iGCSE - Question 2 iGCSE - Question 2: Objectives: Objectives
iGCSE - Question 2 iGCSE - Question 2: Objectives: Objectives
iGCSE - Question 2 iGCSE - Question 2: Objectives: Objectives
Objectives: Starter:
• To know the • You are asked to identify and explain
methods powerful words and phrases in this question.
• What makes a word powerful?
used to
answer • What types of words are likely to be
powerful in descriptive writing?
question 2
Challenge:
• To justify
why words
are powerful
and explain
the effects
Task: On your copy of this question – annotate
what the different parts want you to do.
2 – Re-read the descriptions of:
a) The rainforest and the wildlife in paragraph 1, from ‘The family was
trudging…’;
b) Julia’s walk through the rainforest in search of her parents in
paragraph 4, from ‘Hours later…’;
Select four powerful words or phrases from each paragraph. Your
choices should include some imagery. Explain how each word or
phrase is used effectively in context.
Write about 200 to 300 words This tells you that you should select
words and phrases that help to create
the impression of the topic. You should
This tells you where to find explain how they create this impression
the information. Draw a box
around the relevant
paragraphs to help you. This means that you shiould be concise
and look for the deeper meanings using
IRWL or L-ICE
Question 2 – Top Tips!
• Re-read the whole paragraph before making selections; choose the best and not those which
happen to come first. Remember that you are not being asked to write about the whole
paragraph but only about the language which relates to the particular question.
• Choose a range of words and phrases that seem powerful. Do not write out whole sentences, but
also do not give only one word if it is part of a descriptive phrase. Do not write out the beginning
and end of a long quotation with the key words missing from the middle.
• Remember to put quotation marks around your choices. This makes it easier for the Examiner to
identify them and makes it easier for you to focus on the exact wording.
• Treat each of your choices separately and do not present them as a list or give a general comment
which applies to all of them.
• Avoid general comments such as ‘the writer makes you feel that you are really there’ or ‘this is a
very descriptive phrase’. Such comments will not earn any marks at all.
• If you are not sure about effects, try to at least give a meaning, in context, for each of your
choices. That can earn half marks for the question.
• To explain effects, think of what the reader sees and feels when reading the word or phrase,
because of the connotations and associations of the language. Often there is more than one
possible related effect.
• Include images from each paragraph, and try to explain them (but you do not need to know or
give their technical names); think about sounds as well as visual effects.
Step by Step
1. Read the question. • I think that L-
2. Draw a box/circle around the relevant ICE may help
paragraph for question 2(a) and 2(b) you to be
more
3. Underline words and phrases you will use –
concise!
annotate each for any senses, emotions,
atmosphere and IMAGE they create. Make sure
they are relevant to the question. • Remember
4. Write your response using either: to used CME
if you are
• IRWL – Inference, (effect on) Reader Writer’s
running out
purpose, Link of time as
• L-ICE - Literal meaning, implicit meaning, this way will
Connotations, Effect give you half
• CME – Choice, Meaning, Effect marks.
L-ICE Paragraphs
• Overall Effect - The writer creates the impression
of... in paragraph…
• Quote - The word ‘ ...’ helps to create this effect.
• Literal Meaning - It literally means…
• Implicit Meaning - However, it also suggests…
• Connotations - The word has connotations of...
• Effects - The writer uses this word to create an
image of...
Writer’s Effect Writing Frame
• You may • The writer creates the impression
wish to use of... in paragraph…
the • The word ‘ ...’ helps to create this
following effect.
writing • It literally means…
frame to
• However, it also suggests…
structure
each • The word has connotations of...
paragraph: • The writer uses this word to create
an image of...
The Mark Scheme
Band Descriptor
Band 1 •Wide ranging discussion of language
•High quality comments that add meanings and
9-10 marks associations to words.
•Addresses both parts of the questions
•Demonstrates the writer’s reasons for using the words.
•May group examples to demonstrate overview of
meaning/inference/attitude.
•Tackles imagery with some precision and imagination.
Band 2 •Reference is made to a number of words and phrases.
•Some explanations are given and effects identified.
7-8 marks •Both part of the question are addressed.
•Images are identified with some explanation.
Task: Practice Question
• Read the text on your sheets and highlight four
powerful words or phrases that describe the rainforest
and the wildlife in paragraph 1.
• Then highlight 4 powerful words or phrases about walk
through the rainforest in search of her parents in
paragraph 4, from ‘Hours later…’;