%) to (95%)
earn (100%) much. (96%) As (38%) the (86%) things (79%) price (80%) are
(92%) getting (99%) higher (98%) and (97%) higher (99%) every (38%) day,
(100%) people (96%) are (99%) just (94%) involved (97%) with (97%) overtime
(93%) work (98%) a (95%) lot. (100%) They (96%) feel (90%) like (92%) they
(97%) had (91%) to (99%) earn (93%) much (75%) to (93%) make (100%) their
(98%) family (99%) expenses (99%) easier (99%) for (98%) them (99%) to (99%)
burden. (95%) So, (25%) these (71%) sorts (80%) of (100%) mentalities (83%)
make (96%) the (92%) people (99%) become (97%) more (99%) aeolics (72%) in
(97%) the (87%) present (100%) days. (91%)

Polished Transcript:
Currently, the world demands people to become workaholics, I believe, because
without doing much work, people feel like they cannot earn a lot. And it is true at this
moment. All the companies pay employees for their extra time, so people are
engaged in overtime work to earn more. As prices are getting higher every day,
people are increasingly involved in overtime work. They feel like they have to earn
more to make their family expenses easier for them to manage. So, these sorts of
mentalities make people become more workaholics in the present day.
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Pronunciation Task Response Fluency & Lexical Resource Grammat


Coherence Range
Accurac

7.5 7 7 6 6

Your pronunciation The answer The answer is Vocabulary is Grammar is m


is quite good. adequately coherent and adequate but not accurate, but
Working on addresses the mostly fluent. highly are some min
consistency and question's prompt There is some sophisticated. errors ('pay th
tackling difficult by focusing on the repetition and a Words like employee' sh
sounds may societal and slight stumble 'mentalities' are be 'pay
enhance clarity. economic ('more aeolics'), slightly formal for employees', '
pressures that but the overall flow this context. More for them to bu
contribute to is good. Minor precise and varied is awkward a
workaholism. improvements in vocabulary would should be
Consider exploring word choice would improve the score. rephrased).
additional factors, enhance fluency. The error 'aeolics' complex
such as shows a need for grammatical
personality traits or careful word structures wo
underlying selection. improve the s
psychological
needs, for a more
comprehensive
response. While
the response is
coherent,
enhancing the
vocabulary and
sentence
structures would
further improve the
overall quality.

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